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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks mera title use karne ke leye! 😛 i am glad it helped! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
hey nice start....please continue... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: if.addict

nice ff , pleae continue and the sweetest thing abt it was ridhima said sorry to armaan for uttering that nonsense to armaan .
YOu shud be the creative head of dil mil gaye 😊



awww thank you soo much! thats really nice of u! =]
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Posted: 17 years ago
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after reading all your comments i thought i HAD 2 continue! plz comment again!



[ridz was day dreaming about armaan when she realised that she was late! she checked the time and looked around for anjali, but there was no sign of her. She got dressed and ran downstairs]
N: riddhima tum kya karehe ho anjali aur shashank jalegeye hai, tum late ho jaldi karo!
RG: OH NO! Dr keerti tho mujko katam karengi, bye nani!

[All the interns were already there and ridz was 10 mins late!]
RG: sorry Dr keerti mujhe tora kaam tha
DrKERT: tik hai Dr riddhima don't worry [smiling]
RG: uhhh...
DrKERT: ok doctors aaj Dr anjali aur Dr atul general ward main kaam karenge..
A: thank you!
DrKERT: your welcome! its my pleasure! [smiling exitedly]
DrKERT:Dr Armaan aur...
AM: erm, Dr keerti aaj kya main Dr riddhima ki saath kaam karsakti hu? woh hum dono bohaut din se ek dusre ki saath kaam nahi kiya tho..
DrKERT: don't worry Dr armaan its fine, aap dono OPD main kaam karenge aur Dr muskaan aur Dr rahul aap dono bhi OPD main, ok see you later bye! have a good day!


[ all doctors meet together in canteen]
AJ: aaj Dr keerti ki kya hua, usse main first time haste hui dekrahi hu.
RG: main aaj 10 min late ayi aur woh gussa bhi nahi hui!
R: erm ridz waise tum aaj late kaise?
[ridz looked and armaan and armaan was just daydreaming and staring at her]
RG: woh mujhe kuch important kaam tha!
M: kya kaam?
AM: uh arre choro na koi kaam hoga hume kya!
R: haa tume kya don't be so nosy it none of your business!
M:CHUP! fittemooh main tum sirf phoochrahi thi
S: arre tum dono bhi na! armaan aur riddhima ki tara, sirf jagarthi ho! hai na armaan!
[armaan was too lost in ridz eyes to listen to sapna]
S: armaan?, armaan?! ARMAAN!!!
AM: huh,kya?
S: armaan tum kaha kho gayi ho?
AM: kiski aakho main
[riddhima blushed and looked away]
DING DING! DING DING!
RG: mujhe rounds pe jana hai bye!
AM: haa mujhe bhi
[and he quickly catches up with ridz and grabs her hand
BUZZ BUZZ! BUZZ BUZZ!
S: Dr keerti mujhe page karehe hai bye guys!
EVERYONE: bye!

[ sapna goes to Dr keerti, there she finds her smiling and staring at Dr shubhankar]

S: aap mujhe page kiya tha
DrKERT: haa woh, sapna sab doctors main, main tum meri favourite hu
S: kya? mera matlab main? thank you!
DrKERT: No problem! aur sapna um is it ok if i call you sapna?
S: uhh haa!
DrKERT: ok sapna, tum..uh mujhe pyar hogaya hai!
S: kya? whos the lucky guy?! agar aap ko problem nahi huwi tho!
DrKERT: Shubhankar!
[sapna was shocked! she has got over shubankar and moved on, but she never thought this would happen!]
DrKERT: uh sapna? tum kya abhi bhi usko pyar karte ho?
S: uh nahi nahi! i've moved on with life don't worry he's all yours!
DrKERT: phew!kya tum meri madhaat karogi? main shubhankar ko kaise batou ki, ki main usse pyar karti hu?
S: uhh...

[meanwhile in the general ward atul is following anjali everywhere!]
A: haa aapko is dawah ki zurut hai [talking to a patient]
[atul follows her to the table where the medicine is]
AJ: haa mera patient ko iski zuroorot bhi hai!
A: whatever
[anjali walk to the patient and atul follows her there]
A: yeh kya tumhari patient hain atul?
AJ: nahi
A: tho tum yaha kya karehe ho?
AJ: woh..main..tumhari madhaat karne aaiti
A: main tik hu tum jou
AJ: nahi!
A: kya?
AJ: woh mera matlab, main yaha tik hi hu
Patient: Doctor atul
A: atul
Patient: Doctor atul!
A: atul tumhara patient tumko bularahe he
AJ: arre chup! [to the patient]
Patient: DOCTOR ATUL YAHA AOU!!
A: ATUL! jaou!! abhi!!
[atul walks over the patient]

[in the general ward armaan is handling nana whilst staring at ridz]
nana: tumhare aur bul bul ki jagra katam kya?
AM: haa
nana: aur woh captain cook woh kya!
AM: woh! uska laam hi mat le yaar, mujhe dar he ki woh meri riddhima ko mujse alag kardegi
nana: kyun?
AM: college din main woh ek ladki se pyar ki ti, sonia, ab meri kya galati hai ki main usse zyada handsome hu?
nana: arre kahani to bolo tumhari tarif karna band karo!
AM:sonia mujhe pyar kiya aur rahul mujhe nafrat kiya, toh mujhe dar hain ki woh mujse revenge lene ki liye mujhe aur riddhima ko alag kar dega
nana: arre! tum tension kyun karte ho? main hoon na! main to main hoon na par kaam kiya tha sharukh ki saath, woh yeh sab kitni baar acting kiya tha tho usne mujhe saab sikha diya, main uss captain cook kho ek bohaut achi lesson teach karungi!

R: haa muskaan yeh patient ko hum iss medicine kilana parenge
M: nahi rahul yeh nahi yeh uski symptons ki kiye galat hain!
R: nahi yeh tik hain!
M: galat!
R: tik!
M: rahul!
R: muskaan!
both: ugghh! [and walk away]

[its the end of the day and they all go into the locker room]
AM: aaj tho meri jaan hi nikal gaye, itni kaam!
AJ: haa yaar, Dr keerti humari feelings nahi samajti kya?
A: don't worry atul u'll feel better
AJ: anjali, tum meri fikar karte ho?
AM: he he he he he

[just then ridz walked in]
RG: di hum chale?
A: sorry ridz mera yaha torah sa kaam bakhi hain
RG: tik hain main auto sai ghar chale joungi
R: kyun auto sai kyun? main...
AM: haan main hoon na main tumko ghar drop khardeti hu
[ armaan looked at rahul and smiled rahul looked angry and looked away]
RG: tik hai

[they both go outside and walk to the car, as ridz is walking she trips over a stone and armaan catches her, they both stare into eachothers eyes and the song ishq leta hai kaise intehaan plays, after a few mins they come into their senses and get up]
AM: uhh tum tik ho?
RG: haa main tik hu chale?
AM: haa

[on their way armaan keeps looking at ridz and remembers the good times on the other hand ridz is looking out the window and thinking about the funny times, she could never let armaan go]
[they finally reach home, as ridz gets out of the car armaan grabs her hand]
RG: armaan choro!
AM: main to tumko khabi nahi chor sakta
RG: armaan!
[and he let go]
[in her room she lays down on the bed and picks up the teddy that armaan gave her. She kisses it and goes to sleep.




pwincess kanzi thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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soooooooo soooooooo soooooooooooo sweet! contd soon! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwww so so so cute! 😉 espiacally the teddy bear. 😳 and nana 😉 and rahoool 😆 and muskan fighting! 😆 everything! keep it up! 😛 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it was really cool .. continue soon ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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next part! thx for all the comments!

[The next morning anjali and ridz are both on their way to sanjeevani in their car]
RG: di
A: haa
RG: aapko kabhi bhi pyar hua hai?
A: pyar?! humm..haa hua hai, jab main college main thi ek lirka thi, farhan.
RG: aap jab pehle usse pyar kiya tha aapko kese laga tha?
A: saab bhul gaya tha, meri aakho mai main sirf usko dekta. waise tum yeh sab kyun puch rahe ho?
RG: uhh um aise hi agar mujhe kabhi pyar hua tho kaise symptons ki liye dekna parega!
[they both start laughing]

[soon they arrive and so does armaan]
[they were both in love but their arguments never stopped]
[as armaan gets out of the car he hits ridz in the back with the door]
RG: tum dekhe nahi utar sakte?
AM: nahi
RG: armaan!
AM: riddhima!
A: upho! dum dono kya kabhi bhi jagarna stop karogi?!
BOTH: NAHI!

[anjali walks into sanjeevani before them]
[as armaan and ridz are walking armaan grabs ridzies hand]
RG: armaan haat choro na!
AM: riddhima main iss line se takh gaya hu ek naya line doondo!

[armaan lets go and ridz runs in]
[in the locker room everyone is putting their stuff on]
[rahul and muskaan walk in but at the same time so they get stuck at the door]

M: rahul idiot tu yeh kya karehe ladies first tu yeh kabhi suna nahi?
R: tik hai ladies first
[ he lets her go first but she doesnt see whats coming!]
M: thank you
[ rahul puts his leg out and muskaan trips over]
M: tum!! idiot loser nikhame nikhate!
R: ha ha ha ha!!
S: riddhima yaad hai tum aur armaan ki saath yeh same scene hua tha!
AM: haa! good times, good times...

SPEAKERS: CAN ALL INTERNS REPORT DR KEERTI NOW PLEASE THANK YOU.
A: Chalo
AJ: haa chalo main bhi tumhare saath jati hu

DrKEERT: aacha hai aaj aap late nahi dr riddhima likin next time yeh hua aapki nochre bhi jali ja sakti hai.
RG: yes dr keerti
DrKEERT: ok Drs yaad hain aap sabko well DR rahul aur muskaan nahi likin aap sab, jab hum sanjeevani camp gayi thi?
well kal aap sab phir se jayengi kyunki naye doctors aayi hai iss liye. Now aap sab apni duties par jou
[they all head off in different directions]
DrKEERT: aap nahi dr sapna muje aapse koi zururi kaam thi
S: ok
[on their way they start having their own conversation]
AJ: oh no dr keerti phir se normal hogayi mujhe laga tha ki main aaj usse ek break lungi likin woh tho
R: haa

DrKEERT: sapna main kya karo woh shubankar bhi na
S: aap yeh karye, usse aap dur thakye jitne zyada aap usko baath nahi karengi, ignore karenge woh usse zyada aap se kareeb ayengi
DrKEERT: yeh hoga na?
S: yes!



[meanwhile ridz is seeing sumit]
RG: sumit your feeling better na!
SUMIT: aap mehri kareeb hai tho mujhe koi takleef nahi hoti
AM: huh flirt..
SUMIT: excuse me?!
AM: yes?
RG: uhh sumit tumhare report kehta hain ki tum abhi tik ho tumhare cancer ab nahi hain
SUMIT: saach! yes! yeh aap ki jadoo se hua hai meri operation main aap ne kamal kar dekaiya!
RG: thanks! anyways tum aaj shaam hi discharge ho rahe ho
SUMIT: thank you, likin main aapki dur nahi reh sakta

[afternoon]
[everyones work is finished and armaan and riddhima go up to the balcony]
[meanwhile sumit is working out how to propose to ridz]
RG: aaj kitni sundoor rat hai na armaan
AM: tumhari saath aur sundoor hai
[they both look at eachother and go really close up]
[armaan takes both her hands and kisses them]
AM: dance hojaiye?
RG: dance? likin music nahi hai tho hum dance kaise karenge?
AM: jaise hum lonavala main kiya tha yaad hai?
[armaan puts his arm round his arms round her waist and ridz puts her hands round his neck]
[sumit was looking everywhere for ridz]
Sumit: dr riddhima kaha hai? [to a wardboy]
wardboy: mujhe pata nahi saab
sumit: dr riddhima kaha hai? [to sister lovely]
Slovely: woh dr riddhima ji haan yaad aya main usko balcony par jate dekha!
sumit: thank you!!!
Slovely: arre mention not ji!

[meanwhile ridz and armaan are dancing the night away]
RG: armaan, mujhe kuch kehna hai
AM: mujhe bhi
RG: armaan, main
[just then sumit walks in but ridz and armaan were too lost in their own world that they didnt hear a thing]
[ sumit was shocked at what he saw]
AM: bolo riddhima
RG: maine tumse pyar karti hu
AM: main bhi
[and armaan leans in to kiss her on the cheek]
[ sumit drops everything, his flowers, the ring and the chocolates. he couldn't believe what he just saw.
He always thought that ridz and armaan both hated eachother, but that wasn't true.]
[he ran into the basement and slowly fell to the ground. he was crying, he couldn't stop. the person he loved the most in the entire world just shattered his dreams]
sumit: KYUN? kyun aisa kiya riddhima kyun? maine hi tumse kyun pyar kiya?

[upstairs they stopped dancing and started walking downstairs holding hands]
[as they are walking they find the chocolates, flowers and the ring that sumit brought for ridz]
RG: armaan yeh kya, koi yeh sab chore ke gaya
AM: yum chocolates!
RG: armaan! [smiling]
AM: kya? ek aadmi chocolates nahi ka sakti?
RG: dekho! itni sari phool! aur meri favourite! red roses!
AM: aur ek card bhi hai! andhar kya lekha hai?
RG: lekha hain, roses are red, violets are blue, you are my riddhima and i love you
RG: armaan tumne yeh liki na?!
AM: nahi tho
RG: kya? tho..yeh..koi hai sanjeevani main jo mujse pyar karte hain
[at that thought armaan remembered sumit, all those times he was trying to flirt with ridz. he was discharged today so it had to be him]
RG: kaun ho sakta hai armaan? mujhe bohaut dar lagraha hai
AM: aur koi nahi ho sakta, woh sumit hi hoga
RG: sumit? woh kaise? woh tho mera patient hai armaan woh nahi ho sakta
AM: woh hi hai riddhima, kitni baar tumhari saath flirt karni ki koshish ki thi, aap meri kareeb ho tho mujhe takleef nahi hoti, aap ki haath main jadoo hai, huh flirt
RG: armaan tum bhi kum flirt nahi karti! haa sumit hi ho sakta hai, likin woh yaha kyun aya hoga?
[armaan just shrugs and they start walking down]
AM: riddhima dekho aur ek chiise
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: afifa2

love ur FF..... 😳


THANK Y0U! THiS iS THE FiRST TiME iM WRiTiNG!
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Originally posted by: mannyz_1

awwwwwwwwwwwwww so so so cute! 😉 espiacally the teddy bear. 😳 and nana 😉 and rahoool 😆 and muskan fighting! 😆 everything! keep it up! 😛 👏 👏



THANK Y0U!!

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