'Socha na tha' Updated: Chapter 23: Pg.78 - Page 9

Originally posted by: nureat01

As he pushed off, she fell back against him for a moment, and he felt something shift inside him in that one split second. She steadied herself again. He realized that he was suddenly feeling short of breath.

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"Did you mention Lillies?"

"Huh? I did?? Uhh…yeah! I did! I just saw some growing along the side of the road!" he said, gesturing animatedly with one hand to the side of the road. "They're my favorite flowers!" he finished a little lamely.

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He turned his bike around, and glanced back at her for a moment again. She was opening the door to the house, and soon disappeared inside it. Atul watched the closed door for a moment, and then finally pushed off. As he rode back home, he wondered why it felt as if something inside him had changed irrevocably.

😍 Sigh....my favourite parts, Anu😳 I just loved that feeling of...change that came upon Atul, so subtle yet so powerful. A momentary whiff of a future....amazing. Just loved the way the piece was written, with Atul in the driving seat for a change (pun intended!)! Angie's giggles always make me smile, because I can just picture Sunaina's face lighting up at them...

Amazing development, Anu - glad we get to see a little bit of AA outside the hospital.

Originally posted by: SRK-Kads4ever

Yay!!! 👏 I absolutely loved it Anu!
You're so good at writing romantic scenes, don't worry! 😉 I can just see the chapter playing out in my head... *sigh* And I also loved those parts that Vas quoted! Jasmine and lillies and a black belt...So sweet!

I'll be waiting anxiously for chapter 6! 😊

Originally posted by: mehak_kapoor

Anu ki ho gayi wah bhai wah!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗 🤗 Mehakoo meri jaan!!🤗🤗 Aap aaye bahaar aayee!!😆😆

Wat a part anu, really mind-blowing mahiya types 👏 👏 👏 Thank you soooooooooo much, sweetheart!😳

I just loved the part where atul went to anjali, as he wanted to say good nite n anjali thought that he will ask her for a ride again 😆 😆 😆 It was so ANJALISH 😆 😆 😆 ........ You're the first person to mention it!! So glad you liked it!! Cuz I loved writing it!! Especially the moment when it all backfires on Angie!😆😆

I can actually imagine........anjali sitting in front n atul riding, i hope atul cud see the path ahead, as angi is quiet tall 😆 😆 😆 I just knew ki tere dimaag mein hi yeh khayaal aayega!😆😆...Yes, Atul still managed to see the road just fine!😉😆Atul smelled her scent.........awwwwwwwwwwwwww n that too lillies, his fav flower n the way he said that he was talking abt lillies that are growing at the side of the road was just too gud and quick 😆 .......... 😳

Black belt champion 👏 👏 👏 wohooooooo i hope soon he gets chance to show his skills of KARATE so that ice queen can actually believe it.......... 😉 Anu yaar..........so nice of u to make atul a karate champion..Thanks yaar, Mehak! It was just one of my random ideas...wanted to show him in a stronger way than Angie might judge him to be😉..... i can actually imagine him.......in white dress with black belt n kicking in air..... 😳 and angi singing U are my mind-blwoing mahiya 😆 🤣Mehak yaar, kya situation hai!, Ab Angie bhi MBM gaayegi??😆😆...I think I'd die laughing if I actually saw that on screen!🤣🤣🤣

U noe when i read that scene of angi sitting in front n atul riding....... i recalled that advertisment where hubby is riding bicycle in haste n wifey is sitting in front n a truck comes from front n a clash happens........ after few secs we see bicycle emerging out of fumes and truck is all damaged.........and wifey is saying to her hubby ''Arey bhai kitni baar kaha hai sambhal ke chalaya ki jiye'' 😆 Hehehehehehe imagine anji saying to atul ''Atul thoda dheere chalao.......mujhe dar lag raha hai'' 😆 😆 LMAO!!🤣 There's actually an ad like that??? That's hilarious!!🤣🤣

Really yaar i hope we cud actually see anji n atul like this 😳 *sigh* I so wish so too yaar, Mehakoo!😍

Poor atul is falling for ice queen, but at the same time he is also afraid n can't actually believe watz happening........so real 👏 👏 ..Thank you, yaar!😳......But i m glad that at the end atleast angi uttered THANK YOU...... n i guess that was enough to make Dr. Atul happy 😳

Very well written anu............. 👏 Thank you so so so very much, Mehakoo!🤗🤗🤗.especially for highlighting some of my fav. moments in this chapter as well!..This is why your comments mean the world to me! Love you, sweetheart!🤗

Originally posted by: hira_786

awww Anu tht was a superbb part yar..
n im soo glad finalli u continued😆😆..Thank you sooooooooo much, Hira!😳 So sweet of you to always take the time out to comment!😳
Ok i love da begining.. aww Anjali had a tuogh daii huh n da way she talked to Atul was kinda rude..Buh Atul is soo adorable he jus came to say gud night to her😳 shoo sweeet of him.. omg if i wud be at Atul place n if sum1 behave like anjali i wud have get soo pissed..😆.buh Atul is a sweetheart😳 He sure is!😳 Which is why I adore him so much!😳

Omg i noe how Anjali was feeling.. after a loooong harsh day.. goin back to her house n got stuck into da middle of the road..
goshhh i cant even imagine tht..Yep! I'm sure we've all had one of those days at some point or the other in our lives, hana?

ahahah Atul came on his bike n ask her she can getta a ride.. was juss soo cccute😳.. i can totalli imagine her sittin on da front n Atul riding da bicycle😳..Aww so glad you liked that! I really enjoyed writing it!

omg Atul like jasmines.. tht was my fav part outta all of me😳
It was jusss toooo guuuuuud Anu..Thank you sooooo much, Hira!
Thnxx alot foe da Pm yar..You are most welcome! Actually woh to maine self preservation mein bheja tha😆😆 I didn't want to khao maar this time also😳😆😆
n plzzzz cont soon😃 Will try to update as soon as I'm able to, yaar!
M eagerlii waitin to read da nex part😊

Lotsssssssssssssa Luv:Hira😛

Originally posted by: if.addict

hi anu sorry yaar missed uf ff long time
but will resume reading.
and thnaks for continuing yaar

😊 😊 😊
luv
-kanu