Updated 2/18 P.50 ~Pehla Aur Akhiri Pyar~ - Page 31

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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was amazingggg vibzzz
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hey guys i will post the next part soon!!

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Part 15

Angad is pretty much carrying her to the car. Everyone looks at them thinking how cute they look. Kripa keeps yelling at Angad that she wants to DANCE! Angad is just looked at her thinking what he has in stored for tonight.

Angad started to think…. Why was he being so nice and caring for Kripa. He should be in the club dancing with some hot girls and getting drunk. He sat there thinking when he saw Kripa dancing in the middle of the road. Acting as if she was 7 years old. Once he saw her, an automatic smile appeared on his face. He felt attracted to her, but didn't realize it yet. Then it started raining, softly yet heavy. It touched her face like rose petals. 'She loved the rain. Angad hated it, yet today after looking at her he started to like the rain. He started to walk towards her and she kept on dancing.

K- Arre Angad come on lets dance.

A- Kripa I think we should leave now. It's getting late.

K- Ummmm…NOOOO!!! I want to dance first. COME ON ANGAD! Just once…. PLEASE?????

Kripa made a cute little baby face, which melted Angad. He had to give in.

A- Fine. But after this lets go home.

K- OK!

She goes to him and puts her hand in Angad's. Sending waves throughout their body. When their hands met it felt like a puzzle was finally complete. It was just perfect. Then Angad put his hand on Kripa's waist making her stiff. She liked his touch for some reason. Then she put her hand on shoulder. They started dancing to the sound of rain. Their was music around them but it couldn't be heard by their ears but by their hearts. This relationship between them is still unknown but is going to be found soon.

Meanwhile they stare at each other, looking deep into their eyes. Kripa who was drunk still looked him straight in the eye. Trying to find something. An emotion. While Angad just looked at her sparkling gorgeous eyes, thinking there must be something more. Angad's grip on her waist tightened and he brought her forward. Kripa started breathing harder. They were so close to each other that their bodies touched each other. Their heartbeats connected. Their hearts beated together as if they were one. They were coming closer and closer….their lips were about a cm away from each other when

HONK HONK!!!!!

A truck was coming their way Angad pushed Kripa to the side falling on top of her. He stared at her with shock. Then all of the sudden Kripa pushed him off her and started laughing soooooo hard. She was on the floor laughing.

K- yeh truck….ahaha

A- Uff yeh ladki bhi na…Kripa we are going home right now!

K- Angad CARRY ME!

A- Kya? No way you can walk on your own.

K- ANGAD!!!!(she starts whining like a little kid) CARRY ME!!! OR ELSE IM NOT GOING!!!

A- Kripa come on. Stop this.

K- (she sits down pretending to cry) Nahi….I want you to carry me.

A-(Gives up)- FINE!!!

Angad goes and picks her up and starts' walking towards the car and Kripa is smiling like a little kid right now. She looks at Angad and says

K- Angad ur so cute…You look just like prince charming!

A- (Looks at Kripa thinking she is just absolutely insane but very cute)- Uhh ok.

Then they reach the car, and he puts Kripa in her seat. Kripa grabs his arm and signals him to come closer. Angad comes closer and she kisses him gently on the check.

K- Thank You.

Angad was shocked to even say anything he looked at her and then placed his hand on his cheek thinking of that simply kiss. He smiled at the thought. And he sat in the car and drove away.

They reach home, after what seemed forever.

Angad gets out of the car, and goes to open the door for Kripa.

But Kripa slams the door open and it gave Angad a startle. He went to her and told her to come inside the house. Kripa went to him and said

K- On one condition

A- Kya?

K- If you carry me! (with and innocent face)

A- uMMMM no you have legs I think you can walk.

K- NAHII!!!! CARRY ME PLEASE!!!!!

A- No you can walk.

Saying this he left her and walked into the house. Kripa on the other hand was left outside and she got mad so she started walking to the other end of the house. She found a ladder that went to her balcony and she started thinking of a plan. On the other hand Angad went to his room and sat down. He turned on the TV and started watching some MTV channel where they were talking about him. Kripa was climbing the ladder trying her hardest not to fall. As she was almost there her dress got stuck to the edge of the ladder.

She was trying her hardest to get it out and when she did, she fell and know was left holding on to the edge of the balcony. And on top of that her dress rip to the end of her butt so it was pretty much TAKEN OFF HER LEGS. She started to scream. Angad heard this and started to run to the balcony. His heart stopped when he saw Kripa clinging to the edge of the balcony with her dress ripped. He ran to the edge and helped her.

A- Kripa give me your hand.

K- Nahi. I will fall.

A-You wont

K- Yes I will. Angad help me.

A- I'm trying but please give me your hand.

K- NOOO I WILL FALL!

A- Do you trust me?

K- (looked into Angad's worried eyes)- Yes.

A- Then give me your hand.

Kripa closed her eyes and gave her hand to Angad and he grabbed it tight and pulled her up. Kripa just hugged him. Then Angad told her to come inside. She goes into angad's room. She feels very uncomfortable and Angad notices and tells her to go change in her room. Kripa goes to her room and changes into a tank top and some pajama's with monkeys. She goes downstairs and get the ice cream carton and then goes to the living room and turns on the TV she's watching some music songs and then it plays Khallas…..

She stands up and then starts dancing to the song as well as singing it. Angad hears something so comes outside in his pj'z and undershirt. He goes downstairs and sees what's happening. He stands there thinking OMG…ub kya?

He goes to her and tells her if she's crazy. She grabs him and tells him to dance with her. He says NO. and then she starts dancing and singing again.

When she comes to the Khallas part she pushes him and he falls on the couch. She starts laughing like a little kid and grabs her ice cream and starts eating it again when she ask Angad if he wants some. He says no. And then Kripa puts some on his cheecks. He turns around and looks at her with a calm face and then starts to wipe it off but before he could Kripa puts his hand down and she gets closer to him and starts licking the ice cream off him. Angad is just in total shock. He doesn't move when all of the sudden he snaps out of it and looks at her mad.

K- that was yummy you should try it.

A- Oh really

K- Yes.

Angad puts some ice cream on her cheek and starts kissing it off…not exactly licking it. Kripa is just screaming and laughing at him with her hands around him. It was a cute scene. They were both enjoying themselves when Angad stopped realizing what he just did. He looks at her and tells her sorry. Kripa just laughs and laughs. Then she falls asleep on him.

Angad carries her to her room. He tucks her in and turns off the light taking one good look at her sweet adorable face.

Then he goes to his room and thinks about whatever happened today, one side of him saying that your falling in love, and one saying its just some fling. He gets confused and takes the thoughts out of his head and falls asleep.

Ok I continued finally

Hope u like that part.

And some good news I just gave birth to my TWINS!!!! Ishika and Ishan!!!

Lub ya muchos,

Vibu!!!!

Preview- Kripa and Angad at the wedding!!!
Edited by PyAriViBu21 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
great job conitnue soon....omg u were pregnant?
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WOW 2 replys...haha im not gonna con. unless i have 10!!! HEHE 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago

wow Vibz! just finished reading the last 2 parts!

n i must say they r mindblowing! 😳

so now plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!

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- Dharti!

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Originally posted by: PyAriViBu21

WOW 2 replys...haha im not gonna con. unless i have 10!!! HEHE 😆

oh Noooooooooo!!! 😭 😭

ok....how abt i post something for 10 times, does that count?! 😳 😉 😆

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Originally posted by: cutest_angel

oh Noooooooooo!!! 😭 😭

ok....how abt i post something for 10 times, does that count?! 😳 😉 😆

count me on that

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got u! 😃 Thanx! 😃

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aww thanku...but i need 7 more..ahaa 😆

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