Updated 2/18 P.50 ~Pehla Aur Akhiri Pyar~ - Page 30

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Part 13

Angad goes and takes a shower while Kripa does the same…. Angad comes out with a towel around his waist….(uff imagine that..hehe)…While Kripa comes out with a towel around her…Angad goes outside to go find some shaving cream from the other bathroom (the one Kripa's in)…While Kripa goes out not looking up and Angad walking really fast they both bump into each other…AGAIN…lolz…Kripa falls backwards while Angad grabs her with his huge muscular arms and stares at her…Their heartbeats are beating faster…and faster.

They continue to stare when Kripa realizes what just happened.

K- Ufff….Angad cant you ever watch where you are walking??? You always have to bump into me…

A- huh…(mesmerized by her) Then snaps out of it…Kya me always bump into you….Kripa why do u always bump into me…I mean if it wasn't for me today you would have been hurt…

K- You already hurt me by all the times your fat butt fell on me!!!

A- WHT??? Me and fat…..impossible….and its all your fault!!!

K- You know this is sooooo ridiculous….BYE…im gonna go get ready know!!!!!

Kripa just leaves mad….leaving Angad behind her..

A- Uffff….yeh ladki bhi na….but kya body hai..

Angad get his shaving cream and jst leaves from there also getting ready…

Kripa in her room thinking how STUPID Angad is but how GOOD HE LOOKS!!..

Meanwhile she starts doing her hair, she going to have loose curls which jst looks simply beautiful on her…and she does her make up …and finally puts on her gorgeous dress

This is her dress

Angad is getting ready he has a dress shirt on that is black with pink and yellow stripes on it…with some dressy pants!

HE LOOKS HOTTTTTTT!!!

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Angad is downstairs waiting for Kripa since its like 8:05 now…they are already late….

A- KRIPAAA!!!!! JALDI KARO!!!!

He was pacing back and forth ….when Kripa comes down the stairs looking AMAZING! She looks so pretty and gorgeous it completely blew Angad away…literally he was standing there with his mouth open about to fall over…

They make eye contanct all this time both looking at each other….it was a very cute site….When she reached down the steps she walked up to Angad ….For Angad his heart beat skipped and was beating faster….

Kripa comes up to him and….Closes his mouth- Mou Band Kar Duffer…(and she giggles)

A- Still looking at her even more awed by her laugh and smile….then came out of it…

A- (embarrassed)- Chale Maharani….

K- ufff…shut up…lets go now…

They both walk to the car and drive off….As they are driving Kripa realizes that they both match….

K- Ohh wow…Angad I didn't know that you idolize me soo much that you started to copy me as well…hehe

A- Shut up…I think it's the other way around sweetie…

K- Ya…Ya…

They keep on driving in complete silence….Once they reach the club they both go and walk in together. The wind blowing both on their faces…Everyone turned to see who entered…(ok ok I know this is so filmy….haha) Everyone mesmerized by there perfect ness…

Angad and Kripa go meet his friends…they are sitting at a table. They all look at Angad and Kripa…and think how cute they look together…and HOW GORGOUS KRIPA IS!

He first introduces her to Sam his best friend….

S- Hey Kripa…looking very nice….and It was a pleasure to meet you

Then he introduces her with the rest of the gang…

They enjoy and have a good time…but Angad and Kripa don't talk to each other since Kripa is still mad at him.

Angad gets approached by many girls…and they all ask him to dance he always agrees and kripa right now is sitting at the table alone…Watching Angad dance with the other girl. Her name is Tanya . (ok Tanya is Angad's friend but she likes him. I mean who doesn't she is pretty but nothing compared to Kripa). Ok now Angad looks at Kripa seeing the jealousy in her eyes. He is enjoying this…And so he pulls Tanya closer and starts dancing really close to her…

Kripa is now BURING IN JEALOUSY! She doesn't know why though. I mean who is he to her. NOTHING. She gets confused and grabs a drink…uhhem an alcoholic drink and drinks the whole glass. Then one after the other…She then ends up drunk and is just sitting there out of her brain. Then a guy approaches her and asked for a dance.

She looks at Angad and says sure. They go on the dance floor and the guy is dancing really close to her and Kripa is soo drunk to even realize it…

Angad looks over and is shocked to see Kripa DRUNK!

He is burning in anger seeing that guy so close to Kripa…he stands there and watches them…

The guy now takes advantage of her being drunk and takes her to a corner…

He starts getting closer to her and starts kissing her on her neck and holds her down…

Kripa now getting scared screams and tries to hit him…but failed…

Jst then Angad comes and takes him off her and starts the dishum dishum(hehe)

He punches him and hits him…when the security comes and takes the guy out….

Kripa is in the corner crying hysterically. Angad comes close to her and she goes and hugs him…

He tries to calm her down and hugs her tighter…. Kripa now feels protected and then stops crying …She lets go of Angad and Angad feels a part of him taken away…

A- Lets go home Kripa, your drunk!

K- No Angad, its ok…I'm perfectly fine. and she tries to walk but she falls and Angad catches her and put his arms around her waist..

A- See you're not ok. Lets go.

K- Fine fine have it your way. Chalo.

Angad is holding her because she can barely walk and they leave the disco saying their byes.

OK GUYZ thatz it…hehe

Hope you liked it..

I think it wanst good but oh wellz

Lub muchos,

Vibu

Preview- Kripa DRUNK! hehe

Edited by PyAriViBu21 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey great part ....omg haha kripas drunk? wow...continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey i just read hald of ur fan fic and i gotta say tat it rox! amzaing job and continue soon!

btw- do u have AIM?

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