Main Laksh Ki Deewani Hoon(Final Part 51-Pg30) - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
plzz plzz continue!! v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v gooooooddd,great job so farr!plz continue yaar! 😭 😆 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
That was.................
Terrific!
Great!
Faboulous!
Superb!
Wonderfull!
This part rocked!
It was perfect
loving it so far 😃
continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
Lovely ff! 😳 😳 😳 loved the L-Kt part!!cho cute!! 👏 👏 👏

-abhi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
PART 8

{{RECAP:Laksh proposes Kt...Kt runs away crying...Manthan tries to console her...She saw Laksh,Sneha,Neev and Prachi coming towards them...}}

Kt slowly went to Laksh...

K:I am sorry Laksh...I thought that...
L:(suddenly closing her mouth with his hand and looking into her eyes)Shhh....Don't say sorry Kt....I'm sorry that I hurt you....

Kt was looking back into Laksh's eyes with a happy face...Then they both hugged each other happily....Everybody clapped their hands and cheered them....Kt became shy and she ran to Sneha and Prachi...

S:(hugging Kt)I'm very happy for you dear...
N:(clapped on Laksh's shoulder)Hey man.....Are you happy now?
L:(smiling happily)All this happened because of you Neev.....Thank you so much.....(hugs him)
M:Otherwise Kt and Laksh would never have told their love to each other...Hain na Kt?(looks at Kt ,who looked down)....(he laughs)Now friends lets leave these two 'love birds' alone for some time.....

Others agreed and they all moved to the canteen leaving Laksh and Kt alone in that garden....Kt began to feel nervous,once everybody went away....She was staring to the ground...She knew Laksh was looking at her,but she felt shy to look at him...

L:Kt....
K:Haan....(looks at Laksh)
L:We shall sit here and talk...(he sits on the garden bench)

Kt silently went and sat a little bit away from Laksh without looking at him....Laksh moved to sit near her..Kt's heart began to beat faster...She was feeling really tensed...Slowly she looked at him..He was looking at her so intensely that she couldn't meet his eyes..Laksh had never looked at her like that before..She looked away nervously...

L:Kt....Why are you so silent?
K:(without looking at him)Kuch nahin..
L:(holding her shoulders and then turning her towards him)Idhar dekho Kt....
Kt slowly looked at him....He was looking at her face and smiled..

L:(in a romantic voice)Tum kitni khoobsurat ho Kt...

Kt got up shyly and turned her back towards him...Laksh also got up, he took her hand and kissed it....That was too much for Kt.....She blushed and ran away from him....He also ran after her laughing...She turned a corner and looked back at Laksh while running..She couldn't see him and suddenly she hit on to someone and stopped....She looked at the guy whom she had hit...He was her senior who was in the final year....His name was Eklavya...

K:Oh!!I am so sorry.....
E:(looking at Kt irritatedly)You are a first year, isn't it? (angrily)Dekh kar nahin chal sakti kya?
K:(feeling worried)Sorry....Mujhe maaf kijiye.......
E:Hmmmm......(and he went away angrily)

Laksh came running to her.....He saw her staring tensely at Eklavya who was walking away....

L:What happened Kt?
K:(looks at Laksh)All because of you Laksh...I hit him while running and he got angry...He is our senior....I'm afraid....
L:Don't worry Kt...He won't do anything to you....Main hoon na....
K:(taking his hand) Ab chalo Laksh...We shall go to the others..They will be in the canteen...
L:Teek hain....

Then they went to the canteen.....
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END OF PART 8......SORRY...I TOOK A LONG TIME TO UPDATE.........
HOPE YOU LIKED THIS PART............BUT PLEASE DON'T FORGET TO LEAVE YOUR VALUABLE COMMENTS.....


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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
amazig part👏👏👏
Eklavya😡
Plzzzzz continue soon😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
hey wonderful part and finally they are together 👏 👏 👏
abs fantastic

update soon

-tuba
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
sweet part 👏 !
eku 🤢 😡 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
Lovely part!! 👏 👏 👏 cho cute L-Kt are !!continue soon!!
-abhi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
PART 9

In the canteen

Laksh and Kt reached the canteen.....Neev,Manthan,Prachi and Sneha were sitting around a table..

N:(sees them)Lo aagaye hamare lover boy Laksh ,aur uski Kt....
P:Itne jaldi aagaye tum dono?(giggles)

Kt and Laksh smiled and sat with them...

L:Woh kya hai ki....We suddenly thought about going for the movie which we had planned before.....We all had planned to go for the Shahrukh film on Saturday....Sab log bhool gaye kya..?(looks at Kt and winked)(Kt looks at him surprised)
S:Haan...Woh toh hum bhool hi gaye.....!! Neev ,did you find out its in which theatre?
N:Oh..I forgot to tell you....I had found out that day itself..It will release tomorrow in Alankar theatre..
S:So we can go for the matinee on saturday....
M: No Sneha...We shall go for the morning show....So that we can go somewhere else in the afternoon...
L:Wow!!that'll be wonderful....Hain na Kt?
K:(smiled at Laksh and thought "Yeh Laksh bhi na!!") But Neev.....Will we be able to get the tickets??..Since its the next day after release there will be very much rush.....Its better to book the tickets early...
N:No problem..I will make arrangements for that...

Suddenly one of the boys in Laksh's class came to them..
Boy:Laksh.....we are going to play football..Are you coming....?
L:(gets up without thinking about anything)Haan....Main bhi aaunga...Bye friends...see you afterwards....Bye Kt....(and he runs away with the boy)
K:(with an irritated face)Byee....
N:Chalo Manthan..Hum bhi chalte hai football khelne...mazaa aayega....
M:Ok Neev...

They both said "Bye" to the girls and went away..

S:Chalo Kt...hum bhi chalte hai...
P:(irritated)Yeh Neev!!!Boys are always like this.....Main bhi chalti hoon tum logon ke saath..
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In the girls hostel at night:

It was 10 p.m...Everybody was preparing to sleep...Sneha and Kt were lying on their beds..

K:Yeh Laksh bilkul paagal hai...Woh aur uska football....!!
S:(laughs)Woh to hai.....
K:Uske paas mujhse teek se bye bolne ka bhi time nahin tha...

Suddenly Kt's mobile rang....She took it and saw that it was Laksh..She didn't pick the call for sometime.....The mobile continued to ring....Then she answered the call.....

K:Hello!!Kaun bol raha hai?
L:(in a romantic voice)Tumhari Laksh...
K:(haughtily)Laksh...??Main kisi Laksh ko nahin jaanthi...
L:Come on Kt....Naaraz ho mujhse?
K:(in a sad voice)Aur nahin to kya....?You were very busy in the evening....You didn't even have time to say "bye" properly....
L:(feeling hurt)I'm so sorry Kt...Now onwards I won't do any such thing....I promise to keep you happy always.....
K:(feels happy)Acha..??Kya kar sakte ho tum mere liye?
L:Kuch bhi..
K:(smiles)Kuch bhi??
L:Haan baba...kucccchhhh bhi.....
K:Teek hai...Teek hai...(giggles)
L:Acha....tell me one thing...
K:What??
L:Tum mere liye kya kar sakti ho?
K:Hmmm....Kuch bhi....
L:To jaldi se mujhe ek kiss dedo..
K:Kya??
L:You only told me now that, you will do anything for me....
K:Phone pe?
L:Haan...phone pe....Ok..Pehle main deta hoon....Ummuaaah....Ab tumhari bari....
K:(feels excited) Hmmmm....Jaao Laksh...Main nahin doongi....(then whispers to the phone)...Yahan pe sab log hain...Mujhe sharam aati hain....
L:Koi bahana nahin chalega...You should give me a kiss now....(laughs)
K:Kya Laksh..?
L:Ok baaba..If no one else is near you, will you give a kiss to me...?
K:Hmmm....Teek hai..
L:Promise...?
K:Promise....
L:Byee...Goodnight.....
K:Bye....
L:Ummmuaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh
K:(giggles) Rakhti hoon.....Goodnight.....

She kept the phone and lay on her bed and smiled to herself...... 😊

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END OF PART 9......
HOPE YOU LIKED THIS PART............PLEASE LEAVE YOUR VALUABLE COMMENTS.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: kt4lakshya

hey wonderful part and finally they are together 👏 👏 👏
abs fantastic

update soon

-tuba

Thank uuuuuuuu😊

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