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Posted: 17 years ago
PART 25

{{RECAP:They all go to Juhu beach..Archita and Pari blackmail Laksh..}}

After spending some more time at the beach they decided to go to Sneha's home..They all reached Sneha's home..Sneha went and rung the doorbell..It was her mother Aparna Bajaj who opened the door..Her Dad Mr.Rishabh Bajaj was a businessman..She was their only daughter..

Ap:Hello everyone..

Everyone said hello to her and they all sat in the livingroom..Sneha's house was very beautiful..

Ap:Toh kaisa tha aap logon ka journey?Sneha keh rahi thi ki Bhoomi ki shaadi hai aur isiliye woh Shantiniketan mein hi reh rahi hain..
S:Haan Mom..I don't want to miss the fun..
Bh:Aunty aap aur Sneha ke Papa bhi shaadi ke liye zaroor aayiyega..
Ap:Sure beta..

They spend the afternoon in Sneha's house and then they returned to Shantiniketan after havimg tea from Sneha's house...After reaching SN, all of them went to their rooms to freshen up and change their dresses....Laksh followed Archita to her room...

L:Archita...Ek baat poonchoo?
A:Kya?
L:(sweetly)Nahin...Tum log keh rahe the na, mere secret ke baare mein..Woh kya hain?
A:(smiled)Woh..Main kyun bataaoon aapko..?
L:(pinches her ear)Jaldi bataao..Warna....
A:Aah..Bhaiya agar aap mujhe nahin chodenge toh main chilla chillakar sab ko woh baat bataa degi..
L:Arre baap re...(leaves her ear)Teek hain..Ab bataao..
A:(giggles)Aap kya kar rahe the Kt didi ke kamre mein aaj subah..?
L:(embarassed)Woh..Kuch bhi toh nahin..Woh meri dosth hain..Issi liye wahan par gaya tha..
A:Oho...Dosth...?Sirf dosth...?Don't try to fool me..Aap aur Kt didi ke beech mein kuch toh chal raha hain...
L:(angrily)Aisa kuch bhi nahin hain...Samjhi tum?
A:Agar aap nahin batayenge toh phir hum jaake Kt didi se hi poonch lete hain..
L:Nahin..Archita nahin..Kt se kuch mat poncho...(thinks"Agar Kt ko yeh baat ka pata chal gaya toh woh mujhe maaregi..Oh no!!")
A:Kyun...Kt didi se darte hain aap?
L:Nahin toh...Woh mujhe kya karegi..?
A:(giggles)I saw her pinching you,when you tried to get close with her in the morning...And you were saying "Some mosquito bit me..."(laughs)Jaise ki wahan par bahut mosquitoes the..What an excuse..!!
L:Ok.ok..Archita you are right...Main aur Kt ek doosre se bahut pyaar karte hain...Aur yeh baat tum kisi se jaake mat kehna...Ok..?
A:Ok..Ok...Main Pari ko bataaoo...?
L:Nahin...
A:Usse toh waise bhi pata hain bhaiyya..Main bataaoo..?
L:Teek hain..Bataa do...Aur kisi ko nahin..Teek hain?
A:(happily)Teek hain...
L:Ok...I am going to my room.....
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Laksh was going to Bhoomi's room where everyone (only youngsters) had decided to meet after freshening up.....When he reached there he noticed that everyone was there except Kt...

Bh:Arre Laksh..Why are you so late?
L:Oh..Am I late guys?
Na:Aur nahin toh kya...?

Laksh went and sat near Neev...

L:(whispers to Neev)Kt kahan hain yaar?
N:(whispers back)Mujhe kaisa pata..?She hasn't come till now..
A:Kya secret baatein ho rahe hain wahan par?
L:Kuch bhi toh nahin Archita..
N:Archita Laksh poonch raha tha ki Kt kahan hain?
L:Neev...Yeh kya bol rahe ho tum..?
N:(laughs)Wohi jo tumne pooncha..
J:Laksh..Ab chupakar koi faayeda nahin..Kyun ki Archita aur Pari ne humein sab kuch bata diye...
L:Kya..?(looks at Archita)
A:Haan bhaiyya...Aur aapke in doston ne bhi hume saari premkahani suna di aap ki aur kt didi ki....(giggles)
L:Oh yaar..Ab main Kt se kya kahoonga..She will kill me!!

Everybody laughed and at the same time Kt came inside..

K:Kya baat hain?Let me also join in the joke....

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END OF PART 25......

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Posted: 17 years ago
its really gud plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was an amazing part naina so good!!!! 👏 👏 👏 hope to see more lkt romance 😉

update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
very very good I am also waiting to see more lakshya kt scenes👏

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
archita is to funny man 😆
hopefully laksh and kt don't separate 😭
please continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
IT WAS GREAT.....PLEASE CONTINUE SOON...I AM DYING TO READ THE NEXT PARTS....

PALCHIN
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thank you friends for your nice comments.... 😊 😊 The next part will be up by today evening...... 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

PART 26

{{RECAP:Laksh tells Archita that he loves Kt...Archita goes and tells the other cousins about Laksh-Kt affair...}}

Everybody laughed and at the same time Kt came inside..

K:Kya baat hain?Let me also join in the joke....

Laksh was shocked to see Kt...He thought "Mujhe Kt ko khud bataana hoga"...

L:Arre Kt...Tum..?Why are you late..?Aao mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai...(goes to her and tries to take her out of the room)

K:Kya baat hain Laksh..?(stops him and smiles)Kahan le jaa rahe ho mujhe.. ?

L:Woh..Ek important baat hain...Tum chalo mere saath...abhi isi waqt...

K:Excuse me guys...We will be back in a minute...

She came out with Laksh...Laksh was still holding her hand and he led her away from the room's door...

K:Kya hua Laksh..?Tum itne pareshaan kyun ho..?Maine beach par bhi notice ki thi..Koi problem hain kya?

L:Tum pehle promise karo ki tum mujhe daantogi nahin...

K:Aisi kaunsi baat hain Laksh?

L:Woh.....Kya hain ki...Everybody knows......

K:Knows what..?

L:Ki hum ek doosre se pyaar karte hain...

K:Kya??

L:Haan...Woh Archita aur Pari hain na..They saw me coming out of your room in the morning.......Archita asked me about it and I told her about us...But I had told her not to tell anyone..But now she told everyone of them...Yeh Archita bhi na...

K:Laksh...I told you then itself to go out na...You didn't hear me then..Ab dekho..(tears came out of her eyes)Ab kya sochenge woh log mere baare mein...(starts to cry)

L:Arre Kt...Tum ro kyun rahin ho...?It doesn't matter...They are very happy about it...Aur woh humare friends hain na...Un logon ne kya ki pata hain tumhe...?They told every bit of our love story to the others....I mean..How fair is that...?!!

Meanwhile inside the room....

Sneha thought "They haven't come back till now..Kt kaise react ki hogi?Either she will be crying or she will be beating up Laksh..."

S:Let me go and see where they went...(gets up)

A:Main bhi aa rahi hoon..(goes with Sneha)

They came out and heard Kt sobbing from one corner...They looked at each other...They went in the direction and saw Kt and Laksh..

K:Tum kuch mat kaho Laksh..They would have thought bad about me...Tumhe kya zaroorat thi aaj subah mere kamre mein aane ki...?Aur mujhse jhoot bhi bulwaye Archita se ki mujhe pata nahin ki tum kahan ho.....(sobs and hits Laksh's chest slightly with her fist)Aur Archita ne dekh bhi liya tumhe mere kamre se baahar jaate huye...Oh no!!Woh kya sochegi meri baare mein.....Hmmmmm....

A:Bhabhi....There's no need to worry.....I would love to have you as my bhabhi......Aap bahut sweet hain..Aur humare Laksh bhaiyya ke liye perfect hain.....Kyun bhaiyya...?

L:Archita..Yeh tum keh rahi ho...?Thanks a lot (hugs her)

A:Bhaiyya...Aapki pasand..Humari bhi pasand hain...(leaves Laksh and hugs Kt)

K:Thank you Archita.......

A:(leaves Kt)...Any time bhabhi..Any time(laughs)

K:Aur baaki sab logon ko...koi aitraaz nahin hain kya..?

A:Bilkul nahin...Hum youngsters ko toh koi problem nahin...

L:Baaki gharwaalon ko hum time aane par khud bataa denge...Samjhi tum...Is tarah, un logon se bhi jaake kehne ki koi zaroorat nahin hain...

A:I know...I know...Agar main un logon se bhi jaake yeh baat keh di ,toh phir aap ko blackmail karne ki chance humein nahin milegi na...(smiles)

L:Tumhen toh mein...(tries to hit her)

But Archita ran away from him...Kt laughed and Laksh was relieved...

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{{In this story, Nakul and Pari are the son and daughter of Gautam and Damini, Bhoomi is the daughter of Karan and Nandini,Laksh and Archita are the son and daughter of Sahil and Ganga… Joydeep is Sahil's friend's son who was brought up by Sahil.}}

It was the next day morning and Karan,Gautam,Sahil,Bhoomi,Joydeep,Archita,Nakul and Pari were having breakfast......Damini and Nandini were serving food at the table and Tulsi and Ganga were in the kitchen making more food...

T:Ganga, tumne Baa ke liye unke room mein breakfast leke gayi?

G:Jee badimaa...

T:(comes closer to her)Tumne Laksh se baat ki..?

G:Kaunsi baat badimaa..

T:Offoh...Wohi,jo maine kal tumhe bataayi thi...Laksh aur Krishna wali baat..

G:Oh...Woh toh main bhool hi gayi...Aaj hum donon usse jaake poonchte hain..

T:Teek hain..Breakfast ke baad hum uske kamre mein chalte hain...

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Meanwhile Kt,Sneha and Prachi came down to have breakfast......Karan,Gautam and Sahil had left for office by that time..

Na:Neev,Laksh aur Manthan nahin uthe ab tak...Sleepyheads!!

P:Kya??Woh log abhi tak nahin aaye..?Main jaake Neev ko uthathi hoon...(she went upstairs)

Everyone in SN knew about Neev-Prachi relation...But only the younsters knew about the relation between Sneha-Manthan and Laksh-Kt..

S:Aur hum jaake Laksh aur Manthan ko bhi uthathe hain...Chalo Kt...

K:Teek hain....Hum abhi aaye...

Archita winked at Kt and she smiled at her....

Sneha went to Manthan's room and Kt went to Laksh's room...Kt went inside the room and she saw Laksh sleeping peacefully on his bed...She thought "He looks really cute while sleeping...."

She sat near him and patted his head..His hair was soft and smooth.....When her fingers passed along his hair, he smiled sweetly and said "Hmmmmm...."And then he moved closer to Kt.....

Kt supressed a giggle with the other hand....She lowered her head and kissed on Laksh's forehead.....Laksh smiled and murmered in his sleep..."Hmmm...Kt.....I love you...Ummuah....."Kt giggled and raised her head....

K:Laksh…(shakes him slightly)Laksh…..

L:Hmmmm….Sone do na Kt…….

K:(shakes even harder)Laksh..Utho..Neechen sab log tumhare intezar kar rahe hain…UTHO…(loudly)

L:(pushes Kt away)Hmm…Jaao…..

Kt got irritated and opened the curtains…The sunlight flooded in through the windows and fell on Laksh's face…..He tightly closed his eyes….

L:(angrily)What is this??Archita…Sone do na…..

Kt went to the bathroom and took water in her palm and put it on Laksh's eyes and face….

L:Eeev…Archita…Kya hai yeh..?(opens his eyes and saw Kt and smiles)Arre tum..?Subah subah mere kamre mein….Kahin sapna toh nahin(and closes his eyes to check)

K: Tumhe uthane ke liye aayi hoon..Ab jaldi utho…(shakes him harder)

Laksh caught hold of her hand and pulled her…She fell right on top of him…..Laksh hugged her tightly and Kt began to struggle hard to get away from him…Laksh rolled sideways with her and he was about to kiss her lips..

K:(pushes him away,but still in his grip)Kya kar rahe ho Laksh..?Chodon mujhe….

L:(laughs)Tum kya kar rahe the..?Mere upar pani daali tum ne..?Tum mujhe uthana chahthi thi na..Ab mujhe apne neend se uthane ki keemat chukaani hogi tumhe….(moves his face closer to her)

At the same time Sneha came outside the door..Kt had kept the door halfclosed….Sneha knew better,so she didn't enter the room…She coughed from outside the door so as to give them a signal…Their faces were only inches away from each other at that time..

K:(whispered)Sneha…!!

L:Kahan…?(and left Kt)

Kt and Laksh got up from the bed feeling embarrassed…

L:Andar aao Sneha…

Sneha and Manthan came inside …

M:Laksh ko uthane ke liye itna time Kt..?Main toh jaldi uth gaya jab isne mujhe aake bulaya

…Hai na Sneha?(and smiles naughtily,puts his arm around her shoulder)

S:Aa ha ha…Main bataadoo in logon ko ki maine kya kya ki thi tumhe uthane ke liye…?Aur baaki sab kuch bhi jo baad mein hua..?

M:Nahin nahin Sneha…. Sab kuch mat bataao…(laughs)

L:I know yaar…(laughs and looks at Kt) Explain karne ki koi zaroorat nahin…Ab chalo Manthan, hum donon jaldi chalte hain breakfast karne…Chalo chalo

K:(irritated)Haan…..?Did you see that Sneha..?And Laksh you haven't even brushed your teeth,aur tumhe breakfast ki padi hain…Jaldi jaake brush karo aur neeche aajaao..We are going…Come on Sneha…

S:Aur Manthan,tum Laksh ke saath hi aajaana…Humare saath aane ki koi zaroorat nahin hain…(and both of them walks away)

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END OF PART 26......

THANK YOU FRIENDS FOR YOUR NICE COMMENTS…….😉😉

HOW WAS THIS PART??......HOPE YOU LIKED IT........PLEASE DON'T FORGET TO LEAVE YOUR OPININION..... THEY ENCOURAGE ME VERY MUCH…THANK YOU……

With Luv,😊

Naina😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
that was so awesome and cute 😳
i love the morning romance of laksh and kt 😳
please continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
Your my mind-bloeing writer.....It was awesomeeeeeeeeeeee.......please continnue soon....

Palchin

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