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so goodddddddd I love it👏

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PART 27

{{RECAP:Archita tells Kt that they are really happy to have her as Laksh's wife..}}

Laksh,Kt,Sneha,Manthan,Neev and Prachi were having their breakfast at the table when the other Virani kids came to them after getting ready...

L:Tum log sab baahar jaa rahe ho kya..?
Bh:Kya Laksh......Tum bhool gaye kya..?
S:Arre Laksh..Hum sab ne kal plan kiye the na,ki hum aaj shopping karne jaayenge...To buy dress and all for the wedding...
L:Woh..Main bhool gaya tha..sorry guys...
Pa:Aap bhi naa bhaiyaa..!!

They finished their breakfast quickly and went to their rooms to get ready....
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Laksh was dressing up when some one knocked at his door..He put on his shirt fastly and opened the door.....It was Tulsi and Ganga..

L:Arre aap log..?Kyan hua dadi?
T:Bas aise hi...
G:Hum andar baithke baat karte hain..

They walked in with Laksh and sat on his bed..Laksh went and stood in front of the mirror and was combing his hair...

T:(whispers)Tum pooncho..
G:Nahin...Aap poonchiye...

K:(looking in the mirror)Aap log kuch bol kyun nahin rahe..?
T:Waise Laksh...Hum kuch poonchne ke liye aaye the..
L:(finishes his make up and turns to face them)Kya baat hain dadi..?
T:Woh kya hain ki...Ganga tum bolo...
L:Baat kya hain..?Aap log saaf saaf kahiye....I'm getting late..Woh log mujhe daantenge...
T:Teek hain...Tu kisi se pyaar karta hain kya..?
L:Kya..??
G:Haan...Tu Kt se pyaar karta hain kya?
L:(surprised)Yeh aap log kya keh rahe hain..?

Laksh wanted to act serious but a slight smile appeared on his face..

T:Tu zyaada serious ban ne ki koshish mat kar...Tera chehra saaf saaf bataa raha hain ki tu Krisna se pyaar karta hai...
L:Par...
T:(goes to him)Kuch mat bol tu...Hume sab pata hain...(and smiles)Aur hume koi aitraaz bhi nahin hain is rishthe se...(pinches his cheek)Yeh kehne ke liye aaye the hum log...Chalo Ganga...
G:(gets up and and hugs him)Kt hume bahut pasand hain Laksh...Ab tu jaa..Nahin toh, you will be late..

Tulsi and Ganga moved out of the room and still Laksh was in a state of shock...He couldn't utter a single word......He couldn't believe his ears...He couldn't just understand what happened now...

Archita came into his room and she saw Laksh standing there rooted to the spot with his mouth open...

A:Bhaiyya...(waves her hand in front of his face)BHAIYYAAAAA.....(shouts and shakes him)
L:(comes to his senses)Haan..Archita...Tum!!
A:Haan...Main hi hoon...Kya socha aapne...Kt didi, nahin...Kt bhabhi hain?
L:(closes her mouth)Shhh......Archita...You know what...?Dadi aur Maa yahan par aaye the..Aur pata hain woh log kya kehke gaye..?Ki un logon ko humare rishte se koi aitraaz nahin...(smiles)
A:Bhaiyya...Humare rishte se unhe aitraaz kyun honge...?Hum dono bhai-behen hain na...?
L:Offoh...Archita..Tum bhi na...Mere aur Kt ke...
A:(surprised)Kya baat kar rahe hain bhaiyya...!!
L:Wait..Wait...Kya tumne yeh baat unnse kahi thi..?
A:Nahin toh...
L:Then how did they know about it...?
A:Woh bhaiyya.....Aapka chehraa dekh kar hi pataa chal jaata hain ki aap Kt didi se bahut pyaar karte hain..
L:Haan..Dadi bhi yehi keh rahi thi...Khair...Ab toh sab kuch set ho gaya hain...Main abhi jaake Kt ko yeh khush khabri deta hoon...(walks out of the room)
A:Haan..Main bhi aaoongi...(follows him out)
L:Tumhe aane ki koi zaroorat nahin hain..(and he moves to Kt's room)
A:Arre bhaiyaa...Bhabhi wahan nahin hain...(Laksh didn't hear her)...(she continues in low voice)..Bhabhi toh neeche sab ke saath aapka intezaar kar rahe hain...Teek hain aap jaakar waapas aayiye...Mujhe koi problem nahin....(giggles and moves downstairs)

She went to Kt and the others who were waiting in the living room...

A:Ek good news...!!Laksh bhaiyya aur Kt didi ka rishta sab ko manzoor hain...
Pa:Archita...Are you serious..?
A:Bilkul...Badhaaii ho bhabhi.....(and hugs Kt)
K:Archita...Tum kya keh rahi ho?(but she felt very happy)

Archita told them everything and they all felt really happy...By that time Laksh came down the staircase...He saw Kt and came to her..

L:Arre Kt tum yahan ho...?Maine tumhare room mein jaake dekha toh tum wahan nahin the..
K:Kyun doondh rahe the tum mujhe Laksh?(as if she doesn't know)
L:Woh kya hain ki..Mere gharwale humari shaadi ke liye raazi hogaye hain...(excitedly)
K:Shaadi...?!!What do you mean by shaadi...?Main tumse koi shaad-waadi nahin karoongi....
L:(surprised)Kya..?
K:Haan..Kyun karoo main tumse shaadi...?I mean we love each other...thats all......Nothing more ok...(turns away from Laksh and winks to Archita)
L:(feels hurt)What are you saying Kt...?I want to marry you...Aur tum ho ki....Forget it....!!(turns away from her feeling really hurt..)
K:(turns and holds his hand)Laksh....Naaraaz ho kya?
L:Mujhse baat mat karo tum...
A:(goes and face him)Bhaiyya...bhabhi toh sirf mazaak kar rahin thi....(laughs)
K:Haan Laksh...Idhar dekho...
L:(turns to face Kt)Kya..?
K:Aur nahin toh kya Laksh.....(smiles)
L:(hugs Kt happily)I love you Kt...I love you......
K:(embarassed by Laksh's sudden hug)I love you too Laksh...
L:(leaves Kt and sits on his knee)Will you marry me Kt....?(and holds out his hand)
K:(takes his hand)YES.....(smiles)

Everybody clapped their hands and cheered them up....At the same time Tulsi,Nandini,Ganga and Damini came to them and hugged them both.......They all were really happy for Laksh and Kt....

T:Thakur ji in donon ko aashirwaad de...
L:Ab main Kt ko Baa ke paas leke jaata hoon..Baa bhi toh dekhe Kisna ki Radha ko...

Laksh took Kt with him to Baa's room and told her to wait outside....Laksh went inside..Baa was sitting on her chair near the window...

L:Baa..(hugs from the back)
B:Arre Kisna.....
L:Baa...Is Kisna ko ek Radha se pyaar ho gaya hain Baa....
B:Acha...Kaun hain woh khushnaseeb ladki...Kahin KrishnaTulsi toh nahin...
L:Arre...Aap ko bhi maaloom hain..?
B:Haan..Haan...Tulsi bataa rahi thi...
L:Yeh Dadi bhi na...Kt, idhar aao...
K:(comes in and takes Baa's aashirwaad)Jai Shrikrishna Baa....
B:Jai Shri Krishna beta...Jai ShriKrishna....Tum dono saath mein khade raho...Zara main bhi toh dekhoon donon ki jodi...

Laksh and Kt stood shoulder to shoulder and Baa felt very happy looking at their pair.....

B:Arre yeh toh bilkul Ram-Sita ki jodi hain...Takhur ji dono ko aashirwaad de….
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END OF PART 27......

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Edited by hp_2006 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow
great update........... 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
first to read this part
and as always awesome
cont soon plz
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Posted: 17 years ago
so sweet part i really really like it 👏
can't wait for the next part😳😳😳
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was soo awesome 👏
thank good the family members don't have a problem with their relation 😊
please get them married soon 😉
please continue soon

preeti
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg itz soo good i just love laksh and kt. cab wait to read the next part. hope you cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
cont soon plzzzzzzzzzz
its reallllllllly gud
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{{RECAP: The youngsters were getting ready to go for shopping.....Tulsi and Ganga came to Laksh and told him that they were happy with his relation with Kt.....}}

😭 SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY FRIENDSSSS..........FOR MAKING YOU ALL WAIT FOR A WEEK OR SO.....I WAS NOT FEELING WELL....I WAS SUFFERING FROM FEVER AND HEADACHE......THAT'S WHY I COULDN'T UPDATE.....BUT I HAVE COME UP WITH MORE OF LAKSH-KT ROMANCE IN THE COMING PARTS,AND I HOPE THAT YOU ALL WILL LIKE IT.........AND HERE IS THE NEXT PART.......

PART 28

Laksh and Kt came back from Baa's room and joined the others and they all came out of the house.......

L:Kt.....
K:Hmm..
L:Tum mere saath mere bike par chalogi please....
K:(happily)Kyun nahin Laksh....

Laksh felt really happy......He thought "Pehli baar Kt mere saath bike par chalegi...Wow!!!"
But Kt didn't really like travelling in a bike...In fact, she was a bit afraid of travelling in a bike...She thought "Bike??!!Oh God....But bechara Laksh...mujhe itna pyaar se bula raha hain toh...mujhe jaana chahiye uske saath...."

Bhoomi,Archita,Pari got inside Joydeep's car and Neev,Manthan,Sneha and Prachi got in Nakul's car......

Laksh sat on his bike and looked at Kt who was standing beside it with a nervous face....

L:Kya hua Kt...?
K:(tries to smile)Kuch bhi toh nahin Laksh..
L:Toh phir baith jaao na...

Kt sat at the back of Laksh's bike and placed her hands on his shoulders.......Both the cars started from Shantiniketan...

L:Yeh kya Kt...?Teek se pakdo na..
K:Kaise Laksh...?
L:(takes her hands and puts around his waist)Now hold me tightly ok.....
K:Ok....(and tightened her grasp)

Laksh smiled to himself and started the bike.........Wrrrrrooooooooooooommmmmmmm...............The bike was off at super speed........

K:(holds him tight)Laksh.....Please....Zara dheere chalaao naa....
L:Don't worry Kt........You will enjoy this ride...Main hoon naa...
K:Hmmm....

Kt was really afraid and she sat closer to him and hugged him tightly.....The wind was blowing hard on her face and she closed her eyes tightly and leaned on to his back........Laksh was enjoying Kt's hug and he was smiling to himself.....

After sometime they reached the shopping mall and the others were already waiting for them outside the mall......Laksh stopped the bike and Kt opened her eyes....

L:Kt...you get down..
K:Ok...(and got down)

Both of them walked to the others...

Bh:Where were you both...?
Na:Haan...We've been waiting for 15 minutes......
L:(smiles)Sorry bhaiyya...We were caught in a traffic block...aap log humare aage nikal chuke the....
K:But....
L:(nudged her)That's why you people got early...Hain na Kt?
K:Haan..Haan...

Bh:Ok...Hum log aur Sneha ko yeh mall bahut familiar hain...Issliye Neev,Prachi,Manthan aur Kt tum log abhi decide karo ki tumhare partners kaun honge...
N:But what is the need of that...?There will be no problem....
Na:Nahin Neev...This mall is really big and we have got to split into different teams as each of us have to buy different different items...
M:I will go with Sneha...Kyun Sneha..?
S:Ok...I want to buy a dress for me first...Lets go Manthan...

Both of them went away...

Bh:Aur haan...Archita aur Pari, you will come with me...Because you are younger than us and you don't know the ways in this mall properly..
A:Bhabhi,aap bhi humare saath aayiye..
K:Teek hain...(smiles)
L:Nahin..Kt will come with me...
K:Kya Laksh...?Main kuch hi der mein waapas aaoongi...
L:Par...
Pa:Koi par var nahin bhaiyya.....come bhabhi..(pulls Kt's hand and walks away with Bhoomi and Archita)

Kt turned her head and smiled at Laksh and went away with them...

Na:I am going with Joydeep, Laksh.....I want to buy a watch....You go with Neev and Prachi..
L:Ok bhaiyya...

Nakul and Joydeep walked away....Laksh began to walk with Neev and Prachi..

L:Ab dekho na...Yeh Kt...!!Why did you guys wait for us in front of the mall...Humare bina hi tum log andar nahin jaa sakte the kya..?
N:(laughs)Kya Laksh...?Let her mingle with your family...She is going to be a part of it...
L:But...
N:Waise Laksh...Why were you late actually...?I don't think that it was because of the traffic...(smiles)
L:(smiles)Woh...!!I took another route to the mall ....One longer route...(winks)So that I could be with Kt for more time....What an idea!!
P:Tumhare is idea ne toh humare 15 minutes barbaad kar diye..
L:Haan...Haan...Tum logon ko humare liye wait karne ki koi zaroorat bhi nahin thi...Otherwise I would have been happily doing my shopping with Kt...Waise tum logon ko pehle kahan jaana hain?
P:Mujhe pehle dress khareedni hain..Neev tum choose karoge kya mere liye..?
N:Kyun nahin meri jaan...(puts his arm around her shoulders)

Prachi smiled.....Laksh badly wanted Kt to be with him.......Laksh thought"Yeh Archita aur Pari bhi na...Humesha aisa hi karte hain...Kt, tum kahan ho...?"He looked around the mall and saw her inside a jewellery shop at a far end of the mall through its glass wall...She was standing with Archita and was helping her to choose a necklace...

P:Laksh, hum is shop ke andar chale..?
L:Kya??(turns to her)Oh...Ok..Ok...

Prachi went inside that dress shop and began to do her shopping and Neev also accompanied her...

L:Neev...Main abhi aaya...Tum log yahin par rehna...Aur kahin bhi mat jaana..Ok...
N:Ok yaar...(he was happy to be alone with Prachi)

Laksh quickly went to the jewellery shop and he stood outside the shop and called up to Kt's cell...Kt saw Laksh calling and she moved away from Archita...

K:Kya baat hain Laksh?
L:Baahar dekho...
K:Kahan(and looked outside and saw Laksh)...Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho..?
L:Tum baahar aao na please...Aur mere shopping mein madat karo...
K:Ok..I will come after helping Archita in choosing her jewellery...

Archita came out when she saw Laksh...But he didn't see her coming to him as his eyes were on Kt....Archita came and nudged Laksh...

A:Bhaiyya...
L:(ended the call suddenly)Tum...?
A:Haan..Main...Agar aap bhabhi ko apne saath le jaana chahte hain toh teek hain....
L:Kya...??(he excitedly hugged her and kissed on her cheek)...YES!!

He ran to the shop and pulled Kt outside the shop...Kt was really surprised by his behaviour....

K:Kya Laksh..?Maine kaha tha na...I will come after helping Archita...
A:Koi baat nahin bhabhi...I have decided to buy that necklace which you showed to me...Its ok...
K:Ok then...Chalo Laksh...

Laksh took her to the shop in which he had left Neev and Prachi...

N:Dekho Prachi...Aagaye Laksh Kt ko lekar....Ab humein chein zaroor milega...
P:Kya Neev...?Arre Kt...Did you buy anything?
K:Nahin Prachi...
N:Kt, yeh Laksh hain na...Humein bahut tang kiya...
K:Acha...?Kya kiya Laksh ne..?
N:You went with them na...He was going on complaining about it.....
P:Kt,bechara Laksh was missing you....
L:Ab woh sab chodo na tum log...Ab Kt mere saath hain toh ab mujhe koi problem nahin...Chalo...chalo...tum log apne shopping karlo...Aur hum log bhi karenge...

After some time Kt had selected a blue colour sherwani and dhoti for Laksh for wearing at the wedding and a white coloured sherwani pyjama for wearing at the sangeet ceremony.....Laksh selected a beautiful blue colour ghagra choli for Kt for the wedding and a red colour ghagra choli for wearing at the sangeet.......By that time Neev and Prachi had also finished their shopping......
All of them came out of the shop and they met Manthan and Sneha....

K:Arre Sneha...Kya kya khareedi tumne..?
S:Bas dress hi khareedi...Ab toh jewellery,sandals etc khareedni hain..Aur tum log....?
P:Hum logon ka haal bhi aisa hi hain...
S:Toh phir aao...Main dikhati hoon ek acha sa shop...

Sneha, Prachi and Kt were walking together in the front.....

P:Neev...(turns around)Arre yeh Neev kahan gaya?Aur baaki donon bhi...?
K:Kyaa?(turns around)Oh no...!!
S:Koi problem nahin...Woh log aa jaayenge...Waise don't worry I am with you na....Aur Laksh bhi unke saath hain na...
K:(worried)Haan...Par woh log kyun bin bataaye chale gaye?
P:(irritated)Kuch bhi ho...Aane do us Neev ko…Sneha tum humein us shop mein le chalo...

Sneha led them to a ladies shop in which there were all kinds of accessories and jewellery too....After sometime they bought everything which they wanted and were about to come out when Sneha's phone rang...It was Laksh...

S:Hello Laksh,tum kahan ho....?Aur Manthan and Neev?
L:Relax Sneha....Pehle tum bataao ki tum log kahan par ho?
S:Hum woh "Her Choice" shop ke baahar hain....
L:Ok...We will be there now...

They waited outside the shop and Laksh,Neev and Manthan came to them....

K:Kahan gaye the Laksh?
P:Bataake nahin jaa sakte the kya Neev?
L:Woh...suddenly maine apne kuch dosthon ko ek shop mein dekha...Toh maine in donon ke saath wahan chala...Tum log bahut aage the...Is liye hum bula nahin paye..
S:Toh kya hua...?Ek message nahin bhej sakte the kya..?Anyway its ok...Now we have finished our shopping....
M:Hum logon ke bhi shopping ho chuke..It was a men's accessories shop...So we finished our shopping there itself...
N:Waise tum log humein call karke poonch nahin sakte the kya, ki hum log kahan par hain..?
P:Woh....Hum log ne bhi socha ki jab tum log bin bataaye hi chale gaye toh hum kyun phone karke poonche?...
L:Teek hain teek hain......There is no need to fight over this....Ab hum ek ice cream shop chalte hain....Lets relax for some time.....
S:Haan....."Melting Moments" shop chalte hain........

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END OF PART 28......

THANK YOU FRIENDS FOR YOUR NICE COMMENTS……. 😊
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it was awesome
it was worth the w8
hope u feel better now
update soon

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