~*S@F@R*~...A Journey....{LRL fic}

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello evryone,

Following a request, I have decided to put up this fanfiction here...

it was the first ever story i ever wrote and its is a little amateur but no doubt very special to me...

whether R-N or H-N you will come to know in the course of the fic...

originally titled.."kahani mein twist" as it was very different from the usual fics that had been put up....

I decided to rename it as... ~*S@F@R*~..A Journey... becoz thats watt it truly symbolises...

i hope all of you whether R-N fans or H-N enjoy reading this..and i recieve good response...

thnx..

love, Rumela

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Posted: 17 years ago
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u can't post it here, try fanfic section and give us the link 😊 PM a mod and request them to move it to Fanfic section 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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rajveer is pacing up and down his room..thinking....

...who is it...

she sd it ws sm1 frm within kma...bnt who....
and whr is she...

a knock on the door alerts him...

he opens the door and out of the blaring silence....and the dark..sm1 enters the room..suddenly...
she is anxious..wounded..but smiling

"captain.....its him...its him captain..."

rajveer rushes frward....

"doctor...i mn ritu...ritu...hang on..."

he puts her on the sofa...
and trIEs to provide first aid...
all this tym.."dr ritu mishra" looks on....and fr the frst tym....she looks on differently...

its not the gaze of a spy...not of a traitor..nor a fighter...
she jst looks at the handsome face in frnt of her...and then remembers..that nyt......

"kya baat hai.....raat k teen baje hai...mein kma ke andar..hu...
tumhara dimag kharab ho gaya hai kya....hw cn u call me now..."

"ae..chup kar...mat bhool tu humare lie kaam karti hai...naya assingment hai..."

"wat??? is it..now??"
"maar dal use...orders hai..kill him...warna hum tujhe maar dalenge..."

click...the phone gts diconnectd....

"hello....hello....."

ritu....the spy...wrkng agnst the intelligence dep...so sure of herself...
the one who knows wat she wants...knws her mind

bit her heart?..does she know her heart....


the raindrps wr prcikn her...they wr tearing her heart apart....bt why...???

no this cudnt happen...she ws the one who had devisd this game...she ws the one who had actd it out...hw cud she b so helpless...
she ws losing...losing to her own heart...to her feelings..her emotions......

he kept cmng back ...his eyes...his touch...the moment wen he dnt kn who she ws...the tym thn that they had spnt togther....

"dr.mishra.............."

his voice echoed......

"maar daal use...kill him..warna hum tujhe maar dalenge"

"dr mishra..."

"maar daal use..."

"dr.mishra....."

it ws enough ...she cudnt tk it anymore....

"NO....NO...I CNT KILL HIM....I CANNOT KILL HIM..."

she broke down...


"i love him...i love rajveer..."

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Posted: 17 years ago
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this was the proplouge..if i get response..i will continue....

thnx!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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[COLOR=BLUE]a lot had happened between that stormy night and this.....

ritu had managed to convince...her people to hand ovr to her all the informatn that provd their xsitance near KMA...and the fact that cpt navin singh ahluwalia ws framed...and she still dnt kn how she did it....

she knew...that the day she had got the informatn...wid the promise made that if she had to kill rajveer she wud have to destroy dat..the risk on her life..was inevitable....

but maybe fr the first time in all these yrs...she undrstood wat she had lost wen she had lost navin singh ahluwalia.....

she had managd to inform rajveer nearly evrythng...abt the data...about a man inside kma..who helped them..about the threat on her life...but....

"and why shud i believe a spy....."

"dnt believe a spy captain...never....bt believe...ME..."

rajveer dint know wat the power of her words were...that he felt like believng her...somehow it seemed she wsnt.."the dr mishra" he knew...

she was....yes she was....RITU..only ritu...

he had blievd her....and all this had led to this fateful night...tonyt ws going to decide a lot of thngs....

"its no use captain....."

the click of the frst aid box..brought her back to reality...its no use!!

"dr.mishra..pllzz let me do my wrk..."
"they will kill me captain....its no use...ap kuch nahi kar sakte...apki puri army bhi mujhe nahi bacha sakti..ap..."

"DR.MISHRA...PLEASE!!!!.......plz let me do my wrk..."

she smiled..."ap ki army bhi unse mili hui hai...captain..."

rajveer ws stuuned...."wat??!!!"

"major nair...."
"major???......"
"yes captain major nair....ap ko to pata hi hai unka swabhav kaisa hai....captain naveen singh ahluwalia ko phasane se...unki maut se..aur mere yaha ane se..sirf major nair ka talluk hai...aur unke saath mile hue the...major"

"major bhargav...."
"yes captain major bhargav...."

the winds were blowing wid all their might...the wr in the woods near kma....rajveer went up to close the window...and...

"dr.mishra...we have to move...chalie..."
"but captain..."
"ap chal payengi dr mishra...i know it...u r a fighter..."

she looked up at him....rajveer also looked into her eyes..bt turned...no..he dint want to accept it....

"captain...wait...ye lijiye...ap ke dost ki begunahi ka saboot is microchip me hai...."
rajveer pocketed the chip...and the went out of the house...

"dr.mishra...r u ok??

"i m fine..rajv...captain..i m fine..."
the scuffling of feets...gunshots cud b hrd in the distance...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ritu suddenly smiled..
"hmph!!!..i told u captain ..its no use...ap mujhe nahi bacha payenge...aur.."

"dr.mishra...bhale hi army me kuch log gaddar hai...lekin puri army nahi...mujhe jitna bharosa khud par hai...utna hi bharosa aur fikar army bhi karti hai meri!!
...a small group of army men and a few able cadets are bng sent here...u dnt wory..."


"cadet naina singh ahluwalia???"
"i dnt kn..."
"i know u do know captain...and i m sure..cadet singh bhi yaha ana chahengi...aftr all jis shuks ne uske bhai ko barbad kia...use to woh khud khatm karna chahengi...right captain???"

"dr.mishra ap marne ki batein bandh karengi plz...aap.."
he stopped..someone ws close by....

a pair of feet were movng towards the bush behind wich they had taken refuge..bt they cudnt move...as they wr close to a cliff....

"FREEZE...."

"naina??!!.."

"yes sir...mein..."

and then she faced ritu...

"aap ne phasaya tha na bhaiya ko??!!...aap ki wajah se..aaj tak sab captain naveen singh ahluwalia ko gaddar mante hai...only bcoz of u...main apko nahi chodungi..."dr.ritu mishra"..."

"naina..no....u will not fire...naina...."

"yeh aap keh rahe hain sir??..kise bacha ne ki koshish kar rahe hai ap???..ise..jisne ap ke best frnd ka career barbad kar dia...iski wajah se aaj mere bhaiyya...."

"inhi ki wajah se aaj tumhare bhaiya nirdosh sabit honge naina..."



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Posted: 17 years ago
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no...naina ws shocked.."yeh apko kya ho gaya hai sir...ap hosh me to hai??.."

"naina..hosh me tum nahi ho...put the gun down..."

"i dont believe this...akhir tumne sir ke sath bhi wahi kiya..jo tumne bhaiyya ke sath kia tha...kya kaha tumne inse..wat??..that u love him??!!!..
aur sir aap ne vishwas..kar liya ki ye..."

"NAINA...STOP IT....tum janti ho???.aj sabse zyada khatra yaha kise hai???...dr mishra ko...kyunki dr.mishra ne hume woh microchip diya hai jo hum dhoond rahe the..jis me tumhare bhaiyya ki begunahi ka saboot hai...!!!"


"oh my god!!!!..i dont believe this...isne aap se yeh kaha ki wahi sahi chip hai...aur aap ne man liya???!!!....hw cn u believe her??"

"woh isliye naina...ki agar yeh sahi chip nahi hota..toh aaj dr.mishra ke hi sathi..unhi ki jaan ke piche pade nahi hote....
did u get that...??"

naina's grip on the gun loosened a bit...

"how do u know they want to kill her and not u???"
"NAI.."
"CAPTAIN.....NO!!"

ritu had spoken at last....

"they will kill me naina.....
but today..i m not scared...."

..she looked up and faced naina...

"i m not scared....and i think u know why..." ritu looked sideways at rajveer....

naina put the gun down....she had understood...
but she cudnt say anythng...

"i m sorry naina....mein yeh to nahi kahungi naina..ki tum mujhe maaf kar do...i dont desrve that...but if u cn..plz..dont curse me...i already have a cursed life...hmph...and now a cursed death..."

there was indded a deadly silence...


"tell him...."...naina suddenly spoke...
"bata dijie unhe..." and she left....

it had been five minutes since naina had left...bt neither ritu nor rajveer had said a word..though maybe both knew..

rajveer dint want to face it..and ritu was racing against time..

"ah!!!"
"dr.mishra...r u ok..??"
"no captain i m not ok..."
she said as rajveer rushed forward to help her...

he was inspecting her wound...

"rajveer....i.."
rajveer suddenly got up to leave but ritu held his hand...

"no dr.mishra..."
"no rajveer....i have to say this today...i am sorry....
please....please…rajveer...i..i love you!!!"

raj turned...but he dint look into her eyes...

"i am sorry....i dint.."
he thought it was his fault..he knew wen ritu had frst looked at him in those woods that it was her love for him wich made her do this..

"please dont be..........
rajveer?..i dont want them to kill me..."

"dr..dr.ritu..ap ko kuch nahi hoga.."

"but i dont want to live either"

raj was stunned....

ritu slowly moved forward she was clutching on to rajveers one hand..and now she took the hand in wich he held his gun..

she slowly moved closer and softly kissed his silent lips....

rajveer ws still...he dint withdraw...but just waited...ritu smiled...and..

"RITU!!!!!"

her name finally came on his lips but she was very far...enveloped in the darkness of the ravine below...

wat was left was... her engagement ring in rajveer's hand..




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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice start dear plzzz do update soon

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