My FanFic: Continuation from 082504 - Page 6

Part 16

Kripa wakes up slowly...

And she looks around and doesnt know where she is

She sees that she is chained up

She tries getting out

But she is stuck

Karthik comes out and Kripa is shocked!!!

Kripa: YOU???

Karthik is laughing!!

K: I finally have you!!!!!!!!!

Kripa is trying to get out but cant

K: Try hard!! But you wont be able to get out!

Kripa: What do you want?

K: You know what i want!!!!

Kripa is confused!

K: dont pretend like you dont know!!! I want my property!!!!

Kripa: I will never give it to you!!

K: Shoot ur self!!! but you wont escape!

Kripa: You better let me go or you will be in trouble!!

K is just laughing!!!!!

Kripa has her phone w/ her.....

Angad calls her

K hears it... he gets it

K: Oh look its Angad!!

Kripa is shocked!!

K looks at the phone

Kripa: Give me my phone!!!

K: Do you want ur phone!!???

Karthik takes her phone and slams in on the floor and its break!!

Kripa is shocked!!!!!!!

Angad is shocked...

Angad: Arre whats wrong w/ her phone?

He tries and tries but no response!!!!

Angad tries to call Kripa's home

Her dad picks up

Angad: Hello dad.... is Kripa there?

Dad: No....

Angad; When did she leave from there?

Dad: LEave?? She wasnt even here!!

Angad is shocked!!!

Angad: WHat??

Dad: YEs!!

Angad doesnt want to tell him anything!!

Dad: Why any problem?

Angad: No... i was just wondering where she is.. she's probably went somewhere!!!

Dad: Okay!!

Angad: Thanks!!

Angad is getting worried!!!!

He is standing in front of his house...

He sees a pair of shoes..

The old driver thats in the bushes his shoes are sticking out..

But Angad doesnt know that

He walks up to the pair of shoes

Then he sees a leg

Angad feels weird...

Then he looks into the bushes

ANd he sees the driver and he is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Angad feels that something has happened to Kripa!! and is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cont later!!!!

that was great, plz continue soon

Part 17

Angad is shocked and he tells his parents

They are shocked!

They inform the cops and the search is on

Karthik hears about the search and goes somewhere

So if they suspect him.. he has nothing to do w/ it!

Kripa is crying and poor gal cant even do anything or escape

Her phone is gone!

Kripa is staring and some guy throws water in her face!

She is like what the hell!!

The guy just laughs!!!

He just throws water on her every 5 mins when he feels like it

There is a house where Karthik is staying at

The cops look there ask him questions says he dont know

They question him for a long time before they leave

They get convinced he didnt do it and leave him alone

After they leave he smiles!

Karthik comes back to Kripa

Kripa is giving him the evil look

K: I will be happy to let you go.. but i just need my work done!

Kripa: I will never sign those papers!!

K: Fine then!!!! I dont care!!!

Kripa is trying to get out but cant

Meanwhile Angad is getting frustrated

The cops are trying to find her but they cant

Angad is so sad..

He gets flashbacks..... of him and Kripa together

The cops are taking pix of the body

And see if their arent any clues!!

But luckily the guy was smart and planned it well

Naina tries controlling him but Angad is like... so mad!!!

Naina: The cops are trying their best!! Just relax....

Angad; How can i?? I dont know where my wife is!!! How is she?? Is she okay?

The cops decide to tap Khanna house Phones!!

Just in case someone does call

They inform them and they say its okay!!!!

But no one has called!

Angad looks for her in his car

He drives everywhere

He stops people and asks them but they say no!!

Karthik is just lecturing Kripa

Kripa isnt listening

K: Becuz of you i get kicked of my house!!

Kripa: Its not my fault... its ur fault!! You did this to urself!!!!

K: Well if hadnt come.. then you wouldnt of have to seen this day!!!!!

Kripa is sad!

Angad is driving still

The guy who kidnapped Kripa is walking on the road

He is walking like as if nothing has happened

Angad sees him and stops and asks him

The guy is shocked to see Angad

He starts sweating and everything!!

Angad; Excuse have you seen my wife???

Guy: Wife?

Angad: Yes... here's a pix of her!!!

Guy is like now what do i do?

Guy acts calm

Guy: No i havent sorry!!

He leaves

Angad thinks there is something wierd about this guy!!!

But doesnt care and drives off!!

He goes to the police station and see if the cops have heard of anything!!

But they say no!

Angad is sad!

Angad is about to leave

Before he leaves there is a wall w/ "WANTED" people on it and one of them is the guy!!

Angad is shocked!!!!!!!!!

Angad has a flashback of seeing him

Angad thinks that he's a criminal.. and he did act funny!!

He thinks about it!!!!!!


Okay the End!! Cont tomorrow!!

that was great guli jaan, keep up the good work and continue soon 😉

Part 18

Angad is shocked at seeing the guys picture on the wall!!!

Angad thinks about how suspicious he looked!

The guy goes to Karthik

G: Well some1 bumped into me today!!!??

K: Who?

G: Angad!!!

Kripa is shocked!!!

G: And he asked me..i had seen his wife!!!

Kripa is sad!!!!

K and the guy laugh!!

Kripa is there crying her out!!!

Kripa: He will find me!! You watch!!! And when he does he wont leave you!!!!!!!!!!

K: Shut up!!! No one told you to talk!!

Kripa: I will if i want to!!

G: Hey girl... didnt boss say to keep ur mouth shut then keep it shut!!!!

Kripa gives them a mean look!!

G comes up to her and starts touching her leg

Kripa feels uncomfortable...

Kripa kicks him off with her foot

The guy gets angry

He grabs her Mangalsutra

Kripa is screaming not to touch that!!

The guy doesnt care and snatches it off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kripa is so sad!!!!! No one can imagine!

The guy puts it in his pocket!!!

K: I am going to sleep...... hope you have a nice nap!!!!

Kripa is too sad!!! to react to anything!

The guy leaves!!

He is walking all happy!! Its the middle of the night

Angad is still driving around... he is thinking how Kripa could be....

He starts crying!!!

He is going crazy!!!

Then all of a sudden the guy pops out

Angad sees him

The guy sees him to!!!

Angad gets out of the car and the guy runs...

ITs a cat and mouse game

Then atfer a while the guy falls

The mangalstura falls out from his pocket

Angad sees and is shocked!!!!!!

He knows that its Kripa's!!!!!!!!

He picks it up and looks at it!

The guy is running but angad runs so fast and catches up

He beats him up...

He beats him so bad...... then he cant get up!!!!

Angad asks where is Kripa!!!

Guy doesnt say anything

Angad beats him up even more!!!

He's literally on the ground

Angad gives up and starts walking back to his car

Angad gets into the car....

He sees the guy walking

Angad follows him.....

Guy returns where Karthik is.....

Angad parks his car far and walks.....

He is quiet!!!!!

Guy comes there

K: What happened?

G: Angad... (stutters)

K is shocked

So is Kripa

G: But.. he saw the mangalsutra

K is like how can you be so careless!!!

G: But he beat me up.. but afterwards he left..... so i dont know where he went!!!!

K is like thank god!!

Angad gets closer

Kripa feels Angad's presence is somewhere!!!!

But its probably becuz she's missing him!!!

Angad gets there and he's like where am i?

He gets closer

He is outside

He looks from the window

And when he does he's shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Okay i will cont later!!!!!!!!!!!

that was great guli, y did u have to stop there....plz dont keep us in suspense for soo long and continue soon

Plzz continue guli.. I luv ur fanfic.. U r doing a great job keep it up..

Part 19:

He gets closer

He is outside

He looks from the window

And when he does he's shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Angad sees Kripa tied up to the bed!!!!

He is looking on and is so sad!!

He cant stand to see Kripa like that!

He wants to just go and get her but he cant!!!

And then Karthik comes out

Angad is like OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He is shocked that Karthik is behind all of this!!

He has this mean face like he wants to kill him!!

Kripa is crying and thinking of Angad

Little does she know that he is standing outside!!

Angad is thinking of a plan!!!

Thinking and thinking and finally he thinks of one!!

He calls the inspector

He tells him everything

Angad tells him not to do anything drastic

What his plan is..... To report on TV that they are going to interview her whole family!! Meaning Angad's family!!

But it will only work when he turns on the TV

So as soon as someone turns on the TV then Angad will inform.........

Angad just stands there the whole night looking at Kripa!!

Next Morning:

Angad calls Naina and tells her everything

She is shocked when he tells her that it was all Karthik

Angad tells her the plan and she goes along w/ it!!

Then Karthik turns on the news

Angad informs right away

The inspector gets on it

Then there is a special report about Kripa's case!!

Kripa is like i finally get to see Angad... (on TV)

Karthik is shocked cuz he has to be there!!!

He leaves

Angad sees him leaves and is happy!!

The Guy leaves w/ him

Kripa cant escape anyways.... so they know she cant do anything!!

Angad planned has worked!!!!

He waits to see if the coast is clear

After 5 mins he goes in

Kripa is on the bed looking all sad!!

Angad comes in

He looks at her

Angad: Kripa????

Kripa looks up and is shocked to see him!!!!!!!!

Kripa: ANGAD?!

They look at each other!!

He goes to her and she is thrilled!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It gets all emotional!!

Kripa: Angad??? PLease get me out

Angad tries opening the chain but cant!!

He tries everything

Kripa: God knows where he put the key!!!!

ANgad looks everywhere!!!!

He is looking up and down eveywhere for the key but cant find it!!!

Then after 15 mins... he finds it

He opens it and Kripa is free

They look on TV and they see Karthik there

They escape.... Angad takes the key w/ him

But before leaving

He takes out the Mangalsutra and puts it on her....

She cries and they hug!!!!!!!!!

After everything they leave!!

But they dont know that the Press Conference is over!

The Inspector calls Angad... and tells him its over

They are still closeby

Karthik has left and should be anytime soon

Angad and Kripa get into the car

Then they see Karthik coming in his car

Angad is shocked

He tells Kripa to duck down which she does

He turns his face to the other side but Karthik wasnt paying attention!!!!

Karthik gets there and see's Kripa is not there!!!!

He is shocked out of his wits!!!!!!!!

K: Where could she have gone???

He looks for his keys and they arent there!!

He is like what just happened?? Where is she??

K: She couldnt have gone.. she was tied up really well

He calls that guy..

Guy is shocked!!!!!!!!!!

Angad and Kripa finally arrive home

Naina is so thrilled to see her

They both hug!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Now the question is how to catch Karthik... .Becuz he will deny he had nothing to do w/ this!!!!

Angad tells Naina that they have the key for the chain... that Kripa was tied up w/!!

Meanwhile Karthik is gone totally crazy!!!

He doesnt know how Kripa could've escaped!!

Then he thinks that Angad wasnt there at the conference!!!!

He calls the inspector....

Inspector picks up the phone

I: Hello?

K: Hello Karthik here!!

Inspec. is like well well well..

I: How may i help you?

K: Umm... How come Angad wasnt there at the conference?

I is like what should i say?

K: Hello?

I: Sorry got caught up in something... I already talked to Angad.. he was in the house... He couldnt face the crowd.. so thats why all of you guys where there!!!!

K: Okay thank you!!

He hangs up

Inspec is like Whew!! That was close

K: Okay so it cant be Angad!!!!!

So who could it be?

Khanna House:

Angad is thinking how to get Karthik.....

Then he thinks that the guy was involved.. and he's on the wanted list as well

Angad calls the inspec....

The police search for him

They look but cant find him

Then they see him walking on the road and they arrest him

They take him in...

He's not saying anything about Kripa!!!

He is keeping his mouth shut!

They beat him and beat him.... and he still wont open!!

There is another press conference about Kripa being found

Karthik is shocked that she is already back home!!!

Karthik is like now i am dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


The End! I will cont tomorrow!!

Preview:

Kripa: The person who did this to me was.............

Karthik is like shocked and sweating!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that was great, plz continue soon

that was really awesome..............plz contiune...........

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