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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ktandlakshyalov

i realyyyyyyyyyy loved!!it as usual lovely part!!
xcontinue soon!!

-abhi

thanks!

i am glad u liek my ff😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Angelic_Pari

Wow Nikky i am loving it...gr8 idea and amazing part asusual.... 👏
Cont. soon 😳

Pari

i am glad u liedk my idea!and thanks for ur comment!i luv all my readers and commenters😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: tava

what a cute part i just loved KT 😆 well continue soon 👏 👏 👏

thanks!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: kt4lakshya

OMG!!! nikky that was such an amazing part and cant wait for the romance

-tuba

yup i can't wait to write the romance😃well if u guys want u can always give me idea's just post them here!and i will happily use them😃

thanks for the comment!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: saira_1

i agree😳

gr8 part👏👏👏-i love reading ur ffs😳!

thansk!u guys are makign me blush!😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: uru_hershey

havent visited this section in years... ~SIGH~...
But This FF is sooooo awesome nikki! You have improved a lot!!!...good work... 👏 Will comment everytime now... 😃 Sorry... LK scenes were soooo funny and cute.. 😆 Great going... 👏

wow!i was wondering where u were!lolz

thanks😃u really think i improved😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: P u j a- -*

Reallyy Good Part!! Love How Kt Is In This FF ..Really Open && Not So Shy 😊 Haha ... She Nicked His Wallet .Shame 😛 Anyway Great Part! 👏 Cont Soon 😃 x

lol thansk for the comment!

well what coudl the poor girl do she was hungery lol!i woudl do the same, plush she left him soem candy at the back of his bus😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#38

chapter 3

Kt was laying on the grass, her clothes drying under the hot intense sun.Laksh was changing into some other clothes.
L:arent you going to change?
Kt:what's the need to change?my clothes are dryed why waste more clothes?
Laksh looekd at her like she was a crazy person.
Kt:i am just kidding thats disgusting calm down i iwll change!

Kt went behind some trees and changed into a yellow salwar suit.She walke dup to Laksh who was trying to skip rocks on the water.

Kt:here i will wash your clothes for you.
L:we don't have a washing machine!
Kt:phhhhhhhh!in Punjab we washed our clothes by hand!when will you ever learn, you and you'r fancy machines!here give me your clothes.

Kt took her and his clothes and bent down near the lake she carefully washed each peice of clothing in the water.
Kt:tell me about you'r life? 😃
L:what do you want to know about my boering life? 😉
Kt:anything?your past..........your daily life?
Laksh looked at her and then looked at the ground.
L:i have never ever told anyone this before but.....well can i trust you?
Kt:of course i won't say a word to anyone.

Kt finished washing the clothes and hung them up on some tree branches.She sat beside Laksh and looked at the peacefull tranquil lake.

Laksh began his story.

L:Well i was truly in love with a girl, she was hot, sexy,preity but just after my money.Her name was Sonia.I was her boyfriend for quite along time then i found out sh ejust liked me because I owned a big buisness and I bought her pretty clothes and jewlery, i broake up with her as soon as i found out.

Kt:well then whats wrong?

l:it hurts!She used me for so long i thoguht she loved me, but no just after my money, i can't forget about that!

Kt looked at him.

Kt:realationships are very .........um verry well i don't know because i have never been in one but i talked to my mom and she said she was getting me engaged with her grandson, some one named Manthan who i have neve rmet but thats another reason why i am going to Mumbai to get merried!well any ways as i was saying a relationship ahd lots of twists and turns, ups and downs, goods and bads but you have to get over it she only liked you for th emoney so oh well,nah?you braok up with her she got what she deserved!

Laksh found it alittle wierd that her Mom's name was Tulsi just liek his Grandma's and she was getting merried to Manthan who was his cousin's name.what ever he thought.

L:thanks, that made me feel better.........a bit.

Kt:you'r welcome!now what do you want to eat dor lunch?we have 600 rupees in this wallet what would you liek to eat?

Laksh looked over at Kt.

L:so you'r gonna marry a guy you never even met?
Kt:yeah i guess!well only if i fall in love with him on first sight if not bye-bye,If my maa realy want's me to i will because i love her!

Laksh smiled again.

He leaned over and hugged her they stayed liek that for a few minutes.Laksh was mezmorizing the flowery soft smeel of her hair and body.

Kt pulled out.

Kt:so let's go, we can reach Mumbai faster!
L:didn't you want to eat soemthing?
Kt:nope.
Kt got up picked up her clothes and belongings and held Laksh by the arm as they both walked to the train stop.

Talking to her makes me forget everything in my life, Laksh thoguht.She so perfect..........but she talks to much".

Laksh laughed otu loud,(oh-oh did i just do that out loud? moment)

kt:Okay what ever you'r wierd!!!!hhahahahah.freak. 😃
Laksh smield and hit the back of her head while they were walking.

to be continued
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I hope you guys liekd it!pleas eleave ur comments!

Edited by ~NiKkY~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

Yay! First freak to comment! 😆 Awesome Part Nikki!!!

And I reallly think you have improved girl... nice going... keep it up! 👏

totally terrific... 😳 😳 😳

Edited by uru_hershey - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
Awwww Reallyy Cutee Part! 😊 Hahaa ..Loved It When Laksh Laughed Out Loud 😆 Really Well Written :)

,,x

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