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Posted: 17 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: chinmayi

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hey darling amazing pasrt again. u just keep on growing my interst day by day
plzz keep posted asap 😊

thanku jee, i noe...I'm jus so gud in creating interests...keep reading buddy...abhi to story shuru huwi hai...I mean LOVE STORY❤️

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Posted: 17 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: aaakkii

uski chhod na...tu bataa teri bolti band huwi ke nai😆

Meri to dil ki dhakane hi band ho jati hain yaar,Rajeev(Ryan)😉 ka naam sunte hi😳!! Bolti kya cheez hai !!😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#83

WOWWWWW, Rajeev Aamna's jodi FF 😃 👏 😃 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#84

amazing part...👏....i just loved it......totally differnet concept........janvi is a crazy girl......poor meenal .......so excited to know what ryan is going to do now....😆......i mean ryan and janvi alone in the hunted house..😉....it could be turned out in romantic way or could be a cute fight........anyway love to know what happen....😳..hey if i get a electrician like ryan, i wont give him money for repiar ......i will give him a ring and make me all mine..🤗

🤗...just kidding......but think about it......u find rajeev as your electrician.......i would kidnap him....😳...ple ple continue soon....thanks
love
kashish

Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
hey very nice story.i mean the concept and story line i s mindblowing......i av read ur whole story till now............its mindblowing and amazing👏 plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
amazing part 👏

plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
hey swty plzz jaldi post karo naa me w8ing desparately 2 read the next part 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88

"Do I look like I'm God…."

She looked at him quietly for almost 10 seconds…as if checking him out & then turning her back towards him…

"Such a silly question!!!!!….who r u?????"

"I think U called for an electrician…dint u???"…saying this he bujhaaoed his lighter…it became dark again….

"Yeah !!!!! right……n hey keep ur lighter lit up, its so dark"

"there's no need actually!!!!"..…saying this he held both her hands really tightly & before she cud say anything ….something hit her head really hard…. N the dark room became darker in front of her eyes n she lost consciousness………

He swiftly lifted her in his arms n ran towards his car, which was parked outside the gate n then opening the back door he kept her inside safely…..then without wasting any time he drove d car to his destination

So, wats the moral of d story……..Ryan kidnapped Jaanvi…interesting…… no……

He reached his place finally ….took her out of d car n opening the door lock took her inside…… seated her on a chair & tied both her hands n legs in the chair….after he was finished with it….he went inside n took out a mug full of water & gently sprinkled water on her face………slowly she opened her eyes……

"ouch!!!!!!……..STOP IT!!!!!!!!"…..she angrily looked at ryan , who was sprinkling water on her face

Ryan stopped doin the same, n went ahead to put the mug at its right place…

"WHERE AM I???????"….she cried out loud….

No response….

"WHY HAVE U HANDCUFFED ME??????"

again no response…….

"U IDIOT!!!!!!…. JUS FREE ME ONCE …….I SWEAR I'LL MURDER U!!!!!!"

When she finally heard no reply….she started weeping very very loudly…n it was not at all pleasant to the ears as her voice went suddenly at high pitch n then Low time n again…..big tear droplets began to trickle down her chubby cheeks….n yup she was looking so very cute………

"MUMMA!!!!!!!!…….PAPA!!!!!!….BOOOHOOOHOOOOO…WAT DO U WANT??????……..U SCOUNDREL ………Dog ki maut marega tu… Hell ke fire mein burn hogaa!!!!!! U COCKROACH!!!!!!"

Ryan finally came back, really irritated & red with rage….he was a quiet person ….n this gurl…agrrrrrhhhhhhhh…….

"SHUT UP!!!!!! "…..finally it was his turn to scream….

She immediately shut her mouth up……she was scared actually….it was the 1st time someone chided her…..wo bhi itni zor se…bichaari

He came close to her…..so close dat he cud sense her heart beat,which began to rise higher n higher as he was cuming closer………he began in his normal soft voice…….

"listen baby!!!!!……I'm nt ur P.S. who wud listen to all the rubbish u vomit alright, next time I find ur voice any louder…… I promise…. U wont be able to speak for the rest of ur life….got it!!!!!!!"………he looked into her big pretty eyes which were ghooring him…..

"LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!!!!"……….she screamed again in a voice louder than earlier …….with a look on her face dat said "apni ye akad kisi aur ko dikhaao….main tumse nai darti…"…..hehe

U remember , how closer was Ryan to her……..imagine wat wud have happened to him wen her deafening supersonic sound pierced his eardrums……he gave her a real disgusting look…..phew!!!!!!……poor he or should I say poor she…..becoz d next thing which happened was Ryan chipkaaoing a tape on her mouth…….

"Is dat fine now!!!!!!!"

It was finally an hour….n finally Jaanvi seemed exhausted , her eyes were swollen , n finally the tears had stopped….Ryan was busy with his laptop …n seldom did he care about this cutie captive of his…..

Sorry, small part ,I hope u enjoy it .....do comment soon

Luv,

Akanksha😛

Edited by aaakkii - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
Hehehehe! U bekhandii.....U cant do this.....Write bigger parts.....Itni cute part likha aur itna chota.....Kal write a bigger part warna i will get u kidnapped!! 😆

P.S - Still wondering what bekhandi means.....PM karke pooch le !! 😆 ....Mood hoga to bata dungi !! 😆
Edited by togepe30 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
oh my god...😲....what an interstring part...........i would love to be in jaanvi's place...😉...can u imagine ryan kidnaap u...😍..lucky jaanvi....😳....it is going so good..👏..ple continue.....thanks for updating......hope to see some romantic scene between them..❤️..thanks

love

kashish
Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago

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