DES PARDES 1(kyph) parts1-27 - Page 6

Originally posted by: amneet89

kk me first...first one to reply after the first part...well kripa is really something to handle...wow i like her she is just knocks off her mum and that line di...Mistress of spices...i loved it...i can not believe kripa hates her culture so much...wonder how she lives with her parents...she is such a brat but i still like her...this girl has got guts...she was so confident that she will get a date...Zaib on the other hand is such a sweety😳he is so adorable...i loved his gift that he gave to aaliya...i love when they all tease him about his pari...and the way he blushes awww di...i can imagine that😳😍i just can't wait for them....

FANTASTIC FIRST PART....I M ADDICTED ALREADY...U ROCK DI👏

waiting impatiently for next part di😉

Asever😳

Amneet😉

Thanks amneet...loved ur comments. Kripa actually stays in a dorm at her univ but was home for Navratri celebrations. She is indeed a brat in this one, but let us see how she will change for the better. It will take quite some time tho 😆

Originally posted by: mita_mita01

ohh wow...great start....man kripa is soo arrogant she doenst even respect her mom 😡 ...but its ok hopefully anagd will change that 😉

OK…whatever….just do it….and just touch the teeka lightly…..don't dig it in like a tattoo….it took me 5 days to get rid of that red color from my forehead last time…..next time I might need a whiteout or something,"...

...she needs whiteout to remove the tikka??... 😆 😆

She tried to cover her face as it was quite chilly, "yuck!" She peeled the jacket away from her face, "smells like curry….Jesus!….That is why I hate staying at home even one night….I smell like a freaking Indian restaurant next morning!

🤣 🤣 oh godddd lovved that part...I was cracking up soo much during her siily complains tehy were sooo funnyy....I really like kripa's charcacter even though shes mean and all.....she still is a great comedian...its soo funny....

..Awwww angad is choo chweettt....hes so obidient (spelling?).....but i kinda miss the naughty and teasing angad...hopefully that will change later on as teh story progressess....,,,,great start...continue soon and keep up the great work 👏

Thanks mita. Kripa has a habit of exaggerating stuff in this ff...of course she did not need whiteout, that is her way of telling her mom how annoying that teeka is to her 😡 Zaib is very sweet indeed....i know we miss naughty zaib but may be he will become naughty once Kripa comes into his life 😳

Originally posted by: jdsean

Great part!!! Love that some of the Khwaish characters are in the story. Kripa really has no respect, and is too arrogant, but I love this Kripa, because we always see Angad as the arrogant one. I love Zaib, and his whole family. Can't wait for more.

thanks JDsean. Yes the tables have turned in this one. I have always showed Kripa as the nice and sensitive one, but wanted to do something different this time 😊

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

so it is time for khwahish and KYPH... interesting... nice character sketch.... 👏 👏 👏
what an attitude,, Kripa!!! my god... zaib is gonna have a tough time.. 😆 😆 bechara... 😆 😆
a small request... i dont understand gujarati completely.. can u plz give the translation... 😳 😃

thanks abhilasha. Even i am not gujju...so don't worry i won't use much gujarati. I will translate it or just write hindi instead. Thanks 4 the suggestion

Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani

awesome part bheegi...

i totally loved it...kripa is such a spoiled brat...gosh she doesnt have to hate being an indian...i know a lot of people like that and it gets on my nerves...anyways dont mind but you made one error...in the beginning you wrote 'angad' instead of 'zaib' on accident....but i still loved the part...continue soon dear 👏

annoying
sukhi 😃

thanks sukhi...yes there are a lot of youngsers like Kripa who hate being associated with desi stuff. Really, i wrote Angad? sorry...force of habit...will be careful next time. Thanks 4 pointing that out 😊

Originally posted by: a-k-fan17

it was scch a great part loved it!! kripa is such a brat 😆 😆 coont soon nd btw when u write in gujati or dunno which language its can u write the translation in english please as i don't get a word 😆 😳

thanks akfan. Don't worry, i am not gujju eaither so will not write any more gujarati and if i do, i will def translate it 4 u. thanks again 😊

Originally posted by: *Ejaz4Hinna*

oooooooo im loving kripas character alredy!!!!:P
as for zaib....i dnt lyk him being mama's boiii:( hes better when hes nawty! lol! but this zaib remind\z me of da angad in mixed doubles:P
awwww aaliyah is so luckyyy....my brothers give me nothing on eid lol:(
and hmmmmm i think kripas date will b prithvi!

kripa is a total brat in this one. U have seen nothing yet...u might even hate Kripa at some point 😡 Zaib is an obedient and respectful son but his mom is not like Naina in MD. She is more affectionate and less controlling. Hinna, u have an important role in my ff...u will find out soon 😉

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

wow. gr8 1st part. im lookin forward 2 readin another fan fic of yours. sounds intersting.

thanks angullgrl 😊 i can always count on u 😃

amazing first part!!
wow kripa really hates the indian culture!! hehe she is so opposite of me!! i love doing all that stuff!!
hehe the reference to the teeka and whiteout was funny!!

mistress of spices...thas cute!!
god!! kripa is such brat!! she would choose to walk in the freezing cold rather than wear a jacket!! gosh! kripa grow up!!
and omg!! i also had a purple jacket once...oh god how i hated that jacket!!! hehe!!

and zaib is such a sweetiepie!! he is adorable and cute!!
he will be in a shocker when he meets his pari aka kripa!! 😆

p.s. --> when kripa yelled "no aau chu as in no i'm not going...its supposed to be no nathee jaawaanee!! (the way u wrote it sounds like "no i'm coming" unless u want her to be weak in saying gujrati then its fine cuz that would mean "no coming" as in not going)...lol...i hope understood this mash mesh!! 😆

i loved it!!!

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

amazing first part!!
wow kripa really hates the indian culture!! hehe she is so opposite of me!! i love doing all that stuff!!
hehe the reference to the teeka and whiteout was funny!!

mistress of spices...thas cute!!
god!! kripa is such brat!! she would choose to walk in the freezing cold rather than wear a jacket!! gosh! kripa grow up!!
and omg!! i also had a purple jacket once...oh god how i hated that jacket!!! hehe!!

and zaib is such a sweetiepie!! he is adorable and cute!!
he will be in a shocker when he meets his pari aka kripa!! 😆

p.s. --> when kripa yelled "no aau chu as in no i'm not going...its supposed to be no nathee jaawaanee!! (the way u wrote it sounds like "no i'm coming" unless u want her to be weak in saying gujrati then its fine cuz that would mean "no coming" as in not going)...lol...i hope understood this mash mesh!! 😆

i loved it!!!

thanks desiqt...thanks for fixing my gujju...i will not write anymore gujju phrases unless Kripa is saying them so they can sound funny 😆 😆 I had a horrible purple jacket too that is why i wrote that part 😆 Give me ideas if u have desi friends who hate desi stuff...would love to hear from youngsters and their point of view 😊