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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks afifa!
wow i was waiting soo long for u to continue!! 😊
but i hope ridhima realizes that she and armaan are meant to be together šŸ˜›

and this wasnt boring at all!..i liked the way you potray dr.kirthis soft-side .
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Posted: 17 years ago
i wish armaan wud have listened 2 keerti n ridz's convo.....tch........plz continue soon..........lyked d way u actually described her pain.tht was 2 gud.plz continue soon...........
luv ur ff
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Posted: 17 years ago
I HAVE NOT SEND ANY PM TO ANYONE...SORRY


PART 16


Re-cap: in part 15 u see that Dr.keerti knew everything about armaan and riddhima....and she tells everything to riddhima...and wants to help her out....riddhima is in a grave schock...but accepts the truth.....and accepts her help also....(PART 15 PG.42)

PART 16



PART 16

The Same Night since the Last Part (15)……………….

Armaan came home….he was all wet!..........from head to toe…..he rang the door bell……….(this is where new characters are introduced!)

A girl opened the door……

Girl:…Arre!!!!......TUM!!....aur yeh kiya?

Arm: without answering just entered the house….(in was a mehal(mansion))

The girl just stood there…..then she went back to him…..

Girl: armaan mein tumse poochri hoon!!..kiya hua tum itni geelay kyun ho?....

Armaan just ignored her and went up the stairs to his bedroom……

Girl: arre! Isse kiya hua?

Armaan entered his room…….and went to look at himself in the mirror……

Arm: (crying)…tujhse bara kaamina toh ho hi nahi saaktha…….kyun tu usse pyaar karke betha hai…..jab who tujhse pyaar hi nahi kaarthi?.....he then took his hand and hit the mirror with full anger and force……the mirror broke and that girl came running in the room…….she opened his bedroom door and saw the blood on his hand and some on floor with the pieces of mirror all over the ground……

Girl: armaaan!!! She went rumming to him….and took a hold of his right hand….

Girl: yeh…yeh tu ne kiya kia?...paagal hogayya hai kiya?...with tears in her eyes….

Arm: who mujhse pyaar nahi kaarthi hai…..he said while he went forward to hug her like a baby still crying…..
Girl: kaun?....she hugged him by his head smoothing his hair with her fingers…while his head was on her shoulder…..

Arm: Di….Riddhima!...... (in a faint voice)

*that girl was armaan's older sister (Di)…her name is Meera and this is how she looks like…………….*

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She is Meera Mallik…..the older daughter of the Mallik mansion….she is 26 years old and she is a teacher who teaches little children(ages 6 to 10) how to dance …so for them she is their Guru……she teaches all types of Hindi cultural dance……Sometimes the kids come to her place or they meet up at a Studio where professionals dance and learn……….For her Armaan is her life….she depends everything on him and so does he…..she is like a mother to him….she also sees armaan like her best friend…he is a baby to her…..even though he is just 22…..


She took him to the bed and made him sit….she sat next to him……holding his face……

M: kiya hua?....batao bhi na…..thero..mein iski dressing karvathi hoon….

She rushed to the washroom and got alcohol, cotton and bandages…..
Meera rushes back and applied everything on him and bandaged it properly….

M: doctor toh nahi hoon..leken yeh saab kuch toh mujhe aata hai…..and let a laugh out…

Armaan smiled at her joke …….

M: toh batao kiya hua mere baache ko?...tu aise roh kyun raha hai..yeh tumne kiya kia?.....holding up his chin

Arm: di…Riddhima ne…..and he told her the whole story still having tears in his eyes…and she also had tears in her eyes…..

Meera hugged him…..while he cried his heart out……..mein usse nafrat kartha hoon…nafrat…armaan said while he was sobbing on her shoulder……

Meera ran her hand up and down his hair……aisa nahi kehthai hain…..she said…

She then lifted his head up and wipped his tears….dekho abb yeh rona dhona band karo please…mujhe aacha nahi lagtha hai……she said…

Arm: he wipped his tears…..and looked up at her….

Arm: Di..abb mein usse kabhie baat nahi karoonga……kabhi nahi…na mere dil mein uss kiliyeh jaaga hai….

M: armaan….thande dimaak se soocho…..shayaad uski koi maajboori hogi….u never know…..trying to assure him….

Arm: Di! Kiya aap mere side par ho…ya uski? …..

M: aacha baba im sorry……liken phir se sooch le na…..

Arm: meine soochliya!....then he got mad….

M: uffo!....tu toh gussa hogayya……aapne Di ke saath naraaz hai tu?

Arm: he held her hand……mein aapke saath tho gussa kabhi ho hi nahi saaktha ….then kissed her hand……

M: chal chal itna emotional honi ki koi zaroorat nahi hai….then she smiled…..tu araam kar…..mein tere liyeh khana lekar aathi hoon……

Armaan started to sneeze……accho!

M: offo!...tere kapre abhi taak geelya hai….chal mere tere liyeh kapre nikal thi hoon….

Meera got up and got out his night suit……it was a white sleeve shirt….and black track pajamas……she also got a towel out for him ……she helped him with his shirt because of his hand….and dried his hair….she went out so that he could change his pants….then came back in….

M: she took his wet clothes and put them in the laundry basket and told the nokar (servant) to take it to the laundry room…..

Armaan went to lay down on his bed……Meera went to get food for him…..then she came back and fed him and gave him garaam chai to drink….because he was starting to catch a cold…….

M: lo! …..teri toh full service hogayye!...and let out a cute smile….and then laughed a bit…

Arm: thnxx di…aap kitni aachi hai….and went to place his head on her lap….and closed his eyes…..

M: armaan!...and she touched his head…..chal abb uth….aur soja!....

Armaan got up and she tucked him in…..he went to sleep….Meera smiled and kissed his forehead and closed the light and went out closing the door behind her………………..


Next Morning…….At the Gupta's

Anjalie got up and went to get dressed in the …she took a bath, applied some make up, and got dressed in a orange color tight top and skinny jeans…… Anjalie woke up Riddhima….

An: ridzy utho!...sitting next to her touching her hair….

R: di…sone do na!...abhie abhie toh aiyye hoon…..

An: abhie abhie?......yeh tum kiya kehri ho??....

R: arre di!!..…..meri night duty thi na!!......and took the pillow and covered her ears and head with it…

An: ohh!! Haan!!..sorry yaar!...ok bye mein chalthi hoon…and moved the pillow and kissed her cheeks….

R: urrghh Di !!

Anjalie ran off downstairs did breakfast and drove to sanjeevani……

Same morning at the Mallik's……..

Meera got up like 2 hours before which meant it is 8:00 Am now and started to go and make breakfast…..

M: armaan toh abhie utha bhi nahi…she said to herself while making butter toast…..

M: Armaan!!!...she yelled….Uttho!.....akke nashta karo na!!!..she yelled from the kitchen….

M: yeh ladka kiya karaha hai!....she said to herself….abhie mein usse dekhthi hoon…she said while walking out of kitchen……

Woman: Ruko!....someone yelled from behind….

Meera stopped…and she turned around…..

M: kiya hua?.....in a scared tone….and shocked at the same time……

Woman: usse uthane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai…..chalo jao rassoi (kitchen) mein aur hum saab ke liyeh nashta banao!!......she said fiercely….

M: paar Ma…

Woman: mein teri Ma nahi hoon…samjhi!!!

**** This is another New Character ****……….She is Armaan's and Meera's Step-mother….since their childhood their real mom passed away in a car accident…..and two years after that their dad married another woman……
Her name is Suman Rajput Mallik……..In front of Armaan she acts all sweet and nice…..because he is the only Waaris (son) of the Mallik house and he is after his dad in business …so she acts sweet infront and all nasty behind…she also has a daughter of her own after she got married to Armaan's and Meera's dad………..but in front of Meera from behind of Armaan's back she treats her like a servant of the house……………….but Meera never complained

Step.M: Chal ja bhi!..yahan khare khare mera mou kiya derahi hai?
PIC OF SUMAN..STEP-MOM:



M: paar…Armaan ko uthna hai…..hospital jaane ke liyeh…..she said looking down….
Suman came closer to Meera…and hit her on the side of her head…..

Step.M: Arre! Tummhe kiya lagtha hai?...ke mein yeh saab jaanthi nahi?...chal daafa ho!...and pushed her out of her way…..Meera went to the kitchen and started to make breakfast…..chai, butter toast, jam toast, daliya, cereal, orange juice, and fruits….

……………………..

Step.M(Suman) went into armaan's room…..and cursed him under her breath…….

StepM: armaan…armaan beta….utho…she said in a motherly type of way….and she stroked his forhead to his hair…….

StepM: yeh uth kiyun nahi raha hai!!......armaan …suno armaan beta….chalo utho tummhe sanjeevani jaana hai na?...toh utho na beta……..no response….

Suman went away from his room….and yelled out….hai bhagwan!!!.....isse toh bohut bohut teez buhaar hai!!....acting dramaticaaly….trying to show affection…as if she cares……

Meera dropped everything from the kitchen…and ran upstairs to see him….

Suman stopped her by grabbing a hold of her upper arm……..tum kahan jaari ho??....chalo jao kitchen mein waapas….kaam chor!!

Meera: par….armaan…..usse toh buhaar hai na….please jaane do!!...she said in a pleading way!...........

StepM: chal chal!!...and pushed her……agar tu usse milne gayye na…toh mein teri jaan leloongi….samjhi!!!...she yelled…

Merra was scared…she didn't want her to do anything to armaan….she went back to the kitchen………abb mein kiya karoon?...she thought…

Meera was leaning against the counter in the kitchen….thinking of what to do….then she saw the phone…..and said….haan yehi theek rahega…..and smiled for hope…..

Meera placed the breakfast on the table……….Suman (step mom) came and Suman's daughter also…..and Mr.Malik…(the dad)…everyone ate….except for Meera…she was going to eat later….after they were gone…..


PLEASE LEAVE UR COMMENTS..IT ENCOURAGES ME TO WRITE MORE....FASTER 😳 šŸ˜†

SORRY I HAVE NOT SEND ANY PM TO ANYONE...PLEASE BARE WITH ME...IM REALLY BUZY... 🤢 šŸ˜†

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AFIFA
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Edited by afifa2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
finally ure contd! i am soooooooo happy!!!!! i jst wanted to be 1st 1 to replay so i replaied b4 readin so i will read nw! šŸ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi

finally ure contd! i am soooooooo happy!!!!! i jst wanted to be 1st 1 to replay so i replaied b4 readin so i will read nw! šŸ˜†

šŸ˜†......ur too sweet n cute!!!😳

luv uuu

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Posted: 17 years ago
AFY babes amazing
i hate Suman 😔 😔 😔
and awww Meera is so sweet and i hope soon Armaan comes to know that her step mom isnt that sweet as she tres to portray herself in front of him
Please continue soon its getting so interesting
and pls dnt forget we want AR together
Love u loadzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey afifa dat was great
i luv ur ff
hope u update soon
wana read da next parts
gd job xxx
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Posted: 17 years ago
Di.................im abt to cry!!! 😭 😭 😭 ............merai armaan koh bhukaar hai.............or mein kuch nahin kar sakthi......or uss suman kha tho mein na .......mein na gala dhooba dhoongi!!!!!!! 😔 .........but other then that............u were as always FABULOUSSSSSSss
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Posted: 17 years ago
ok i hve read it! its really nce bt i hpe AR r 2geder soon! 😭 its mkin me cry! 😭 n dat suman 😔 i hte her! bechari meera! she is soooooo sweet n nce n carin!!!!!!!!!! 😳 bt still yaar jaldi se AR ko milva do! nahi toh mein roo dunge! 😭 contd soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! šŸ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey. i loved ur part,really nice.do update soon, i will be waiting. šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

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