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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks to everyone who enjoyed the part; here is the next part....(sorry if the part isn't long enough 😭)

Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa

Part ~ VII

Recap ~ Krupa fought a-bit with Prithvi than tells him everything about Kripa's wedding; Angad came home from jogging and decides to change up-stair in his room.

Kitchen

Meera was taking out the cake from the oven while Krupa got loss into her childhood days…

All four of them came back from school and soon as they enter the Khanna house they smelled a cake beginning baked.

(History: Kripa and Krupa have done half of their schooling in Nainital than Punjab afterward rest in Panchmeshwar and Mumbai.)

Krupa: Auntie, I'm hungry

Prithvi: Me too

Angad: Me three

Kripa didn't even answer and just went straight toward Dadi's room; and sat in her lap saying "Dadi, why do people leave us?"

Dadi: What's the matter?

Kripa: Dadi, you remember my friend Tina and Soni their baby sister Mahi died and Mahi was close to me. I really miss her Dadi

Dadi: When god loves someone so much that they call them back to them because they can't live without them.

Kripa: Then why were Mummyji and Daddyji crying with Mama and Papa?

Dadi hugged Kripa while Angad also came from behind and hug his Dadi saying "he wants to become a rock star just like Ram Kapoor

Kripa: You and rock star (controlling her laughter)

Angad: Why? Is there a problem that I can't be a rock star?

Kripa: Yes there is a problem that you can't be a rock star; and the biggest problem is that you can't sing like me.

Angad: Very funny! Hahahahahahahhahahahahhahahhahahhah

Krupa: Angad, you just look like a monkey

Prithvi: Angad a monkey…

Nice one Krupa

Angad: Dadi…

Dadi: Hey you guys don't make laugh of my Angad

Kripa stood up on the bed: Dadi is right you guys can't make fun of Angad only me.

Angad also stood up on the bed next to Kripa: Why who missy?

Kripa: You called me missy! How dare you?

Angad: Missy…Missy…Missy…Missy…

Kripa: Angad I'm warning you stop it before I open my mouth.

Krupa: What are you going to say Sis about Angad?

Prithvi: Tell me so I can also blackmail Bhai.

Angad: Kripa – you – won't

Kripa: I – will – if – you – don't – stop – calling – me – missy - ?

Angad started chasing Kripa all round the house even Prithvi went behind them to escape them all Kripa hide in Kartik's room behind him.

End of the flash back

Angad's bedroom

Angad goes inside his room and throws his muscle shirt on the bed and looks through the mirror at his muscles. When Kripa walked out from the bathroom wearing a purple rob around her and start drying her hair. Suddenly Kripa saw someone's mirror reflection and screams out aloud "Tum"

Angad: Tum

What are you doing in my room? You were just down there talking with Mom than how did you get up here?

Kripa: Excuse me Meera Auntie told me to come up here and fresh up because I looked like shit that's why I'm here and by the way who are you? I never scene anyone like you with no manners.

Angad: First of all you barge into my room use my bathroom than asking who am, I.

Secondly without my permission no one enters' Angad Khanna's room… understood!

Kripa: Oh my god! It's you monkey! You never changed a bit since the last time I saw you during gr. 7 or 10. You haven't change a-bit?

Angad: Know I understand you must be Kripa Bajaj…right? You look so different from the last time I saw during mid-age.

Kripa shook her head indicating he was right but also shook her head indicating no because she was married now. Before Angad could ask anymore question they heard Meera calling for them… Kripa quick go back inside the bathroom but forgot to take along her track suit. Angad also had a towel wrapped around himself, when he heard Kripa saying "please pass my track suit lying on your bed"

Angad picked up the track suit and passes it to Kripa afterward he also wears his black muscle shirt before Kripa came out. It was taking long so Meera went inside Angad's room where she heard noises so she went up to check on Angad than Kripa. Exact time Kripa came out wearing the track-suit from Angad's bathroom but still felt nervous standing in, a rob in front of your friend…made her feel sick inside…

Meera opens the door: There you are Angad; and Kripa, what are you doing here?

Kripa: Auntie, I heard some sound coming from here so I came to check it but afterwards I learn that these noises were coming from monkey's room.

Angad: Mom tell her not to call me monkey

Kripa: Auntie, what did I say wrong monkey is monkey! I never knew that there was another name for a monkey?

Angad: Mom

Meera: Kripa Beta

Kripa: Sorry Auntie

Meera: Kripa say sorry to Angad

Kripa: Lekin Auntie

Meera: Kripa

Kripa: Fine… Sorry Ang… Monkey (Kripa ran out of the room in time but Angad also went behind her "like old times") While running behind her he was thinking and looking a shame of himself for arguing with Kripa since childhood he never knew that Kripa would be a hot babe when she grew up. Kripa also was amazed by Angad's behaviour toward her since 15years ago they would argue none stop.

Kripa: Angad, what are you smiling about?

Angad: Nothing… let's go down

Both of them where heading down when they pass by Kartik's room (Kripa got carried into her thought about the time Angad had chased her in Kartik's room).

Angad was running behind Kripa when she hides behind Kartik.

Angad: Kartik move out of the way?

Kartik defending Kripa: Angad, what has she done to you that you are chasing her like tom chases jerry.

Kripa sticks out her tongue at Angad

"Kripa, what are you thinking?"

Kripa: Angad, you remember one day you were chasing me all around the house and to hide from you;

Angad: you ran into Kartik's room and hide behind him afterwards stick out your tongue at me. (Takes a deep breath) Those were the days we laughed, cried, argued and shared each and happy moments together.

Kripa: I know

Krupa yelling from the bottom of the stairs: Are you two done arguing so we can have some tasty cake made by Auntie.

Next Day

Shabd driving Nainital

Shabd started driving to Nainital before Karva Chauth or else Kripa will eat him alive if he starved after the moon comes out. While Shabd was driving he remembered the first time he saw her at his outdoor shooting while she was enjoying her summer camp.

Shabd was busy taking pictures when his camera focused on Kripa playing with her friends' volleyball. Shabd was amazed by Kripa's beauty and asked her to shoot one of his add-film; at first Kripa said "no" than after looking through the details Kripa said yes for Shabd's happiness. Shabd gave Kripa her outfit for the film shoot Kripa wore this hot, sexy outfit

; Shabd was drooling over her acting and her beauty –Shabd asked Kripa out for a date.

Confused Kripa: Why do you want to go out on a date when I hardly know you?

Shabd: So I can learn more about you

Kripa at first said "no" than her friends' forced her to say "yes"

Some one was honking from the behind Shabd's car; Shabd came out of his daydream and said sorry for holding the traffic like this. Sorry once again!

Traffic officer: It's ok but please don't do that next time

Shabd: I won't

Afterwards Shabd drove off toward Nainital; on the other side Angad was driving home too for Kartik's birthday and his mom said something about Karva Chauth where wife fast for their husband's long life –but I don't understand that no one at our house is married than why are we having Karva Chauth function…

Kartik's surprise party

Everyone gathered at Khanna house where many people brought gift for Kartik and Kripa because Meera had told many people that this party was held in Kartik's birthday and Kripa's wedding, but Kripa doesn't know nothing about that only knows that today is Kartik's birthday party and Karva Chauth together. Krupa walked around the party looking for someone to hang out with when she notices Mrs. Nanda.

Krupa: Hello Mrs. Nanda

Anjali: Hi Krupa

How are you?

Krupa: I am fine and what about you?

Anjali: Same here… and by the way what are you doing here?

Krupa: Actually we use to stay here but afterwards, me and sister went back to Punjab than Panchmeshwar than Mumbai finally back to Nainital for a friends' wedding.

Anjali: Oh I see

Well it was nice meeting you again

Krupa: Same here; wait Mrs. Nanda!

Anjali: Yeah

Krupa: I want to meet my twin sister Kripa Bajaj

"You mean to say Kripa Sharma"

Krupa: Sister

Anjali: So you are Mrs. Kripa Sharma

Kripa: Yes and by the way who are you?

Krupa: Sister she is Anjali Nanda who I met at the mall remember

Kripa: Oh yeah

Well it was nice meeting you

Anjali: Same here

Well got to go know

Bye

Kripa: Bye

Krupa: Bye

Prithvi came up with a mike saying today we are gathered for Kartik Bhai's Birthday and also a special occasion Karva Chauth for those women who kept a fast for their husband and there is another news but that will be told later on so enjoy the party.

Kripa: What surprise Auntie?

Meera: Actually I thought with Kartik's birthday I'll also celebrate your wedding

Kripa: Auntie not yet, cause I haven't told Angad yet or Bhai so I want to give them a surprise before Kartik cuts his cake.

Angad: What surprise?

Kripa: Nothing… excuse me

Kripa leaves toward Meera Auntie's room; Angad was trying to figure out the surprise so he decides to follow Kripa toward his mom's room…

I'll end it right here, because I am going out right now so enjoy this part… Peace out… have fun reading this part for up coming week: Angad was shock to find out about Krupa and Prithvi loving each other while Kripa tried her best to tell Angad about her wedding on the other hand Shabd meets a accident… What will happen on Kripa's first Karva Chauth?

Chor Ki Kashish

Edited by Chor-Ki-Kashish - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
wow. gr8 fan fic. just started reading. interesting. the promo: omg...shabd's gonna have an accident...i hope he doesnt die...that's so sad...but i think he will since u said at the beginning that she has 2 become a khanna. newayz, cont soon. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part!! really enjoyed reading it especially angad and kripa's cute fights!!
Uh-Oh! shabd is gonna have an accident, hope nothing serious happens to him!!
and angad still doesn't know about kripa's wedding? waiting for him to know!!
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
great updates
liked it
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg so sweet great dear sorry i al late its awesome
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part... even though i luv the jodi of angad n kripa, i dnt want anything to happen to shabd!!! Pls let him be safe!!! n i wonder how angad will react once he finds out kripa is married!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Please don't kill me for killing off Shabd when he was a great husband to Kripa but the story as to move on...

Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa

Part ~VIII

Recap ~ Kripa and Angad fought like old times while Shabd is driving to Nainital. Now what will happen?

While following Kripa Angad spotted in a room where Krupa was hugging Prithvi, Angad felt like going inside and slap his brother for loving her but he couldn't do anything so he let it be and tried to fine Kripa but he, loss her.

On the other hand Shabd was driving in Kripa's thought while singing this song from Kehta Hai Dil Baar Baar

Shabd's Line: Deewano Ko, Pata Hai

Deewano Ko Pata Hai Yeh Ishq To Nasha Hai
Milti Hai Bechaini Is Mein Din Katta Na Mere Yaar
Tere Bina Ek Pal Na Rehna Kehta Hai Dil Baar Baar
Tu Hai Meri Aakhri Tamanna Tu Hai Mera Pehla Pyaar

Kripa walks down the stair with sindoor in her forehead and mangalsutra around her neck; Kartik was surprise and shock to see his kid sister got married (Angad still doesn't because he is busy talking with his friends when he notice Kartik looking at something he turns around light go off.) Kripa also image Shabd is standing in front of her - Deewano Ko Pata Hai Yeh Ishq To Nasha Hai
Milti Hai Bechaini Is Mein Din Katta Na Mere Yaar
Tere Bina Ek Pal Na Rehna Kehta Hai Dil Baar Baar
Tu Hai Meri Aakhri Tamanna Tu Hai Mera Pehla Pyaar (Kripa's line)

Shabd's line: Deewano Ko Pata Hai

Ek Madhoshi Shaam Sher Hai Teri Mohabbat Ka Yeh Asar Hai

(Lights are still off with Meera looking for the candle while Kripa is standing by the window)

Kripa's Line: Yaad Teri Aati Hai Tanhaayi Jaati Hai Yeh Bekhudi Koyi Jaane Na

(Shabd still driving the car)

His lines: Tere Bina Ek Pal Na Rehna Kehta Hai Dil Baar Baar

Tu Hai Meri Aakhri Tamanna Tu Hai Mera Pehla Pyaar

Kripa's line: Deewano Ko Pata Hai

(Music beat)

Khushboo Teri Hai in Saason Mein Sapne Tere Hai in Aankhon Mein


Shabd's line: Rang Tera Chalka Hai Hosh Nahin Pal Ka Hai

Maane Koyi Na Chaahe Maane Na

(Lights are back on Kripa standing in-front of Angad; Angad is speechless)

Kripa's line: Tere Bina Ek Pal Na Rehna Kehta Hai Dil Baar Baar

Shabd's line: Tu Hai Meri Aakhri Tamanna Tu Hai Mera Pehla Pyaar

(Angad stared at Kripa's forehead)

Kripa's Line: Deewano Ko Pata Hai Yeh Ishq to Nasha Hai

Shabd's line: Milti Hai Bechaini Is Mein Din Katta Na Mere Yaar

Both at same time (screen divide two section)

Tere Bina Ek Pal Na Rehna Kehta Hai Dil Baar Baar
Tu Hai Meri Aakhri Tamanna Tu Hai Mera Pehla Pyaar

Kripa looking all happy but Angad was heart broken cause even though he fought with Kripa he still cared for her and also happy but just mad at her. On the other hand Shabd was driving fast that he didn't see a truck coming a-head; While Kripa is getting ready for Karva Chauth vrat when we see in the other screen a huge blast.

Mumbai

Shabd's Grandmother's room

Shabd's grandmother was cleaning up her room when she drop Shabd's picture indicating something bad is going to happen.

Rd 55, Mild highway

Three people saved two burn bodies, one is alive and the other on is dead near by the dead body a cell phone rings. Before the guy could pick up Kripa disconnects the phone because Meera Auntie is calling her for cutting the cake but Angad wasn't in his self he started fighting with a bar tender when we hear a girl scream her lungs out "JUJU"

Please don't kill me for having a short update today cause I am not feeling that good. 😆

Edited by Chor-Ki-Kashish - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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grt part...awww poor shabd...cont. soon
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noooo shabd 😭 wasn't there another way to unite ak and not kill shabd??? oh well writer knows best.... it was an awesome part (even with shabd meeting with an accident)cont soon plz! 👏

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