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Here is the first look at the first part of Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa! Please tell me to continue if you all like it!
Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa
Part ~ I
In Panchmeshwar
Three numerous people dressed up a girl for her wedding that was taking place within 30mins; one girl said "you look so beautiful in this wedding dress"
"Thanks"
Girl number two said "You look so beautiful that your husband will be clean-bowelled on your guys' first night"
"Shut up Tanu"
"Why are you blushing?" Said by Soni
"Can you guys shut up? I am already nervous and you guys are teasing me, not fair."
"Everything is fair in love" Said by Tanu (Tanu is Kripa's best friend since childhood)
"What's happening? Why haven't you guys finish dressing up my angel?" Said by the girl's mother
"Mom, we were almost done putting up, the last touches on Kripa." Said by Krupa her sister
"It's okay you guys go and check on the remind things to be done while I finish up dressing Kripa."
"Yes Mom"
Krupa lead the way out of Kripa's room while her mother admires Kripa's nervous looks through the mirror reflection. Prerna walked up to her daughter place a black-mark behind her ears saying "no one's evil spirit come on you" Kripa smiled through her mother's comment, but she was still nervous because this is the first time she will see Shabd as her husband not as her boyfriend.
"Mamma, can you please sing my bedtime song for the last time, you never know when I'll see you guys now?"
Prerna sat near by Kripa and touched her forehead than started singing her bedtime song from Na Tum Jaano Na Hum… "Yeh betiyan to babul ki raniya hai
Yeh betiyan to babul ki raniya hai
Mitti mitti Pyaari pyaari yeh kahaniya hai
Yeh shisthiyan gudiya rab jaane ki yeh kudiyaan
Kina jamilya to babul ki raniya hai
Mitti mitti Pyaari pyaari yeh kahaniya hai"
Prerna welcome's the groom with traditional aarti –afterwards they welcome everyone inside the wedding are while Prerna looked at Kripa being brought down by her sister and friends. During the rituals Prerna remembers' Kripa's childhood. "Yeh ladkiya to maaon ki raniya hai
Yeh ladkiya to maaon ki raniya hai
Mitti mitti Pyaari pyaari yeh kahaniya hai
In ka ram hai rakhwaala inka bachpan bhola bhaala
Bholi bhali si in jawaniya hai
Yeh ladkiya to maaon ki raniya hai
Mitti mitti Pyaari pyaari yeh kahaniya hai "
After the phere were done, Shabd place sindoor in Kripa's maang, than placed a mangalsutra around her neck.
Krupa had stolen Shabd's joote as a ritual, Shabd's cousin was arguing against the girls demand; finally Shabd and his cousin gave up to the girl's demand and handed them 5000 rupees to each girls; In excitement Krupa hugged her juju with tears saying "please take care of my sweet sister Kripa because her smiles is everything to me and I never want to see tears I her eyes"
Shabd said "Don't worry sister-in-law, I promise to keep your sister happy all her life"
Soon or later Kripa's bidaai ki ghadi aayi everyone formed into a line to say their last goodbye to Kripa; Mr. Bajaj her father cried his heart out when Kripa hugged him. (All Kripa's friend broke the father and daughter hug while Krupa hugged her sister with huge tears). Kripa asked her sister "where is Mamma?"
"I don't know?"
"Papa"
"Sorry even I don't know"
"Hey Kripa,
… look up there"
Kripa looks up toward the stairs and looked at her mother bring a red dupatta; Kripa look confused while her mother gave it to Shabd saying "Beta, this isn't only color red but this is symbol of love, friendship, and pain. This red dupatta was given to me by my dearest friend who is no more but I am giving this too you because I can see his reflection in you. Promise to take care of my daughter who is my life"
Shabd took the red dupatta out of Prerna's hand saying "he promise to keep her daughter happy all her life without letting any harm come to her."
Kripa hugged her mother the last time while this song was playing in the background:
"Sab ke dil ki saare ghar ki raniya hai
Sab ke dil ki saare ghar ki raniya hai
Yeh chidiya ek din pur se udjaaniya hai
Koi inka haath na chhode koi inka dil na tode
Tey saache rab diyan meherbaaniya hai
Yeh betiyan to babul ki raniya hai
Mitti mitti Pyaari pyaari yeh kahaniya hai
Kahaniya hai kahaniya hai
Entire Bajaj family stood there in tears, while Kripa is long gone to her new world in Mumbai; Krupa went inside her room and looked through all the pictures of her and Kripa
(Flashback of young Kripa and Krupa)
Kripa was sitting in the garden drawing a picture when Krupa comes with a cut on her forehead. At that time no one was home only her and their babysitter who fell asleep while watching TV especial her serial on Sony TV. Kripa tried her best to wake up the babysitter but she was sleeping like a baby so Kripa went and got the first-aid box. Started cleaning Krupa's cut; when Krupa notice the burn on Kripa's hand she knew that her Bua had burn Kripa again for hitting her son.
"Sis, what happen to your palm?"
"Nothing Krupa, it's just a small burn"
"Oh really… It's just a small burn? I can feel your pain because whenever you get hurt I get hurt "sis"."
"Anyways, how did you get this cut?"
"It doesn't matter how I got it but it matters to me how you got burn?"
"Krupa look at me, if I tell Mamma and Papa that Bua burn my hand than they will be upset so just forget about it?"
"If you say than I'll or else I know how to teach Bua a lesson for messing with my sister"
Soon as Kripa finish bandaging Krupa's cut they both hugged each other.
Mr. Bajaj came from behind and hugged Krupa while also loss in Kripa's thought when she was only seven and started playing basketball with him. In another room Prerna sat down by the window and looked at the wind chime hanging above her window. (Flashback: when Kripa gifted a Wind chime to her)
Prerna was sitting in her office when Kripa came in running with a huge smile on her face.
"Beta, what's the matter?"
Kripa ran out of breathe –"Mamma – you – won't – believe – I – got – student – of – year!"
"I am proud of you"
Kripa hugged her mother
Mumbai City
Shabd's bedroom
The room is decorated with flowers mostly Jasmine, in the middle of the room candles lit around the bed. On the bed we see a girl sitting on the bed covered by her ghungat; inside the ghungat Kripa felt nervous and happy cause today is her wedding night. All of a sudden the door opens and a tall handsome person walks in with a flower in his hand…
I think I'll end it right on Kripa and Shabd's wedding night; also please tell me how was the first part and if you all don't like it than I'll stop continuing it. So please tell me if I should continue?
Love you all,
Chor Ki Kashish
Edited by Chor-Ki-Kashish - 17 years ago
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