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Posted: 17 years ago
Kayyy,
Im finally here to write the part!Loved all the amazing comments u guys left thanks alottt!Im reallyy sorry for the late update i kno i was supposed to update 2 days ago but on Christmas Eve i unexpectedly got busy && on Christmas I went to watch the movie "Welcome" so im verrry sorry plz forgive me!

EPISODE 9:


After the conversation w/ her dad, Ridz goes straight to her room to pack her clothes.

R:OMG!Armaan ke saath do mahine har pal?!God!Yeh Raj kyun nahi jaa saktha tha?

At the Malik Residence.....

Armaan,who had just recived the news was happy with joy!
A:Yes!Yes Yes Yes!Ha!Im too good!Vacation w/ Riddhima!2 months!Without Raj!

Armaan packs up all his clothes && then Ridz is shown done packing her clothes also.

San Frasisco High, 1:25 PM

Somehow,AR had managed to get thru the day w/o talking to each other (Funny,huh?). They were both too anxious too talk to each other but,when dance class came,well......
Luck wasnt exactly on their side......

Teach:Ok,Class!This unit we will be doin Balllrooom Dancing.
Everyone rolls their eyes...
Teach:Ok,so each of you will be assigned a partner!Boy & Girl.Ms Gupta!
Ridz looks up.
R:Huh?
Teach:Quit Texting (SMS) & listen!
R:Sorry!
Teach:Ok as i was saying u each will be assigned a partner,lets see....

Atul & Anjali [Anji from DMG]
Nick & Sapna
Armaan & Riddhima

Riddhima gets shocked.
R:C***!Ab toh ise baat karni hi pade gi!
Teach:Ok everyone get seetled w/ ur partners.
Armaan & Ridz come in the middle.
Teach:Ok,now all of u hav to go according to the instruction sheet.
Armaan nervously put his hand around Ridz's waist. He liked it but he still knew that even if he loved Ridz,she didnt have the same feeling for him...atleast not yet...becuz that was abt to change.

Ridz on the other hand,was really nervous abt 2 things: 1. Wat the whole trip would be like w/ Armaan
2. Armaan touchingher like this.

Armaan held Ridz closely to him,Ridz's heart skipped a beat.
Armaan spins Ridz arund and she comes back and hold his hand.Armaan felt like he was in a different world where he could only see Ridz & him,noone else at all.He looked into her eyes && Ridz was doing the same.Both of them didnt know wat was happenning.Suddenly the music stopped but AR kept looking at each other.Atul comes there && wakes them up.
At:Hello?Koi ghar mein hai kya?
AR break free.
At:Kya hua?
A:Uhhh!Kuch bhi nahi woh chipkali mera haath nahi chod rahi thi!
R:What?Mein?Tum mujhe nahi chod rahe the!
At:Ok,enough!Class mein late hona hai kya?
With that,all of them left the class.

The same day; 3:15 PM

Ridz took her stuff out of her car.
R:Sapna,meri car ab do mahinon ke liye tumhari!
S:Teek hai!Bye Ridz!
R:Bye Sapna!Bye Atul!Bye Nick!
ASN:Bye Ridz!
R:Armaan chale?
A:Haan,Bye Guys!
ASN:Bye!
N:Bye Yaar!Ill miss u!
A:Me too.Ill be back tho!
AR get into the car & drive off.
R:Armaan gaadi dheere chalaao!
Armaan keeps on driving at the same speed.
R:Armaan tumne suna nahi?
A:Haan mene suna par aggar jaldi nahi chalaya na toh flite choot jayegi!Phir na kehna tumhari waajah se meri flite chooti!
Ridz makes a face at him & looks away.
Armaan who saw that in the rear view window, smiles.

Armaan & Ridz enter the airport,get their tickets,&& baggage check done & eneter the plane & get seated.
A:Wah!Seats woh saath!Uncle aaap ne toh kamaal kar diya!
R:OMG!Dad seats bhi saath hi honi thi kya?
They both get settled.
Soon,AR start to get sleepy.Ridz doesnt have a place for support & her head slowly fell on Armaan.
Armaan waks up to see Ridz on his shoulder he smile & goes back to sleep.



3 hrs Later:
The flite lands at Dehli,India.
AR wake up to see each other so close & break free real fast.
As soon as they got out of the plane,they saw India for the first time after so many year.
R:Omg!India!Kitne saal ho gaye!
A:I know.Tum yahaan rukho,Ill get the bags & check in.
R:Ok.
Armaan soon returns with the bags & Ridz helps him.
As they reach the Arrrival section,a guy is standing there with a Sign that reads:
"San Fransisco Wale"
They both assume thats their ride.
A:Jee aap humme recieve karna aaye ho?
Sar:Tussi Riddhima jee te Armaan hai?
R:Jee.
Sar:Taan aaao mere naal!
Armaan & Ridz follow the Sardar.
Sar:Jee mein Kapoor's da driver hega Kuljeet Singh.
R:Oh acha.

1 hr later:
The car stops & AR reach a huge haweli (Gupta household in DMG)
Armaan,Ridz,& Kuljeet reach the entrance.
Kuljeet knocks on the door.
The door opens....


Ab kya hoga? To know more saty tuned for the next episoed!


Love,
Jasnoor

PS:Promo will be posted soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was gr8.........i luved part 9 wow AR 2gather for 2 whole months.......can't wait for the next part.......plz continue soon....... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
exciting! Ridhima and Armaan alone for two months!! wow..great idea 😉 hehe continue soon

*Armaan* 😛
jdots thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
i am a newbie ..jst started reading ..now cant wait for next part...

good job! 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
koooooooollllllll
plzzzzzzzzzz continue as soooooooooon as possible...
luv ur ff
ishiqa 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Nicccccccceeee,i really liked it, plzzz update soon i am waiting 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
rocking part 👏

ar dancing scene was awesome wowwww yaar....the time should hav shopped there only soo that they would fall 4 each other moreee hehe


(((R:Armaan tumne suna nahi?
A:Haan mene suna par aggar jaldi nahi chalaya na toh flite choot jayegi!Phir na kehna tumhari waajah se meri flite chooti!
Ridz makes a face at him & looks away.
Armaan who saw that in the rear view window, smiles.)))
this was funny hehe tumhe sunna nahi hehe, n his reply too was funny

sleeping on each other shoulder is the best thing yaar, one of the most romantic thing cho cweet yaar

now im waiting 4 next part wow plz continue soon, im damm excited becoz raj is not there 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
dat was so cuteeeeee.
cont soon.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
That was awesome jansoor!!!

wow!!
i lobed the dance scene tooo cute...and also when armaan said we have to drive fats if not the flight will be missed and then she made a face and looked away and he smiled.....chooo chooo chweet!!!!

and im sooo damn inerested in whos the person behind the door??....and soo excited to find out what will happen becuz raj is not there.....its like they open the door and its RAJ!! 😆 😆 ..plz dont do something like that!

continue soon..and its such a long time yaar!!
afifa
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jdots

i am a newbie ..jst started reading ..now cant wait for next part...

good job! 😃 😃

thxx!

really happy to see youve caught up it makes it sorta haard wen i dont hav a table of contents on the front page.

I really appreciate it!

&& Welcome to IF!

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