Lamhe- Pyaar ke ( SK) PART 32 PG 80 note pg 83

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saba

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Posted: 17 years ago

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hey great start 👏 👏 👏 plz cont. soon its going great 😊 😊 😊

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PLZ PLZ PLZ COMMENT

Frndz if u are reading this fan-fic then plz do comment... there is no writer without a reader and incase u guys dont comment i will really be depressed. 😭

I know i am no good 😕 😕 😕 ... but plz plz... even if it is to criticize do comment....

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Ambarina Altaf

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Originally posted by: ananya7736
PLZ PLZ PLZ COMMENT

Frndz if u are reading this fan-fic then plz do comment... there is no writer without a reader and incase u guys dont comment i will really be depressed. 😭

I know i am no good 😕 😕 😕 ... but plz plz... even if it is to criticize do comment....

hey buddy dnt be depressed this is jst a start im sure every1 will comment..

see me a silent reader i dnt comment on any FF's nt even of them who are my best buddies u can ask anybodyy over here...surya di,vandoo,kimmy......all the one who read sk FF's n who knw me can say i dnt reply to any FF's...

bt see being a silent reader i replied to ur FF as its damm good...n i dnt want a beginner to be disappointed...

dnt worry no matter if any1 doesnt reply will surely try to reply to ur storyy...n hun first part was dammm gud..good start...will be eagerly waiting fr the nxt part..doo contd..

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

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very nice...cooll....i liked the first part very much... everything was very well written in the part... bohat achcha...keep up the good work going.....👏do continue soon.... 😊 😛 😃

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ur fic is good pls cont
pls dont b sad. we all r here to encourage u . u are a wonderful writer. Cont soon

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zaira

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Posted: 17 years ago

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awesome story ananya!!!!!!!..........nice character's 👏 👏 👏......the first part was written really good 👏 😊 👏......sujal the most eligable bachleor 😉.....!!!!!!!!!!! rishi part is hilarious yaar.....how he make's ideas n veena agree with him 😆 😊 😉.....n his latest idea is to get sujal married 😉.....larki bhi wohi dhundega 😊....but a nice 1 ofcouse 😊!!!!!!!...........poor sujal can't belive tthat they want him to get married 😆 😉 😛!!!!!.........the promo was really interesting .........rishi telling sujal abt his bhabhi n how sujal will fall in love with her 😊 😉 😛..........continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzz..........can't wait !!!! 😭 👏 😭 👏 😭...........don't feel depress yaar........we'r here to support you!!!!!!.........great going !!!!!!!!!

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ananya7736

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Thanx everyone 😊 😊 ... i am posting the next part... kashish's entry is gonna take a bit time...

PART 2

It was late at night and sujal was busy in his room.....cleaning up stuff and preparing himself off to sleep...when Rishi poked his head in the room...

"Hey Big B can i talk to you???"

Sujal looked up to see Rishi dressed in his nightsuits....

"Sure Rishi....since when have you started asking for my permission??"

Rishi came inside and closed the door behind him and jumped on the bed next to sujal...

"you are not angry with me are you??" rishi asked

"what for??..." Sujal asked looking into a file....

"aBOUT THE....MARRIAGE idea that i gave...."

Sujal's jaw tightened......he kept the file on the table and went and stood by the window....He had agreed because he knew his yes was making his mom and his bro happy....

"Bro....i gave the idea more for your sake than mine or mom's...." rishi said breaking into his thoughts....

Sujal looked at Rishi surprised.....

"well Rishi then you are wrong.....i don't need a woman in my life...."

"you need a woman more than me or mom does at least..."

Rishi's words were surprising sujal at each step....surely he din''t know that.....sujal came and sat next to rishi...

"and what makes you think that...."

"Big b i knoe everything.....evrytime you are alone at night you cry your heart out....(sujal was shocked and tried to interupt...) wait....big b....iknow you think nobody knows about it.....but i do and so does mom...we don't say anything becoz...bcoz...you try to be strong in front of us....we all know you were very close to Dad..and his death has come to you as a big shock...but....."

"But what...I loved him...I could have saved him....i could have....mom would have been happy today....we all would have... how do you think should i live with the fact...that....that.... I KILLED MY DAD...."Sujal screamed as tears came out....flowing non-stop.....

Rishi walked towards Sujal and put his arms around him...For the first time he had seen Sujal so broken....Sujal had always supported all of them ... he had been the pillar of strength for them....

"Big B why are you blaming yourself for it.....it was not your fault...."

Sujal laughed sarcastically...."not my fault...eh???... It was all my fault.... and forget it....i will blame myself and nobody is going to agree....and how do u think i am supposed to explain all this to someone i marry....how...??"

"you don't need to ..... bro.... she will understand you...."

"oh yeah!! sure...you do remember ritu don't you....my ex- girlfriend who supposedly loved me and left me at the time when i needed her the most....sure a person who dosen't even know me....will understand the pain that i am going thru....when the person who claimed to love me couldn't....."

Rishi had no answer for this....

"bro u will see.....my bhabhi...will be someone u will fall in love with...her first look will tell you all about her and then you can tell me whether u will just lust her as u did with ritu and she did with u ar you will love her....goodnight..."

Before Sujal could even say anything rishi went back to his room...Sujal locked the door and went and stood by the window pondering into what rishi had said and drowned into his past.....

PAST:

Sujal was pursuing his MBA from The Melbourne University in Australia...He had been going out with girls just for fun...but never too initimate...Sujal had been completely fun-loving then...a big pranker..a big flirt...he had 3 best friends Angad , Karan and tushaar... all of them were studying together...while Angad was going steady with Kripa and karan with Gauri... Tushaar and Sujal kept dating here and there just to enjoy...while...tushaar slept with his date once in a while...Sujal din't....he had never even kissed anyone...it was i their final year when ritu had come to their college.....and to start with everybody fell in lust with her.. and so did sujal....she had everything that a man could desire....the perfect body...the perfect face...the perfect lips and the least clothes that set men wanting her.... Aware of the effect she had on men ritu cast her bait on sujal...young...handsome...rich and the hottest n sexiest guy on campus....Sujal and ritu started going out....but ritu wanted more....she wanted his body.....and it was difficult for Sujal to stay away from her also.. this sometimes created fights b/w them since.....Sujal wasn't even ready to kiss her ... sujal once wanted to leave her....but ritu would claim that she loved him and then Sujal would decide against it....time passed and One day Sujal's dad died....Sujal was broken...He went to india..stayed with rishi and veena for some time and returned back to Austrailia to complete his final year...He went to Ritu's apartment for some support.and comfort...Since ritu had given him a key...sujal unlocked the door when ritu din't answer...and the sight in front of him had frozen him....ritu was making out with somebody on the couch.....shamelessly.....Sujal had returned back to his place.....completely broken....

Sujal came out from his reverie and went to his bed and lay there....he slowly turned and looked at the side of the bed that was vacant....he remembered himself promising his mom marriage....sujal slowly laid out his hand on the vacant bed beside him and felt it....after somedays....someone would be lying here...sharing his room...his bed...his body...his happiness and his griefs.....unknowingly a smile appeared on sujal's face and he fell of to sleep...

Edited by ananya7736 - 17 years ago

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ananya7736

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Posted: 17 years ago

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this was the second part and plz plz.. do comment i will try to post a new promo by tommorow

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

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that was very cool , tooo good,very well potrayed...nice... me waiting for kashish's entry..me sure sujal will fall in love with her the moment he sees her.... very well written part..👏 do continue soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago