Lamhe- Pyaar ke ( SK) PART 32 PG 80 note pg 83

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ananya7736

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey hi everyone!!

After going thru few fan fics i decided to write a one of my own.. though i am not a trained writer like most of u seem but yes i will try to give it my best shot... Its going to be a SK fan fic.. a simple one though.. dealing with institution of marriage, love and betrayal... If you like it plz tell me and i will continue...

Ananya

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey cooll...do start soon..me waiting for the intro... 😊 😛 😃

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ananya7736

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey could anybody tell me how do i start off ... imean do i give the intro by going to New TOpic or how ??
PLZ HELP!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago

post the intro and all the parts in this thread only and me waiting eagerly for u to start the fc 😊

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ananya7736

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanx Aishwaria... 😊

I wont be posting individual character intro u will get to know it as you read it... But just to give a jist of it..

CHARACTERS : -

GAREWALS

Sujal garewal (rajeev khandelwal) - business man in delhi. young and handsome lives with his mother and brother

Veena Garewal: sujal's mom loves him a lot and relies on him for everything. She is a widow was married to lalit Garewal...

Rishi Garewal: A ladies man but knows his limit..is very concerned about his Big B ( as he calls sujal).

SINHAS :

Kashish Sinha (Aamna Shariff): simple yet beautiful loving and caring. has a past which might be her present and future also.

Chetan Sinha: Kashish's dad.. loves his family very much and trusts kashish the most

Vasu Sinha: Kashish's mom. (ive got nothing more to say about her)

Mehak Sinha: Kashish's sister.. very charming and simple.. loves her family a lot. is always scared for kashish

Charu Sinha: kashish's another sister.. different from mehak and kashish and is very outging..

OTHERS

Angad Karan and Tushaar: Sujal's frnds... Angad is in CBI and karan is a business man like Sujal. tushaar is an international photographer..

kripa and gauri: Angad and Karan's better-half..

Akshat: kashish's best frnd and Charu's boyfrnd

there are more characters which i will introduce later on.. i think this suffices the intro... tell me if its ok and then i will post the first promo..

Do post your comments since it is very valuable...

Ananya

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Posted: 17 years ago

ananya very nice intro...me looking forward to read the future parts of the fanfic....indeed very good... 👏 continue soon... 😊 😛 😃

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ananya7736

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Posted: 17 years ago

NEW PROMO

"bro u will see.....my bhabhi...will be someone u will fall in love with...her first look will tell you all about her and then you can tell me whether u will just lust her as u did with ritu and she did with u or you will love her.... "

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very damn interesting promo... 👏 continue soon... 😊

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ananya7736

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey thanx peopple for welcoming into ur fanfic arena here is the first part

PART 1 :-

Sujal Garewal was returning from his office....completely tired and frustrated. He had a very tiring day at work today and to top that the traffic in Delhi was getting on his nerves...He just hoped he reached home on time becoz he knew if he was late his mother was going to kill him. Sujal was the most handsome guy in Delhi and as a relief to girls he was still a bachelor.. Sujal had never been interested in girls....only his work was important for him especially after his fathers death... His fathers'sudden death had caught him off balance.....Sujal sighed in relief as he parked his car in his driveway. he got out of the car and took out his laptop and coat from the back seat and entered his home to see his mother...Veena standing next to the dining table....Sujal smiled and after putting his things on the sofa he went to his mother and hugged her which surely was not returned back....Sujal looked up at his dear mom who wasn't looking at him...

"Sorry mamma...."

Veena glanced at her handsome son and with a frown on her face started moving towards the kitchen making sujal realize that he still wasn't forgiven.....Sujal stopped her midway.....and holded his ears....

"Sorry mamma...."

veena looked at Sujal again and a smile came to her face as she saw his son making a cute puppy-like face.....She placed a hand on sujal's cheek slapping him slightly....

"ou sure know how to change my mood......but next time .... i am never going to speak to yu...."

"well mom .... i think u should start practicing it from today.....and i dont mind accompanying u...."

sujal and Veena looked at Rishi...Sujal's younger brother...who placed himself nicely on the sofa.....

"you know what rishi....u are absolutely right.....Sujal i am not speaking to you..." veena moved in a huff to sit next to her second son....as rishi made space for his mother to sit.....

Sujal scowled at rishi and looked at veena trying to win again the lost battle.....

"mom who are u listeoing to??? Rishi!!! of all the peope RISHI???"

"hey Big B that's insulting...."Rishi claimed....

"Shut-up....mom.....listen..(taking veena's hand in his and kneeling in front of her)....i promise i am not going to be late from tomorrow.....i move out on time....but the traffic.....mom please....."

Veena smiled and kissed sujal on the forehead......Sujal then sagged on the nearby sofa....

"but still sujal beta....you need to think about yourself....we have got to think of some way to make you come home on time...you make these promises daily but........"

Sujal looked sheepishly at his mother.....when suddenly rishi jumped.....

"what the hell......"sujal exclaimed.....

"Mom i've got a perfect idea...to keep bro at home and to solve your as well as my problems...." rishi screamed....

Sujal and veena looked at each other confusedly....trying to make out what plan had rishi come out with....

"oh....plzzz....don't look so confused.....mom get big B MARRIED!!!!""

Sujal looked dumbstruck....and he wasn't ready for marriage....he had lots to do...live to his father's Lalit garewal's expectations....make his business the best in the nation....he had a lot to do....and to top it all he had never even thought about marriage....he had never thought about a woman in his life.....though in college he had been involved in initimate relationships but that was.....welll was just college..... after that his father died and he had devoted all his time to the business.....he wasn't ready....he looked at his mom and from the look of her face it seemed she was quite taken by the idea....

"mamma...no..i'm not ready for marriage....." Sujal tried to explain his mother

"no sujal..i think this is a perfect idea.....anyways you are 25 and you should be getting married. As it is you are so busy in business and you don't enjoy life as everybody else of your age does....i think..." veena pointed out...

"mamma....listen .... plz....there is so much work..."

"that's what you think of don't you.... work work and just work???( tears came out of veena's eyes...) i know it was your dad's dream that you want to fulfill but i am sure even your dad must not have wanted you to just carry on with life .....he would have wanted you to live it....."

" fine mom....but living life dose not mean getting married......"

But this time Rishi answered for veena....

"yes big B... but you don't even have time for us...... with bhabhi at home at least there will be somebody for us.... you are busy in your office and i in my college...who has mom got....with you being married mom will atleast have some one to talk to...and apart from that ....."

"Fine....ok...I am ready..but on one condition..." sujal said accepting an emotional defeat....

"what??" veena asked....

"you have to find the girl...i am not going around places looking for girls...."Sujal said picking up all his stuff to take it to his room....

"done Big B....." Rishi exclaimed happily....and looked at a beaming Veena....

Sujal sighed and walked away to his room....

Edited by ananya7736 - 17 years ago