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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
well apologising agn fr being late!! 😊


how much i try to be on time bt i m late every time will try to post nxt part soon...

fr now njoy reading part 10!!

n dont forget to reply!!
😊 😆

luv u all,
mehndi 😊 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART-10

as she opened the door , a huge room awaited her presence.a big bed , couches , balcony , cupbooards....she entered the room n walked upto the balcony.it ws beautiful.

she checked with the cupboards , she saw rahil's clothes out there...well and hers too...she freezed fr a moment , she ws going to share the cupboard , the room the bed with rahil..suddenly the huge room seemed suffocating , she cudnt breathe easily.this thot never occured to her.he n she sleeping on same bed...the mere thought gave her jitters...and to top it all he entered the room...

seeing her in such a condition he ws perplexed...but didnt knew wt to do.still he went upto her..startd moving towards her

nethra who ws already nervous , moved back n he stopped.he held his steps.
she ws too nervous to think anything , rahil turned arnd to leave the room...

"ye kya ho gaya tha mujhe.." she said to herself wen he left the rooom.


she stood in the balcony it ws evening then.she cud see the people walking down the road.

nethra decided to meet his mom.she ws too weak to get up frm her bed so she went to her room.

"mumma" she whispered.
"aao na nethra" she trid to get up bt cudnt so nethra helped her to lay down again.
"aap lete rahiye mumma."
"bohot sundar lag rahi ho."

she looked down..


"mere rahil ka khayal rakhna..bohot tut gaya hai use wapas hasta khelta hua rahil banaogi na."
"ji mumma."

she caressed her cheek.

"main janti hoon tumhari wajah se hi aaj main rahil ko yahan is ghar mein dekh paayi hoon warna main to umeed hi kho bethi thi ki is ghar mein kabhi khushiyaan aayengi.main janti hoon tum use wo pyaar de sakogi jo use na mil paya aur jo uske hisse mein hai."
"haan mumma main poori koshish karoongi."
"dekh tere aate hi tujhe kuchh diya nahi balki tujhse maang liya."
"to kya hua mumma ye bhi to mera ghar hai."
"khush rehna beta aur use bhi rakhna.pata nahi kya gam dil se laga ke betha hai."

she adjusted a little n took out a box frm the side drawer.she opened n gave her a diamond necklace.

"ye shaadi ka shagun nayi dulhann ke liye."n gave it to her.

she went to kitchen frm there to look aftr the dinner.she cudnt see rahil all the time n asked the kaka there.

"bansi kaka apne rahil ko dekha kya??"
"bitiya is time to wo garden mein hi honge."
"ji kaka."

he saw rahil watering the plants , n she instantly remembered his love fr nature something then striked her n ran towards where her luggage ws kept.she took out the same white rose plant that she had at her house n ran back towards the garden.she chose a place amongst all the other plants n kept it there.she got up n turned to talk to rahil but seeing him standing closely behind her she got panicked and ws abt to fall back but she managed her balance.to restrain her frm falling , rahil too held her arm tightly.

"wo ye flower plant main apne saath le aayi..."

he ws watching her from the moment she ran back to her room to get thr plant n saw her keeping amongst other plants.he had come there to water that plant only wen she got up and ws abt to fall.

he dropped her hand...softly...watered the plant n went away.



"rahil , khana tayyar hai." she called rahil fr dinner.
"bansi kaka ye mumma ke liye , rikuye main de aati hoon." she startd fr her room as she cant come to dining table.

rahil sat their waiting fr nethra to came back so that they can eat..together..
she as if knowingly came n sat in chair front of him.

food ws tasty , but they ate in silence.she ws nervous as the time fr going back to their 'room' ws nearing.rahil aftr having dinner went back and nethra cleared up the table , checking mumma's room n slowly paced fr her room.opened the door bt found it empty.she ws relieved.

not fr much time.he just entered the room aftr having a shower , wearing a lower n sanders with water dripping frm his hair.she blushed seeing him like this.rahil still hadnt noticed nethra.she had a sweet smile as he watched him drying then combing his hair.she cudnt look away...she tried but cudnt so she did the best--stopped trying to look in different direction.

she walked towards him , kadmon ki aahat se rahil ka dhyan nethra ki taraf gaya , she ws taking steady steps towards him.walking under some spell.rahil ws feeling little awkward as wat he shud do or rather wat he shudn't do!!

she came close to him , eyes on him , raised her hand , his eyes on her , slowly her hand reached the cupboard handle n in few seconds he cud listen her laughter.she ws laughing , like an angel!!

she had tricked him , she took the nightdress frm almirah n rushed towards bathroom to change.all this time she ws just playing with him.he smiled , strange girl he thought.

he didnt noticed himself bt he ws having a hearty smile at her act n how he ws caught in it...

****

it had been 2 weeks since their marriage.rahil had joined his office , n worked hard to know abt the ups n downs in past years.he noticed his frnds had really worked hard to stabilize the whole company.he was grate ful to them.he concentrated more on office work n used to get home late.but every night found nethra waiting fr him .well..most of the times found her sleeping on couch due to long waiting.he then softly shook her , she smiles and then lays the table fr dinner.
he had a limited talking regarding his business in office.frnz missed the old rahil but thank god he startd speaking....strictle professional though , usually silent at home.but nethra was always in high spirits , smiling n doing all the work..

from morning breakfast to dinner she did all the job.

subah rahil ko uthana , uske kapde nikalna , breakfast ready karna , lunch pack karna , dinner banana , n then finally uska dinner par wait karte karte so jana.it ws her daily routine

"tumhe nahi lagta hamein rahil aur nethra ko honeymoon par bhejna chahiye??"said rajput one day.
"main bhi yahi soch raha tha uncle."said a worried rishi to rajput.

"saara din to wo office mein hi hota , ghar bhi late jaata hai pata nahi inki lovestory aage kaise badegi??"said neha.
"inhein switzerland bhej dein??"
"paris wud be more romantic."
"main to kehti hoon goa bhej do."
"nahi uncle kahin door bhejna , nahi to rahil 2 din mein hi wapas aa jayega."
"florida kaisa rahega??"

adviced rishi n well got a slight hit at the bach of head frm neha fr giving such a stupid idea.

"wo ghar se bahar to jaate nahi hai , florida bhejoge unhe??simla sahi rahega."

"kya nethra maanegi jaane ke liye??"
"maan jayegi , aakhir biwi hai uski."
"aur rahil??"
"arrey use bol denge ki office ka kuchh kaam hai , aise to wo jayega nahi."
"aap bohot smart hain uncle..."
"i know."
"meri aur neha ki bhi setting karwa do na!!"whispered rishi in his ears.
"shaitaan kahin ka , chal ja yahan se.."
"plzz na uncle , baat karo na."
"ja raha hai ya nahi?"
"sirf 1 baar."

he gave a very angry stare..
n then smiled..

"barkhurdaar kya tum sachmuch us se pyaar karte ho?"
"ji haan."
"badu changi ladki hai."
"janta hoon.."replied rishi.
"bilkul baat karunga."he assured rishi n then hugged him lovingly.

"rahil , dekho ye shimla se mr khanna ka invitation aaya hai.unki company ko 15 yrs ho gaye isliye unhone 1 party rakhi hai aur specially tumhe bulaya hai."
""tum aur neha chale jaana , mujhe yahan kaam hai."
"lekin unhone specially tumhe bulaya hai.aur yahan ka kaam hum dekh lenge.ye rahi car ki chabi aur aaj shaam ko hi nikalana hai.maine nethra bhabhi ko bhi fone kar ke bata diya hai.unhone packing bhi kar li hogi."

he stared him fr a moment n then widout saying anything left.

"use shak nahi hua na??"
"arrey kaise hoga...aur agar ho bhi gaya to kya uske liye achha hi kar rahe hain." n rishi winked saying this.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
awesome part..........plzzzzzzzz continue soon.......dont make us wait too long.......dying to read the next part 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
awesome..superbb..too good..i loved it..it was really soo sweett..yeh part padkar mazaa aagaya..mera dil khush hogaya..really a wonderful part...fantastic..excellent... superb....lovely..simply rocking...keep up the good work going... 👏 do continue soon..me waiting for the next part very veryu eagerly... 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part yaar 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏!!!!!!!!!!!.....love it 😉! .....nehtra goes to "her" house n is mermeraized from its beauty 😊, when rahil comes 😉. i think even nehtra is a bit akward but she's going to be f9 wt it n as rahil mother say bring the funny going rahil back 😉!!!!! .......the part where she goes to bring the plant from her room n then find rahil behind her so cute 😛!!!!............i think rahil goes late home so he can avoid nehtra 😕, but not possible 😛!!!!!..........love Mr. Rajput n his briliant ideas 😉 😊 😛!!!.....so know the r hoing to send them on a honeymoon, but for rahil won't know as for him its a business travel 😕, par uske faede ke liye hie hai 😉!!!...............rishi apni setting pe laga hua hai 😆!!!!..............can't wait for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...................yaar abb aur intezar mat karwana , coz i can't wait 😭 😛 😭!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!......................plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
awsome, too good,plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
hi frnz....this time i m early!!

so posting the next part...enjoy it!!

luv.
mehndi 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART-11


"saari tayari ho gayi...dhyaan rakhna apna bhi aur uska bhi."

it ws rahil's mom giving last minute instruction to her bahu.nethra ws lil apprehensive of going but her rajput

uncle , as usual , convinced her.

"it is strictly proffessional beta."he had told nethra in the morning.
"but..."
"nethra...its a business party n besides everyone wants to meet rahil dixit aftr long n his wife too!!"he

convinced her more.

"its so awkward going wid him.."
"that 'him' is ur hausband nethra."he replied laughingly.
"i know but still...i dnt want to go...plzz"
"agar tum nahi gayi to wahan sabko yahi lagega rahil ab bhi poori tarah se theek nahi hua hai.it will effect

his business."

she didnt replied n well didnt said no that meant a yes...!!
'ye business loss wala idea hamesha work karta hai i know' the old man smiled at his power of convincing.

now it ws time fr rahil n nethra to leave...together alone in a car.they touched mother's feet n seeked their

aashirwaad n then left.

the previous 2 weeks went fastly.they didnt talkd all day long as rahil ws in office.in night they slept

seprately in their bedroom.she on huge bed n he on the leather couch.she tried to talk abt her daily chores as

she used to do in hospital but found him sleeping in next few mins.

and here they were sitting in car quietly.thankgod to the FM radio in car that kept them entertained....fr the

time being though...

"ye station bhi gaya , yahan highway pata nahi kaunsi frequency catch hogi."she said , switching between the

radio channels , to herself.

she chkd few CD's kept there n sighed , "oh god kitna boring collection hai songs."she agn said to herself.

"kiski car hai ye rahil?"she askd loud.
"meri"he replied.
"tum itne boring songs sunte ho?"

he didnt replied.


"kya karoon itna lamba raasta , baat karne ke liye koi tayar nahi , gaane bhi saare boring aur ab FM ki

frequency bhi catch nahi ho rahi....oh god help kar.." she said in completely irritating voice.

"kitna bolti hai , kaan hi khati rehti hai" rahil said to himself n kept on driving.

well , she drowned to sleep shortly , much to his relief , he can now drive soundly atleast.he turned to have a

look at her.and kept on looking at her fr what seemed like ages but were few seconds though.she had a complete

childish sleep.her head supported on the back rest wid her hands in her lap n a small but noticeable smile on

her face.the kohl of her eyes were slightly spread around the corner but that added to her beauty more.

the continous honking frm the truck behind brought him to senses.he let the truck pass and again gained on

speed.she truly looked like an angel , not even in disguise.

it ws 2 more hrs to go wen she finally woke up and as if thinking n reliasing nothing she stretched her

arms.her hands slightly brushed his ears n they both felt something.no one commented though!!

"sorry."
"its fine."he said

"u know it is much more simpler n well...good wen u speak , rather being in ur famous 'silent mode'"

he kept on driving without answering bit knew that now she is awake n full of energy n wont stop talking untill

they reach.

"phir se wo hi silence...tum bina kuch kahe reh kaise sakte ho??mujhse to aisa kabhi nahi hoga. i mean spending

years not uttering a single word.lekin , lhair , sabki apni apni choice hoti hai.achha batao tumne latest movie

kaunsi....tumhe apne kaam se fursat mile to movie dekho na...plzz mujhe kkrazzy4 dekhni hai , yahi shimla

mein...chaloge na mere saath."

he gave a look that meant a flat no.

"its on me , i wont let u spend a single paisa i promise.aur waise bhi i can spend thousands fr hrithik's much

talked dance."she said hoping a yes but he gave a more angrier look.

"ok that ws a bad option...ur looks tell me.how abt if i offer u can sleep throughout the movie n me nt

disturbing u even in interval??"
again same looks were given by her serious husband.he ws njoying a little , it seemed.

"another bad option , ok..." she said with defeating tone "u drop me at the theatre n do only thing u love--ur

business...fine??"
he stopped the car n started shouting at her.

"nahi...mana kiya na 1 baar kahi nahi jayenge , na main na tum.party attend kar wapas.ab chupchaap baithi

raho."

and nxt second he heard a loud crying of some girl child nearby...well....very near....oh just beside

him...nethra...

"mujhe ajtak papa ne nahi daanta."she said in between sobs...
"kabhi avi ne bhi nahi , na hi kisi aunty ne.sab yahi kehte hain ki nethra bohot achhi ladki hai aur tumne

mujhe itni chhoti si baat ke liye daant diya..kabhi pyaar se baat to ki nahi aur aaj daant diya..."n she cried

more loudly.

it ws obviously a fake crying as there were no tears..n well no reason...n no emotions but the loudness

increased with time.
"ok baba i will drop u to nearest cinema hall...fine!!!"he said defeating.

and she smiled instantly as if she had got her choclate.

**

"agar tum bhi chalte.." she askdhopefully last time b4 entering the hall.
"i dnt like movies."he hage a flat reply.
"hmm...ok show shuru hone wala hai."
"i will meet u in 2 hrs here only...dnt go anywhere."
"theek hai.bye."
"bye."

she watched the movie alone thinking abt rahil in between , then njoyd the movie n the most the hrithik's song

in it.the film ended n it ws time to go back.she ws standing near the gate whr rahil had askd her to meet.she

waited fr say 2 mins n then her eyes caught something tempting.....an ice cream parlour. wow!! she exclaimed.

"itni thand aur ismein icecream."she cudnt stop herself frm going there....

"ab ye nethra kahan hai??"murmered rahil who ws standing near the gate , waiting fr her."sab galti meri hai kyu

jaane diya use akela.1 ghanta ho gaya hai..pata nahi kahan hai."he ws talkd to himself worriedly.
"aisa kaunsa kaam kar lia main peechhe se , is se achha chala hi jata , anjaan shehar mein use aise chhod

diya.kitna stupid hoon main." n he hit his fist on the nearest wall in anger.

it seemed as if it has been hrs since he is searching fr hr.he askd every person ot there , but to no avail.he

then went to ticket counter n requested the person out there to let him in so that he can chk on his wife.

"no sir we cant allow u in.."said the man at the ticket counter.
"plzz mr i really need to see in...ok i will buy a ticket."
"we are house full sir...sorry sir bt its against rules."
"rules....damn rules i WANT to search fr my wife n i m GOING in."said angry rahil.
"dont force us to use the other way sir."warned the man.
"u dnt me..hai na...i can buy ur cinema now n here , if u dnt let me in another 5 seconds,i promise u will be
in biggest trouble ever."his voice so high that there ws a crowd surrounding him.

meanwhile , releasing the time nethra too came out of the parlour....with 2 ice cream cones , one in each hand.

"oh god itna time ho gaya hai.rahil pareshaan na ho gaya ho...!!"

as she neared the crowd she heard a familiar voice , she went more close n saw rahil , top 2 buttons open ,

cufflings fild , tie let loose , coat in han n shouting.....

he too saw her coming frm front....and his anger grew at the site he saw....

she ws having 2 ice cream cones in her hands , wore dark blue denims , a long black overcoat with black high

necks inside , came with a smile as if to calm him down of his anger.

next moment he got a smile on his lips , unbelieveble to himself too.but she , at the moment reminded him of

asmi!!
he , ignoring all resemblances , held her wrist tightly n drag her to his car.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
Hehehehehehe!! Lovedddd the part.........The cute nok-jhok between them was soo cuteeee 😆

Issi tarah jali jaldi continue karte rehna....plzzzzzzzzz!! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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superb,loved the part,very nice, great going,continue soon

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