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Posted: 16 years ago
Hiiiiiii Arwa,
how r u dear???
did i have to say that to u that how is update..............
yaaar am too tired of telling u that ur update's are
fantabulous, mindblowing, cool, Gr8, amazing,spectaculor n what notπŸ˜†
every time am reply to u am scared that what should i write becouse i don't have a single word after reading update it' s just simply
" PERFECT " in every aspects......
so now plzzzzzzz update soon becouse am waiting for listen the luv story of our RN. make sure that u will give us update sooooooooon.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ~~ashi~~

Lol and even if Raj says he will 'leave out things' we dont want him to!!!!

we wanna know every little detail *winks* not necessary tht huda and alekh should know too!!! hehehe!!
why is alekh bnothering me? sure he is a little nosey every now n then but is there more to him than meets the eye?
aaaaarrrrrgggghhh, why cant these two ever get privacy? why is this huda...always...... 😑
oh cmon...... leave them alone will u?
(im speaking to u arwa, ur responsible for this rnt u?) πŸ˜†
update soon! :)

hey ashi thanks a lot
i'm sure u all do πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰
hmm Aalekh is just a good person and dont think into it too much my dear.
Huda is just a joker in between but very seful sometimes and dont worry i'l lleave them alone very soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hiiiiiii Arwa,
how r u dear???
did i have to say that to u that how is update..............
yaaar am too tired of telling u that ur update's are
fantabulous, mindblowing, cool, Gr8, amazing,spectaculor n what notπŸ˜†
every time am reply to u am scared that what should i write becouse i don't have a single word after reading update it' s just simply
" PERFECT " in every aspects......
so now plzzzzzzz update soon becouse am waiting for listen the luv story of our RN. make sure that u will give us update sooooooooon.

thanks a lot as ur praises are valued very much
it works as a kick to do even better
hehehehehe even a small thankyou would do too so dont need to be that scared.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!!

Goliyan chal rahi hai aur iske beech bhi yeh dono baat karne mein busy hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Naina ne kya kaha ke she has not come so far to lose him again!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaiiii!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Waah kya pyaar hai!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘Raj was finding hard to breathe but Naina ki baahon mein rehna is as helping as an oxygen tank!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Kya baat hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Charon taraf goliyan chal rahi hai but both of them are not affected by bullets and are thinking about the safety of the other!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Wow!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Naina ne sahi kaha!!!! Raj ka koshish karna bekar hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊She won't leave him and and she had found him once and can very well find him again!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳

O no!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Ab Pooja ko Nair ne pakad liya and now he is threatening them to come out!!!!

He is hugging her and telling her about his plan!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳Great!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

His eyes were full of love and trust and she saw it!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️She is now confident in her love!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊How sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Huda is doing nothing except asking questions repeatedly!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’He is plain irritating!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Raj wants to strangle him!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats good!!!! 😊 😊 😊Mera dil toh hamesha yehi karta hai keh main Huda ka gala ghot doon!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😈 😈 😈 😈 😈 😈 😈

Bhargav is behaving like a Hindi film villain!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Aur inko bhi Raj aur Naina ke pyaar ke baare mein pata hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› Kya baat hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Raj ankhon se hi ishara kiya and Naina did as he told her and everyone broke out of capture!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Raj threw a gun and he needed Bhargav to take that gun!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Thats his plan!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is caught toh kya sabka dimag chalna bandh ho gaya including Abhimanyu!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Raj ne kaha ki woh chahta hai ke uspar goli Naina chalaye!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳😳 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Everyone is shocked including Naina but Raj again assured her with his eyes!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊They always talked with their eyes more and finally it is coming in handy!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Poor Naina!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭She coudn''t do it!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭She is scared that what if she really killed him!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj Naina se ke agar usse kisiko marne ka haqh hai toh woh Naina hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Kya baat hai!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Waah!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Mare toh bhi Naina ke haathon aur plan kamyaad ho toh bhi Naina ke haathon!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Wow!!!😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Har cheez Naina se shuru aur ussi par khatam!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina ne Aishwarya ne jaise Hrithik par chalayi thi waise hi Raj par teen teen goliyan chala di!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Very dramatic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Naina really did believe that she had killed him!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭If not bullets then the fall!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Yaah but hero kabhi marta hai kya!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Naina ne Raj ko dekhte hi hugged him and he hugged her back!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳So romantic!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

He said he will not leave her and she will be able to do justice to his death!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 This is so emotional!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

When Naina asked him finally he said the three magical words!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Finally Raj confessed!!!!! It was music for sure to Naina's ears!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Wow!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘It was so sweet and so romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Huda ne sahi kaha!!! Raj toh wakai Dhoom 2 ka Hrithik Roshan nikla!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Wow!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

But really this Huda is getting too free!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

But Raj ne bhi sahi pakda!!! Usse filmein dekhne ka time kab milta hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Huda and his big mouth!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 Toh yeh sab karta hai woh!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

He is right agar abhi yeh sab bola toh story ki jagah usse ulti duniya ka saza dega Raj!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Raj's plan was changing Nair's gun with his which had blanks in it!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Impressive!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Even Aalekh is irritated by Huda's constant blabbering!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’Ufff Huda just cannot keep quite!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Kya baat hai!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘Raj's fate was in Naina's hands!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Raj said he will welcome death with open hands because his love for her is simply blind!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

He gave her his gorgeous smile and she winked at him!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Haaiiiii!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Aalekh is right!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Yeh dono kahi bhi shuru ho jate hai!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj wants her to go back but she does not want to because what if they got separated forever!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Haan uska darna bhi jayaz hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj kehta hai ki woh saaya bankar rehega Naina ke upar!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Accha huya he did not go to Abhimanyu but instead got him to do it by an anoymous phone call!!!!

Abhimanyu ko Raj ne bataya tab jake woh kuch kar paya otherwise kisi kam ka nahi hai woh!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’Usse shaque huya but even the he did not recognise Raj!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Raj is also very clever!!!! He dubbed his voice harder when he realised Abhimanyu could recognise him!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Abhimmanyu had to mention Naina shot Raj who was traitor!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’How bad par kya kare!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Poor Naina!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭She was disturbed by nightmares aur Raj bhi usse dur tha!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Finally Raj came to her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊I loved it when she pressed his hands to console him!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj was so sweet and romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Naina was still calling him sir!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›I just loved it when he asked her to call him by his name!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

His killing smile aur Naina sharma gayi!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Naina sharmati bhi hai??πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Matlab jo stuff they had burnt was all fake??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Then why need to do all this??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Wasn't that enough to get them caught??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Col.Shakti Chandra was also in it!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›And thus R2 was born!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina naraz ho gayi aur chali gayi!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Zahir hai!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”How can she stand other woman clinging to him!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Woh ek aurat hai kaise bardaarst kare yeh sab!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Raj samajta hi nahi hai!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Naina is warning him to keep quite!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›He is scared of Naina!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†So cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

The others find it hilarious!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Arre har mard apni biwi se darta hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊Bade bade veer bhi apne biwi se darte hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

But Raj was so cute when he said he loves her too much to hurt her!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️He was so adorable ke Naina bhi pigaal gayi!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj usse gode mein uthakar legaya and she is still sleeping!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Gode bechke soh rahi hai!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Raj is kissing her and still she is sleeping!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Finally she wakes up!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Even I want to hear the story of how they got married!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

I am really out of words....ur mindblowing mindblasting, fantastic, fabulous..n the list continues...writer.........kya likhha hai yaar.....just awesome

Naina was worried about his deterioting health and didn't want him to get hit by any of the bullets so she shielded him. Rajveer on the other hand was worried about her safety because he needed her to stay alive after him as only she could bring justice to him and Naveen. He wanted her to not worry about him and leave the place with Abhimanyu.

You know Sir I won't leave you so no point in trying. You did it before and now see where you are but I still managed to find you so what makes you think I won't find you again.

.............. how sweet aww 😊😳

Hold on sir, if she did shoot you then how did you survive? I mean she did shoot three bullets in you and then you fell... Huda remembered the facts and became confused.

Well I was getting to that. The only reason Rajveer was annoyed with Huda was because from the past hour he had done nothing but ask him questions repeatedly and now he just wanted to strangle him. .......uff huda disturbs soooo muchh 😑

The constant instigation made her pull the trigger and before she knew it she shot three shots at Rajveer.Then he fell back into the cliff leaving everyone shocked. Time had stopped especially for Naina as she really did believe she had killed him. .......really uff you described the scene so well my reaction while reading was like 😲

At first she just stared at him and then at an impulse got up and hugged him tight. Tears were flowing out of her eyes and soon Rajveer also wrapped his arms around her and tried pacifying her. ..............thank u miss writer....what a relief!!!
I love you Naina. Naina se zada I wanted to hear these 3 magical wordsπŸ˜†
I really love you Naina and I need you. I've always needed you and will always need you till I take my last breath. ......I wish I could be there in place of Naina😳😳

Wow sir aap to Dhoom 2 ke Hrithik Roshan nikle jaha pe end me wo apnee mehbooba ke haatho se marna chahta he because they had planned it all out from before........Clever writerπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰.....before anyone mentions the name of the movie u've mentioned πŸ‘

Cadet Huda when do you find time to see movies? Rajveer had a curious look on his face. .............hahaha huda....phas gaya πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Eh Huda bandh kar apnee bakwaas or Rajveer sir ko apni kahani puree karne de.Aalekh slapped the back of Huda's head as he also was irritated by Huda's constant blabbering and short cuts and puns. ...............thanks alekhπŸ˜†

Both Rajveer and Naina sat opposite each other and stared with affection. He gave her his gorgeous smile which always melted her insides making her shudder. She looked at him constanly and then winked at him startling him as she got him off guard.

Aalekh saw that he had become silent all of sudden and then he noticed how he and Naina were playing with their eyes. He felt a bit awkward and thought that these two started anywhere and why did he have to witness it. Rajveer looked at an embarrassed Aalekh and realised what he was doing so he just gave a weak smile and looked away from him. Naina also turned away as she had gone full red. ......................oho koi to in dono ko akele chod do😳

She laid a soft kiss on his bare chest which was revealed by his open neck shirt. 'I trust you fully and I know you'll always be there for us..............😳

It did go in their favour as Abhimanyu did mange to convince the judge that these cadets have broken several rules in the past but they have done more good deeds to prove them as being capable cadets of the KMA. Then he also mentioned of how Naina did shoot Rajveer but who was he, a traitor. He had to put a stone over his heart to say all that in court but he had no choice as he had to save all of them. The judge agreed and sent them to the detention center for reformation. ........................welldone raj πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ n abhimanyu

He cupped her face in his palms, I know Naina because now you've got to be my strength. If I'll lose you then I won't be able to do anything. And the name is Rajveer if you don't mindπŸ˜†.He gave one of his killing smiles which just made her insides melt. She blushed all of a sudden and buried her face in his chest. He just laughed at her innocence and was surprised to see this side of her. ........sooo romantic 😳😳😳

In all of this he had one person who knew the whole truth and he was Colonel Shakti, his senior officer who had put him on the mission in the fisrt place. ...wow....one nice twist again😊

I don't understand Rajveer as along with being a trainee army officer I'm also a woman who has a heart which is not strong enough for all this. I won't be able to stand where I am and see other women clinging onto you like leechers. I won't be able to do.She said that pushed him away and went back. He tried calling her back and consoling her about the situation but she didn't agree and he couldn't even raise his voice so he was left in deapair.

Wah beta Raj, bohat khoob ek kaam sahee karke dusra kaam barbaad kardiya.He cursed himself whilst climbing out of the ditch and walking out of the compound. ............ohooooo 😊

Rajveer, please leave all that out. Naina had become alert and warned him with her eyes for him to stop. Oh come on Naina ab in dono se kya parda.Rajveer rolled his tongue in his cheek whilst smirking at both Aalekh and Huda. Both of them sat there laughing themselves whilst Naina was red with embarrassment as well as anger. All that was going to follow was quite intimate and private stuff which she didn't find comfortable for others to find out. Rajveer, she spoke with gritting teeth making sure she emphasized it well for him to know, please. ..........hahaha nice πŸ˜ƒ

Her look did scare him and he did hesitate in telling them but Aalekh and Huda just cracked up seeing them argue like that and Rajveer being afraid of Naina was just hilarious. Oh come on sir you don't need to be afraid of her as we're here to save you from her raft. Huda began his usual cracking up again. Naina began smacking his forearm for him to shut up making him laugh even more....................huda u better watch Naina's reactionπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

I'm not afraid of her Huda; I love her too much to hurt her that's all .......soooo sweet

When he stopped the car he looked over her sleeping and went closer to her and took her face in his palms. Then he laid a soft kiss on her forehead which made her moan in her sleep but she still didn't wake up. He laid a kiss on her right cheek but still no reaction. Then he kissed her on the left cheek and once again she just moaned and tried pushing the hair on her face. He went closer and was about to possess her lips when big brown orbs stared back at him with shock..........kahan end kar diya...πŸ˜†πŸ˜³...

No really thanks for such long n awesome part....do update soon asap....as u know I just can't wait to read thatπŸ˜³πŸ˜†

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Posted: 16 years ago

@diya7000

Kya pehle usne keh diya??😑

Main kabse Dhoom 2 Dhoom 2 bol rahi hoon!!!!!Ever since Raj's death scene!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

@diya7000

Kya pehle usne keh diya??😑

Main kabse Dhoom 2 Dhoom 2 bol rahi hoon!!!!!Ever since Raj's death scene!!!

Oho itna gussa kyun hoti ho!! arey main janti huun ke tum pehle se kehti aa rahi ho par this time she mentioned it first na!! that's why......😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi!!Arwa!!
I am really sorry for replying late dear.😭😭
Got busy with some work.
anyways a fabulous update.
Do I need to say more????
I have always loved your fic.πŸ˜›
The update was absolutely superb!!!
Naina's anger 😳😳,Raj's reactionπŸ˜‰
Mind blowing.πŸ‘πŸΌ


Do visit the fc when u find some time.
Take care.


love
Riya.😊


Edited by riyaa_1985 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!! - thanks alot Shaina

Goliyan chal rahi hai aur iske beech bhi yeh dono baat karne mein busy hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› - jab pyaar kiya to darna kya.

Naina ne kya kaha ke she has not come so far to lose him again!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaiiii!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Waah kya pyaar hai!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘Raj was finding hard to breathe but Naina ki baahon mein rehna is as helping as an oxygen tank!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Kya baat hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘- yep pyaar hee itna gehra hai inka to phir ek dujhe me saamaee huwi hee hogi na inki saase

Charon taraf goliyan chal rahi hai but both of them are not affected by bullets and are thinking about the safety of the other!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Wow!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Naina ne sahi kaha!!!! Raj ka koshish karna bekar hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊She won't leave him and and she had found him once and can very well find him again!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳

O no!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Ab Pooja ko Nair ne pakad liya and now he is threatening them to come out!!!!

He is hugging her and telling her about his plan!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳Great!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - hehehehe what better way to say gudbye as well as making the plan.

His eyes were full of love and trust and she saw it!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️She is now confident in her love!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊How sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - aakho aakho kee baate hai yeh

Huda is doing nothing except asking questions repeatedly!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’He is plain irritating!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - oho shaina itna ghussa acha nahi hai sehat ke liye

Raj wants to strangle him!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats good!!!! 😊 😊 😊Mera dil toh hamesha yehi karta hai keh main Huda ka gala ghot doon!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😈 😈 😈 😈 😈 😈 😈 - leave that to Raj otherwise u'll end up in jail πŸ˜†

Bhargav is behaving like a Hindi film villain!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Aur inko bhi Raj aur Naina ke pyaar ke baare mein pata hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› Kya baat hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - have to be a bit filmy here otherwise there's not much fun

Raj ankhon se hi ishara kiya and Naina did as he told her and everyone broke out of capture!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Raj threw a gun and he needed Bhargav to take that gun!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Thats his plan!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is caught toh kya sabka dimag chalna bandh ho gaya including Abhimanyu!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ - everyone loves Raj so much that they simply cant think straight

Raj ne kaha ki woh chahta hai ke uspar goli Naina chalaye!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳😳 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - pyaar jo itna karta hai osse

Everyone is shocked including Naina but Raj again assured her with his eyes!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊They always talked with their eyes more and finally it is coming in handy!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - as i said aakho aakho kee baate hai

Poor Naina!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭She coudn''t do it!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭She is scared that what if she really killed him!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj Naina se ke agar usse kisiko marne ka haqh hai toh woh Naina hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Kya baat hai!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Waah!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Mare toh bhi Naina ke haathon aur plan kamyaad ho toh bhi Naina ke haathon!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Wow!!!😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - what better way to die than by your lover who trusts you so blindly.

Har cheez Naina se shuru aur ussi par khatam!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina ne Aishwarya ne jaise Hrithik par chalayi thi waise hi Raj par teen teen goliyan chala di!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Very dramatic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - thanks ab dramatic nahi hota to phir tujhe pata kese chlata ke yeh sab drama hai.

Naina really did believe that she had killed him!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭If not bullets then the fall!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Yaah but hero kabhi marta hai kya!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ - of course not per agar marta hai to phir kahani khatam hojaatee hai

Naina ne Raj ko dekhte hi hugged him and he hugged her back!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳So romantic!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

He said he will not leave her and she will be able to do justice to his death!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 This is so emotional!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - itna mat roh warna tissue papper kee factory khol nee paregee πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

When Naina asked him finally he said the three magical words!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Finally Raj confessed!!!!! It was music for sure to Naina's ears!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Wow!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘It was so sweet and so romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - finally he said what all of you wanted to hear from him especially Naina. i hope now ure happy.

Huda ne sahi kaha!!! Raj toh wakai Dhoom 2 ka Hrithik Roshan nikla!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Wow!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - kyu ke wo rithik se kam nahi hai koi shak.

But really this Huda is getting too free!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

But Raj ne bhi sahi pakda!!! Usse filmein dekhne ka time kab milta hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Huda and his big mouth!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 Toh yeh sab karta hai woh!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

He is right agar abhi yeh sab bola toh story ki jagah usse ulti duniya ka saza dega Raj!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - lagta hai tera huda ke saath 36 ka aakra hai ke oska naam dekhte hee ghussa naak pe aajaata hai. yeh Raj is also very annoyed with him right now.

Raj's plan was changing Nair's gun with his which had blanks in it!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Impressive!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - that's our hero Rajveer who can do anything.

Even Aalekh is irritated by Huda's constant blabbering!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’Ufff Huda just cannot keep quite!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - Aalekh is the only one man who can shut Huda up.

Kya baat hai!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘Raj's fate was in Naina's hands!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Raj said he will welcome death with open hands because his love for her is simply blind!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

He gave her his gorgeous smile and she winked at him!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Haaiiiii!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Aalekh is right!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Yeh dono kahi bhi shuru ho jate hai!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - they're soon going to get the title of modern laila majnu.

Raj wants her to go back but she does not want to because what if they got separated forever!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Haan uska darna bhi jayaz hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj kehta hai ki woh saaya bankar rehega Naina ke upar!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - ab Naina kee zindagee oskee zindagee hai.

Accha huya he did not go to Abhimanyu but instead got him to do it by an anoymous phone call!!!!

Abhimanyu ko Raj ne bataya tab jake woh kuch kar paya otherwise kisi kam ka nahi hai woh!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’Usse shaque huya but even the he did not recognise Raj!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Raj is also very clever!!!! He dubbed his voice harder when he realised Abhimanyu could recognise him!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Abhimmanyu had to mention Naina shot Raj who was traitor!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’How bad par kya kare!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Poor Naina!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭She was disturbed by nightmares aur Raj bhi usse dur tha!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Finally Raj came to her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊I loved it when she pressed his hands to console him!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - im glad you liked it but when did this happen? i mean did Naina console him i thought it was the other way around. anyways whatever.

Raj was so sweet and romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Naina was still calling him sir!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›I just loved it when he asked her to call him by his name!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - ha ab to wo informal bansaktee hai kyu ke osne ose yeh haq diya hai.

His killing smile aur Naina sharma gayi!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Naina sharmati bhi hai??πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› - she's a woman after all.

Matlab jo stuff they had burnt was all fake??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Then why need to do all this??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Wasn't that enough to get them caught??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• - that was Raj's plan because he knew that Bharghav will destroy everything and he couldnt let that happen. and no it wasn't enough as he wants to get to the main guy behind it all.

Col.Shakti Chandra was also in it!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›And thus R2 was born!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yep it was our Raj's creation.

Naina naraz ho gayi aur chali gayi!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Zahir hai!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”How can she stand other woman clinging to him!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Woh ek aurat hai kaise bardaarst kare yeh sab!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Raj samajta hi nahi hai!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ - samajta hai per wo farz ke aage majboor hai or phir wo mana bhi to raha hai.

Naina is warning him to keep quite!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›He is scared of Naina!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†So cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - he is her cute buddhu πŸ˜‰

The others find it hilarious!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Arre har mard apni biwi se darta hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊Bade bade veer bhi apne biwi se darte hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ - tujhe bara pata hai. ab pata chala kyu shaadi nahi karna chahtee.

But Raj was so cute when he said he loves her too much to hurt her!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️He was so adorable ke Naina bhi pigaal gayi!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - itna sharmaane kee kya zaroorat hai, aisa lagta hai ke Naina kee jaga tum bethee ho πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Raj usse gode mein uthakar legaya and she is still sleeping!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Gode bechke soh rahi hai!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ - agar phoolo jese nazuk bistar pe sorahee hogi to aisa hee hoga na.

Raj is kissing her and still she is sleeping!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Finally she wakes up!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Even I want to hear the story of how they got married!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

- you'll do so in the next updt.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: diya7000

I am really out of words....ur mindblowing mindblasting, fantastic, fabulous..n the list continues...writer.........kya likhha hai yaar.....just awesome - thanks very much for all these praises.

Naina was worried about his deterioting health and didn't want him to get hit by any of the bullets so she shielded him. Rajveer on the other hand was worried about her safety because he needed her to stay alive after him as only she could bring justice to him and Naveen. He wanted her to not worry about him and leave the place with Abhimanyu.

You know Sir I won't leave you so no point in trying. You did it before and now see where you are but I still managed to find you so what makes you think I won't find you again.

.............. how sweet aww 😊😳

Hold on sir, if she did shoot you then how did you survive? I mean she did shoot three bullets in you and then you fell... Huda remembered the facts and became confused.

Well I was getting to that. The only reason Rajveer was annoyed with Huda was because from the past hour he had done nothing but ask him questions repeatedly and now he just wanted to strangle him. .......uff huda disturbs soooo muchh 😑 - yeh Huda has a bad habit but Raj knows how to shut him up.

The constant instigation made her pull the trigger and before she knew it she shot three shots at Rajveer.Then he fell back into the cliff leaving everyone shocked. Time had stopped especially for Naina as she really did believe she had killed him. .......really uff you described the scene so well my reaction while reading was like 😲 - it was meant to be a shocking scene.

At first she just stared at him and then at an impulse got up and hugged him tight. Tears were flowing out of her eyes and soon Rajveer also wrapped his arms around her and tried pacifying her. ..............thank u miss writer....what a relief!!! - hehehe ur welcome.
I love you Naina. Naina se zada I wanted to hear these 3 magical wordsπŸ˜† - we all wanted to hear it my dear.
I really love you Naina and I need you. I've always needed you and will always need you till I take my last breath. ......I wish I could be there in place of Naina😳😳 - we all do.

Wow sir aap to Dhoom 2 ke Hrithik Roshan nikle jaha pe end me wo apnee mehbooba ke haatho se marna chahta he because they had planned it all out from before........Clever writerπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰.....before anyone mentions the name of the movie u've mentioned πŸ‘ - people had mentioned it to me when i wrote that part in the beginning so i thought of adding it in.

Cadet Huda when do you find time to see movies? Rajveer had a curious look on his face. .............hahaha huda....phas gaya πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Eh Huda bandh kar apnee bakwaas or Rajveer sir ko apni kahani puree karne de.Aalekh slapped the back of Huda's head as he also was irritated by Huda's constant blabbering and short cuts and puns. ...............thanks alekhπŸ˜†

Both Rajveer and Naina sat opposite each other and stared with affection. He gave her his gorgeous smile which always melted her insides making her shudder. She looked at him constanly and then winked at him startling him as she got him off guard.

Aalekh saw that he had become silent all of sudden and then he noticed how he and Naina were playing with their eyes. He felt a bit awkward and thought that these two started anywhere and why did he have to witness it. Rajveer looked at an embarrassed Aalekh and realised what he was doing so he just gave a weak smile and looked away from him. Naina also turned away as she had gone full red. ......................oho koi to in dono ko akele chod do😳 - privacy to inko ab bohat mushkil se milegee

She laid a soft kiss on his bare chest which was revealed by his open neck shirt. 'I trust you fully and I know you'll always be there for us..............😳

It did go in their favour as Abhimanyu did mange to convince the judge that these cadets have broken several rules in the past but they have done more good deeds to prove them as being capable cadets of the KMA. Then he also mentioned of how Naina did shoot Rajveer but who was he, a traitor. He had to put a stone over his heart to say all that in court but he had no choice as he had to save all of them. The judge agreed and sent them to the detention center for reformation. ........................welldone raj πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ n abhimanyu

He cupped her face in his palms, I know Naina because now you've got to be my strength. If I'll lose you then I won't be able to do anything. And the name is Rajveer if you don't mindπŸ˜†.He gave one of his killing smiles which just made her insides melt. She blushed all of a sudden and buried her face in his chest. He just laughed at her innocence and was surprised to see this side of her. ........sooo romantic 😳😳😳 - finally we get to see the feminine side of Naina.

In all of this he had one person who knew the whole truth and he was Colonel Shakti, his senior officer who had put him on the mission in the fisrt place. ...wow....one nice twist again😊 - thanks.

I don't understand Rajveer as along with being a trainee army officer I'm also a woman who has a heart which is not strong enough for all this. I won't be able to stand where I am and see other women clinging onto you like leechers. I won't be able to do.She said that pushed him away and went back. He tried calling her back and consoling her about the situation but she didn't agree and he couldn't even raise his voice so he was left in deapair.

Wah beta Raj, bohat khoob ek kaam sahee karke dusra kaam barbaad kardiya.He cursed himself whilst climbing out of the ditch and walking out of the compound. ............ohooooo 😊

Rajveer, please leave all that out. Naina had become alert and warned him with her eyes for him to stop. Oh come on Naina ab in dono se kya parda.Rajveer rolled his tongue in his cheek whilst smirking at both Aalekh and Huda. Both of them sat there laughing themselves whilst Naina was red with embarrassment as well as anger. All that was going to follow was quite intimate and private stuff which she didn't find comfortable for others to find out. Rajveer, she spoke with gritting teeth making sure she emphasized it well for him to know, please. ..........hahaha nice πŸ˜ƒ

Her look did scare him and he did hesitate in telling them but Aalekh and Huda just cracked up seeing them argue like that and Rajveer being afraid of Naina was just hilarious. Oh come on sir you don't need to be afraid of her as we're here to save you from her raft. Huda began his usual cracking up again. Naina began smacking his forearm for him to shut up making him laugh even more....................huda u better watch Naina's reactionπŸ˜†πŸ˜† - yeh she can be too lethal

I'm not afraid of her Huda; I love her too much to hurt her that's all .......soooo sweet - thats our sweet Raj.

When he stopped the car he looked over her sleeping and went closer to her and took her face in his palms. Then he laid a soft kiss on her forehead which made her moan in her sleep but she still didn't wake up. He laid a kiss on her right cheek but still no reaction. Then he kissed her on the left cheek and once again she just moaned and tried pushing the hair on her face. He went closer and was about to possess her lips when big brown orbs stared back at him with shock..........kahan end kar diya...πŸ˜†πŸ˜³... - acha na phir it leaves the readers wanting more

No really thanks for such long n awesome part....do update soon asap....as u know I just can't wait to read thatπŸ˜³πŸ˜†
overall thanks for ur cool comments and I'm glad u enjoyed reading it. yeh i'll updt asap.

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