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Posted: 17 years ago
omg the secret is out
CONT SOON PLZ
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Posted: 17 years ago
yes the secret it out and soon the truth of the night will also be out.

thanx for commenting and ill try and ud asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry guys abt the long delay but i really got held up with things.

part ninety six

Angad:
😡 kya kaha tumne?

Simmone: wo...me....😲 I didn't mean... (she tried hiding her eyes away from him as well as her fear)

Angad: (grabbed her shoulders aggressively and held her close against him)
😡 kya kaha tumne? Tum pregnant nahi ho?

Simmone: (afraid of the rage in his eyes) An- gad wo...me (her voice cracks as she's too scared to say anything further)

Angad:
Aakhir tumhaara jhooth pakra hee gaya

Simmone looked up at him horrified 😲 she realised that Angad had known from the beginning and was just playing with her

Simmone:
😔 Angad meree baat suno...darasal wo me...

Angad: Sssh...😡 (puts a finger on his lips) Aaj me kuch nahi sunna chahta. 😡 I just want to know the GOD DAMN TRUTH!

Simmone: (shaken by his rage) wo actaully Angad me darr gayee thee 😔 isliye yeh kehdiya ke me pregnant nahi hu

Angad: Acha! 😛 To phir chalo mere saat or zindagi bhar mera saath dene ke liye tayyaar hojaoh meri biwi bankar. 😳 Today I'm going to make you my WIFE!

He dragged her back inside when midway she shook his hand away.

Simmone:
😡 yeh kya karahe ho Angad? Maine kaha na ke me yeh shaadi nahi karna chahti

Angad: (breaths down her neck) kyu 😡 jab mere saath ek raat guzaar saktee ho to phir os rishte ko pavitra banane me hitch kicha kyu rahee ho? 😡😡 Tell me damn it!

Simmone: (pushes him away) Ha! 😡 maine tumhaare saath ek raat guzaaree, lekin tumne kya kiya mere saath? 😡 you made fun of me. You never reciprocated my feelings and you made a fool out of me.

Angad: (grabs her elbow) 😡 Kya bakwaas karahee ho? 😕

Simmone: Wahi jo sach hai

Angad: Tumhaare mooh se 'sach' ka shabd hee jhooth lagta hai (lets go her hand roughly) Now I've had enough. 😡 Abhi isi waqt mujhe sab sach bataogi tum, warna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga

She stood there with fright 😲 looking at Angad's boiling with rage eyes 😡. Her voice was stuck in her throat.

Angad:
😡 😡 BOLO!

Simmone: 😔 An- gad me...me...me pregnant nahi hoo. Kabhi thi hee nahi kyu ke os raat hamare beech kuch nahi huwa tha 😒

Now it was Angad's turn to be horrified 😲

Angad:
To phir kya huwa tha? 😡 TELL ME RIGHT NOW!

Simmone: Os raat...

FLASHBACK


After Angad's and Simmone's performance Angad was completely doped He was unable to see things from straight to wrong and was moving around deliriously when Simmone came towards him pretending to be unknown of his condition and being concerened for him

Simmone:
Angad 😲 kya huwa tumhe?

[B}Angad: kuch bhi to nahi 😛 (stumbled whilst moving forward) Me to bus...

Simmone: (holding onto him) Angad sambhaalo apne aapko. Tumne sharaab pee hai?

Angad: SSsssh...😛 kissee ko kehna mat (looking around as if he was a criminal, then started hissing 😆)

Simmone:
Angad tum is haalat me kaise jaaohge 😒 chalo me tumhe chore detee hu

Simmone supported Angad by the waist and walked him to his room. They kept rocking to and fro whilst Angad kept singing gibberish 🤪 Simmone saw that and realised it was the best time to call Akshat as Angad wouldn't be aware of it.

Simmone:
Hello! ha Akshat kaha pohoche tum?

Akshat: Is waqt me yaha grounds me hoo jaha Kripa sab kuch tayaar karahee hai

Simmone: Theek hai 😈 me Angad ko lejaarahee hu. Tell me exactly when she's reached the floor.

Both cut the phone and then carried on with their plan. Simmone on purpose took Angad through the longer route so Kripa would get their at the right time. She had him clinged to her with his head resting on her chest, so passer bys would notice it clearly and know they are together. Since Angad was sub conscious he actually enjoyed the proximity.

Ten minutes later

Akshat:
(on the phone) titli pinjre me ghoos chukee hai 😈 ab sirf jaal daal ne kee dairee hai

Simmone: Samajh gayee 😃

After cutting the phone she carried Angad towards his and Kripa's room on the top floor. She dragged him inside and as she attempted to lay him down on his bed he pulled her on top of her which made her crush into him. He had this cheeky grin {:)] on his face but his eyesight was a bit blurry so he couldn't clearly see who the girl was. Whoever it was he was certainly aroused.

Simmone was happy 😊 as her plan was turning out even better but she still needed to stir those feelings in him so she sat up, still on top of him and untied the knot behind her neck of her dress, leaving her in a skimpish petticoat. She had to prepare herself as Kripa was bound to come in any second.

Soon the opening of the door was heard which was her cue. 😈 she began opening Angad's shirt and laid kisses on his bare chest.

Angad was enjoying 😃 it and in his drunken state surprisingly he saw Kripa instead of Simmone.

Kripa was already at the door of the bedroom 😲 shocked out of her wits after looking at the devastating 😭 scene.

Simmone noticed it and grinned 😊 as she continued loving Angad who reciprocated.

He held her tight close to him and rolled over so she was under him now and then he began loving her with his agressive luscious kisses.

Angad:
I need you, I want you (he mumbled in between kisses) I want you Kripaaa!

Kripa had already left by now so didn't hear anything. Simmone was displeased 😒 to hear that and first shrugged it off thinking she must have heard wrong.

Angad:
I need you Kripaaa! I want you...

This time Simmone heard him loud and clear so she froze with disbelief 😲 with fury 😡 that even in this state he could only think of Kripa. She managed to push him off her and she rolled off the bed, feeling humiliated 😔 Angad laughed 😆 at her in his delirious state and soon fell into deep slimber.

Simmone:
How could you do this to me Angad? 😡 Nashe me bhi tum os kut*** 🤬 Kripa ke khayaalo me rehte ho. I won't let you humiliate 😡 me like this. I won't.

With a humph 😡 she got off the floor, put on her dress and left the suite, waiting eagerly to meet Akshat.

END OF FLASHBACK


Simmone:
Maine or Akshat ne naya plan banaya jaha pe her tarhase tum Kripa kee nazro me girjao or tumhe aisa ehsaas dilaaye ke Kripa ko bhi tum me koi interest nahi hai. Hum jaante the 😳 ke tumhe kuch yaad nahi hoga ke raat ko kya huwa to hum acchee tarhase fiada utha sakhenge. Or wahi huwa, Kripa ne Akshat kee her baat pe yakeen kiya kyu ke osne apni aakhose sab kuch dekha. Tum ne bhi wahi kiya.

Angad was standing away from her at a near pillar facing the other way 😔 relenting his own actions of how in anger 😡 he tried forcing himself on Kripa. All because of someone else's manipulation.

Simmone:
😭 mujhe maaf kardo Angad. Maine yeh sab Akshat ke kehne pe kiya, because I really like you. Me sirf tumhe paana chahtee thee.

Angad: Maafi? 😡 maafi galati kee miltee hai, or tumne to gunaah kiya hai jiskee sirf sazaa miltee hai (turned towards her) Tum jaisee giree huwee larki 🤢 maine aaj tak nahi dekhee jo apne maqsat ke liye itna gir sakti hai. Pyaar...bhavnaeh...naam ke shabd tumhaare mooh se ache nahi lagte 😒 You don't even know the meaning of it.

Simmone: Angad 😔 please mujhe maaf...

Angad: (grabbed her shoulders with sudden rage) 😡 Maaf kardu tumhe? 😡 maaf kardu? mere saath itna bara ganda khel khel ne ke baad maaf kardu? 😡 meree zindagee, mera pyaar mujhse alag karne ke baad maaf kardu?

Simmone: Angad I...

Angad: Shut up! 😡😡 Tumhaaree gandhi zubaan se mujhe or kuch nahi sunna. Maafi to dhoore, aaj ke baad me tumhara yeh manhoos chehra bhi nahi dekhna chahta. Isse pehle ke me kuch aisa wesa kardu chali jao yahase 😡 GET OUT!

She trembled whilst looking at his raging eyes. She could see how dangerous he had become so she quickly ran away from there out of the temple and out of his life.

Angad returned back in front of the idols and joined his hands in prayer and fell down on his knees with despair 😔 He was ashamed of his own actions of his unruly behaviour towards Kripa. How could he have hurt her so much? Soon a hand rested on his shoulder.

Josh:
Angad

Angad: Josh aaj me apnee hee nazro me girgaya yaar (tears 😭 trickled down his cheeks) kitnee baree bhool hogayee mujhse

Josh: dosh tera nahi hai Angad 😒 tere saamne haalaat hee aise peda kiye gaye the ke tu kuch kar nahi sakta tha

Angad: Nahi 😒 Josh maine jo Kripa ke saat kiya wo sirf meree galati thi. Maine oske jasbaato ka, oske pyaar ka, oskee bhavnaoh ka gala ghote diya apnee ginhonee harkat kee wajese 😭 me apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi karpaaoonga, kabhi nahi (buried his face in his palms)

Josh:
Angad Sambhaal apne aapko. Yeh waqt pachtaake rone ka nahi hai, balke pachtaake kuch karne ka waqt hai 😳 Tujhe Kripa ka vishwaas or dil waapis jeetna hai. 👍🏼 you've got to win her back. Os Akshat ko jeet ne nahi dena hai 👎🏼 You can't let him win. You can't 😒

Angad: Theek kehraha hai tu (wipes his tears) Os Akshat 😡 ne to apnee chaal chaldi lekin ab bohat ho chuka. Ab me osse dekhaoonga ke Angad Khanna kya cheez hai. 😡 Osne meree Kripa ko mujhse cheena hai, ose me itnee aasaanee se nahi chorunga. Ab ose pata chalega ke Angad ko sirf jeet na aata hai or wo her keemat pe jeet ke hee rehta hai

Josh: Yeh huwi na baat 👏 (slaps Angad's back) ab pehla qadam waapis Mumbai jaana hai. Hamara yaha kaam pura huwa

Angad: Ha Josh 😃 I can't wait to go back (stood in up to perform the last puja) Me aaraha hu Kripa. Me aaraha hu!

End of part.

Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

yay!! simone our akshat to gaye.. lol.. go angad go angad.... i can't wait till things get back right but it will take alot of time...

Edited by chocolate p - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Yea! Ab Simmone aur Aukshat ki tho khair nahi! 😆

And Angad will have to win back Kripa-so I'm guessing more romance? 😉 😆

By the way, loved the parallel sentence structure with the "Maaf Kardu?!", and also the dangerous boiling look in Angad's eyes- I could so imagine it (Iqbal did them perfectly in KYPH 😛 ).
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wonderful! Now Angad knows the truth, maybe he can play some tricks on Akshat too, to throw him out of Kripa's life.
But winning back Kripa's trust wont be that easy! 😭 Her heart is totally broken! 😭 😭

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Posted: 17 years ago
loved it amazing marvellous wow atleast angad has fully realised his mistakes but kripa cant forgive him yet he has to win her love and trust back pls con soon cant wait
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Posted: 17 years ago
Simone aur Akshat bachoo aarha hai angad woh sab jaan gaya hai wowowo 😆 😆 😆 kripa asani se maaf nahi karege 😭 angad ko thoda time lagega jaror kripa ko jeetne ko .i love to see kaise angad kripa ka trust wapas lata hia.
Edited by monikaseth - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey MSD,,,,,,,,,,
amazing yaar,,,,,,,,,,it was so precised,,,,,,,i enjoyed reading it,,,,,,,
now akshat and simmone are toh dead,,,,,,,,🤢
but v.small part,,,,,,,,,,
try to write big epi.,,,,,,,,,,,,
and plz take out time to write the parts,,,,,,,,,,,plz dont take breaks in between,,,,,,,,,every time ka hai,,,,,,,3-4 din ke baad hi aap epi. post karte ho,,,,,,,,i m die hard fan of ur ff,,,,,,,,so cant wait,,,,,,,,,,,di plz cont soon,,,,,,,,,,
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetmagic4u

Yea! Ab Simmone aur Aukshat ki tho khair nahi! 😆

And Angad will have to win back Kripa-so I'm guessing more romance? 😉 😆

By the way, loved the parallel sentence structure with the "Maaf Kardu?!", and also the dangerous boiling look in Angad's eyes- I could so imagine it (Iqbal did them perfectly in KYPH 😛 ).

thanx a lot for appreciating

yep now we gonna kick some romance in this ff as too much crying has been done already. 😃

hmm well i was able to picture it as well thats how i got the anger scenes and im glad u liked it.

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