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Posted: 17 years ago
πŸ‘ i luvd dis part d way dey bth were convying silent msgs thru eys its juzz too cute n romantic πŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rima791

cute part totally loved it i am can't wait until both AK say i love you to each other wonder how it will happen??? πŸ˜›

thanx hun for appreciating

yeah the confession will happen in the near future and it will be quite romantic.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

sooooo sweet awesome πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

thanx monika as usual.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: newkidontheblok

πŸ‘ i luvd dis part d way dey bth were convying silent msgs thru eys its juzz too cute n romantic πŸ‘

thanx for appreciating

im glad u luved it.

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Posted: 17 years ago
πŸ‘
AK kp khayalo aur songs me to pyaar ka izhar karwa diya, bas ab jaldi se ek zabardast haqiqat me pyaar ka izhaar zaruri he.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: tekhum

πŸ‘
AK kp khayalo aur songs me to pyaar ka izhar karwa diya, bas ab jaldi se ek zabardast haqiqat me pyaar ka izhaar zaruri he.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

thanx

ha zaruri to hai per oske liye thora intezaar karna hoga.

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Posted: 17 years ago
interesting cute awosme and funny too love how everyone was teasing poor rani aks song interacton was good too
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: armaghan0

interesting cute awosme and funny too love how everyone was teasing poor rani aks song interacton was good too

thanx for appreciating

im glad u found it funny

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Posted: 17 years ago
???????????????? wht happened no new part from last threeeeeee days.........????????????????????
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Posted: 17 years ago
part eighty nine

Next week of competition


During the past few days Angad and Kripa have been spending a lot of time together, either that be rehearsals, meeting up for lunch or just hanging around with friends. They pretended in front of everyone that nothing was happening between them but they all knew they were together.

Kripa is in the rehearsal hall by herself practising her solo performance. It was meant to be when her heart breaks πŸ₯Ί but she didn't feel like she would be able to do justice to it as she was too happy to be sad.

As she began practising a spotlight was shot on her. The blinding light made her annoyed πŸ˜” so she moved out of it back into the natural light of the hall and resumed practising. After five minutes the spot light came onto her again. She made a face πŸ˜” and yet again moved out back into the natural light.

After another five minutes the spot light was shot on her again. Now she had had enough.

Kripa:
😑 Kaun hai waha per?

Angad: Me hoo, sirf me πŸ˜ƒ

Kripa: Angad! 😲 tum waha kya karahe ho?

Angad: tumhe follow karaha hu πŸ˜›

she blushed ☺️

Angad:
I mean is light se

Kripa: Angad please stop it, or wahase uthro

Angad: Oh come on Kripa me to bus...Whoa!😲

He fell from the scaffolding

Kripa: (running towards him)
😲 Angad! tum theek to ho?

Angad: Aah! πŸ˜” ha luckily is spring ne bacha liya warna (he sees she's really concerned so pretends he's really hurt his leg) πŸ˜› Aaah!

Kripa: πŸ˜” Angad, kya bohat dard horaha hai?

Angad: ha actually let me see (he pretends to find it difficult to raise his leg) Tumne kaha ke neeche uthro to short cut le liya πŸ˜† (guys this is one of the cute scenes from Dil ka Rishta and i really wanted to use it)

Kripa:
Angad tum bhi na 😊 chalo me uthatee hu tumhe

She struggles to pick him up and Angad on purpose puts all his weight on her so he could hold her closer.

She supports him by the shoulder and both walk out of the hall with Angad pretending to limp.

Kripa:
Angad mujhe lagta hai hamein doctor ke paas jaana chaheeye

Angad: Doctor? 😲 no, no Kripa (pretends to be scared) I hate hospitals and doctors πŸ˜” wese bhi tumse acha doctor koi nahi hosakta πŸ˜‰ (leaned his head on her shoulder)

She was finding it hard carrying him and at the same time was worried πŸ˜” about his injury being serious.

Meanwhile Angad kept leaning on her pretending that his leg really hurt making fake moans and groans πŸ˜† Kripa became even more tensed.

Just then a kid was running pass them and he tripped over quite badly Angad released himself from Kripa immediately and ran to pick up the crying 😭 child forgetting about his fake pain

Angad:
Are beta, tum theek ho? (hugged πŸ€— the crying child)

The kid's parents came running after soon and took him in their embrace

Mother:
Thankyou 😊 hum ise subhe se dhoondh rahe the

Angad: It's okay (ruffled the kid's hair)

After they left, Angad saw Kripa who had a cross look 😑 Then he remembered what he just did so he pretended his leg hurt again

Angad:
Aaah! (holding onto his leg)

Kripa:
Angad you...😑 (she began chasing him whilst he ran to save his life)

Angad bumped into Mishti

Angad:
Mishti πŸ˜› bachao mujhe

Mishti: πŸ˜• kya huwa Angad?

Angad: Ek junglee billi πŸ˜› peeche pargayee hai

Just then Kripa caught up and tried getting her hands on Angad but he hid behind Mishti

Mishti:
uffo! 😑 tum dono phirse jhagar rahe ho?

Kripa: 😑 Mishti tu hath ja. Aaj to ise mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta

Mishti: Kya kiya isne phirse?

Angad: Kuch bhi nahi kiya πŸ˜› pata nahi hamesha yu larne kyu aa jaatee hai. Junglee billi πŸ˜†

Kripa fumed 😑 and tried attacking Angad but he put Mishti in front to defend him.

Mishti:
Kripa stop it na 😳 jab dekho bus bacho jese larte rehte ho. Chalo just say sorry to each other.

Kripa: (turned away like a spoilt kid) me koi sorry worry πŸ˜” nahi kahoongee

Mishti: Kripa!

Angad: Okay chalo, 😊 I'm sorry (holds his ears) Ainda se aisa mazaak nahi karunga

She looked at him and couldn't help but laugh πŸ˜†

Angad:
ehem, ehem (stood there as if he was expecting to hear something in return)

Kripa:
What? πŸ˜›

Angad:
aern't you supposed to tell me something too

Kripa: Oh ha. 😊 mene tumhe maaf kiya

Angad: 😲 kya? excuse me madam per shayad maafi tumhe bhi maangnee hai πŸ˜›

Kripa: Me kyu maafi maangu? πŸ˜’ galati tumhaaree thee

Angad: ha πŸ˜› galati meree thee, me hee paagalo ki tarha tumhe maarne ke liye peeche bhaag raha tha na

Kripa: tumne mujhe paagal bulaya? 😑 Oh you...

Mishti: Tum dono kabhi baaz nahi aaonge πŸ˜’ come on Kripa ise pehle ke tu ise cacha chaba jaye 😳 hum chalte hai yahase.

Mishti took Kripa away. Midway Kripa turned around and grinned πŸ˜ƒ at Angad who in turn returned her a blow kiss. Both of them knew that no matter how much they fought with each other, at the end of the day both were crazy about each other.

Josh:
hmmm...πŸ˜‰ to yaha yeh sab chal raha hai

Angad turned around and was surprised 😲 to find Josh

Angad:
Hey Josh! 😊 tu kab aaya yaar (hugged πŸ€— him)

Josh:
Me to kab ka yaha hee tha per lagta hai kuch logo ko apnee prem kahani πŸ˜› se fursat hee nahi milti ke apne dosto ko bhi yaad kare.

Angad: Prem kahani? πŸ˜• kaha hai. mujhe to nazar nahi aarahee

Josh: ziada natak karne kee zaroorat nahi. πŸ˜› achee tarha se dekh raha tha me kese apnee premeeka ko yu, yu (mimcking Angad's blow kiss) karaha tha.

Angad: Your so old fashioned Josh. Or ha πŸ˜’ aisa kuch nahi jo tu soch raha hai. Yeh sab kya pyaar vyaar laga rakha hai? Angad kee dictionary πŸ˜› me pyaar likha hee nahi.

Josh: πŸ˜• to yeh sab?

Angad: are kabhi kabhi πŸ˜‰ kisee insaan ko kaaboo me laane ke liye oske rang me rang na parta hai. To bus wahi kiya maine or mera kaam hogaya πŸ˜ƒ. Soon she'll be under my sack.

Josh: Yaar Angad πŸ˜” ise to baksh diya hota tune. Jitna me Kripa ko jaanta hu, wo bohat hee inncoent or shaareef hai. she wont even let you get that far

Angad: Or jitna me ose jaanta hu she's all over me. Mere peeche itnee deewaanee hai wo ke she'll do anything 😈 to keep me close.

Josh: Phir bhi me kehraha hu ke tera ye khel oske saat mat khel πŸ˜’ she's a really nice girl.

Angad: ab kya kare nice girls are my weakness πŸ˜‰ or tu oskee itnee taraf daaree kyu karaha hai? πŸ˜• Tu mera dost hai ke oska?

Josh: Me tera dost hu, isiliye tujhe warn karaha hu ke Kripa on larkiyo me se nahi hai. Or kai aisa kuch na hojaeh πŸ˜” jispe baad me tujhe pachtaana pare.

Angad: Chalna ab chore na isse. Come on let's have a drink.

Both walk away.

Kripa's room

Kripa:
Mishti tujhe pata hai kal kya hai?

Mishti: Kal? πŸ˜• ha kal sunday hai

Kripa: yeh to me bhi jaantee hu, lekin kal πŸ˜ƒ ek khaas Sunday hai

Mishti: aisa kya khaas hai?

Kripa: kal Angad ka birthday hai πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Mishti:
Me to bhool hee gayee Yaad hai pichle saal kese paagalo kee tarha tu ose wish karne ke liye pure Shimla kee college me doree thee lekin jab oske paas pohochee to osse wish karne ke badle heel tore di or kichar me girgayee πŸ˜†

Kripa: Oh don't remind me πŸ˜” it was so embarrassing 😳 ke pure hafte me college nahi gayi thi. I was feeling so stupid πŸ€ͺ yeh soch kar ke what must he have thought about me. Or aaj dekh ek saal ke baad sab kuch kitna alag hai na 😍

Mishti: too much πŸ˜ƒ alag to bohat kuch hai kyu? (starts teasing her)

Kripa:
stop teasing me Mishti πŸ˜’ anyways is saal me Angad ko kuch alag hee tarha se wish karna chahtee hu

Mishti: I'm sure πŸ˜‰ Lekin Kripa you better not be thinking about naughty ideas 😳

Kripa: Mishti! 😲 ab sun aaj raat baara baje...

Mishti: 😲 Oh my God! Kripa baara baje kya karne waalee hai tu?

Kripa: Tera murder πŸ˜† puree baat to sun. Me chahtee hu ke aaj raat baara baje me ose sabse pehle wish karu

Mishti: How sweet Kripa πŸ˜ƒ

Kripa: Mishti tujhe meree madad karnee hogee

Mishti: abhi bhi tujhe madad kee zaroorat hai? πŸ˜› Now he's all yours

Kripa: aisee baat nahi hai Mishti. Dekh I want to surprise him so I'll need your help with the preparations.

Mishti: Lekin πŸ˜” aaj raat ko to teree performance hai

Kripa: aaj meree nahi, Angad or os 😑 chipkali kee hai. Isliye me nahi jaane waali. I can't stand her at all.

Mishti: theek hai, ab jaldi bata kya karna hai.

Kripa got excited and explained her plan to her.

Dressing room before the show

Simmone is busy with her make up.

Akshat:
Hi Simmone!

Simmone: Hey Akshat! πŸ˜ƒ kya baat hai aaj tum apni Miss Attitude πŸ˜› ke saat nahi ho

Akshat: hehe, you know that's what I like about you. πŸ˜ƒ always have a good sense of humour (yeah right)

Simmone: πŸ˜›
what's the real reason?

Akshat: Wahi jiske liye tum yaha ho. πŸ˜‰ I know how much you want Angad per wo hamesha Kripa ke peeche bhaagta rehta hai. Or me ye bikul nahi chahta πŸ˜’

Simmone: I see something cooking 😈

Akshat: agar tum Angad ko apna banana chahtee ho then follow my plan and in no time he'll be in your bed.

Simmone shook hands with him and then listened to his evil 😈 plan.

Performance

Now they're story had reached the part where the second girl steps in throwing the guy off his feet. this is where he leaves the first girl for this one prooving that he never was in love and was just having fun.

The scene was of a club and the guy has gone there with his friends and is just mesmerised by this girl's sexy body.

Simmone comes flying down sitting on a swing and begins singing.

Simmone: kehte hain sabhi ke badi hot hu main
tell you what takila ka ek shot hu main
kehte hain sabhi ke badi hot hu main
tell you what takila ka ek shot hu main

magar khayal yeh rahe jara
mummy ko nahi hain pata, mummy ko nahi hain pata
so mummy se na kehna


She went around the guys and then came by Angad and began seducing him. Then she filled his glass with the drink which to him should only be fruit juice but she had spiked it with alcohol 😈 and her plan was to make him drink atleast 15- 20 glasses so he would get really drunk.

Simmone: fill me up baby fill me up
honey main teri tu hain mera
aaj woh ho jaayega ab tak nahi jo hua
fill me up baby fill me up
honey main teri tu hain mera
aaj woh ho jaayega ab tak nahi jo hua

magar khayal yeh rahe jara
mummy ko nahi hain pata, mummy ko nahi hain pata
so please mummy se na kehna na


She continued pouring his drink and Angad just kept enjoying her seductive moves. The alcohol seemed to be kicking in as he began feeling a bit delirious

Simmone: phool hu main tu phool hain toh cool hain yeh jagah
aa jara kiss yu kare jal jaaye sara jahan
(gave him a kiss)
phool hu main tu phool hain toh cool hain yeh jagah
aa jara kiss yu kare jal jaaye sara jahan

magar khayal yeh rahe jara
mummy ko nahi hain pata. mummy ko nahi hain pata
please mummy se na kehna

kehte hain sabhi ke badi hot hu main
tell you what takila ka ek shot hu main
kehte hain sabhi ke badi hot hu main
tell you what takila ka ek shot hu main

magar khayal yeh rahe jara
mummy ko nahi hain pata
mer mummy ko nahi hain pata
mummy ko nahi hain pata
mummy se na kehna

Please dont tell mummy


By the end of the performance Angad was drooling πŸ€ͺ over Simmone whilst she was pleased.

Simmone:
Angad come on, performance khatam hogayee (she pretended to be innocent and not happy πŸ˜” about him being drunk but in reality she was jumping around)

Meanwhile Kripa had set up a lovely table in the hotel grounds. She had taken permission from the restaurant that she was doing it for a special birthday. The table was decorated with deep dark pink roses and scented candles. She had ordered a big chocolate cake and now was just setting the candles on them.

Mishti:
Are wow πŸ˜ƒ Kripa sab kuch kitna acha lagraha hai. I'm sure Angad yeh sab dekhega na to oske to hosh πŸ˜‰ hee urjaenge

Kripa: Really? pata nahi πŸ˜” Mishti ose yeh sab pasand aaehga ke nahi?

Mishti:
Tune apne dil se yeh sab kiya hai to definitely pasand aaehga. Ab chal, dekh 11:30 baj chuke hai. Show khatam hogaya hoga and I'm sure wo apne kamre me hoga.

Kripa: 😊 you're right

After checking everything was set she made her way back inside the hotel really excited πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ about surprising Angad.

As she made her way to the top floor in the lifts, she couldn't help wondering what Angad's reactions would be.

Kripa stood outside her room door hesitating at first to open it but then she built up the courage and opened it. She found Angad sitting on the couch in the lounge waiting for her, with the lights closed and only candles lit every where. The soft wind was blowing, crashing wind chimes in the near distance. She went closer to him and saw he had his eyes closed πŸ₯± so she went behind him and laid a soft kiss on his forehead. His eyes opened and he smiled 😊

Kripa:
Sorry, bohat dair hogayee na. πŸ˜” Lagta hai kaafi dair se intezaar karahe ho

He gets up, then holds her close by the shoulders.

Angad:
Kripa 😊 it's okay. Wese bhi me ziada dair nahi intezaar karaha tha.

Kripa: theek hai. chalo mere saath

Angad: πŸ˜• kaha?

Kripa: ummm...it's a surprise πŸ˜ƒ ab chalo na.

She drags Angad out with her and eventually they end up at the grounds where she has prepared everything.

Kripa:
Yeh dekho πŸ˜ƒ maine yeh sab tumhaare liye kiya hai

He's surprised 😲 and overwhelmed πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Š as he's being pulled by Kripa towards the table full of candles and flowers. Then he sees the cake.

Kripa: (whispers near his ear)
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

He gives her a longing look then holds her tight by the waist and pulls her closer. She rests her hands on his chest. He slowly comes closer to her and just when is about to kiss her she moves her face away, too shy 😳 Then she takes his hand and gives him the knife and both cut the cake together. She first feeds him and then he feeds her.

Then she pours two glasses of champagne and both enjoy it.

Angad then holds her close and kisses her hand. Both stay in each other's arms whislt swaying to the song in the background.

Main pyaar hoon tera jaane na tu
Jaane na tu haan maane na tu
Main pyaar hoon tera jaane na tu
Jaane na tu haan maane na tu
Tera hi aashiq hoon mein
Mujhko tu pehchaan le
Yun to mein mar jaaoonga
Kehna mera maan le
Kehna mera maan le
Main pyaar hoon tera jaane na tu
Jaane na tu haan maane na tu

Aaya hoon mein paas tere ae sanam
Dil mein chupa ke laya tere ghum
Kya karoon tu bata meri hai kya khata
Kyon pyaar mein mujhe tadpaaye tu
Tadpaaye tu kyon tarsaaye tu
Kyo pyaar mein mujhe tadpaaye tu
Tadpaaye tu kyon tarsaaye tu

Maine tere naam likh di zindagi o o
Kitni bhi karle mujhse berukhi
Le mera imtihaan aur bhi aazmaan
Har saans mein tere bas jaaoonga
Ek din tujhe haan mein paaoonga
Main pyaar hoon tera jaane na tu
Jaane na tu haan maane na tu
Tera hi aashiq hoon mein
Mujhko tu pehchaan le
Yun to mein mar jaaoonga
Kehna mera maan le
Main pyaar hoon tera jaane na tu
Jaane na tu haan maane na tu
Main pyaar hoon tera jaane na tu
Jaane na tu haan maane na tu


By the end they have their foreheads touching together

Then he lifts her in his arms and carries her towards a bridge above the lake. It looks really beautiful under the night sky with the stars reflecting in the water.

Both sit there with Angad lying with his head in her lap and Kripa playing with his hair. they have sweet conversations about anything and just keep teasing each other and have fun.

Just then the elevator makes a 'TING' noise and Kripa reaches the top floor. She looks around being surprised 😲 and then flips her head grinning πŸ˜ƒ at herself that she was just imagining it all. Anyways it was up to her now to make it real.

As she stood out of her room she hesitated just like her imagination. Then opened the door with excitement πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ but she saw the room dark. She felt disappointed πŸ˜” but then again flipped her head.

Kripa:
tu bhi na Kripa.

She opens the light and begins looking for Angad, but can't find him in the lounge or even in the bathroom. She makes her way towards the bedroom and when she opens the door she finds him lying on the bed with a big grin πŸ˜ƒ. she enters but soon freezes in her tracks as what she see's next is unbelievable.

Angad pulled Simmone on top of him and both were looking at each other intensely. Then Simmone began kissing him all over his face and then she unbuttoned his shirt and began laying kisses on his bare chest. Then Angad pulled her closer to him again and pinned her down on the bed. Then he began nuzzling her neck and...

A thunder bolt hit Kripa. She couldn't take it anymore. she was disgusted at the sight 🀒 and most of all at herself for preparing everything for a man who was having fun with another woman.

She ran out with rage 😑 non- stop until she reached her prepared surprised. She threw away all the flowers, the candles whilst crying 😭😭 abruptly and then threw the cake away. She was torn completely as Angad broke her heart πŸ’”πŸ₯Ί.

end of part.


Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago

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