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Originally posted by: guddi085

hey maya...tht was cooool...but please continue sooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnn.....dyin to know wats gonna happen next...i hope armaan is safe.....continue sooooon....u rock!!!!! 👏

luv
gita 😊

thank you sweeeety an u also rock! cause u r like my other sweeeeet friends who hav stayed since begening....i mean even 2 me it sounds wow.....[cause u kno i actully 4get about it!😳]

thank uuuuuuuuuu.......an u rocccckkkkkkkkk!

Originally posted by: x-Ridzzie-x

OK serousily dis was da best prt evaaaaaaaaaa

i relli wanna know what happend nxt yaarrrrr plz plz plz update sooooooonn 😭
OR IL WILLL DIE I SWEAR DOWN
plz yaaar update real quick n plz pm me so dat i know plz.....cuz i relli wanna read ur ff...n i might 4 get cuz i exams cumin up

ayt bi

noways...u cant die........i,ll save u!😆...okay ive added u 2 my list so i,ll send u message next time...okay

thanks.............

Originally posted by: hot_diva

nice but short part 😳

sorry yaar............i get soooo much homework nowadays that i the only time i spend free is actually an hour on computer on if....after that homework!!!!!!!!!!

thanks

Originally posted by: bookadict303

really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thankssssssssssssssss................................an 25 exclamation marks!! wow

thanbks guys 4 ur comments

i will try an do the next part tomarrow....if i can because im soo much caught up in home work an a musical in school[because of which i hav soooo much home work!!!]

hope u understand

thank u.............

Originally posted by: maya_2u

sorry yaar............i get soooo much homework nowadays that i the only time i spend free is actually an hour on computer on if....after that homework!!!!!!!!!!

thanks

no prob i also have much homework nowhere days can u plzz pm me when u update plzzzzzzzzzz

okay guys....i think i,ll will have the next part in 2 hrs........... 😳

okay guys here is the next part.....oh an just 2 let u know im in a musicalin my school an will possibaly b gone this weekend an the coming[practice an then eal thing!] so hope u forgive me if i dont hav it done on these 2 weekends!

recap;they all go back......trying 2 escape...attacked by a group...armaan stays back 2 give the others a head start....ridds comes back 4 him an finds out that the stalker is actually sam................

ridds amit anjali an atul sapna are way ahead now....they dint kno wat happened 2 armaan or where he is......ridds still hadn,t told any1 it was sam.........it had been a day now since then an they had moved along quite far......
then as they were all moving along wen sudddenly out of nowhere some body attacked amit....they had him 2 ground an the others were 2 shocked 2 react ....they were rolling over now. then the man out his gun an aimed it at amit...just about 2 fire..wen suddenly out of nowhere some 1 shoots a knife...............the man makes a choking sound....an then he falls off....dead!
amit gets up quickly an grabbs his stick.....then a shadow moves in from the corner[from where the knife was hit]amit prepares 2 strike ....an then stops suddenly.......an smiles...it was armaan
"ARMAAN!!!!!!!" all of them cry an hug armaan....ridds doesn,t move......amit goes up an says
amit;great timing.......[an he pats his shoulder]
armaan; yeah.......hw much hav u travelled.......
amit; dont kno....but we no longer hear the river....which means we are quite deep...
armaan;but not way from danger..if he got here....others are probabaly near....
anjali; par tum wahan se nickle kaise...ridds wapas gayi thi...aur tub se woh kuch bolti hi nahi.....
armaan i.....[he looks at ridds an thro her eyes he knows that she knows the whole truth]...forget about that.....we better get moving
they all move along an ridds avoids armaan entirely....
they all move along 4 ages then at one point they run into trouble.........
they all turn a corner an fing themselves surrounded by men with knives an guns...........they had also come fom back...they had led them into a perfect trap......
they had no ay of escaping....they all are huddeled into a group....sam is not there.......
a man in red jacket steps up an says"buhat baghaya ..now ur dead"
armaan; who r u...wat do u want with us..[armaan wasnt playing at it....he knew very well...he only wanted more time 2 take in its surroundings an 2 look 4 an escape route
red suite man;u sud,t really worry much about that...worry about ur self.............
armaaan; tu tum logon ne yeh sab plan kiya tha......humein yahan tuk talany ke liye
red suite; about time u realise.........our boss wants u dead........[while he ws talking armaan whispers 2 ridds an atul " get ready 2 attack...if we get them by surprise we might make it....dont go same way...go seperate in groups.....tell others now..wen i say go...attack"...our job wud hav been finished in jungle..but ur lucky...but not any more....he raises his gun an points at them
armaan takes a deep breath an shouts..."go" an at once all of them attack the others.....they were all taken by surprise an it worked....there were 2 ways of escaping.....all of them go towards the bigger one....as it looked like it had more chance of escaping..[they both led out side]......armaan was cornered an cudn,t go 2 that tunnel so instead he takes the other...ridds follows him
they both run at full speed an get away from the scene.........they stop 2 take a breath....
armaan; why...why did..u come this way.....why didnt u...go with ..others
ridds; i cudnt...........
armaan; but u cud hav made out side...then yyyy......
they both look at each other in silence then start running again avaerting their eyes....
they stop 2 take a rest but then armaan stops suddenly
ridds; wats wrong
armaan; i can feel the air....come here look....
at one side of the cave wall there was a tiny hole an they cud see day light.....finally!
they both begin working on the wall trying 2 make a hole....an it was working
finally they will breath fresh air.......!

nxt 2 parts; ridds will finally confess here love....a sweeet sweeeeeet part coming up
thats it
hope its gud
do comment

i will be w8in for a sweet sweet prt! i am speechless! u r too gd! i dnt know wat to say! u jst....! contd soon plz..... 😛

that was great plez continue soon