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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks..........an nxt part is coming 2
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Posted: 17 years ago
i am soooo HAPPY :) dat u enterd tha FF contest!!! u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
deserve 2 win COZ U R AN AWSUM FF WRITER!!!!!!
U ROCK AND ROLL GURL!!!!
if ders gona b votin u DEFINETLY have MY vote!!!

and i'm waitin till u update!!!
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Edited by nishat_1995 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
nishat......i love u yaar.......ur sooo sweet im half way through the update an i,ll hurry up 4 u.......i sooo love u 🤗
u kno as many as i put....they not enough....u deserve more!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwww thx maya!!! i luv u 2 (as frends!) lol..xx
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Posted: 17 years ago
heyy maya! ders dis post called attention DMG FF writers the link: http :// .india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=786239

its says 2 put the name of ur fanfic in so dey can make a fanfic index....u shud really put urs in!
Edited by nishat_1995 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
okay....im soooo sorry u guys...4 not havin writin the part so long...there was a wedding an i was working on the FF contest...but now the date is extende so its ok[4 now!! 😉 ]
okay here we go.................
they all move inside an walk fast........amit looks questiongly at armaan...but he nods saying i,l tell u.....
the cave were dark......but they had brought wood an lit them..moving fast into the darkness......they move 4 a gud while untill they cudn,t move an decided 2 stop at a small cavern.........
they go 2 sleep but amit comes 2 armaan an asks him
amit;armaan .....wat exactly happened......
armaan;...well...wen i went up.........
[flashback!!]
armaan was walking through the trees ...thr rain was pounding down heavily........armaan did not kno where the men had been but he had an idea.........of where exactly they were........he walked fast...then out of nowhere a man jumped out from the tree on top of armaan!......armaan was weaponless....an fell.....he was a jungali an he pointed a long stick with a point towards armaan,s chest just then lots more jungali,s come out an along with them came the men in normall clothes...........1 of them looked at the jungali an said something in their native language.....then he looked at 1 of his companions an said
wat do u reckon we do 2 the others......
1 of the other men responded......wat kill them wat else....just not the girl...wats her name...yeah riddhima......kyon pyaar karta hai tu us se....bol......waise yeh riddhima hai badi chikni..
armaan ;SHUT UP OR I,LL MURDER U.......
oh ho....itni mohabbat...hai koi hum se bhi kare ....says 1 of the men
then a serious looking guy came up 2 armann....he held a stick also an he puts the stick through armaan,s arm......armaan cries with pain...while all the jungali,s dance
armaan pretends 2 fall unconsious....an the men start talking among themselves...armaan listening closely
"ab kya.......karna hai...."
kya karna hai....is ko in jungaliyon ke hawale kardete hein......aur wapas....us ladki ko kuch nahi kehna...kyon ke boss ne mana kia tha...."
theek hai...tu phir plan set....
armaan felt a wave of anger swep him
armaan opens his eye a fraction an loks aroung....there were 2 many of them 2 fight alone......the other [normal] men had gone an armaan decided 2 make a run 4 it..................................
the jungali,s were dancing like mad wen they heard 1 of them screaming something.......they all look towards where he was pointing.....an see a tip of armaan,s head disappear behind a tree
outraged.....they all run after him.......
[back 2 now]
amit sat in silence taking in wat he had heard....then he looks armaan in the eye an says
amit;so we hav 2 leave this place now.............
armaan nods an they both fell silent.....but unaware that som1 had just heard their conversation...........................
nxt day
they all get up an get ready 2 leave.....armaan was a bit at the back looking at his wound wen ridds comes up an says
ridds;armaan.....tumhen buhat chot aai hai.....is ka ilag zaruri hai.....or else infection phel jaye ga!
armaan;riddhima....is ka tu kuch bhi nahi hai.....jo chaut tum ne mujhe di hai....woh is se bar kar hai....buhat bar kar......
ridds eyes were full of tears....she turns 2 leave but armaan stops her......by putting his arm out
arman;riddhima......tum janti ho na....ke humaara yahan se bach nikalna mushkil hai.......the odds are stacked against us......agar mujhe kuch ho gaya.
ridds; dont!!...says ridds hastly...then she turns an finds anjali there..
anjali;tum dono yahan kya kar rahe ho.......
ridds;ummm woh kuch nahi di......hum chalen.....an they leave

they all move on.........deeper into the cave...1st they tried 2 remeber there way ...but then it became impossible and they just abandoned it.....
they were all moving fast......keeping there eyes peeled....when atul sudenly stops
atul;STOP!!!!
amit;wat happened......
atul;muhjhe kuch sunai[heard] diya....
they all stop but there was no sound.......so they move on...but then they stop this time they had heard a noise but it stopped as soon as they stopped..........it was impossible 2 tell from where the noise was coming from......they start moving fast........then break into a run........
then a movement at the front brings them all 2 a halt................

hope its gud
do comment
love ya!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey....this is sooo good keep up the amaizing parts!! 👏

waiting for the next part! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey maya...tht was rockinnnggggg....bahut suspense tha.....wondering who heard armi n amit's conversation....nd i hope they get out of this jungle....n ridz confesses....n i hope tht they all get to knoe tht amit is the guy.....n yah....waitin to read lllooooadddsss of armi n ridzi scenes.......continue sooooon....n gr88888888888888888888 to know tht u have enetered the FF contest...will surely vote for u...... 😳

luv
gita 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
the best ff ever amazing idont hav words
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Posted: 17 years ago
iam not hurt it was due to amistake 😊

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