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Posted: 17 years ago
hi OMG ur ff is sooo great ...n it tuk me 2 to 3 hrs 2 read it n i stayed til 4 in morinin dat was cuz i was readin others ff as well....buh it was worth while...wen r u sendin da nxt part plz hurry..cn u snd da link wen u update it plz fnx
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Posted: 17 years ago
ya i love ur ff but dont u think it bit long now i think rid should say i love u 2 armaan n tht sam should be exposed
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: x-Ridzzie-x

hi OMG ur ff is sooo great ...n it tuk me 2 to 3 hrs 2 read it n i stayed til 4 in morinin dat was cuz i was readin others ff as well....buh it was worth while...wen r u sendin da nxt part plz hurry..cn u snd da link wen u update it plz fnx

ohhh thanks...an sure

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: maha_elahi202

ya i love ur ff but dont u think it bit long now i think rid should say i love u 2 armaan n tht sam should be exposed

it is i agree....an it will b done soon now...[hope fully]😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry guys....didnt update today....will update tomarrow 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
ooohhh....maya!!!

ok will be waiting dear! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
noooooooooooooooo u cnt do dis 😭 ....OK BUH I WIL B WATIN 😃 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
noooooooooooooooo u cnt do dis 😭 ....OK BUH I WIL B WATIN 😃 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
okay guys....i THINK i ,ll hav the nxt part in 1.5 hrs...or so 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey guys.....sorry 4 da delay...heres the nxt part..

sapna; okay riddhima ab tumhari bari...sing with n..
ridds;ummmmm mein kyon pehle atul...........
atul ;acha theek hai........um..na na na na nare nare nare nanan nare na re na....sade nall raho ge te aish karo ge zindagi de sarey.... [he now gets up an stars doing bhangra...sapna an anjali join in]
atu; na..........okay an laii ab tum...h ke saat..
anjali;honton pay aisi baat mein daba ke chali aayi..khul jaye wohi baat tu duhai hai duhai.........
anjali....okay arman ab tumhari turn...sing a song
armaan looks up at ridds who looks away...
armaan;sanson ko sanson mein dhalnay do zara...[aman an anjali start dancing ..sapna also gets up an also atul....armaan goes up 2 ridds an takes her hand an she gets up....he puts a hand around her waist an they start dancing slowly without any1 realising]..dheemi si dharkan ko barney do zarra...lamhon ki guzarish hai yeh..pass aa jayyyyeee..hum..hum tum.... tum hum tum..........................
then they all sit down.,.......
sapna;ridds ab tum hari bari sing a song........
ridds;raat se roothi...koyal se kalli...raat kate na..hijran wali..tere ishq mein hai tere ishq mein[every1 was practically swinging an clapping...armaan staring constantly at ridds while she tried 2 avoid those mystic eyes].....tere ishq mein...marte rahe marte rahe......tere ishq mein...tere roobaroo bete hua marte rahe...tere ishq mein...................
then they all platyed on.....wen again it was armaan s turn
armaan;tu ek baar pyar se mujh ko choo lay tu har zakham bhar jaye ga....zara iltija sun ke dewane dil ki mujhe apne dil se laga.......tere pyaar mein aise jiye hum...jala hai yeh dil...yeh anken hui nam....
oh an armaan s arm had been bkeeding but now it had stopped an he didnt tell any1...
they kept playing on...wen there was a shuffling sound from near by....every1 freazes...atul basically hugs anjali who jerkes away...
atul;wat was that..........
aman;i think it was an animal...dont worry i,ll go check
armaan ; i.ll come with u.......
an they both move out towards the source of noise...they go way in wen suddenly aman spots an object on the ground.......aremaan 2 was looking...aman picks it up an examines it then his mouth fell open
armaan; wat happened..........
aman; yeh...yeh kabaili logon ke[jungle people/natives] hai......it belongs 2 them this weapon...is ka matlab yeh hai...ke hum jungali logon ke area mein hai.....
armaan 2 becomes shocked.........he remebers something which the driver had told him when they were going 2 leave
[flashback]
armaan; acha hari ram....is area mein dekhaney ko kya hai
hari ram; saab yeh jaga buhat hi sundar hai...par utni hi khatarnack[dangereous] hai.....kahin jungle ki khoobsurti...tu kahin jangali janwar....kahin girte hua jharne...tu kahin tez pani ka shor....yeh pahaar buhat khoobsurat..par ek slip aur zindagi aur maut ka sawall ban sakta hai......aur haan saab yahan jungali log bhi rahten hai....woh jo bhi un ke alake mein aate hain...un ko maar dete hain...hum wahan nahi jate..wahan sab se dangerous janwar hote hain...wahan us jungle ke hise se kabhi koi zinda nahi lota........ya tu jungali maar dete hain...ya janwar un ka shikaar kar dete hain..............................
[back in jungle]
armaan an aman both share terrified looks
armaan ;this means hum log jungle ke us hise mein hein jahan jungali rahten hein.....jis ke bare mein hari ram ne bataya tha..
aman; haaan......aisa hi lagta hai.....par ab
armaan;tum un ko mat batana ...woh log darr jayen ge.....
aman nods....an puts the knife like object in his pocket an they both turn around.........an to thier horror they find all the gang standing behind them....they had heard every thing...........
they were back in their clearing an no one spoke.......then finally atul said
atul;guys woh hum ko maar day gey........yaar janwar kha jayen ge
armaan;look...guys nothing 2 panic...hum..hum guard karen ge aur subha hote hi yahan se jane ka rasta dhoonday ge.....
aman;armaan is right....so who is in it....
every1 looks up an nods.........................trying 2 hide their fear
that night it was armaan an atul,s duty 2 stay up at night....they wud change shifts during the night.....
every1 lay down an no 1 cud sleep....then finally every1 was asleep.......armaan was looking out 2 wards the jungle a stick in his hands.....atul on other side....he looks over an sees ridds ...he goes over an takes his jacket off an puts it gently on riddhima.....then he returns 2 his old place an keeps guard then his stick falls.....he ducks 2 pick it up....suddenly 2 arrows were shot from near....they hit the exact place where armaan was a sec ago............................................

hope its good.............
do comment
love maya 😉 [now i betta get back 2 HW... ]cheers

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