Chaurahen - LKT[23] 5/30/09 - Page 3

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plz update soon 😳

awsome update janvi can't wait to read more....
cont. soon 👏

Shona

SCENE 4

[LATER IN THE AFTERNOON, BOTH KT&PRACHI AND LAKSHYA&GANGA ARE GETTING READY TO HEAD TO THE MANDIR]

LOCATION: LAKSHYA'S HOME

*Lakshya sitting on the couch waiting for his mom to finish getting ready*

*Lakshya's cell phone rings, it's Neev*

Lakshya: yeah, Neev

Neev: whats going on bro?

Lakshya: nothing man, have to go to the temple in a bit

Neev*laughs*: how'd you get caught up in that

Lakshya: mom's wish

Neev: good luck

Lakshya: kahe ka good luck, pata nahin wahan jaa ke kya karoonga mein

Neev: bhagvaan jaane

Lakshya: bohoti bore hojaounga mein, tu bhi chal

Neev: khud marega aur mujhe bhi marvaega

Lakshya: arrey, jai ke bina veeru kahin gaya tha kabhi?

Neev: sahi hai yaar, mandir mein hi milte hain tab

Lakshya: chal, theek hai, bye

Neev: bye

LOCATION: PRACHI & KT'S APARTMENT

KT: Neetu, chalo aaj mandir chaalte hain, kal college shuruaat hoga, toh kyun na hum bhagvaan ke aashirvaad ke saath shuruaat kare

Prachi: haan, aur vahan se loog bhi miljayenge jo humare college mein jaate honge

*they both head out to the mandir*

LOCATION: MANDIR

[bhajans are being sung in the hall which the panditji is leading, everyone else is either singing along or praying]

panditji *singing*: tu hi mata, tu hi pita hai, tu hi hai radha ka shyam...shri ram, shri ram

*KT and Prachi enter*

Prachi: wow, KT dekho kitna bada mandir hai

KT:haan, aur dekho vahan murti rahki hai, chalo vahan jaa ke pooja kartien hain

*KT and Prachi head over where there are a line of bhagvaan idols*

*Lakshya & Ganga enter*

Lakshya: mom, hum kyun aaye hain yahan

Ganga: Lakshya, chup chap pooja karo

*Neev spots Lakshya and walks up to him*

Neev: toh...ab kya?

Lakshya: kasam se yaar, bhagvaan bhi itne bhajan sun sun ke bore ho jaate honge

Neev: seriously...

Lakshya: aur aaj bhi inti ladkiyan nahin aayien

Neev: oye, Basanti!!

*Neev watches a girl(Prachi) near the devi maa idol*

Neev: tumhara toh pata nahin, par mein jaa raha hoon iss devi ka pooja karne ke liye

*Lakshya nods his head in disbelief at his friend's pursuit*

*Neev lightly fixes his hair and walks towards the girl (Prachi)*

Neev: uh, Hi

*Prachi looks at Neev up and down with a confused look*

Prachi: Namaste

Neev: oh, Namaste...lagta hai ke aap yahan pehli baar aayi hain

Prachi: ji, aap ko kaise pata

*Neev quickly lies about himself*

Neev: nahin, mein toh yahan ladkiyon ka pooja..i mean BHAGVAAN ka pooja karne ke liye..har roz aata hoon, aap ko toh pehli baar dekh raha hoon

Prachi: ji, hum abhi abhi India se aaye hain

Neev: bohoti shubh baat hai, aur yahan aane ka kaaran?

Prachi: mei yahan New York University attend karne ke liye aayi hoon

Neev: kya baat hai, woh mera hi toh college hai

Prachi: aap bhi vahan jaate hain

Neev: of course! ..mera matlab, haan mei vahan MBA kar raha hoon...parantu, aap ki classes kab shuru hoti hain?

Prachi: kal se...

Neev: mera bhi, agar aap ko koi si bhi kasht ho, toh phir please aap iss badmash--uh i mean iss bholu ko please yaad karna...

*Neev quickly bows his head before her, which Prachi smiles to*

Neev: vaise, aap ka shubh naam ka hai?

Prachi: humara naam Prachi hai

*Neev smiles, and looks at her directly in the eye*

Neev: pata nahin aap se sundar aap ka naam hai ya khud aap hi

*Prachi's cheeks turn red*

*Neev finds himself staring at her, and quickly regains his senses*

Neev: --uh, kher...mera naam hai Neev ulf Neevu, Neevo...jho bhi...aap hi dekh le na, mera naam aap ke in hoonton pe bohoti saaje ga

*Prachi is taken aback by his flirtatiousness*

Neev: just kidding...aap mujhe kuch bhi bulaa sakti hain...magar iss se pehle aapko toh mera number toh hona chahiye

Prachi: number?

Neev *jokingly* : aur nahin toh kya...aap ki madat karne ke liye sau laash letaa duunga!!

*Prachi shyly giggles*

Prachi: vaise, hum toh yahan naye naye aaye hain, aapki meherbaani hogi agar kal aap humme college mein mile aur tohda classes dhoondne mein madat kare

Neev: yeh bhi koi baat hui, hum zaroor pohonchenge, pukar ke dekho toh sahi...

*Neev takes his hand out for a handshake*

Neev: friends?

*Prachi looks at his hand and hesitates*

Neev: zindagi bhar ke liye haath nahin maang raha hoon...

*Prachi smiles, and gives him a handshake*

Prachi: friends!

*Neev tightly holds her hand and pulls her a little closer to him*

Neev: maine kya kaha tha...nahin, mein toh yeh haath zindagi bhar ke liye nahin chhodunga...

*Prachi shocked, looks into his eyes and watches him slowly smile*

*her heart melts*

*Neev laughes*

Neev: sorry, meri mazak karne ki bohot aadat hai...aapko kissi bhi kaam ke liye zaroorat ho, toh please aap beh fikr kar ke humme phone kar lijiyega

*Prachi takes out her cell phone and takes down Neev's number*

Neev: aur aap ka number kya hai?

Prachi: uh...humme aapki zaroorat jab padegi, toh hum zaroor call karlenge...

Neev: aur agar mujhe aapki zaroorat pade...toh phir hum kya karenge...

Prachi: intezaar!

*Prachi smiles at him one last time and walks away*

*Ganga pulls Lakshya towards the Radha-Krishn idol*

Ganga: Lakshya, please yahan aaye ho, toh phir kam se kam thodi si pooja karlo

Lakshya: mom, mere paas sab kuch hai, ab kya maangu?

Ganga: hamesha kuch na kuch chahiye tumhe, bas pooja karo aur bhagvaan khud tumhe ashirvaad de ga

*Lakshya finally closes his eyes, folds his hands and moves a little closer to the murti to pray*

Lakshya *speaking to God in his mind*: jai shri Krishn, mein aapni zindagi se bohot khush hoon, aur kya maangu, aur--

KT:excuse me...

*Lakshya annoyed, opens his eyes to see who it is that is disturbing him...*

*next to him, stands a simple girl with dark eyes who is peering at him so deeply that it almost gave him the chills*

KT: excuse me, aap mera raasta chhodenge?

*Lakshya realizes that he's blocking the passage of the girl's to move on to the next idol, and apologetically moves to a side*

Lakshya: sorry

KT: thanks

*Lakshya tries to close his eyes again and pray but, when he does, he sees the girl's face in front of him...he quickly opens his eyes and stares at the Radha-Krishn murti*

Lakshya *thinking*: meri mulaqaat toh hazaaron ladkiyon se hoti rehti hain, magar mujhe ek bhi chehra yaad nahin rehta...yeh chehra kyun baar baar mere saamne aa raha hai...

panditji *singing*: ...tu hai har radha ka shayam...shri ram, shri ram...

[scene ends with a focus upon the Radha-Krishnji idols]

PROMO: FIRST DAY OF THE REST OF THEIR LIVES...

*JHANVI*

WILL CONTINUE AFTER 7+ COMMENTS

WOW!! Love the New Banner !! 👏 👏 👏
Okie , almost done reading, will edit ! :D

great part...hmmmmif i write seven comments will you continue soon? lol..continue soon... hope people comment...i think this is my first or maybe second comment in this fanfic...but i must say so far the fanfic is interesting...it doesn't drag and amazing detail..continue soon.

wow!!ur a gr8 writter!! 😳 😳 perfect!! story!!n perfect dailoges!! 👏 continuee soon!!


-abhi

Originally posted by: neha^^

great part...hmmmmif i write seven comments will you continue soon? lol..continue soon... hope people comment...i think this is my first or maybe second comment in this fanfic...but i must say so far the fanfic is interesting...it doesn't drag and amazing detail..continue soon.

thanks for the compliment!! def. helps to hear all this, hopefully i'll continue soon!😳

Originally posted by: .::Kittu::.

WOW!! Love the New Banner !!

thanks girl!! all credit goes to saira n basanti_diya! 😳

Originally posted by: ktandlakshyalov

wow!!ur a gr8 writter!! 😳 😳 perfect!! story!!n perfect dailoges!! 👏 continuee soon!!


-abhi

thanks soo much abhi!! wasn't so sure if ppl would understand my hindi writing lol😆

awsome update janvi....loved it....
waiting to read more....

Shona