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Posted: 18 years ago
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scene 2

Location: NYC

[Lakshya hurrily arrives at his university to find Neev waiting for him]

Neev: kya yaar, kitni der lagadi tumne...tu toh ladkiyon se bhi zaada time lagata hai taiyaar hone mein


Lakshya: aaj phir se Rahul ne mujhe gira diya tha


Neev: kya baat hai lakshu beta, tu toh kitne barde barde admiyon se pit ta hai


Lakshya *sarcastically*: haan haan...


Neev: ab chalo

Location: MUMBAI AIRPORT

KT: Papa, mein aapko phone karungi jab flight land hogi


Mihir*laughingly*: haan, ab toh tu videshi ban gayi...


KT: PLEASE PAPA, NO!, mein toh sirf wahan college ke liye jaa rahi hoon, zindagi bhar ke liye nahin


Tulsi: aabhi tu yeh kehrahi hai, kahin baad mein pata chala ke vahin bassne ke plans bana liye ho


KT: Maa!


Tulsi: accha, baat chhodo, abhi Neetu nahin aayi? woh bhi tumhare saath jaa rahi hai na...aabhi tak kyun nahin aayi?


KT: pata nahin Maa, mein aabhi usse phone karti hoon


Mihir: haan beta, varna flight miss hojayegi

*KT calling Prachi*

Prachi: KT!!!!, tumne apna phone off kiya tha kya??!! maine kitni baar tumme phone karne ki koshish ki!! yeh kya-


KT: arrey, Neetu!! kahan ho?!! flight take off hone ko hai, aur tu abhi tak nahin aayi!!


Prachi: Mein abhi tak nahin aayi!!?? mein toh flight mein hi baithi hoon!! Tum kahan ho??


KT: KYA?? tum flight mein baithi ho??

Prachi: haan, mein yahin hoon, aur tumhara intezaar karte karte paak chuki hoon!!


KT: Neetu!! tu paak chuki hai?? main abhi baati hoon tumhen!

*KT hangs up the phone, feeling a bit annoyed*

Tulsi: Neetu, plane mein hai?


KT: haan!! aur mere dimaag yahan pe kitna pareshaan ho raha tha!


Tulsi: chalo phir tum bhi jao, abhi tordhi der mei boarding khatam ho jayega


KT: Maa! aap bhi mere saath reh reh kar paak chuki hain?


Tulsi: dhaat pagali! agar tumhari flight miss hogayi toh phir tum yahi kahogi ke'dekho maa aap ne mujhe jaane nahin diya'


*KT smiles and hugs both her parents*


Mihir *places his hand on her head*: chalo beta, mera saara aashirvaad hai tumhare paas


Tulsi *tears in her eyes hugs her daughter one last time*: aur dekho, khaana theek se khana, aapni health pe dhyaan rakhna, aur har rooz phone karna...


KT *close to crying*: aap bhi aapna khayal rakhna...

*KT says bye to her parents and boards the plane*

Prachi: aagayi madam saiba..aayiye baitiye...aap batane ki kasht karengi ke aap itni der se kahan thi..


KT: stupid! tujhe pata hai ke mein kitni pareshaan thi?


Prachi: aur mei ghadi ka chehra dekh dekh kar-


KT: AUR MAINE KITNI BAAR PHONE KIYA-


Prachi: AUR MAINE BHI KITNI VOICEMAILS DAALI-

*just then a flight hostess walks up to them*

Hostess: please, take off hone wala hai, aap dono please shor mat kijiye


Prachi & KT: sorry ma'am


KT whispering: maine kaha tha chup hone ke liye


Prachi: aab tum chup raho, aathara(18) ghante ki flight hai, abhi soo jao, New York pohonchke bohoti kaam karna hai


KT: haan soo jao...

[later in the day]

*lakshya done with orientation for the day decides with Neev to go partying*


*both drunk, walking down an empty street*


Neev singing:papa kehtien bada naam karega..beta humaara aisa kaam karega....


Lakshya *joins in*: mera ek sapna, hai ek chehra, dekhoon jho usso jhoome bahaaarrrr....


Neev: aabe saala flirtoo ke aulad, kitni ladkiyan hain tumhare peeche...ab yeh nayii ladki se kya karna


Lakshya: arrey yaar...mein soch tha hoon...*lakshya singing besur* bachna ae haseeno, lo main aagaya


Neev: sahi hai bhaii...


*both try to high five each other but miss*


Lakshya: nahin yaar, ek na ek din to settle karna hai, Baa ke liye ek bahu laana hai


Neev: arrey yaar, kyun sochta hai tu itna beta! aanewale aajate hain!

[scene ends with Lakshya and Neev singing on their way home]

[flight lands]


Prachi: AAGAYE!!


*KT still sleeping*


Prachi: KT!! utthoo!!


KT: kya hai neetu!


Prachi: soothi shakal! hum aagaye!


KT*still half sleepy*: ..kahan?


Prachi: uff...Africa!


KT: KYA?!


Prachi: aur nahin toh kya...jab humme New York aana tha toh phir New York pe hi aayenge na?


KT: abhi toh yahan raat hai


Prachi: haan pata nahin agar iss raat mein taxi aasani se milegi ki nahin..


KT: chalo, zaldi chaltien hain humme maa papa ko phone karna bhi hai


Prachi: haan, chalo...

[scene ends with KT & Prachi both get off the flight, grab their baggage, and head towards the taxi stand]

Promo: Big City, Big Dreams...Big Problems...

*JHANVI*

Edited by desigrl05 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
ohhhhhh!that was great!i love it.cool fanfic an docntiue soon it is intresting!!!!!!!!!11
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
wow awsome part can't wait to read nextt.....
cont. sooon....

Shona 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy awesome part jhanvi ur superb i really love this ff although its just started 😆 but cant wait update soon

-tuba
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 awesome part! 😳
btw-wats orientation class? 😳
plz update soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
hey guys! thanks for such encouraging comments!! this is my first FF so it def. helps to hear such good words of encouragement!!

@saira: orientation class is basically what you have to attend before any college/program to recieve more information about the program/college and basically its just a way to get together and find classes, meet up w/ professors , etc 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17

scene 3

LOCATION: AIRPORT TAXI STAND

[Being well past midnight, KT & Prachi look around the Taxi Stand to find an available Taxi]

KT: Neetu!! dekho vahan pe!


*KT pointing to an empty taxi cab*


Prachi: haan chalo chalte hain, isse pehle koi aur baithle

*KT & Prachi walk to the Taxi cab*


Prachi:umm...excuse, is this taxi available?


man: yes ma'am


Prachi: ok, we need to go to this address


*Prachi hands the man a slip of paper with an apartment address*


man: okay, you ladies have a seat and i'll get you there in no time


*KT n Prachi sit down as the taxi man takes them to their destination*


*they reach the apartment and give the taxi fee*


KT: aacha hua yaar, jo hummne pehle se hi apartment book karvaadiya tha, varna bohoti problems ho jati


Prachi: haan, ab chaabi nikaalo


KT: chaabi toh tumhare paas thi na?


Prachi: KT, yeh koi mazaak karne ka waqt nahin hai, laao, chaabhi do

KT: Neetu! kasam se!, mere paas chabhi nahin hai!!


Prachi: yaad karo KT, zaroor tumne kahin chabhi rakhi hogi!

KT: NAHIN HAI!


Prachi*on the verge of crying*: hey bhagvaan! ab hum kya karenge...


KT: roona maat Neetu, bhagvaan hi humme museebat mein daalta hai aur wohi museebat se nikalta bhi hai...


Prachi: magar hum yahan itni raat main aakele, kya karenge??!!


KT: ek kaam kartien hain, vahan ek phone booth hai, vaheen se kyun na hum lock kholne vaala ko bulaa te' hain...


Prachi: toh phir lock khul jayega?


KT: budhoo! aur nahin toh kya!


*KT and Prachi call up the locksmith to come*

LOCATION: LAKSHYA'S HOUSE

[coming in late after partying Lakshya tip toes into his house hoping no one would notice him coming in]

Lakshya *thinking*: bacch ke rehna bacchu, aaj agar mom ne dekh liye toh band baj jayegi

*Lakshya manages to come into his room just to find his elder brother, Sagar, there*


Lakshya: Bhaiyya, aap?


Sagar: Haan, mom ne mujhe yeh zimidaari sounpi(given) hai ke tujhe aaj bohot daatna hai...


Lakshya: lekin maine toh kuch--


Sagar: dekho Lakshya, yeh der se aana, har roz party karna, aur aise hi awaragiri karna tujhe soot nahin karta...tumhari health pe kya assar hoti hai, tujhe koi fikr hai ki nahin?


Lakshya: Bhaiyaa...masti ke diin yahi toh hote hain, kal kissne dekha hai


Sagar: dekh toh sab kar sakte hain Lakshya, par jee nahin sakte hain...planning toh kuch naam ki cheez hoti hai, na?


Lakshya: yeh planning vlanning ka mujhe kuch nahin maloom...meri aabhi toh yahi last year hai, aur uske baad mein toh dad ke saath office jaane lagunga, aur kya planning karna hai?


*Sagar smiles at his brother's innocence*


Sagar: tu abhi bhi chhota hai, aaj tujhe samaj nahin aaye ga, par ek din toh zaroor...


*Lakshya looks at his brother with a confused look*


Sagar: tu soo ja, mein bhi jaata hoon...goodnight


Lakshya: goodnight Bhaiyya

*Lakshya doozes off on his bed thinking of his brother's words...*

LOCATION: APARTMENT

Prachi: yaar, adha ghanta hogaya yeh aadmi aaya kyun nahin??


KT: pata nahin, mujhe yahan bahar bait ke bohot dar lag raha hai...aur parson college khul raha hai, pata nahin sab kuch set hoga ki nahin


Prachi: lo, aagaya


man: so you have a problem with your lock?


KT: actually we forgot our keys, so we were hoping that you could help us out...


man: well, lets see what I can do for you two...

*after a couple tries the man gets the door unlocked and open*
man: there we go, you two ladies have a good night


KT & Prachi: thank you, good night...


*they both enter the apartment and start looking around*


Prachi: aab suba hote hi, apartment office se key ki copy le lenge


KT: yeh ghar kafi accha hai...


Prachi: abhi papa mummy ko subha phone kar lenge


KT: haan, vara pata chala ke phir se lock out ho jayenge

[scene ends with KT & Prachi unpacking]

NEXT DAY

*KT & Prachi go out to call their parents*


*KT calls home*


Tulsi: hello?


KT: namaste maa!


Tulsi: arrey Krishna! kaisi hai? vahan theek se pohonch gayi? Tumne itni der se kyon phone kiya, beta? Aur Neetu kaisi hai? Sab saman theek se lag gaya? college kabse shuruaat hogi?..tu jawab kyun nahin de rahi hai, ladki!?


KT: maa!


Tulsi: kya hai?


KT: aap mujhe kuch kehna ka mauka kab de rahi hain!, mein yahan theek se pohonch gayi thi, aur Neetu bhi theek hai, woh abhi auntie uncle se baat kar rahi hai...college kal se shuru ho raha hai, aabhi hum jaa rahe hain kuch khane peene ke saman lene ke liye..


Tulsi: accha accha, le aapne papa se bhi baat karle


Mihir: haan Krishna


KT: namaste papa


Mihir: jeeti raho, sab kuch theek hai vahan pe? koi problem toh nahin aayi thi


KT: nahin papa, ab sab kuch theek hai


Mihir:theek hai beta, khoob pardhai likhai mein dhyaan rakhna...lo, tumhari maa kuch baat karna chahati hain


Tulsi: Krishna?


KT: ji maa?


Tulsi: accha, toh zada paisa maat barbad kar, aaj cell phone le le na, tab phir phone karna


KT: theek hai maa, mein raakh thi hoon...


Tulsi: arrey sun! tu theek se khana khate rehna, aur thakurji ki murthi aapne kamre mein rakh de na! aur roz subah uthte hi pooja karna, din acha guzarta hai...


KT: ji maa..


Tulsi: aur kahin mandir aas paas ho, toh vahan bhi chale jaana


KT: ji maa


Tulsi: acchha theek hai, raakh


KT: jai shri krishn


Tulsi: jai shri krishn

[ scene ends with KT & Prachi heading out to shop]

LOCATION: LAKSHYA'S HOUSE

*Lakshya still in a deep sleep and Ganga enters his room*

Ganga: LAKSHYA!

Lakshya*still half asleep*: hmm....

Ganga: LAKSHYA! ABHI UTTHO!!

Lakhya: maa...itni subah subah kaun uthta hai...

Ganga: Lakshya subah ke gyara(11) baj gaye aur tum soo rahe ho! mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai, abhi uttho!

*Lakshya relents for a bit, but finally sits up on his bed and smiles sweetly at his mother*

Ganga: Lakshya--

Lakshya: ji mummy jaan..

*Ganga lightly hits Lakshya on the shoulder*

Ganga: maska maat lago, ab suno, mujhe tumhara yeh raat ka aana pasand nahin, ainda baara baje ke pehle aajana

Lakshya: mom, baara baje pe toh sab kuch shuraat hota hai...

Ganga: mein tumhari ek bhi nahin sunungi! ab zaldi se taiyaar hoja

Lakshya: kahin jaa rahe hain hum?

Ganga: haan, aaj puranmasi(full moon) hai, aur aaj pravichan rakha gaya hai mandir mein

Lakshya: mom!! mandir??!! aap hi jaaiye...

Ganga: Lakshya! tu bhagvaan ke paier(feet) choo lega toh tumhara kuch nahin jayega, badle mein tujhe acchi duayien milegi...

Lakshya: agar aisi baat hai toh phir...

*Lakshya gets up and touches his mom's feet*

Ganga: arrey...kya hai yeh Lakshya

Lakshya: kehtien hai na, maa ke pairon ke neeche jannat hai...jab tak aapki duayien aur aapka ashirvaad saath ho, aur kuch mere liye maii-ne nahin rakhta

*Ganga's eyes fill with tears*

Ganga*lightly slaps Lakshya's cheek*: ...pagal...na jaane kab sudharega

Lakshya: haan..vaise bhi perfection ko improve karna mushkil kaam toh hai hi...

Ganga: aisi baat hai??!!

Lakshya: aur nahin toh kya...

Ganga: aur nahin toh kya ke bacche! zaldi se taiyaar ho! mandir aaj zaroor jaana hai, pata nahin tum kab samjho ge!

Lakshya: iss mei samajh ne ki baat kya hai mom?

Ganga: tu aaj nahin samjhe ga, par jab samaj mein aayega toh tab dekhna...

[scene ends with Lakshya going to get ready]

PROMO: NEEV MEETS NEETU

*JHANVI*

Edited by desigrl05 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
Sorry for commenting so late!! 😭 😭
Yayyy your owqn fanfic!!! 👏 Its FABULOUS and I can't wait to read more. Plzz continue soon! 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome ff jhanvi 👏 ...ur a fabulous writter. 😊 while waiting for laksh-kt to meet!! 😳 😳 😳
-continue soon!!
-abhi
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
ur ff is awesum...do cont soon!! 😃

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