Rishta -Pt17on PG42 03/11 NEW! - Page 3

brilliant work... i loved it..look heaps forward to part 2~

A treat for everyone..Part 2 and 3 are up now.
Here is part 2:

Part 2:

Riddhima arrived at the hospital before Anjali. As always. She made her way to her locker. The locker room was empty. That's strange.
Ridz: Yeh toh bahut ajeeb hai. Armaan aur Sapna ke shift meri shift se ek ghante pehli thee. Kahan hai voh.
Armaan: Basket…mein yahan hoon…par thum itnee jaldi kyun aa gaya. Abhi toh sirf she vaja hain.
Ridz: Silly meri shift toh she vajah he shuroo hoane valee thee. Aur tumari shift paanch vaje.
Armaan: oh crap….
Dr.Keerti: Dr. Armaan tum yahein kahein hoa…..?
Dr. Keerti peeped into the locker room
Keerti: Dr. Armaan mein aap koa khabse dhund rahein hoon. Aap koa maloom hai kai aapkoa mere daftar mein paanch vaje hona chaye tha…
Dr. Armaan looked a little scared. Dr. Keerti was the only female at Sanjeevani that he couldn't charm. It was like she put a barrier up everytime she came infront of him.

Armaan: Um Doctor Keerti bhaath kuch aise he hai..
Ridz: Sorry Dr. Keerti maine Dr. Armaan kai saath shift exchange ke thee. Armaan nein mujhe bathaya tha kai mein aapka dafthar mein paanch vaje poncho, lekin mein bhool gayein.
Keerti: Dr. Riddhima yeh math sochna kai agar chief of staff aapka ke pita hai kai aap jab jee ayein aur jab jee jayein. This is Hospital and we have rules. Understand.
Rdiz: Sorry Maam.
Keerti: teek hai….nau vaaje aap aur Dr. Armaan mere saath kitaab khol kai yeh maloom karne ke koshish Karengai, keh Mr. Joshi koa kya hoa hai. Teek hai.
Ridz and Armaan: Teek hai.
With that Dr. Keerti left.
Armaan looked at Riddhima and couldn't believe how great she was. She wasn't just nice, caring, loyal, friendly, responsible, she was a life saver. His life saver.

Riddhima looked at Armaan and couldn't believe for the umpteenth she had gotten him out of trouble with Dr. Keerti. She realized she would always do the same. Armaan was Armaan, and no matter what he was like, she liked him to much to see him suffer.
The two gathered their white coats, stethoscope and ventured out to begin another day at Sanjeevani Hospital.

Riddhima's beeper paged a message. She looked down and it read the message:

Dinner tonight at 7:30pm Important news Papa

Anjali was sitting with Armaan trying to be interested in what he had to say. He was talking about how great his Baba is. Quite frankly, Anjali was bored with the old man. She kept wondering why on earth the old man had such a hold on Armaan. Anjali's beeper paged a message, Dinner tonight at 7:30pm Important new Mama.

Anjali told Armaan that she couldn't see him tonight because her Mama wanted to have dinner with her. Secretly Anjali was relieved. All the pretending was tiring Anjali out.
Armaan: It's just as well, Baba wants to have dinner with me tonight too.
Anjali: Baba Baba Baba!
Armaan: what do you mean.
Anjali: Armaan tumhein nahin lagta ke Mr. Malik kuch zyada thumare zindagi mein dhakal andaazi kar rahein hai.
Armaan: Anjali tum kaise bhatein kartee hoa. Baba said he has some really important news for me.

Ridz entered the cafeteria looking for Anjali and sure enough she saw Anjali. Sitting in Armaan's lap. Riddhima couldn't figure why Armaan behaved this way with Anjali. It was completely against his character. She knew it was because Anjali. Anjali was way too modern for her own good. Anjali was way too stubborn for her own good. Anjali was way too goal oriented for her own good. Anjali was way too selfish for her own good.
Ridz (thinking to herself): stop it Riddhima…Anjali ke bhare aise soch kai Armaan aur thum ek nahin bhan jaogai.
Ridz: Hi Anjali, Hi Armaan.
Anjali: Ridz.
Armaan: Hi Basket.
Armaan smiled at Riddhima. She was so innocent looking that she made him want to smile each and every time he saw her.
Ridz: Anjali it's 6:30pm. Ghar chalein. Papa nein hum dono koa dinner pai bhulaya hai.
Anjali: haan chalo, Armaan ve busy hai aaj raath. Baba Malik nein use dinner pai bhulaya hai
Ridz smiled: Baba ghar aagay.
Armaan: Sirf ik raath ke leye. Kal subha voh Hyderbad jaa rahein hein. Some finance deal Hospital koa secure karne ke leye.
Ridz: oh too bad. Itne jaldee aay…or use ve jalde vapas ja rahein hai. Anyways, unko mera hello dhena.
Armaan smiled: zaroor. He'll be happy.
Anjali rolled her eyes.
Anjali: let's go Ridz.
Ridz: bye armaan.
Armaan: bye basket.
Armaan: Eh Anjali love you.
Anjali: yeh me too.
Ridz felt her heart break yet again.

8:30pm.

Dr. Gupta: That was a great dinner. I love this restaurant. Ridhhima mein aur aapke ma hamesha yahan pai athe the.
There are some great memories here.
Anjali: Mama dinner was great but I hardly think you got us two here so that you can relive your memories about maasi.
Ridz: Anjali why do you have to talk like that to Papa. Khabie tho izzat se bhaat kar loa.
Anjali: Whatever Ridz.
Dr. Gupta: Girls, please yahan pai math yeh sabh karo.
Ridz: Sorry papa.
Anjali: sorry mama.
Dr. Gupta: okay now is the time for my important news. Doctors without borders is giving me the honour to assist them in Afghanistan. I'll be helping those that can't travel, can't speak hindi or English. It's going to be an experience that really tests my medical ability.
Ridz: Papa I'm so happy for you. Mein aaj bahut kush hoon. Aap bahut dher se yeh karna chaathe thein. Your dream is coming true.
Anjali: why mama do you want to help really really poor people and risk your life.
Dr. Gupta decided to ignore Anjali's remarks. She rose up to the mark and yet again surprised him with her attitude.
Dr. Gupta: Girls the thing is I leave the day after tomorrow. Wednesday.
Ridz: Papa itne jaldi. Aap nein tho abhi abhi humein bhathaye hai. Itne jaldi kaise aap jasakthe hein. Aur agar aap ki zaroorath pare tho?
Dr. Gupta: Riddhima bache you're a fine doctor. Tumhare paas itne badhi support network hain..Dr. Keerti, Sapna, Anjali and Armaan.
It was too late Riddhima had started to cry.
A little smile came to Anjali lips. Mama out of the country meant she could make some quick moves on Armaan and seal a marriage deal. Best of all there would be no curfew, no rules and no Mama interfering in her day.
Riddhima felt as if one of her friends was leaving on a vacation for a long time.
Dr. Gupta: It's only for 6 months. Then I promise I won't do anything like this again.
Riddhima: Promise Papa.
Dr. Gupta: Promise beta.
Riddhima hugged her father tightly. Anjali not wanting to appear to want to stay out of this emotional thing hugged her mama as well. This shocked her Mama.
Dr. Gupta thinking: Anjali, jhutee hug tho sahee…khabie na khabie thumein ehsaas hoa ga that I love you like I love Riddhima.
The three finished their dessert and headed home. Ridhhima insisted on helping her father pack. Anjali said goodnight and claimed she needed to read up on a case, her head hit the pillow as soon as she entered her room.



Precap for Part 3:
Armaan leaves his Baba alone and can't believe what a mess he is in. He too wants what his Baba wants too, but he can't introduce him to Anjali yet.

and here is Part 3 (i'm sorry it's so short in comparison to part 1 and 2..):

Part 3

Across town, Armaan and his Baba were having dinner.
Armaan: this is great food Baba. You know I have always loved this place.
Dr. Malik: I know beta. By the way how is Ridhu.
Armaan: Ridhu …Basket, I mean Ridhhima is doing fine. She said to say hello to you.
Dr. Malik: very nice girl.
Armaan lied: Anjali said Hello too.
Dr. Malik: Beta I wanted to talk to you about something important. Mein ab bhudha hoa chukka hoon. Mein chaatha hoon ki tum puree tharan set hoa jao. Very good Doctor toh tum bhan he chukein. Acha ghar, car hai thumare paas. Sirf ik….sirf ik…um sirk ik
Armaan: go on Baba
Dr. Malik: Biwi ke zaroorath hai.
Armaan: choked up on his beer: biwi..what is this baba…yeh biwi ka nonsense kahan sai tapak gaya.
Armaan thought to himself, he was not ready to present Anjali too has baba. As things stood now between his Baba and Anjali, Baba would have preferred a kotewali. According to his Baba, atleast the kotewali is dedicated to her profession and shows some love to those that have raised her from a baby. Armaan believed he loves Anjali, he just wants Baba to like her too.
Armaan: I'm not ready to get married yet baba…
Dr. Malik: mein ve kahan ready tha jab maine thumare dhadee se shaadi ke the. We were best friends. Bas itna hamare liye kaafi tha.
Armaan: yes…50 years ago…
Dr Malik: pichaas sal hoa, yah ik saal hoa…mein abhve tumare dhadee se utna pyar karta hoon jitna mein pehle mulakath se karta tha. Anyways yeh shaadi ki bhaat meri history ke bhaath kaise bhang aya. Your good beta..par mein ve tumare baba hoon.
Armaan: Toh aap chatein hai kai mein shaadi kar loon. Well I'm not ready.
Dr. Malik: mujhe koi fark nahin partha. Thum 27 kai hoa chuke. Agar ab shaadi nahin karogai tho kya meri umar mein shaadi karo gai.
Armaan: dekho baba mein aap ki har bhaath maan loonga…just not shaadi right now. I can't.
Dr. Malik: Kyun.
Armaan: koi bhaat hai.
Dr. Malik: I don't care. Armaan agar thumnein kise koa pasand kar leye thoa bhathao.
Armaan : actually mein anj..
Dr. Malik: mein chaatein hoon thum aise ladki sai shaadi karo joa thumari maa aur dhadee ke tharan hoa. Saaf dil, jaan se pyari, bhado se pyar dene vale, aur bachon ki sath betane valee.
Armaan thought to himself: Anjali marjaye gee yeh sabh karne se pehle.
Armaan: Baba I can't do this right now. You can't do this to me right now.
Dr. Malik: teek hai, you have left me no choice, mera kehana mano…nahin too mein tumhein phuti koree ve nahin dhoonga.
Armaan: what! Aap nein kya koi bollywood movie dekhie hai abhi ahbi. Like I said before I can't do this right now. I have to go.
Armaan got up, put his jacket on and strode out of the restaurant leaving his baba alone and sad in the restaurant.
Baba: agar thum aise nahin manogai…toh math bhool na…mein ve tumhare baba hoon. I know a thing or two about how to persuade you.

Armaan got into his car and squealed out of the parking lot. I need to call Basket. She'll know what to do. She can handle baba's madness.
Armaan punched in Riddhima's cell number and then hung up.
Armaan: Riddhima toh kahe gee..baba nein kya galat kiya. Aur sach bhaath toh yeh hai, mein ve khudh shaadi karna chaath hoon…par maine anjali koa abhi badla nahin. She's to self centered to become the daughter in law of the Maliks. What am I going to do…?
Armaan pulled into his driveway. He opened the door of his house
Armaan (out loud): shit! What am I going to do now.

Precap for Part 4:
Armaan gets a phone call from his grandfather to come to his hotel room urgently and he is shocked himself at what he says. Riddhima bids her father a goodbye and promises not to get into any trouble while he is away – a promise that will be broken in a matter of days. And Anjali…well Anjali continues to be Anjali

ps. please let me know if you guys like long parts or short parts.

no comments...i need your guys feedback...just in case there is something that you don't really like.. i wanna change to appease the masses.
btw, does anyone know what a red envelope means beside your post on the main page for dil mil gaye..My story has a sometimes red or blue envelope.
Thanks,
and Goodnight,
Mrs. Soni Armaan Malik..kidding.

wow...excellent!! please do continue!!! 👏 👏

awesum !!! read all the parts together they were gr8
cont soon

brilliant.. i love your lengths.. but prefer long ones so that i have more to read on the school bus! 😳

soni ur too good in wat ur doing........... 😊
i loved ur parts and adored them too.......... 😳 😳 😳
ridz already in love with armaan......... 😳 😳 😳
stupid armaaan just like all men likes anjali.......... 😆
the part are good with fab explanatory......... 😉
yeh plz continue yaar i loved so plzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😆
great FF...... 👏

Part 4:

Who does he think he is. And why does he think he can control this part of my life. Baba is so difficult. Armaan was having trouble in trying to figure out why his Baba was being so adamant that Armaan get married.
Armaan: Kehte hain mein bhuddha hoa gaya. Voh pichle mahine ve bhuddhe the…aaj rath kiya hoa gaya joh mujhe shaadi pe majboor kar rahein he. Riddhima koa phone karma chayeh. Shiyad voh kuch jaanthi hoa.
Armaan picked up his cell phone and dialed Riddhima's number.

Riddhima was lying in her bed crying. She didn't want her father to leave, she wished that she could say something to make him stay. She knew that if she once said that she needed him then he would cancel this project. But she knew how important the project was too him. She couldn't be that selfish. She needed her father so much, but she knew that he needed to work with Doctors without Borders. It was a project for him long in the making. Ever since her mother had died saving those gaon vale.

Brrrrrrrrrrrring Brrrrrrrrrrrrrring. Riddhima looked at her phone. "ARMAAN CALLING"
Armaan. She needed Armaan right now. He would say something to make her laugh. He would say something to help her get through this.

Riddhima: Armaan…..Armaaan….
Riddhima broke down crying again. Armaan had called Riddhima with his own problem. But then he realised that Riddhima herself was going through something.
Armaan: Basket kiya hoa? Mein aaon kiya, kisene tumein kuch kaha…

Riddhima: Armaan, papa Afghanistan ja rahein hai. 6 months ke liye. Doctors without Borders ke liye. Voh Wednesday koa rama hoa jayengai. I don't want him to go. I want him to stay here and be my papa. Mein dhartee hoon agar unhe kuch vahan par hoagaya.

Armaan: Basket, aise kuch nahin hoga. Dr. Gupta ik bahut he nek insaan hai…he'll be careful. Agar thum chahoa mein tumare paas aajaon.
Riddhima smiled: nahin kal subha milenge. Good night.
Armaan: Goodnight Basket
Riddhima smiled to herself as she hung up the phone. Armaan smiled as he hung up the phone. He couldn't shock Riddhima with his problems right now. He needed to be there for Riddhima. He realised that he should call Anjali.
Brrrrrrrrrrrrring. Brrrrrrrrrrrrrring. Anjali slowly opened her eyes and looked at her cell phone display "Armaan calling"
Anjali: What the hell….kiya use mallom nahin subha ked dhoh vaje hain.
Anjali picked up the phone.
Anjali: It'd better be good Armaan.
Armaan: huh….kaise hoa anjali…do you need to talk.
Anjali: NO! I need to sleep…goodnight Armaan.
Armaan: Goodnight Anj….Click!
Armaan wondered why Anjali didn't feel the same way about Dr. Gupta leaving as Anjali did. They were different as night and day.
Armaan decided not to ponder on too much…those sisters really confused him a lot.

Tuesday went by like that. Baba didn't call Armaan. Armaan didn't like this fact. Was Baba trying to give him the cold shoulder. What game was he playing.
Dr. Gupta was packed and ready to leave and had just finished hugging Anjali.
Dr. Gupta: Please anjali take care of your little Sister. Voh thoree se emotional hain.
Anjali: thodee see…
Dr. Gupta: Anjali stop it bache.
Anjali: fine! Anyways take care of yourself …and see you soon…bye.
Anjali ran out the door to her waiting car. She didn't even wait around the house to say goodbye to her mama.
Ridz: Papa….mein aa rahein hoon.
Dr. Gupta saw his daughter come out of the pooja room with a thali and Prasad in her hand.
Riddhima: Apna sar neeche karo….mein tilalk lagana chathein hoon.
Dr. Gupta smiled at Riddhima, she was becoming more and more like her mother. So pure and caring for others.
Riddhima: Papa aap apna khayal rakhna, aur jaldee vapas aana. Mein aapka intezar karoongee.
Riddhima started to cry.
Dr. Gupta hugged his daughter: Beta ik bhaar kaho, papa math jao…..
Riddhima: kal rath mein puree thayar the aap koa yeh kahene ke liye…aur mujhe maloom hai ki aap rukh jayengai….lekin yeh karne sai aap ki khawish udhuree reh jaiye gee. Mein yeh nahin karh sakthee hoon. Mein chathee hoon mere papa ki har khawish puree hoa.
Dr. Gupta: Sabse badhi khawish tho thum nain puree khar dhee…Doctor ban kai. Agar aaj thumaree maa yahan hothee..tho voh bahut kush hothee.
Riddhima: Agar maa hothee tho voh aap koa dhekh kar vee bahut khush hothee…
The father and daughter hugged each other tightly.

Armaan: Ummmm..can I interrupt for a second.
Ridz: Armaan thum yahan.
Armaan: maine soche kyun ki Dr Gupta aaj ja rahen hain..thumein thodee se supoort dhedhoon.
Armaan hugged a teary eyed Riddhima.
Armaan: Anjali kahan hai.
Dr. Gupta: voh toh kabse chale gaye.
Armaan: really…that's strange. Anyways, Dr. Gupta good luck and I wish you all the best. Chalo mein aapko airport chod dhunga, mere he raste mein hein.
Riddhima hugged her father again: Thank you Armaan….I love you Papa.
Dr. Gupta: I love you Riddhima.
Armaan smiled and with that Dr. Gupta and Armaan left for the airport.

As Armaan said goodbye to Dr. Gupta at the gate,
Dr. Gupta: mein thumse ik favour puch saktha hoon.
Armaan: Anything Dr. Gupta.
Dr. Gupta: meri Riddhima aur Anjali ka khayal rakhna. Anjali thod khud apna khayal rakh sakhdhee hai…lekin Riddhima khabie khabie sabh kuch apne dil mein rakhthee hai.
Armaan: I promise.

The two said a final goodbye.

On his way home, Armaan cell phone rang.
Armaan: Hello……..
Dr. Malik: Hello…Armaan mein thumein foreign apne hotel mein dhekha chaatha hoon.
Armaan: teek hai Baba…mein abhi aaraha hoon.

Armaan made his way to the hotel and couldn't figure out why his Baba was so adamant about meeting him this instant.
Knock Knock. A teary eyed Dr. Malik opened the door and hugged Armaan.
Dr. Malik: Thum aagai Beta
Armaan: Baba kya hoa aapkoa….kisine kuch kaha…
Dr. Malik: Beta…ik bhaath kheni hai thumsein….Mere liye thum abhi abhi shaadi kar loa..
Armaan: Baba don't start this again…please you know that I have reason what I can't do this…
Dr. Malik: Armaan…ik second ke liye chup hojao. Armaan beta mujhe heart problems hai. Tuesday mein saara din hospital mein tha…tests karva raha tha…aur doctor nein kaha hai kai mein bas thodai din ka mehmaan hoon.
Armaan felt the earth from under his feet give way. His Baba was sick and doctors had only given him a little while to live. Armaan tightly hugged his father and pleaded him to tell his this was lie. Dr. Malik hugged Armaan back and was secretly very happy as he thought this was the reaction that he would get from Armaan. His plan was working. He knew that hearing about his death Armaan would become emotional and not even question or even think for a second his Baba was lying.
Dr. Malik: patha nahin kai mein khab bhagwan koa pyara hoa jaon…mein apne bahu ka chera dekhna chatah hoon..isley beta shaadi kar loa.
Armaan felt the walls closing in on him. He wanted to marry Anjali, but telling his Baba this at this time would probably give him a heart attack intead he couldn't believe what he said next…

Armaan: mein shaadi nahin kar sakhta hoon..kyun ki mein already shaadi shuda hoon….!
Armaan couldn't believe his own ears. Dr. Mahesh Malik grabbed a chair nearby and quickly sat down…he thought he was really about to have a heart attack.
Dr. Mahesh Malik: already shaadi shudha…kab? Kissai?
Armaan: Ummmmmmmm voh…ummmm….

End of part 4

Precap 5:
Armaan relectunatly gives his Baba a name and can't believe his own words when he utters her name. Baba is angry but then overjoyed and says he couldn't have chosen a better wife for Armaan.

quick question: do you guys want me to post all the parts on the first page or are you okay with going through the pages.