Ek Gharelu Kahani! AK ff! Epilogue pg 196

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Vijaya

@vallanki

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Posted: 17 years ago

#1441

Originally posted by: hitomi
hi vallanki
i just started reading your ff. i am half way through. and i have to say. you have done a great job on it.i love it..... will comment when i read more.

love
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ThanQ for reading my ff..your encouragement gives inspiration indeed.

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A&K_4Evr-S

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Posted: 17 years ago

#1442

omg everyone is finsihng there FF like u bheegi and both of u r going on vacation... kreeppyyy
do u have any idea wat ur nxt FF is going to b atbt ??
hope its ALL romance...and the tittle wud b EK ROMANTIC KAHANI 😆 😛 😉
cnt wait for epilouge

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Vijaya

@vallanki

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Posted: 17 years ago

#1443

Originally posted by: sahr_8
omg everyone is finsihng there FF like u bheegi and both of u r going on vacation... kreeppyyy
do u have any idea wat ur nxt FF is going to b atbt ??
hope its ALL romance...and the tittle wud b EK ROMANTIC KAHANI 😆 😛 😉
cnt wait for epilouge

😆nice title though😛

Thanks sahr! yuh we both finished at same time unknowingly. My next ff may be full of romance..but title ..sochna padega😆 let me think in these two weeks. I'm not going on vacation but have loads of work to finish.

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A&K_4Evr-S

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Posted: 17 years ago

#1444

Originally posted by: vallanki

😆nice title though😛

Thanks sahr! yuh we both finished at same time unknowingly. My next ff may be full of romance..but title ..sochna padega😆 let me think in these two weeks. I'm not going on vacation but have loads of work to finish.

0o0o work..lol i just finshed my eaxms and the kahani is over and i have 1 week off wat will i do...m,ayb read the other FF of urs lol

o0o0 guess wat congradulate me i just got a job well a part time sinc i have grd 11 to do also😭😃

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Vijaya

@vallanki

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Posted: 17 years ago

#1445

Originally posted by: sahr_8
0o0o work..lol i just finshed my eaxms and the kahani is over and i have 1 week off wat will i do...m,ayb read the other FF of urs lol
o0o0 guess wat congradulate me i just got a job well a part time sinc i have grd 11 to do also😭😃

WOW..congratulations..part time in the beginning is good..u don't get fed up of the jobs in young age..learn something now only.

hmm..one week free time..yuh read other ffs😉..I can't write before 8th Feb atleast😆 I have a big puja in my house..have to get arrangements for that.

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rimmi123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#1446

😉 awesome part
it was just like i expected it to be

😭 😭 bt u r ending it

👏 well i suppose dis is d rt time
vaise bhi my boards r coming
ma to chilati rehti hain
pata hai i just open d net 2 read ur story
hmm well i wuld w8 4 d next ff
i hope i wuld get 2 read them after
17th march
thts d day when my exams r supposed 2 end

luv ya di
keep rocking & keep writing
lovely & romantic ffs like dis one
😳 😳

it was toooooooo good

Edited by rimmi123 - 17 years ago

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Vijaya

@vallanki

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Posted: 17 years ago

#1447

Originally posted by: rimmi123
😉 awesome part
it was just like i expected it to be

😭 😭 bt u r ending it

👏 well i suppose dis is d rt time
vaise bhi my boards r coming
ma to chilati rehti hain
pata hai i just open d net 2 read ur story
hmm well i wuld w8 4 d next ff
i hope i wuld get 2 read them after
17th march
thts d day when my exams r supposed 2 end

luv ya di
keep rocking & keep writing
lovely & romantic ffs like dis one
😳 😳

it was toooooooo good

ThanQ rimmi!

I planned earlier to finish this ff by year end but it dragged so much. I will try to write another by Feb 15th to finish by May end...mujhey India jana hai😳 I don't get any time in India to write😆 only option for you is to read after board exams...that's more important. This ff and I will wait for you 😳

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Vijaya

@vallanki

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Posted: 17 years ago

#1448

Epilogue:

Kripa delivered a girl three months after Misthy delivered a boy in Mumbai. Kripa was adamant to have her delivery in the village hospital as she believed she would get a girl as per Angad's prediction. Angad didn't force her as he knew Kripa wouldn't like to stay a day away from him now. Damini took Misthy for delivery before baby shower as Devyani didn't allow two pregnant ladies in one house.

Kripa named her daughter after Devyani's choice "Diya." Misthy named her son 'Bheem' after her paternal grandfather.

A three storied 90 room hotel was built in the border of the village in 10 months of time and named as KMK on Angad's choice which represented first letters of his three cousins' names.

Kanan had girl twins "Riya" and "Priya" and happily settled in Bangalore with Pratham.

Angad and Kripa never fought and got a name 'made for each other' among their society. But both knew their fights were limited to their bed room. They never stayed away from each other even for a day after their first fight in little more than a year.

She affectionately whined every time Angad became wild on fourth day of her menstrual cycles"Char din bhi door nahin reh saktey ho?".

"Darta hoon tum phir sey naraz ho gaiee toh?" he pretended fear every time reminding her anger. She blushed as remembered the situation.

Once she went to Mumbai for training on new technology in studios for four days after Diya's fifth month completion. She postponed her usual return for fifth day to another day due to an emergency holiday in between training. Sixth day night when she returned home she didn't allow him to touch her. Angad was surprised for the change in her behavior "kya huva, Kripa? Kahin wahi koyi mil toh nahin gaya?" he thought he was jovial with her. She retaliated, "mil gaya hota toh hi acha hota. Tum jaise jhoote ke saath jeena nahin padta." Angad was confused.

He pleaded, apologised for unknown mistake but she took two hours to reveal the reason for her anger. "Tumney waada kiya tha na main jab bhi door jaaongi tu mujhey rok loge? Pur jub main ney apney aaney ki date postpone ki toh leyney kyon nahin aaiey? Don't you have the responsibility to get me back in time?"

Angad wondered at her tearful accuse "kaise aa sakta tha Kripa? Tum kaam per gayi thi, aur tumhari training khatam bhi nahin hoiee thi. Mein kaise beech mein tumhey lene aa sakta tha?"

Kripa sniffed "woh main ney jhoot bola tha, tumhey aazmaaney ke liey. Tumhey meri parwa hi nahin hai. Main tumsey door rahoon yeh tumhey manzoor hai."

Angad sighed "I believed you darling! I thought you had genuine reason to postpone and waited till your return."

Kripa nodded her head "nahin, itna trust mut karo. Pehley bhi aisa hi huva tha. You gave lenience and I took advantage of it. Aaj bhi aisa hi huva toh? Tum kabhi mujhey lene nahin aoge?"

Angad's heart melted at her worry and pulled her in his arms "main ney itna nahin socha, sweety! May be if you had postponed another time I would have got doubts at your decision. Phir yeh kabhi nahin douhraiengey. Promise. I don't allow you a minute away from scheduled time in future."

Kripa wiped her tears to his shirt "I don't even go alone next time." He kissed her lips aloud "toh phir tum ney mujhey maaf kardiya na?" she smiled through tears and cuddled him in her arms to take him into position.

He commented in satisfaction, "I didn't know you could become too extremes this way, sweety!" She bit his cheek "abb samajh mein aya na, toh phir kabhi mujhey akele mut janey dena, warna koyi mil jayega."

Kripa smiled at her past fears and allowed him to be wild enough as per his wish.

Diya became 3 years and started talking sentences. Satya became 5 year old and became as naughty as Angad in childhood. It was 60th birthday celebrations for Dilip. All children made it a big event. Prithvi, Kanan, Misthy, came with families. All sisters from either side of Dilip and Naina came. Devyani was pleased to see everyone together once again after Satya's 1st birthday celebrations. Anittah came with her husband Raj from USA. Harshini delivered a baby girl just a month ago. Satya was fond of little kids and especially fell in love with Harshini's daughter, Simran. He showed possessiveness about the girl "mein iss sey shadi karunga. Yeh meri hai."

Everyone surprised and Prithvi asked Satya as teased him "yeh kyon? Mere bhi ek khubsoorat beti hai, Tanya. Uss sey shadi karo." Satya confused but ran to Harshini "nahin Simran meri hai. Aap Tanya ko Mumbai le jatey ho. Simran yahi rahegi mere saat. humesha"

Angad laughed at his son's intelligence "wah bhai, mera beta mujh sey zyada akhal mand nikla. Abhi sey biwi ko aas paas hi rakhna chahta hai."

Kripa frowned "bachon ke saamney abhi sey shadi ke baat kyon karte ho?"

Harshini interfered "kurney do Kripa! Ismein ghalat kya hai? bachpan sey yeh baat ki tabhi toh tum Angad ko mili ho." Kripa kept quiet after seeing affectionate looks in Angad's eyes.

Along with time, Kripa grew a little brave too. It was one of the incidences to show it, when her second daughter 'Saya' took her first steps. She was playing along with Satya and Diya in the backyard. Saya was taking her first little steps. All three got excited and encouraged Saya. Kripa ran to Saya when she fell down and cried for help. She suddenly stopped at a big lump of small millipedes on the way. Satya and Diya ran to Saya and tried to lift her. Kripa warned them and took a deep breath to cross the lump of millipedes. She ran into the house as soon as she took Diya and Saya in either side of her arms. Angad laughed at kripa's fears "tumsey zyada toh Satya bahadur (brave) hai. Itne chote worms ko dekh kar darti kyon ho?" Kripa frowned and left with pouted lips.

Kripa was now a responsible multi-tasked woman with responsibilities of home, kids, studio, and hotel. She helped Angad in their accounts and tried her best to impress everyone.

Nishant managed to stay nearby districts to help Misthy and kid. Naina and Dilip looked after her son when she was in the hospital. After five years Damini and Yashwant moved to the village along with Nandini when Misthy had another boy.

Devyani performed Satya's thread ceremony after his 13years of age completion in grand manner as whole village remembered Angad's ceremony once again.

Dilip and Naina made a practice to visit pilgrimage along with other siblings and their spouses in every summer when Kripa could relax with kids' in their summer vacation.

Kripa concentrated in training classes in her own studio and made sharp singers to compete in reality shows like SaReGaMaPa and Indian Idol. Some reached their goal to take up playback singing too.
Angad succeeded in implementing new technology in his fields to increase his produce too. He was awarded Jagjivan Ram Kisan Puruskar,for his new knowledge, and diversified agricultural activities.

Thanks to everyone for reading and enjoying this ff. All your encouragement helped me to complete this ff successfully. keep reading more of mine 😳 Next ff may be on or after Feb15th

Edited by vallanki - 17 years ago

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~*~kom@l~*~

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Posted: 17 years ago

#1449

awesome ending di 👏
awww now kripa is a mature and a great wife, a daughter-in-law and a mother.
satya is so sweet, he already chose his bride. i loved this line "nahin Simran meri hai. Aap Tanya ko Mumbai le jatey ho. Simran yahi rahegi mere saat. humesha"
apne papa par gaya hai lol
kripa is still scared of worms 😆 😆 angad as usual was great😳

its the cutest ending ever.
waiting 4 your next ff. i know it will be awesome like this one.

Komal<3

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mintfresh

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Posted: 17 years ago

#1450

awesum ff 👏
perfect ending to a perfect story.satya bilkul apne baap pe gaya hai 😆 ,uske hi nakshe kadam par chal raha hai 😉 .
a bit sad 😭 as this ff is ended but every good thing comes to an end.will be eagerly waiting for ur new ff. 😃 😳

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