Ek Gharelu Kahani! AK ff! Epilogue pg 196 - Page 143

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rimmi123

ya bt jyada time nhi lena di plzzzzzz😉

idhar to jaan nikal rahi hai 😳

😆 keep safe with ur jaan...part padhna abhi baaki hai😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
amazing parts 👏
finally both of them got what they deserve,their true love 😳 .it's nice to know that kripa accepted her faults,it only shows how much she has matured. eagerly waiting for their second suhaag raat 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mintfresh

amazing parts 👏
finally both of them got what they deserve,their true love 😳 .it's nice to know that kripa accepted her faults,it only shows how much she has matured. eagerly waiting for their second suhaag raat 😉

ThanQ. nexpart in short😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part: 75

Kripa was in the kitchen arranging dinner plates for both when Angad reached home. He washed his feet and walked inside. He locked the doors and switched off all the lights in other rooms. Kripa was in the kitchen frying potato pieces.

She was looking gorgeous in self zari white sari with matching jewelry and jasmine flowers in her long loosely braided hair inviting him to adore them along with Kripa. He silently admired her beauty and hugged her from behind and deeply inhaled the fragrance of flowers. Kripa startled at his sudden appearance "tum? Kab aaya hai?"

He kissed her neck behind ears "main hi hoon, sweety! Aur kissi ki himmat hai tumhey haat laganey ki?" She smiled and pressed his head to hers from behind "kaisey ho? Sab theek sey pahoonch gaye? Misthy ney rukney ke liey toh nahin kaha?"

He dropped the spatula from her hand before switched off the flame and carried her in his hands "nahin. Sab ko maloom hai aaj humari khaas raat hai."

Kripa surprised "wo kaisey? Yeh bhi bata diya kya sab ko? Iss gaon mein aur iss ghar mein koi bhi baat nahin chupa sakte."

He kissed her cheek "Satya ka birthday ke din hum donon ki ek dosrey ke liey kashish(desperation) dekhkar sab ko pata chal gaya ki hum ek dooserey se alag reh rahey hai."

He climbed stairs kissing her intermittently. She softly warned him "Angad! khana tunda hojayega. Chodo. Let me serve meals first."

He moved his head "no, first let's go finish our work and then meals. Khana toh taiyyar hai na, hum baad mein kha sakte hain. Main uss khana sey zyada tumhara bhuka hoon."

Kripa pouted her lips and softly groaned. "I don't get energy later to serve you food."

"No problem, Sweety! I will feed you. Let me have my energy back first. Bahut tadpa hoon." She hid her face in his chest as circling her arms around his neck.

"WoW!" he exclaimed as soon as he entered the bed room. Kripa giggled at his excitement and burrowed her face in his chest.
The bed was set with white velvet sheet and white pillows. Whole bed was filled with rose petals and jasmine flowers. Fragrance of incense spread all over the room. Scented candles lit in the corners of the room. He was excited at the decorations and cuddled her more into his arms. "Hmm, I'm impressed, darling! Itni taiyyariyan kar ke bhi sharma rahi ho. Wo bhi mere saamney."

He put her on bed and glared at her from head to toe. She blushed at his hungry looks and closed her face in palms with shy. He sat beside her and removed the palms from her face to see the blushed cheeks. He ran his fingers on her closed eye lids, cheeks and traced her lips line.

"Aankhey kholo." He whispered and blew air over eyes and lips. She slowly opened her drugged eyes and looked into his eyes. Both tried to read something in each other eyes. "I wonder how I controlled myself away from admiring this beauty." He took her face in his palms and caressed her chin with his thumbs.

She blushed and bit her lower lip "aisey dekhey toh mujhey bahut sharam hoti hai, Angad!"
He bent on her and pulled out her lower lip with his lips "ispey haq mera hai." She sweetly smiled. He stared at her wet juicy lips and brought his lips to savor hers. She rolled away from him and chuckled. He pouted his lips "alright, just give me few seconds jaldi se naha kar aata hoon. Feeling sweaty." She stretched her hand for him "aajao na. Mujhey tumhari yahi khushboo pasand hai, rehney do." She grabbed his shirt and stroked his lips with hers "don't waste time."

Her seductive husky voice aroused him and he cuddled her in his arms. Both stared into each other eyes for a moment and slowly, steadily kissed each other as they wanted to bind other in their mouth lock forever in life. None of them allowed other partner to draw away from the passion. Both laughed in other's mouth without leaving the lock for their greediness as trying to swallow others. Angad laughed aloud with joy and rolled over to pull her on him.


"Hmmm, you taste delicious tonight." Kripa touched his lips with her fingers "you too." He kissed her fingers and bit her lips as groaned to agree with her statement. She gasped and stroked his hair and neck. Both were eager to melt in their passion. He kissed her jaw moving slowly to her cleavage. He rolled over her and slowly removed her clothes one by one. She pulled his shirt over as gave him way to relish her beauty. She was more open to surrender herself in his passion and offered what he deserved. She encouraged him with her moans and constant chant of his name. He groaned in reciprocation of her moans as sweet pain filled all over them.

Ten months of separation didn't take much longer to relax them in each other's passion. He groaned loudly in satisfaction and kissed her adorably as she was dozed off after deep passionate reunion.

"Kripa! Utho, khana laya hoon. Please have something." Angad woke up at ten in the night and went down to kitchen to get some food for them. She was lazy and turned otherside "abhi nahin, Angad! soney do."

Angad tried to wake her up "aaj soney ki raat nahin hai, sweety! Common gets up." He made her sit and she dozed on his shoulder. He kissed her lips and nibbled them. She moaned and cuddled him tightly.

She opened her eyes when he put a morsel of food in her mouth through his mouth. He giggled when she chew on his morsel without opening her eyes. She blushed and sat in his lap. She pulled a blanket "sharam nahin aati hai? aisey hi khana lekar aa gaiey ho?" she wondered to see Angad still naked but brought the meals upstairs..

He chuckled, "ghar mein koyi nahin hai. Kaisey bhi jaon kya farakh padta hai? I don't want to waste my precious time in removing and putting clothes." She slapped him playfully "tum nahin sudhrogey badmash!"

He loudly kissed her "Phir sey kaho. Bahut din hogaiey tumhare muh sey apni tareef (praising) sun kur."

Kripa blushed "kaisey sun sakte ho, jub tum ney koi badmaashi hi nahin ki toh?"

He chuckled "chalo, abb purey saal ki badmashi ek hi raat karley." He pulled her plate to keep on side table. He pulled over her in his lap to take her into his position. Kripa enjoyed his badmashi from bottom of her heart.

Both kept dozing and waking up each other throughout the night.

Morning at ten Angad walked to Kripa and whispered in her ears "darling! Abhi uthogi ke nahin? Pura din sone ka irada hai kya? Mujhey koyi aitraaz nahin hai agar raat mein mere saat jaagney ka wada karo toh."

Kripa lazily stretched her body "Angad tumney raat bhi sooney nahin diya, aur abhi bhi jaga rahey ho?" She peeped out from bed covers and stunned to see bright light outside. "Kya time ho raha hai?"

Angad wiped drool over her lips "dus baj rahey hain."

Kripa wide opened her eyes "oh God! Dus baj gaiey? Pura kaam waisey ka waisa hi pada huva hai. Na pujapaath, na cleaning, oh my God! Angad! tum bhi na pehley jaga diya hota. Satya bhuka hoga." She got up in haste and tried to get down the bed.

Angad pulled her back as lay on his back and locked her in his hands "kahan khoiee hoiee ho, ladli? Sab log kal raat Misthy ke ghar gaye they. Satya bhi unn ke saath hai. Aur pura kaam ho chukka hai. Servants apna kaam khatam kar key chaley bhi gaye hai. I finished cooking and puja too. Bus tumhari aankh khulney ka intezaar kar raha tha."

Kripa sighed aloud "mera dimaak kahan kaam kar raha hai. kal raat itni disturbed sleep thi."

Angad chuckled "haan, bahut mehannat bhi toh kiya tha."

She blushed and hid her face in his neck. He stroked her tendrils for some time. He rested his cheek on her head after kissing her maang and encircled her with his two hands. She kissed his chest and inhaled his masculine cologne. "tumhari bahon mein kitna aram milta hai, Angad! lagta hai zindagi mein sab kuch mil gaya hai, aur koyi khwaish bhi nahin rahi, bus yoohin tumhari bahon mein meri zindagi aram sey kut jaaye. Yahin pratna karti hoon. Kabhi bhi apne sey door nahin kurna muhjey. kabhi bhi main ney jaaney ki baat ki toh mera muh band kar key apne saath baandh kar rakhna. Promise karo." She spoke her heart with affection filled voice and held her hand in front of his face.

He put his hand on hers as promising "wada hai mera. Abb hum kabhi door nahin hongey. Phir kabhi tum mujh sey door gaieen toh keench kar laoonga. Tum bus meri ho. Kahi door nahin janey doonga. I don't wait till you return on your own. Promise!"

"We have to go to Misthy's house, right?" Kripa asked as she remembered Naina's orders before she left.
Angad nodded his head and cuddled her "I called Misthy and requested to keep everyone with her for some more time. She understood and agreed. We get privacy for another day. Kal sham sab buaye wapas chale jayengey. Till then we have our own time to stay alone."

She smiled and thanked him. He caressed her bear body for sometime before she took him in her position. "you are no more bachi rahi, sweety! I'm impressed" he certified at his satisfaction. She blushed and bit his jaw as groaned aloud.

Tommorrow will be epilogue

Edited by vallanki - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part. i'm glad that kripa took a promise in the end


~Sana~
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Posted: 17 years ago
grt part ad grt wirting vllanki
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: iamsmart

awesome part. i'm glad that kripa took a promise in the end

~Sana~

ThanQ sana! yes, that's needed ..if Angad had brought her along with Satya the story would be in differant way😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

😳that was romantic, there finally one, great, but aww, you ended the ff, i enjoyed this ff, hope to see you back, cant wiat for the epilogue

ThanQ...next ff after two weeks break

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: za7n4b

grt part ad grt wirting vllanki

ThanQ..it's all you readers' encouragement.

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Posted: 17 years ago
hi di
Im a silent reader and i haven't comment on this ff but now i want to comment on it.
there are a lot of brilliant writers in this forum but there are few whom stories are totally different from the others they wrote before. and you r one of them. i have read all ur ff and some of them twice and loved them.

this one i think is the best of all. i love the way you write detailed parts and i got to know new things from your ff's like traditions in the this ff you wrote about. you continued regularly and i like that about you.
in this ff i didn't liked kripa's character in the starting. she was too immature and stupid(couldn't find another word) but i think that was the main plot of this ff. sometimes i felt like killing her 😆 but i loved angad. he was whatever kripa wasn't. and i think he did the right to take satya away from her.

i loved kripa in few last parts. she was being mature otherwise she was a mother of a kid but she herself was a kid. i also loved the promise they made in the end.

Overall the ff was awesome, brilliant, marvelous, and the list goes on and on.
👏
i think i covered all the stuff i wanted to say.

are u going to write a new ff? plzzz do write

waiting 4 the epilogue.

Komal<3

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