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Posted: 20 years ago
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yes..

i think deepti can do that..

i am glad if she does..
anju
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Missed 14?? click here----->http://www.india-forums.in/viewtopic.php?t=9513


EPISODE-15

Story so far:-
In the college, sanjana on her way to home rembers that she has forgot her id card and is going back to class to bring id card. She meets karan who drags her to a class room and closes the door..

NOW:-
On dragging sanjana to her class room he just closes the door with his other hand.. Sanjana aks him to stop. He doesn't. He removes his jacket and is seen in white T-shirt showing his well built chest, shoulders and arms. She shouts.
Sanjana says:" chod do mujhe..varna mein zor se chillaongi.." Karan doesn't stop and is moving and she is moving back. Suddenly she meets wall from behind. She shouts. Karan holds her mouth by his hand and shouts at her by saying "CHUP..".She is trembling. He removes hand. And puts his both hands on the wall surrounding her. There is hardly 10 cm difference between their mouth with sanjana trembling and controlling herself. He says at her
"Kuch nahi karoona main tumhe….Nahi…agar tum khood chal kar mere pass aa bhi jaaogi to main tumhe chohonga bhi nahi….janti ho kyu..because I am sick of you….".
He continues.."Nafrat hain muje tumse aur tum jaise ladkiyon se jo apne aap ko mahan sabeet karne ke liye doosro ki izzat ke saath khelte hain…Kya samjha tha tumne..tum muje thappad marke is college ke heroine ban jaoogi..Saare logo ko..yeh dikhaogi ki..tujme kitni himmat hain.."
She is trembling..
He continues " aaj main tumhe dikha sakta hoon ki mujme kitni himmat hain.." saari duniye ke samne…"
She is trembling..
He continues.."lekhin main aisa kuch nahi karoonga isleye nahi kyunki main tumse ya is duniye se darta hoon…par isleye..kyunki. main itna geera hua nahi…hoon..agar main chahta to tumhe bhi 2 thappad mar sakta tha..lekhin maine aisa nahi kiya kyun ki…main kabhie bhi ek ladki par haath nahi uthata hoon..Lekhin us din tumne had par kar di..
Kya samajthi ho tum…maine timhari coldrink mein zeher milaya…agar mujhe kuch karma hota to main sabke same karta hoon…choopa kar nahi…us din maine tumhe gana gavaya..maine tumhe batakar gavaya….agar coldrink mein kuch milana hota to bhi main tumhare samne hi milata…lekhin ye sab main tumhe kyun bata raha hoon…Tum to mahan ho….hai na…sabke samne chata marker yeh dhikadiya ki tumhe kitni himmat hain.."

HE leaves her and says :"Now get lost from here…Ayenda..mujse takkar lene se pehle 2 bar sochna…OK..". he removes his hands from the wall.. and goes near the window.. She is still standing there and trembling. She slowly sits there and starts crying. Karan feels guilty again for doing this in anger. When he sees her crying his heart too feels unusual pain..a pain he has never felt so far in his 23 years. He feels like he has commited a crime by making her weep. He approaches her and stands. Suddenly she gets up and starts moving outside. He never hears karan r.
Mohit sees sanjana running from the class on his way while he is coming to search for karan. He doesn't understand why she is crying and moving. He goes to the class room and sees that Karan has removed his jacket. HE goes slowly near him while he is seeing outside window. And aks in fear.."Kya kiya tumne sanjana ke saath.."
Karan shouts at him.." aab tu bhi mujhe galat samjhega.." and walks out putting his jacket on his shoulder. Mohit keeps seeing. He understands that nothing happened and gets angry on himself as to how he could doubt his close friend whoam he knew well.

Sanjana is walking on the street alone. She keeps on remembering of what all happened and is crying too… People on the street keep watching at her..

KARAn is moving in his car driving rashly. He is angry on himself for what he has done.

AT THE AGARWAL:
Arundhati and notice sanjna in a tense mood. Lalit and Nitin ask but she says that she is feeling tired..that's why she is like that way. Arundhati squeezes her lips as usuaul.

AT the kapors:-
Karan comes and parks his car. While getting heis again angry on himself as to how could he do such a thing in anger and hits hard with his hand on car glass and hurts himself. He then takes a rod and breaks his car glasses in anger. And walks to his room.
He sits drinking in his room and smoking closing his door giving an indication to RAMOO and other servants not to disturb him.
Brigbhushan comes home late from his meetings usually and sees car glass broken. He asks her Ramoo who says it karan. he aks his ervants to get it repaied but never bothers to ask his son as to why he did so. Clearly shows brig's nature who is intd only in money making and less concerned towards his family.
Karan calls Mohit from his cell and says sorry for talking to him in anger. Mohit says:"Nahi yaar meri galti hain..main tumhe phone karne wala tha.."
Karan says its ok and there is no SORRY in friendship. Mohit too smiles and Karan explains to him the whole story. Mohit consoles him and says that not feel guilty as he didn't do anything. It was not her mistake not yours too. She slapped him because she thought you did that colddrink dramam on her. Karan says not to speak aagain on that topic and says good Night…


COMING UP:

Its Sunday and karan is at the agarwal house..
With karan's birthday approaching all his friends start preparations.
Avantika meets sanjana in shopping mall and warns her to be alert as she considers her as her biggest enemy.

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Edited by anju_bangalore - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Missed 15th episode click here-->http://www.india-forums.in/viewtopic.php?t=9611

Episode-16
SO FAR: karan drags sanjana into class room and watns her to think twice before taking him next time. Sanjana is crying and leaves home. Karan feels guilty for whatever he has done and goes home.

NOW next:-
Agarwal house:-
Its Sunday. Reema is serving breakfast to Dhruv. She is surprised to find karan at the door. She is just wondering how karan came so early that too on Sunday morning.
"aaj kya..suraj kis deesha se aaya hain dekh na.."
Karan smiles and goes straight and sits on dining table chair and starts eating from Dhruv'plate before reema serves him too. Reema sees wounds on karan's hand and aks "Kya hua haath ko.."
He says nothing and he had an minor accident.
Dhruv shouts " Dekha mama kitni baar kaha tha..zor se mat chala..lekhin meri baat kaun sunega.."
Reema has tears in her eyes slightly and she feeds karan by her hand. Karn by looking at this thinks how luckt he is to have such a nice mother even though god took his own mother too early in his life. Dhruv too gets emotional and all of them share light moments.

AT THE KAPOOR HOUSE:-
Sanjana is at the dining table. All are eating. But sanjana is in some other thoughts. She is constanly remembering those incidents that happened between her and karan and all the seniors and blames herself for everything. "Had she sung the song she wouldn't have faced so much. But later feels she was right. Why she should sing song in front of those people who don't know to appreciate a good act". Suddenly she is disturbed by nitin asking "kya hua..kis khayal me dube ho.."
Sanj says : "kuch nahi bahiyya..woh meri dost hain na anita..us ki tabiyat theekh nahi hain…toh mainsoch rahi thi ki..ab who kaise hogi.."

Nitin aks her to call and confirm but sanjan says she will call later as she might be sleeping at this time.

AT THE AVANTIKA"S HOUSE:_ Avantika calls ritu and some other friends and discuss about karan's birthday that is 1 week after this next Saturday. All of them plan.
She calls ritu her home in the evening. Ritu comes in the afternoon itself.
Ritu says let the party be arranged in resort or something.Avantika agrees. It should be somewhere away from the college. "waise bhi collge main who sanjana aur uske dost hain.. I don't like them…"phir se koi nahi mushqil khada kar denge karan ke liye.."

Ritu agrees and aks her about her love..and advices avantika to propose to karan this birthday. Avnatika says she would have donr but fears of his rjection. Ritu says "Nahi..i am sure he too loves you…tum ek bar baat karke dekh to lo.."
Avantika says : "I will try…In the party I will tell.."
They both laugh.

IN THE EVENING:-Ritu and avantika go for shppoing in a popular shopping mall in Mumbai. Avantika sees sanjana shpping there too with her Bhabhi. She goes near her and says " hai sanjana.."
Sanjana turns back and says Hai too.
Avantika says to her after her bhabhi goes a little far..that now she has only one big enemy and that is sanjana. Sanjana is shocked to hear this. She says SORRY to her and says that now she is not interested in her and his friends group and advices her to leave alone and she wants to concentrate solely on her career.
Avantika says : "nahi…yeh kaise ho sakta hain..shuruvat tumne kit hi…lekhin..khatam ham karenege…"
Ritu doesn't say anything and both of them leave from there.
Sanjana keeps looking at them until her bhabhi comes along with kids "chale..kya hua.."
Sanjana says nothing and they leave for home.

IN THE AGARWAL HOUSE:-Karan is with reema and dhruv but constanly thinking of what he did to sanjana. He doesn't say to anyone. Reema interrupts his thoughts and says
"us prashant to rahena do…boore logo ke saath bhagwan boora karta hain…"
Karan says and asks her: "Mama kya main boora hoon.."
Reema says that he is the best son any mother would like.
Karan says : " sach kaho na mama.."
Reema says that just because he has some bad habits she cant call him BOORA and says that he is the best son.
Karan says that she tells like that way as she is his mother.
Reema says "nahi beta…Tums ach much boore nahi ho..ek ma ki ankein dhoka nahi kha sakti.."and kiss him on his forehead.
Karan hugs her and has light tears in his eyes for no reason.
Reema says " ab kaha..ur the best.."
KARAN SAYS " I AM THE BEST>>"
They both laugh…

EPI ends..

COMING UP:In the college on Monday. Sanjana first encounter with karan after the incident.

Edited by anju_bangalore - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#54


👏 thanks Anju

you are soooooo much better than ekta

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Posted: 20 years ago
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great going anju...better than ekta serials 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Missed episode 16 click here---->http://www.india-forums.in/viewtopic.php?t=9682


SO FAR:-Avantika meets sanjana at the shopping mall and tells that she consider sanjana as her biggest enemy. Both Karan and Sanjana are tensed in their own way. While karan feels guilty sanjana is tensed that whole thing started by her ego..

Episode -17
NOW NEXT:-
COLLEGE:- Sanjana is coming on her way to college along with anita as usual. She says to Anita that fron now on she won't think about karan, mohit, avantika and other seniors. She says that partially she was responsible for the whole thing.she says that if she had first sing her song today she would have been happiest.
ANITA although not knowing what happened between karan and Sanjana "Nahi sanju..galti tumhari nahi hain…un logo ki hai.."
Sanjana says to her from now on she will not think about them or any other groups like prashant. They both smile and go to their classes.
Karan sees sanjana from far and is looking at her.
Sanjana sees this and tries to avoid his eyes and walks with her eyes down and goes to her class room. Karan feels guilty but his ego doesn't allow him to say SORRY.
Mohit also sees and doesn't say anything. Avantika doesn't understand anything.
In her class room sanjana is listening to lecture she feels little unwell. Anita asks her but she says nothing and says she has minor cold.
That day karan and sanjana face many times. Sanjana never looks in his eyes nor she tells something. Karan too feels sorry for what he has done but his ego doesn't allow him to say anything.
Mohit and shabbir too discuss about karan's forthcoming birthday and say that they will have more fun this time in PUB.
"woh naya PUB khula hain na…wahi jayenge…sshhhh secret..karan ko pata nahi chale…"
Ritu hears this and says that if they talk loudly karan comes to know..and their surprise would never be surprise. They also say that party should be arranged in the college
Avantika says NO…
"is bar party college main bilkul nahi hogi.."
Shabbir says : "par avantika..baaki logo ke leye kya karenge.."
Avantika says " Main nahi janti.. Par party college main nahi ho sakti…ek taraf se woh prashant..doosri taraf se woh sanjana..dono ne pareshan karke rakha hian..karan ko..isleyi party nahi hogi.."
They see karan coming and he smiles at them.."kya ho raha hai.."
They say nothing. Avantika says nothing and says that they were discussing about prashant.
Avantika says: "Karan..tumhe princicple se jaakar kehna chahiye ki woh colddrink ka drama prashant ka hain.."
Karan says he will do but he has no proof against prashant. He also tells that if he gets to know the waitor.. then they can do…"par uski koi jaroorat nahi hai.."
Karan and mohit leaves from there. On the way he meets Anita. Mohit and Karan says HELLO to her.
Mohit asks "Tum akele.."
Anita says to him: "haan woh sanju ki tabeeyat kharab hain na.to maine use taxi main bitaya aur woh ghar chali gayi.."
Karan thinks that sanjana went home just because of him as she couldn't face him properly.
Mohit says BYE to anita and she leaves. Karan keeps thinking. Mohit sees this and he says nothing as usual and both of them leave for canteen.

EVENING:-
MALHOTRA HOUSE:-
Karan is thinking about sanjana. He keeps thinking that she just went home because of him and fever may be an excuse. He later says NO and she might be really not feeling well to himself and sleeps. He feels uneasy to sleep.

AT THE KAPOORS:-
Nitin and lalit notice sanjana and find she has a viral fever. Nitin takes her to a doctor and doctor advice her to take rest and say its just a minor fever due to changing weather.
Sanjana takes medicine and sleeps. In her sleep she decide not to fear of karan and his group and thinks that her destiny of becoming a fashion designer is important and all these obstacles wont stop her. She decides and smile at herself and goes in deep sleep.

NEXT DAY:-
Sanjana is not to well and Nitin advise her : "jab tak tum poori tarah se theekh nahi ho jaati..uto mat.." sanjan says she is fine but Lalit too never hears check her tempuature and find its too much above normal. Sanjana feels uneasy and says she will not go to college OK..for 2-3 days. Nitin says : "that's like a good girl.." Arundhati is squeezing her lips as usual.

IN THE COLLEGE:
Sanjana has not come and anita feels lone although some other friends have come.
Karan's eyes unknowingly search for sanjana. He doesn't know that she hasn't come. Mohit notices this but doesn't say anything.
In the mean time avantika also joins them and says that TODAY college is the best day after so many days.
KAran aks her: "kyun.."
Avantika says : "who isleyi kyunkii…hamare 2dono dushman..i mean sanjana aur prashant college se gayab hain…I mean college nahi aye.."
Karan doesn't say anything but comes to know that sanjana has not come and thinks.
Mohit says : "haan achha hain…Prashant nahi aaya..lekhin sanjana who bechari to kya kar sakti hain.."
Avantika says : "don't call her bechari..she is……."
KAran unable to listen goes from there making excuse. Mohit understands the reason and follows him. Avantika says that to herself : "in dono ko kya hua hain.."
She keeps thinking.

Ends.
Coming UP:-college again sanjana is absent and karan missing her terribly without knowing..

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Edited by anju_bangalore - 20 years ago
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wooow! great anju..... 👏 👏 read the story after a long while.....but finally caught up! 😃 😳

plz continue....great detail.....wow i was impressed by karan;s dialouges in the classroom!!! 👏 👏 😳 great.........dhuruv keh bare mein bhi zaida likho na!!!!! 😛 😉 😳

keep it up!
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So Far:
Sanjana feels not well and leaves home. She had come to the collge but doesn't look in karan's eyes. Karan feel like saying sorry to her but his ego stops him. Avantika and others have an discussion about karan's birthday.
EPISODE-18
College:-
Sanjana has not come to the college as her lovely brothers adice her to take rest atleast for 2-3 days. Anita misses sanjana a lot. She thinks how friendship between her and sanjana has blossomed so fast. She misses her and calls her too and is happy to know that sanjana is fine.
Karan's eyes are now not searching for sanjana as he comes to know she has not come to the college. But his heart is missing her now without his own knowledge.Mohit often notices this about karan feeling uneasy in front of friends and his company. He even understands his feelings but never speaks anything.
Avantika is forced by Ritu and shabbir for celebrating karan's birthday in college too. They say they will be celebrating it next day.ie Monday as his birthday has fell on Saturday which is holiday for college. Avantika agrees to this after she is forced by everyone.
Karan is unaware of his own birthday. He is thinking about something else. There is 1 day left and his frinds are busy planning different things. His close friends plan a pub party on Saturday night( his birthday) so that they can easily recover hangovers. Others plan a party on Monday in college free classes and nearby restaurants. Nothing is finalized perfectly as everybody has his/her own opinions.
Meanwhile prashant has come and he approaches Karan and says : "kya hua karan kis soch mein dube ho..isse soch mai na..ki tum mere saath aur kya kar sakte ho.."
Karan shouts at him to get lost and he says "Kitne ghatiya insaan ho tum..mera naam kharab ho isleye tum kuch bhi kar sakte hoon..kuch bhi…sanjana ke coldrink mein..tumne kuch milaya and mere sar dal diya…."

Prashant says : " Nahi ..karan..maine kuch nahi milaya..who kya hai na mere dost ne kiya…ab yeh mat poochna kaunsa dost..main jhoot bol doona.."
Karan doesn't say anything and pats him and says : "now get out.."
After prashant leaves Mohit comes and says their plan is successful about recording the conversations.
Karan says YES.
Mohit asks him to go tp principal and say the same as now he has proof too.
Karan says : " Nahi..main dekhna chahata hoon ki who saala kitna geerega…aur kya kya karega…Sab karne do use..Phir ek saath sare sabooto ke saath us ko is college se bahar nahi nikalvaya to mere naam bhi KARAN nahi..'
Mohit agrees and says he is right. Now if they turn to principal, he will get stronger next time with gain a dirty plan. Instead allowing him to do and collecting proof one by one will be the best idea.

IN THE EVENING:-
Mohit and Karan go out for a drink. While going on the way Karan sees sanjana at the Bus stop along with 2 kids Mohit watches this too. Both of them watch although karan can't take his eyes from her he pretends as if he didn't see her. Mohit too notices this and doesn't say anything and smiles to himself. Karan aks him.."kya hua muskurare ho..".
Mohit says : "kuch nahi..Yu hi.."
Karn too smiles to himself.
AT THE KAPPORS:-
Sanjana has returned from Bus stop picking 2 kids from their schools bus. She is now feeling a little better. Anita calls ur up and asks her about her health. Sanjana says she is fine now but will return on Monday to the college as its Friday 2moorow and she is Lazy for one day. Anita laugh and they end up speaking something.
NEXT DAY:
Karan misses sanjana terribly and doubts why she isn't attending college when she is fine. He is not aware that next day Saturday is his birthday. He feels pain he has never felt. He has never felt this before although girls have come in his life before too. He keeps thinking.
Mohit asks him: "sanjana aaj bhi nahi aayi aur bahut log use miss kar rahe hain.."
Karan doesn't say anything and says that he was not thinking of her. Mohit says
"maine kab kaha ki tum sanjana ko miss kar rahe ho…"
Karn smiles to himself and walks.
Mohit understands that Karan has started loving sanjana slowly but he himself doesn't know its love as he never loved anyone in his life.

IN THE NIGHT: -
Its 12:00 am NIGHT AND NEXT day is karan's birthday. He gets a call. He picks up in a sleepy mode : "Happy birthday sexy..". he asks " Kaun.."
Avantika shouts : "are tum merei awwaaz nahi pehachante.."
Karan asks for sorry and says since she called sexy he imagined someone else. Avantika says to herself : " aab tumhe sexy nahi kahunge to kiise kahungi.."
And wishes HIM HAPPY BIRTHDAY..23 saal ke buddhe..
Karn smiles and says that he has forgot that. Avnatika says she knew. Karan says he will arrange a grand party 2morrow for all. Avantika says : "iski koi zarrorat nahi hain..ab tum so jao kal ke bare me kal dhekenge.."
Karan says Ok and sleeps. Avanyika too sleeps dreaming of karan.
Again call comes.
Karan speaks again by saying : "aab kya hain.."
REEMA says : "kya mama tumhe phone nahi kar sakti.."
Karan says sorry and reema wishes him along with dhruv. Karan becomes very happy.
Reema asks karan to come tomorrow to home as she will prepare his fav dish. Also she tells they need to make aarti of karan. Karan promises to come and wishes them good night. HE sleeps.
Again calls are flooded one by one right from mohit, ritu,shabbir and others one by one not allowing him to speak.
He curses the british system of 12:00 Am and sleeps.
Ends
COMING UP:
Karan's birthday. Karan realizes his Love for sanjana. He confesses the same in front of everyone..keep reading.

Edited by anju_bangalore - 20 years ago
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omg its sooooo exciting go on anju
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So far:-
Sanjana doesn't come to the college at all and karan miss her.Its karan's birthday today and Karan is wished by his friends and reema and Others on the same day night.Karan promises reema that he will come to her house next day.
EPISODE-19
Agarwal house: -
Reema is performing pooja in her pooja room and dhruv is in home today as its Saturday and Karan's birthday. Karan comes to the house as promised to reema and dhruv. Karan goes and sits next beside Reema in her pooja room. Reema finishes her pooja. Karan takes reema's ashirwad. Reema hold Karan by the ears and says
"ab teri bhi aarti karoongi..HAAPY BIRTHDAY BETA"
Karn says : "THANK U MAMA"
Dhruv comes to the pooja room and hugs karan and wishes him HAPPY BIRTHDAY.
He says that he is going out to bring some sweets. Karan insists on coming but dhruv says to stay. Reema prays in front of god and asks to god
"meri umar mere bacche ko dena..". Karan feels emotional when he hears this.
Reema holds an aarti plate and aks karan to sit.
She says : "tumhe mandir jaane ki aadat to hai nahi..isleyi main yahi pooja karoongi.."
Karan bows to her. Reema does a arti to karan.

She kisses karan on his forehead and gives him aashirwaad.

She says : "beta tumhare paas aisa kuch nahi hain..jo main tumhe de sakoo..lekhin itna ashirwad deti hoon ki zindagI bhar tum hamesha khush raho…tumhari har ichha poori ho…..khoob naam kamoa..tum apni papa se bhi zyaada naam kamoaa..
Aur ek baat…

"tumhare paas dost hain…main hoon maa…bhai hai..dhruv….kami hAI to sirf ek ladki jo tumhari biwi bane.."

karan smiles at this..
She continues : "main tumhe aashirwaad deti hoon..ki tumhe ek aise ladki mile jo tumhe bahut pyar de…jis pyar ke tum hakdar ho…."

She continue : "tumhe ek aise ladki mile jo tumhare paise yaa naam se nahi..balki tumSe pyar kare.."

Karan is smiling.
She continues : "mujhe ek aisi bahu chahiye jo…Brigbhushan malhotra ke bete karan malhotra se nahi balki sirf karan se pyar kare..sirf karan se.."

Reema hugs after saying this..

Karan closes his eyes after hugging Reema only to find SANJANA in his eyes. She is smiling at him.
He remembers all the dialogues she told to him when she slapped him for the first time. (refer episode 5)
He understands that there can be no other girl who can love him like that except sanjana. He realizes that feelings he had for sanjana thses many days are nothing but LOVE
Then reema says : "aaj poora din yaahi raho.."
Karan says OK.
Reema goes to kitchen. But karan is smiling. The picture of sanjana smiling is in front of his eyes and he cant avoid it. He says slowly to himself : "I LOVE YOU SANJANA .."

Dhruv comes back from shop and aks karan; "kya diya mama ne tumhe.."
Karan says : "bahut kuch diya..mujhe ek zindagi di.."
Dhruv says : "kya??"
Karan : "kuch nahi..aashiwaad diya…ehsaas dilaya….mere man me jo Ashanti thi ab shanty me badal diya.."
Dhruv laughs at karan and they hug each other.

Reema prepares all the dishes favorite for karan and feeds him in her hands. Both dhruv and karan enjoy that day. Reema is happy to see karan happy after so many days
"beta..tum itne khush kyun ho.??."
Karan says : "AAP ki wazah se mama.."

Reema and dhruv doesn't understand anything. Karan doesn't say and he to himself that
"sahi waqt par bata doonga mama ki aap ko bahu milgayi…"

IN THE EVENING: -
Mohit calls up karan and aks to come to a point. He says that they have a surprise for him. Karan says : "BIRTHDAY MERE HAIN party mein doonga.."
Mohit says : "sale aajana yahan par.."
Karan says OK and tells mohit that he is happy and wants to tell him something important.
Mohit : "BOLNA KYA BAAT HAIN>>"
Karan : "waha aakar bata doonga.."
Karan is ready to go.
Reema asks : "kaha ja rahe ho..party "??
Karan says : "dosto ke saath mama.."
Reema smiles and says to go and he leaves. He hugs both of them and leaves to meet his friends. she tells him to return home safely

AT THE SPECIFIED POINTshiwaji chowk
:- Karan meets mohit at the specified point. Mohit is there to pick karan up to a PUB where a special party has been oraginsed by avantika and others.
Mohit asks karan what he about say somrthing important. And asks the reason for being such a happy today.
KARAN SAYS : "I am in Love..Yaar…I love sanjana.."
Mohit says : "itni si baat.."
Karan says : "main jhoot nahi bol raha hoon yaar..sach hai.."
Mohit says that he knew that some days back itself.
Karan pats him and says : "tu bhi naa…."
They both hug..and leave for PUB..

COMING UP:Avantika is shattered after she comes to know about karan loving sanjana..
Mohit announces the karan's love case in his bday

Edited by anju_bangalore - 20 years ago

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