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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part yaar! i am happy that kayanat & arzoo had trust them.... ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part's ruksaar !!!!!!..........this story is different n really interesting ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ‘, all the part's a really wonderfull.........i'm glad that finally kayanat n arzoo trust them ๐Ÿ˜Š, ayaan n rehan are best buddies ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ˜‰........what's there mission ????....whom is kayanat face similar to??? whom r ayaan n rehaan looking for ????....what will happen to kayanat n arzoo?????........continue soon plzzzzzzzzzz..........there are so many questions stuck in my head ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜• !!!!!!!!..........can't wait for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!...........do continue plzzzzzz

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

gr8 part dear.... ๐Ÿ‘

thnx a ton..!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: ami_princess

great part yaar! i am happy that kayanat & arzoo had trust them.... ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

im glad u liked it.. thank u so much..๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: le_me_star

awesome part's ruksaar !!!!!!..........this story is different n really interesting ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ‘, all the part's a really wonderfull.........i'm glad that finally kayanat n arzoo trust them ๐Ÿ˜Š, ayaan n rehan are best buddies ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ˜‰........what's there mission ????....whom is kayanat face similar to??? whom r ayaan n rehaan looking for ????....what will happen to kayanat n arzoo?????........continue soon plzzzzzzzzzz..........there are so many questions stuck in my head ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜• !!!!!!!!..........can't wait for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!...........do continue plzzzzzz

thanks s lot dear.. im gald u like this story too... well too many questions ha ๐Ÿ˜†.. ookiee lemme answer sum... kaynaat's face is similiar to whom??? chk rehan's character profile n u'll hv the answer ๐Ÿ˜‰ & for the rest of the questions.. u'll get ur answers soon...๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
wow ruku dear awesome part loved it toooo tooo goooood m happpy both of them now trust rehan and ayaan continue sooon can't wait more...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Honii

wow ruku dear awesome part loved it toooo tooo goooood m happpy both of them now trust rehan and ayaan continue sooon can't wait more...

thank u so much.. im glad u liked it.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part-4

Recap-

Kaynaat ko lagta hai ki Ayaan aur Rehan bhi unhi log jaise hai aur isiliye agle din hi wo Arzoo ko lekar waha se chali jaati hai, per raaste wo log phir unka peecha karte haiโ€ฆ Kaynaat Ayaan ko uss khoon ke bare mein sab kuch bata deti haiโ€ฆ.

Story furtherโ€ฆโ€ฆ.

Ayaan ko lagta hai ki wo insaan jise Arzoo ne dekha tha shayad wahi hai jiski talaash unhe haiโ€ฆ wo kisi ko phone kar hi raha tha ki wo dekhta hai ki Rehan badi tezi se daudta hua aa raha haiโ€ฆ Wo neeche hi aata hai ki Rehan daudta hua uske paas aata hai.. aur use uper aane ko kehta haiโ€ฆ Rehan Kaynaat aur Arzoo ke paas jaata haiโ€ฆ

Rehan: jab tak hum na kahe yaha se hilna bhi matโ€ฆ, wo log yaha a chuke haiโ€ฆ.

{achanak goli chalne ki awaaze aane lagti haiโ€ฆ. Rehan wo room lock karta haiโ€ฆKaynaat aur Arzoo behad ghabra jaate hai.. Rehan uperwale kamre mein jaata hai to dekhta hai ki Ayaan unlog per fire kar raha tha aur wo log ghar peโ€ฆ }

Ayaan: Rehan.., main inhe sambhalta hu tum seediyo per raho aur dekho koi uper aane naa payeโ€ฆ

Rehan: haโ€ฆ

{rehan daudte hue seediyo tak jaata hai per waha se ek aadmi uski taraf gun lekar baadhta hai per rehan badi chalaki se use maar girata haiโ€ฆ kuch der tak aise hi firing hoti rehti haiโ€ฆ. Aur phir wo log chale jaate hai, Ayaan ko ek goli left arm per chukar chali jaati hai, jiski wajah se kaafi khoon beh raha hota haiโ€ฆ. Wo wahi neeche baithta

hai.., Rehan jhat se pehle uske paas aata haiโ€ฆ}

Rehan: Ayaannnโ€ฆ, tum thik ho?

Ayaan: hmmโ€ฆ.mainโ€ฆmain thik huโ€ฆwoโ€ฆ tum un dono ko dekh aaoโ€ฆ

Rehan: wo bhi thik hai tum mere saath chalo neeche chaloโ€ฆ

{rehan use neeche kamre mein le jaata hai.. jaise hi wo darwaza kholte hai wo Kaynaat aur Arzoo ko dekhte haiโ€ฆwo dono bahot hi dare hue ghabraaye se wahi baithe hote haiโ€ฆ Ayaan ko dekhke wo aur bhi darr jaate haiโ€ฆ

Rehan Ayaan ko wahi bithata hai aur first aid box le aata haiโ€ฆ Ayaan ko aise dekh Kaynaat ghabra jaati haiโ€ฆ wo use paani deti hai}

Kaynaat: aap thik ho?

Ayaan: hmmโ€ฆ..

{rehan use bandage lagata hai, aur khoon bhi ruk jaata hai}

Kaynaat: yeh sab hamari wajah se hua haiโ€ฆ

Ayaan: nahiโ€ฆ, aisa kuch nahi hai, Yeh to hona hi thaโ€ฆ

Rehan: ha.. per Ayaan ab hamara yaha rukna thik nahi hai.. kam se kam in dono ka katayi nahiโ€ฆ

Ayaan: hmmโ€ฆ ab to bas ek hi jagah hai jaha yeh log mehfooz reh sakte hai

Rehan: thik hai, per filhaal tum thoda araam karloโ€ฆ

{ayaan kuch der wahi baithta haiโ€ฆuse dard ho raha tha per wo kuch dikha nahi raha thaโ€ฆ

Kaynaat unke liye kuch khaane ke liye banati hai aur Arzoo uski madat karti haiโ€ฆ

Raat hoti haiโ€ฆ, aur wo sab saath saath dinner ke liye baithte hai.. Kehne ko to yeh chaaro anjaan the, per phir bhi inmein ek ajib sa ankahaa se rishta ban chuka thaโ€ฆ

Khaana hone ke baad wo aise hi baithe theโ€ฆ yeh soch rahe the ki ab aage unhe kya karna hai}

Ayaan: Rehan, mujhe lagta hai ki inhe Shimla bhejna hi thik hoga..

Rehan: ha, waha Dayijaan inka khyaal rakhenge aur yeh log waha in tak pohoch nahi payenge

Arzoo: shimla?

Ayaan: ha, waha mera ghar hai..aap dono waha bilkul mehfooz honge

Kaynaat: per hum waha jayenge kaise? Yeh log to har waqt hamara peecha kar rahe

Ayaan: main tumhe chod aaungaโ€ฆ

Rehan: per Ayaan aisi halat mein tum kaise jaa paoge?

Ayaan: pehli baar to nahi hua hai na? Inki zimmedari ab hamari hai

Rehan: to thik hai, kal savere hi main inko lekar chala jaungaโ€ฆ aisi haal mein main tumhe khatre mein nahi daal sakta

Ayaan: Khatra {smiles sarcastically} jaan ki parvaah hai bhi kise abโ€ฆ Waise bhi un logo ne mujhe nahi dekha hai, tumhe dekhte hi wo pehechaan jayengeโ€ฆ tum bas kisi tarha Malik Sahab se contact karna, aur main inhe chod kar laut aaungaโ€ฆ

Rehan: tum to meri baat manne se raheโ€ฆ jo chaho karo..

{rehan uthkar uperwale kamre mein chala jaata haiโ€ฆ aur ayaan use dekhkar muskurata hai}

Ayaan: ab aap bhi aaram karle, kal savere hume nikal jayenge

{wo dekhta hai ki unke chehre per ab bhi wahi dar hai}

Ayaan: ghabrana nahiโ€ฆ, hamare hote tum dono ko kuch nahi hoga..

{aur wo bhi utkar chala jata haiโ€ฆ

arzoo aur kaynaat ko unki baat manne ke alawa aur koi raasta bhi nahi thaโ€ฆ wo bas savera hona ka intezar karte the.. Kuch der baad Arzoo wahi so jaati hai, per Kaynaat so nahi paatiโ€ฆWo uthti hai aur uper wale kamre ki taraf jaati hai.. waha dekhti hai ki Rehan so chuka hai aur Ayaan wahi khada thaโ€ฆwo bhi so nahi paa raha thaโ€ฆ Kaynaat uski taraf aati haiโ€ฆ Uski payal ki chanak sunkar Ayaan palatta hai..}

Ayaan: aap? Kuch chahiye tha?

Kaynaat: nahiโ€ฆ bas neend nahi aa rahi thi isiliye yaha aa gaye..

Ayaan: baithoโ€ฆ

{wo uske paas baithti haiโ€ฆ aur dono bas ek dusri ki taraf dekhte haiโ€ฆ per Ayaan apni nazrein hatata hai..}

Kaynaat: aapka zakhm kaisa hai?

Ayaan: beheter hai..

Kaynaat: aapne hamare liye jo bhi kiya hai uske shukriya bhi kehna chota lagta haiโ€ฆ aaj jaha log ek dusre ki khoon ke pyaase hai waha aapne hum ajnabiyo ke liye kitna kuch kiyaโ€ฆaur ek hum the jo aap hi ko galat samjh baitheโ€ฆ..

Ayaan: per ab to ajnabi nahi hai na? Apno ko khone ka dard kya hota hai yeh main achi tarah se jaanta huโ€ฆ maine bhi apni zindagi khoyi haiโ€ฆper phir bhi aaj bhi zinda huโ€ฆ

Kaynaat: hum kuch samjhe nahiโ€ฆ

Ayaan: kuch nahi.., shayad wo bhi hume samajh nahi paayi thi.. kuch samajhne ka mauka hi nahi milaโ€ฆ

Kaynaat: bahot pyaar karte the aap unse?

{ayaan looks at her in amazement}

Kaynaat: aapki aakhein sab kuch bayaan kar rahi haiโ€ฆ

Ayaan: hmmโ€ฆ per ab pyaar lafz pe bhi yakeen nahi raha..

Kaynaat: per pyaar se khubsoorat ehsaas to iss kaynaat mein koi bhi nahi haiโ€ฆ.

Ayaan: lekin sabki taqdeer mein wo nahi aataโ€ฆ

{saying this he turns the other way}

Kaynaat: kabhi apni ateet ki parchayiyo ko hatakar dekhiyegaโ€ฆ ho sakta hai wo khushnuma ehsaas ek baar aapki zindagi mein dastak deโ€ฆ

{ayaan palatkar uski taraf dekhta hai..aur kuch pal ke liye wo ek dusre ki aakho mein kho jaate haiโ€ฆ. Phir Kaynaat dekhti hai ki Ayaan ke haath se khoon beh raha tha per use iss baat ka ehsaas tak nahi thaโ€ฆ wo uske kareeb jaati haiโ€ฆphir uske bandage nikalkar dusri bandage lagati haiโ€ฆ Ayaan ki nazar uske chehre se hatti hi nahiโ€ฆ}

Kaynaat: ab yeh thik haiโ€ฆ. {aur wo jaa hi rahi hoti hai ki ayaan use rokta hai}

Ayaan: shukriyaโ€ฆ {wo muskurakar uski taraf dekhti hai}

~~~**~~~Song in background~~~**~~~

Ek din fursat meinโ€ฆ. Thaame haath hamareโ€ฆ

Le gayi uss dagar peโ€ฆ jaha rehti hai bahareinโ€ฆ

Chal diye hum bhi ghar se hoke kuch befikar se

Dil tha apne bharose hum the dil ke sahaareโ€ฆ

Ek din fursat meinโ€ฆ. Thaame haath hamareโ€ฆ

Le gayi uss dagar peโ€ฆ jaha rehti hai bahareinโ€ฆ

Raah mein mod aaya roshni ho gayi kamโ€ฆ.

Raah mein mod aaya roshni ho gayi kamโ€ฆ.

Kuch dil ghabraayaโ€ฆyeh kaha aa gaye humโ€ฆ

Aage uss modke bhiโ€ฆ.to bahaarein nahi thi

Aage uss modke bhiโ€ฆ.to bahaarein nahi thi

Bhooli kuch khwaishei thi aur khwaab the bas hamareโ€ฆ.

Ek din fursat meinโ€ฆ. Thaame haath hamareโ€ฆ

Le gayi uss dagar peโ€ฆ jaha rehti hai bahareinโ€ฆ

~~~**~~~Song in background~~~**~~~

Wo chali jaati haiโ€ฆ. Ayaan palatta hai to dekhta hai ki Rehan uski taraf dekhkar has raha hai

Ayaan: kya hua? Neend nahi aa rahi ya koi khwaab dekh liya?

Rehan: wahi samajhne ki koshish kar raha hu ki abhi jo maine dekha wo khwaab tha ya haqeeqat hai

Ayaan: Rehaannnโ€ฆ, tum achi tarah jaante ho mujhe aise batein pasand hai

Rehan: per kyun Ayaan? Kya kami hai usmein?

Ayaan: kami usmien nahi haiโ€ฆ per tum achi tarah se jaante ho ki ab inn sab baato ke liye naa to mere paas waqt hai aur naa hi in per ab yakeen raha hai

Rehan: jaanta hai aaj pehli baar aisa ho raha hai ki teri aankhein teri zubaan ka saath nahi de rahiโ€ฆ Dekh pyar karna koi gunaah nahi haiโ€ฆ jo hua use to hum badal nahi sakte, per ab jab teri zindagi ek baar phir pehle jaisi ho sakti hai to tu kyun aage badhne se katra raha hai?

Ayaan: bakwaas mat kar, aisa kuch nahi ho sakta

Rehan: bakwaas nahi main sach keh raha hu.., tum bhi use pasand karne lage hoโ€ฆ kyunki uske chehre mein tum Sanya ko dekhte hoโ€ฆ Kaynaat ki takleef tumse bardasht nahi hotiโ€ฆ apni jaan ki parvaah naa karte tum uske liye

Kuch bhi karne ko tayyar rehte hoโ€ฆ Yeh pyar nahi to kya hai Ayaan?

{ayaan kuch bol nahi paata.. apni kuch ateet ke lamhey uske zehen mein ghumne lagte haiโ€ฆ.

Shayad Rehan sahi thaโ€ฆ..}

โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆend of part 4โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ

comments awaited!!!

Love,

Ruksaar

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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
wow ruku dear awesome part loved it tooo tooo gooood amazing...m happy ayaan has some feelings 4 kaynaat hope both get together ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ continue sooon ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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absolutley fabulous...cant wait...plz dont make us wait soo long again n cont soon ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thx fr al de commentz.., wl try n update asap ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part ruksaar ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ‘!!! so those people followed rehan till there cabin (house) ๐Ÿ˜ญ!!! rehan locked arzoo n kaynaat in the room 4 their safety ๐Ÿ˜Š! ...... rehan n ayaan were shooting those people, after a while they leave n rehan takes ayaan downstair where the girls were as his left arm was bleeding badly ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ.....kaynaat worried seen ayaan like that ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ญ!!! they have dinner n the guys deceide that they will take kaynaat n arzoo 2 shimla as that the most safe place from them 2 be right now ๐Ÿ˜Š, ayaan family lives there ๐Ÿ˜‰!!! rehan aur ayaan kya ek dusre kya kitna jayal rakte hai ๐Ÿ˜Š...they like brother's ๐Ÿ˜Š!!! they all went to sleep, as they will have 2 leave early morning ๐Ÿ˜Š! kaynaat wasn'table to sleep ๐Ÿ˜•, she goes upstairs n found ayaan looking outside ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜•! they talk for a while abt what's happening n ayaan's life a bit (not openly ๐Ÿ˜Š) .....must say that kaynaat got 2 knew ayaan a bit more by the look in his eyes, pain, etc ๐Ÿ˜Š...she asked him if he loved "that girl" a lot.....ayaan ans. confused me a little ๐Ÿ˜†!!! kaynaat changed his wound n then left...ayaan give her thanx wt a smile....wow ๐Ÿ˜‰!!!.......the convo btw ayaan n rehan was really interesting ๐Ÿ˜‰...so the girl who's face was or is similar 2 kaynaat is "sanya"...the girl ayaan love, right ๐Ÿ˜Š??? i think rehan is absolutely right ๐Ÿ˜Š...ayaan doesn't want 2 admit that he has start liking kaynaat ๐Ÿ˜Š, he should think seriouly abt rehan words ๐Ÿ˜‰!!!...what happened in the past??? is kaynaat begin attracted 2ward ayaan??? what will happen btw ayaan n kaynaat???...i want to know more n more abt ayaan n rehan ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜Š!!!....continue soon plzzzzzzzzz.....can't wait to read the next part !!!!!!!!!

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