My FF-Mohabbatein(Parts-25/26/27 updt.)

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Hi..How ru all doin..

I'm here with my new Fan Fiction-''Mohabbatein..''

As the name suggests...It's not only about one ''Mohabbat'' but many ''Mohabbats'' goin around..😆

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Characters:-

Robbie-

He's really sweet.Many girls in the college r mad about him..but poor Robbie...is still in searchn for his ''Dream Girl'' as he doesnt find his ''Dream Girl'' in any of the girls who r mad about him....

Aditya-

He's known as ''Bholu''...he's really sweet....and is'nt irritatin like his frenzzzz....Unlike his frenzz,he respects women....He's also very ''studious'' and is said to b the most intelligent student of the college...

Laksh-

He's badly sufferin from an ''attitude problem''...He's known as the ''cool dude''....He's rich and tries to flirt with each and every single girl in the college....He's never interested n his studies....

Neev-

He's sweet,fun-loving,irritating and totally adorable....He's always hangin sumwhere in b/w when it cums to study...''Study OR Not to study''...actually...not only while thinkin about studies....but while thinkin about any matter..he's always confused...

Nakul-

He's sweet and simple...he isnt interested in girls...but wait a sec...Girls think the same way about him...(not even a single girl is interested in him)....but he's happy the way he's...At times...he likes to study...but otherwise...he likes to enjoy with his frenzzz...

Saksham-

He is nther patient of ''the attitude disease''...He doesnt try to misbehave or flirt with girls but doesnt respect them even....He's always confused about his decisions....

Now...all of the above mentioned guys r really different from each other but still r frenzzz...they can be called a group...as they r best frenzzz...but more than two!!!

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Kasturi-

She's sweet,simple and sum1 who's really dumb...she doesnt understand anything...She's bad at studying but gud at singing...

Maithilli-

She's really simple and innocent....She loves to study but poor Maithilli...cant get anyhting into her mind...

Krishna Tulsi-

Her name's really lengthy....thts the reason every1 calls her KT...She's nther sweet girl...who loves to study....she's also known as ''Debator'' among her frenzzz..as she cant stand any1 who has an attitude problem or who's wrong...

Prachi-

Prachi is sweet and fun-loving....knows how to irritate ppl...loves to play pranks...And is so-so at studying...

Sanjhi-

She's too fast,and knows how to handle guys....and is not at all interested in her studies...

P2-

She's beautiful and intelligent but is fun-loving and irritating,too....She's helpful and every teacher's fav.student...Her actual name is Prerna...but when Prachi and Prerna became frenzzz... Prachi started callin her ''Pretty Prerna'' but then she thought tht this was too long...and she shortened it to ''P2''....

Now...these grls r also different from each other but r really cloze frenzzzzzzzz

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So,how was the intoduction?

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice intro looking forward to reading it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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h it sounds great some of my fav jodi's!!!!!!!!!
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wow! lookin forward 2 it. n i think i'm goin 2 like ur style of writing! 😆
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Part-1

Aditya and Robbie live ina hostel and r roommates.

Aditya has no1 in the world except his uncle and aunt who live abroad and keep sending him money 4 his expenses.

Robbie's parents live abroad due to his father's business but Robbie didnt want to leave his country and so decided to live in hostel.

Aditya was upset and checkin his bag again and again,when Robbie enters.

Robbie:Oye kitaabi keede!Aaj aakhri chutti hai...aaj to enjoy kar..

Aditya:Kya enjoy karoon...Maths ki book nahin mil rahi....

Robbie:Mil jaye gi..kya tension le raha hai..

Aditya(irritated):Robbie...bukwaas band kar..mujhe book dhoondne de..

Robbie:Theek hai....beth ke dhoond..(naughty smile)...par ek baat bataon..dhoondta reh jaye ga..

Aditya(angry and irritated):Oye Robbie!Ruk!Meri book de....

Robbie:Mere paas kahan hai..

Aditya:Robbie!Ab mein tera sar tod doon ga...book de..

Robbie:Chill..chill...chill.!!!!''Bholu'' se ''Angry young man'' mat ban..(gives him the book)...aur yeh pakad apni book...

Aditya:Ab mera sar mat kha aur yahan se ja...

Robbie:Mujhe bhi tere saath reh ke apne aap ko ''padhai ka Virus'' lagaane ka shauq nahin hai...

Robbie leaves...While Aditya gets buzy with his books again.

~*~Part-1 ends~*~

Edited by Kashish4Sujal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-2

Saksham,Neev,Nakul and Laksh r sittin near the entrance of the college and r waitin 4 Robbie and Aditya..

Robbie and Aditya enter...

Neev:Nazar na lage mere bachchon ki punctuality ko...

Aditya:Kya yaar,Neev!Abhi se start hogaya hai...

Neev:Hum to hamesha hi start rehte hain..

Robbie:Aur abhi aik thapar lagaya to stop bhi ho jayenge..

Saksham:Robbie,tu kabse Adi(Aditya) ki boli bolne laga..

Aditya:Matlab??

Laksh(puts his hand on Adi's shoulder and gets up):Matlab,my dear Adi...Robbie kab se ghussa karne laga...

Aditya:Chod yaaar...aisi harkatein karo ge to ghussa hi aaye ga ne..

Nakul:To phir kaisi harkatein kiya karen hum..

Saksham:Mein batata hoon..hum log dil laga kar padha karen...Ladkiyon ki izzat kiya karen...aur masti karna chod den..

Neev,Laksh,Robbie(together):Ecjactlyyyyyyyyyyyy....

Aditya(irritated):Kya yaar...har waqt mazaaq, mein ja raha hoon..

Aditya leaves...

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Neev,Saksham,Laksh,Nakul and Robbie r still sittin near the entrance..\

A group of 4 girls(P2,KT,Prachi,Sanjhi) enter the college..

Saksham whistles..

P2 gets angry...

P2:Tameez hai ya nahin..

Saksham(chewing a gum):Nahin...

Neev,Laksh,Robbie laugh...

P2:Tum jaise ladke is college mein aate hi kyun hain.......

Saksham:Tum jaise ladkiyon ko dekhne..

Every1 laughs again..

P2:Shut up!!

Saksham:U too....

P2:Tum..

Saksham:Mein kya...(gets up)

Nakul:Aye...Kya kar raha hai,Saksham..beth ja...(holds his arm and pulls him)

Nakul(to the girls):We're sorry...ab yeh paagal phir aisi harkat nahin kare ga..

Saksham:Pagal to nahin ho gaya tu..

Nakul:Shut up..

Nakul(to the grils):Aap jaiyye..we're sorry..

P2:It's ok...

The girls leave...

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Saksham(angry at Nakul):Yeh kya kiya...pagla to nahin gaya tha..

Nakul:Nahin...tu pagla gaya tha...aise hi ladaai kar raha tha...Ab chal/...

Nakul and Saksham get up..

Nakul(to the others):Tum log yahaan sone aaye ho..idiots utho...Maths class ke liye jaana hai.....

Every1 leaves...

~*~Part-2 ends~*~

Edited by ~*~A~*~ - 18 years ago
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Part-3

Every1 in the classroom...and the Maths teacher enters..

Sum minutes later...Maithilli cums to the teacher...

Maithilli:Ma'am....I wanna talk to u...

Teacher:Yes,Maithilli....speak up..

Maithilli:Can u teach me during the Recess.....

Teacher:Maithilli dear..tht's impossible for me....but yes...sum1 can help u...

The teacher asks Aditya to cum to her...

Aditya:Yes Ma'am...

Teacher:Can u teach Maithilli during the Recess??

Adi's quiet but his frenzz start laughin..

Teacher(looking at them angriily):Silence!

Every1's quiet..

Aditya:Yes Ma'am..sure...

Teacher:Thnk u,Aditya..

Aditya:No problem,Ma'am..

Teacher(to Adi and Maithilli):Now.....go to ur seats...(to Maithilli)And Maithilli dear...dont forget to go to Aditya during the Recess..

Maithilli:Ok,Ma'am..

Adi and Maithilli leave...

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During the Recess,Adi is sittin an enjoyin with his frenzzzz.

Maithilli cums there...

Maithilli:Mein..woh...

Adi:I'm sorry..mein to bhool hi gaya tha..

Maithilli:Nahin..koi baat nahin....par...

Adi(puts his hand on the stair he's sittin on):Aap yahaan bethiye...(pushes Neev)..

Neev:Haan..haan..uth raha hoon....

Neev gets up..

Maithilli sits near Adi..

Aditya starts explaining...

Nakul:Professor sahab....

Every1 starts laughin,while Adi gets angry...

Saksham:Adi,theek se samjhaana...aisa na ho ke bechaari ko jo aata hai,woh bhi bhool jaye..

Every1 laughs...

Aditya(to Maithilli):Hum wahaan chalte hain(pointin towards a corner)...

Adi and Maithilli get up..

Laksh:Akele mein samjhaana chaahta hai to seedhe mun bol..

Aditya(gets really angry):Haan..akele mein samjhaana chahta hoon..koi problem..

Robbie:Nahin, ''Angry young man''///

Aditya(to Robbie):Nahin..tu bhi aaja saath..

Neev:Nahin,hamen kabab mein haddi banne ka shauq nahin hai..

Every1 laughs...

Aditya:Aur kuch bukwaas???

Neev:Nahin..

Aditya:To ab hum jayen..

Laksh:Haan..haan..

Aditya:Thnk u Laksh,tum ijaazat na dete to mein mar hi jata...

Saksham:Shubh shubh bol..tu mar gaya to is bechaari ka kya hoga(pointin towards Maithilli)..

Every1 laughs...

Aditya:Ab aur bukwaas ki..to mun tod doon ga...

Robbie:Oye..''Angry young man''...ab ja bhi..warna ye bechaari yahiin aadhi ho jaye gi...garmi ki wajah se..(pontin towards Maithilli)..

Aditya:Shut up!

Adi(to Maithilli):In logon ki to aadat hai...hum chalen?

Maithilli:Jee.....

Both of them leave while the others start laughin again..,,

~*~Part-3 ends~*~

Edited by Kashish4Sujal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great fanfic can't wait for the next one...hehe 😛
Edited by neha^^ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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lol these boys! awsome, continue!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its so funny....adi...my rasgulla has become very studious...'angry young man'😆
pls continue...great fanfic 😃 😛

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