My FF-Mohabbatein(Parts-25/26/27 updt.) - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

154

Views

16.2k

Users

27

Likes

3

Frequent Posters

-aweshome_moi- thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 18 years ago
#21

Part-5

(2 Weeks later)....

All the guyzz r sittin...

Suddenly,Neev gets up...

Neev:Mein ja raha hoon...

Robbie,Saksham,Nakul,Laksh(together):Kahan ja raha hai tu,Adi...

Adi's confused...

Neev:Maithilli ke paas..bechari kab se intezaar kar rahi hogi...

The guyzz start laughin..Adi's rritated..

Aditya:Yaar...plz irritate mat karo...

Neev:Haan..mein soch raha hoon ke aaj Mithilli ko kya padhaon...

They start laughin again...

Aditya:Tum log bilkul paagal ho...

Laksh:Bilkul.... poori dunya pagal hai...bas inki Maithilli ko chod kar...

They start laughin again...

Aditya:Kyun us bechaari ka mazaaq uda rahe ho..

Nakul:Bechaari??|

Aditya:Woh to itni masoom hai..itni masoom hai...inti masoom hai.....

Neev(interrupts):Itni masoom hai ke use to ''Massoma Begum'' ka tag milna chahiye..

All the guyzz(except Adi) start laughin again....

Maithilli cums...

Maithilli(to Adi):Chalen??

Adi:Haan...(and gets up)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Adi and Maithilli sittin on a bench...

Maithilli is askin about a formula...while Adi's lost in his ''Dream World''...

Maithilli:Aditya..

Adi's still thinkin..

Maithilli:Aditya..

Adi(cums out of his ''Dream World''):Haan....

Maithilli:Yeh formula....

Aditya:Haan..yeh..(and starts explainin the formula)....

~*~Part-5 ends~*~

Edited by ~*~A~*~ - 18 years ago
yulZ thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 18 years ago
#22
wow lovely part 😳 😆 cont.soon 👏 👏
adi is falling in love 😳 😍 loved all the jokes yarr 🤣 😃
72968 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#23
brilliant 😃 waiting for next part!! 😃
HhAaNnAa thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#24
hey kashish4sujal your ff is mindblowingtooo tooo gooood just rokin i love the fight btwn p2 n saksham just awesome continue sooon yaaar can't wait more.... 👏
famy.kn thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#25
i always roll in laughter after reading ur FF,enjoyed the fight between saksham nd P2
angelic shaz thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#26
wow awesum!!
neev is too much 😆 😆
continue soon
cnt wait!! 😃
-aweshome_moi- thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 18 years ago
#27
Thnk u....all of u.... 😃
I'm glad tht u ppl like my FF...I'll cont.soon.... 😳
-aweshome_moi- thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 18 years ago
#28

Part-6

Aditya's sittin in his room,Robbie enters...Robbie cums near Adi,who's lost in his ''Dream World''...

Robbie:Boo!!

Aditya:Robbie,tu aagaya..

Robbie:Nahin Adi,Mein chala gaya...

Aditya:Robbie...tujhe mazaaq ke ilaawa kuch aata hai....

Robbie:Aur tujhe sapnon mein khone ke ilaawa kuch aata hai....Ek min....kahiin tu ''bholu'' se ''angry young man'' bante hue ''Mr.Romeo'' to nahin ban gaya...

Aditya blushes....

Robbie:Maithilli??

Adi smiles...

Robbie:Kya choice hai!!(laughs)...chal ab so ja....kal hum dekhenge tamaasha....

Adi:Aey Robbie,baaki sab ko mat batana.....woh log mujhe pagal karden ge...

Robbie:Woh to tu pehle hi hogaya hai....

Adi:Robbie,tu...

Robbie:Chal,chal..ab baaki ghussa kal k liye bacha ke rakh....(keeps his hand on Adi's shoulder)...kal to tu gaya...

Robbie goes to sleep while Adi keeps on asking him not to tell the otherzzz....

~*~Part-6 ends~*~

Edited by Kashish4Sujal - 18 years ago
-aweshome_moi- thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 18 years ago
#29

Part-7

Neev,Laksh,Saksham and Nakul r waitin 4 Robbie and Adi...

Both of 'em enter...

Robbie(almost shoutin):Aaj ki taaza khabar,aaj ki taaza khabar....

Adi(to himself):Mar gaya...

Neev:O Newspaper bhaisaab!Yahaan aane se pehle Press mein gaya tha kya...

Robbie:Tu sune ga na to khushi ke maare pagal ho jaye ga...

Neev:Phir to rehne hi de...mujhe shaadi se pehle pagalhone ka koi shauq nahin....

Saksham:Haan...shaadi ke baad to bechaara waise hi....

Nakul:Shaadi ke baad...mujhe to laga tha yeh defect is mein bachpan se hi hai....

All the otherzz laugh..

Neev:Achcha bas.....Robbie,tu bol..

Robbie:Haan,woh..

Aditya:Chalo,class mein chalte hain...

Robbie:Haan,class mein to woh bhi hogi na...chalo wahiin...

Aditya(interupts):Nahiin..yaheen theek hai...

Robbie:Haan.. to mein kya keh raha tha...haan.....hamare ''Bholu'' ,''Mr.Romeo'' ban gaye hain..

Saksham,Neev,Laksh,Nakul(together):Kya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Robbie:Haan...

Adi:Main chalta hoon...

Nakul:Mr.Romeo itni jaldi kya hai....apni Ms.Juliet ka naam to batata ja...

Robbie:Main batata hoon....woh hain ''Mr.Bholu'' ki ''Ms.Bholi Bhaali''..Maithilli...

Laksh:Maithilli.....Ab to tu maara gaya....Tu usse shaadi karne ke baad,poora din samjhata rahe ga...''Maithilli dear,hum donon ki shaadi ho gaye hai'' aur woh aakhir mein kahegi...

Neev,Saksham(together):Main samjhi nahin...phir samjhaiyye na...

All of 'em..start laughin except Adi...

Neev:Tum log kyun us bechaari ka mazzaq uda rahe ho....

Nakul,Laksh,Robbie,Skasham(together):We'e sorry,Adi!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aditya(gets angry):Ab mein chahe jitni mushkil mein hoon...tum logon ko kabhi nahin bataon ga...

Aditya leaves in anger while the others r still laughin....

~*~Part-7 ends~*~

Edited by Kashish4Sujal - 18 years ago
-aweshome_moi- thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 18 years ago
#30

Part-8

Robbie is standin near the canteen while Kasturi cums runnin...and falls on Robbie...

Robbie(angry)(gets up):Andhi ho kya!Dekh kar nahin chal sakti(stopps 4 a while)...i mean bhaag sakti....

Kasturi(starts crying):I'm sorry..

Kasturi starts cryin loud...

Robbie(to himself):Isko kya hogaya??

Robbie:Are...tum ro kyun rahi ho...

Kasturi starts crying even louder..

Robbie:Dekho..dekho...i'm sorry...mujhse ghalti hogaye...mujhe maaf kardo..par tum rona band karo...

Kasturi cries even louder...

Robbie:Kasturi,dekho main Robbie.....mein aur tum aik saath hi padhte..

Kasturi cries even louder....

Robbie(keeps his hand on her mouth):Chuppp!Samajh mein nahin aata tumhe(Kasturi stops cryin)...kabse chup karne ko keh raha hoon...Hindi samajh mein nahin aati ,Bangali samajhti ho,kya....

Kasturi(starts cryin again):Tumne mujhe danta...mein ja rahi hoon..

Kasturi runs away,while Robbie tries to stop her..

Robbie:Suno to sahi....

Kasturi doesnt listen...

Robbie(to himself)(smiles):Pagal.....

Robbie leaves 4 his class.....

~*~Part-8 ends~*~

Edited by Kashish4Sujal - 18 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 ¡ 5 years ago

Kumkum Bhagya: Rishton Ki Ankahi Kahani - Chapter 108 updt on pg 22

Book cover by Prii @SweetButSpicy. Thanks a million Prii for this wonderful book cover.

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".