Fan Fiction Pyar - Page 10

[;z contt soon how there is no updates

finally i read the whole thing ziddi. 😃

the story is really good, there are so many them 😆

waiting for the next part 😆

Recap

Malika calls Vedika. Malika: uncle is really angry and she tells her what happened

Vedika: don't worry I will come home in 15mins. She tells her something and they agree.

Part 22
Meanwhile

Arun looks at the clock she has 45 mins

Malika(comes ) hey guys why don't we watch a movie

Purab: great idea

Um& Sum nice idea beta

Vedant: Did any one of you rented or bring a movie?

Karu: Jassi and I went and rented Waqt a race against time.

Vedant: I haven't seen that

Prem: me either

Rohan (exciting) my girl friend is in it.

Prem (shocked) what? You have a girlfriend and I don't know (getting mad)

Rohan: chachu everyone knows my girlfriend

Vedant : great even he has a girlfriend and I don't

Purab: so who is she

Rohan: papa she is

Purab: she is

Rohan: she is my mom

Purab(shocked) your mom, mom ka chamcha

Jassi: Purab he love you more then me

Rohan: seriously she is the beautiful Priyanka Chopra

Prem: she is my girlfriend also (he gives Rohan a high five, someone grabs his hears)

Karu: Prem if she is your girlfriend then who m' I ?

Prem: you are my wife

Niharika: don't worry bhabi? It has the dashing Askay in it also

Karu: fine go and see your gf and I will watch Askay (everyone 😆 )

Prem: sorrie meri biwi sorrie, I will not say this again

Karu: much better

Arun: ok lets go and watch the movie (everyone gets up and goes to the family room)

Vedika arrives at her place at 7:20 because of the traffic she went to the gas station and she stopped by somewhere also.

Vedika: how will I enter the house

Then she gets a idea, she gets out of the car, take her purse, the tali, she has another bag. She goes to the back of the farmhouse quietly and opens the patio door because she told Malika to unlock the door for her. And silently she goes to the kitchen and puts everything in and she goes upstairs to her and niks room and she goes and takes a shower and wears something warm because she is cold. She looks at the clock and it is 7:45 and she goes downstairs in the kitchen. She prepares something and gets some samosa and warms it up, gets some popcorn and she goes to take out the warm jalebi because its Aruns favorite sweet.

In the family room

Rohan: bebo I smell popcorn

Bebo: you are always hungry

Rohan: seriously I smell popcorn coming from the kitchen

Bebo (smells) me too

Niks: be quiet

Rohan: bua we smell popcorn

Niks: it your imagination

Rohan& Bebo leave and go to the kitchen because they smelled popcorn and it made them hungry. Rohan and Bebo are surprise and happy to see Ved

Rohan & Bebo: Ved Bua (little loud)

Ved (having her fingers on her lips) shhhhhhhhh quiet you too,

Rohan & Bebo: ok bua

Ved: good (looking at them) are you guys hungry (R&B nod) here take the popcorn (they take it and leave)

Karu (sees them) where did you get the popcorn from

Bebo: mom microwave (they put it down and leave)

Prem: smart kids got it from me

Jassi: be quiet

Ved: smart kids (she gives them some jalebi with napkin)
Rohan & Bebo come in the family room sit next to Prem and Purab

Prem" where did you get that from

Rohan: cachu from bua (bebo steps on his foot)

Rohan: ouch

Very one turns their heads and says shhhhhhh

Ved walks into the family room silently and quietly with the tray that has jalebi and parsad and puts it on the table and takes one Jalebi and goes behind the sofa n touches Purab's shoulder. Purab Bebo Prem Rohan Vedant are in one sofa.

Purab: (looks around) Prem did you touch me

Prem no Bhaiya

Then she hits Vedant

Vedant: Prem did you hit me

Prem: no why everyone is blaming me (Rohan and Bebo giggle) Then she touches Prem and then Purab grabs her
hand. HE looks around and is surpised to see Vedika.

Purab: Vedika tum

Vedika: puts a finger on her mouth, and gives me a jalebi

Purab: thanks,

Prem and Vedant: what about ours Vedika goes to the table and gives them that and she goes and sits between
Purab and Prem and takes Bebo in her lap.

Arun( gets up ) Its 8:00pm Vedika hasn't arrived

Prem: Papa look closely (Arun faces him and he is surpised to see Vedika)

Arun: Vedika beti (everyone looks)

Vedika: Papa (she gets up and goes and hugs him)

Arun: where were you

Vedika: Papa I was here and sorrie my cell didn't work, and there was lots of traffic

Arun: its ok beta, I was worried about you

Uma: see Vedika has come and his anger is gone.

Vedika gives everyone the parsad and the jalebi and snacks they watch movie

Vedika: Niks di where are Di and jiju

Niks: they went to somewhere

Vedika: love birds disappeared interesting
Everyone watchs the movie and they eat dinner and play games and go to sleep.

Coming Up
Love birds and Romance

great ziddi cont soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz like with also dhurv and ved

guys my story will be about dhruv and vedika but it will take time because my story is about family ties, love between a brother and sister, sister and sister, husband n wife, parents to kids.

My story is about Vedika, Niharika and Disha and their love and life 😉

ziddi that was really lovely. 👏

that was really cool of vedika sneeking in 😆

Awesome story! I especially loved the begining when the kids called Vedika Mom! fabulous job! keep it up, please update soon Ziddi!

Part 23
Dk takes Disha on a motorbike couple minutes away from the farmhouse.

Disha: dk where are we going?

Dk: dishu jaanu plz wait?

Disha: ok but i have to say riding a motorcycle in the rain is funshe has her hands out and opens it so her hands and get wet

Dk: Disha hold me tight

Disha: jaanu don't be scared nothing will happen

Dk: we have arrived

He stops the motorcycle and gets out and Disha also gets out but its starts to rain. Disha lets go of Dk's hand and plays in the rain

Dk: Disha come on lets go indide

Disha (nodding her face like a kid)no dk me like the rain. Dk runs to the cottage porch and watches her from there. She spins herself around the rain and she is moving her arms and she is enjoying herself. Her salwar kamez has become transparent

Disha stops then she notices that Dk is not there then somebody kisses her neck from the back, and she is getting shivers on her spine and she is walking away from him and he holds her hand and starts kissing her and comes and slowly kisses her neck but she runs but her duppata gets stuck in his watch

Dk pulling Disha closely to him and going near her ear singing
Tum Paas Aaye Yoon Muskaraye (pulling Disha closly with her duppta)
Tumne Na Jaane Kya Sapne Dikhaye (and grabs her hand and twirls her around and she lands into his arm and his face is burried in her hair 😳 )

Ab To Mera Dil Jaage Na Sota Hai (kissing her ear)
Kya Karoon Haye Kuchh Kuchh Hota Hai (then lets go of her hand where she spins and he opens his hand so he can also enjoy the rain)

Disha (running to him) Ye Ishq Jaane Kaise Hua
Becheiniyon Mein Mann
Na Jaane Kyon Aane Laga

Dk:Tanhai Mein Dil Yaadein Sanjota Hai Kya Karoon Haye Kuchh Kuchh Hota Hai and Dk picks her up and twirls her around and takes her inside the cottage.

When they enter Disha is suprised to see that the cottage is lighted with candles and there is a table set for two and she looks at Dk and he nods his head in a yes and then Dk gives her a black dress. then Disha goes to the restroom and changes and Dk also changes when he turns around and he a beatiful disha wearing a strapless black knee length dress and he is shocked and he gives her a red roses and she smiles and takes it. They eat dinner and Dk puts slow music on and they dance in a cute way where Disha trips a little bit but Dk holds her and they are staring into eachother's eyes romanticly 😳 and then slowly and slowly dk pulls her up and starts kissing her and then he carries her and puts her down on the bed and slowly and slowly the sences fade way.

The End!
This part was planned by Dk and when Disha was playing in the rain he went inside to light the candles. 😉

plz cont soon. [=D>] [=D>] [=D>] [=D>] [=D>]

sweet of DK, hope to see what happens when Dhruv learns about Vedika! 😃