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Hey every1 Im updating afta a very long tyme, im really sori couldn't update been really busy wid studies, Im posting da 2 parts nw and da last 3 parts i will post dem asap, I totally lost da plot of dis fanfic didn't no wah 2 write, im updating afta ages 4 ma wonderful readers I hope ur happy nw Harji although its really crap i have lot ma creativity in writin.

Part 82

Every1 was singing and dancing and enjoying the holi party, nw we c da servant giving out bhang and drinks to all da guest Angad and Ammy were talkin

Ammy- Uno wah Angad Laibas nt even givin me a chance 2 talk, shes 2 busy wid dat stupid idiot Sammy🤢 duno y he came ere, he ruined ma day😡

Angad- Chill out Ammy hes just a m8 k u dnt need 2 be dah jealous calm dwn

Ammy- I duno hw u do it man ur such a hero u luv Kripa and u c her wid Shabd everyday hw do u tolerate it

Angad- Coz she luvs Shabd and he luvs her bck so I'm happy in her happiness

Ammy- Well Angad Im not nyce like u I wont sacrifice my luv 4 any1, Im gwin 2 sort dah Sammy out, he finks hes so cool he hasn't met Ammy yet ders no1 cool den me

Angad- Ammy ur overreacting der just m8s, u gta learn 2 trust da person u luv

Ammy- I do trust Laiba 100% I just dnt trust dah not so cool Sammy, anyways Angad Im gna geh gwin now will sort him out, look at him hangin around wid my Laiba

Ammy goes to talk 2 Sammy and Laiba meanwhile we c Kripa and Shabd talkin

Shabd- Kripa I want us 2 geh married soon, once we geh bck 2 Manhattan gna tell my uncle and aunty 2 talk 2 ur parents

Kripa- I dnt fink Im ready 2 geh married Shabd its 2 early, we haven't even finished colij and uni yet, we cnt geh married Shabd wahs rong wid u

Shabd- Kripa we can study as well afta we geh married

Kripa- No its embarrassing plz Shabd can we change da topic, we gt a long tyme 2 discuss all dis

Shabd- Kripa u do luv me tell me

Kripa- I do luv u plz try and understand my point of view its 2 early yet

Just den Madan cmz

Madan- Hey Kripa I was findin u everywer der u r wel im gwin bck 2 Manhattan in 2dys, my company won da best business award, uno wah my dad is handling all da business 2 me, u both r invited plz do cm

Kripa- Congrats Madan we will cm Im a lil confused we aint even graduated yet hw u gna handle da business

Madan- We have ages ago u cnt remember I will tell u all bout it (Interuptted)

Shabd- Madan we gta go Kripa Nanima is callin u lehs go

Kripa- Buh Shabd (Interrupted)

Shabd- Lehs go excuse us Madan

Shabd and Kripa left Madan smiled evilly

Nw we c Ammy, Laiba and Sammy talkin

Ammy- Laiba I need 2 talk 2 u lehs go

Laiba- I dnt want to go wid u Ammy

Sammy- Ammy y dnt u go urself and leave Laiba alone

Ammy- Oi do uno who i am

Sammy- Yh ur Ammy da illiterate who dnt understand English

Ammy- Oi shut ur mouth dnt call me a illiterate, Laiba my best friend

Sammy- I fink u gt dah rong shes my best friend

Ammy- Laiba tell him ur my best friend

Laiba didn't speak Ammy gt angry and left

Nw we c sm1 talkin to da waiter

Sm1- Nw listen carefully give dis drink 2 dah guy over der k hes name is Shabd

Waiter- Ok

Nw we c Tanz and Lucky fyting and chasing each other

Tanz- Stop it Lucky dnt u dare put colour on ma hair, u ruined my whole outfit

Lucky- So u ruined ma face u mde me look like a cartoon, u wait der

Da waiter was gwin 2 give Shabd da drink Tans accidently pushed da waiter, he fell on da floor and all the drinks spilled

Lucky- Oi Tanz wait der im gna geh u

Tanz- Nah dnt fink so on dah

Meanwhile we c Alisha upstairs in her room, she was upset if she didn't go wid her Aunty she would hurt da person she luvs, she decides to talk 2 Sujal

She goes to Sujal room he was smoking weed

Alisha- Sujal I need 2 talk 2 u bout smefing important

Sujal- Nt ryte nw Alisha I told u wen im smoking u dnt talk 2 me k and u dnt cm anywer near ma room k

Alisha- Plz Sujal its very important u gta listen 2 me

Sujal- I told u Alisha same rule applies 2 u as well I will talk 2 u l8ter GO AWAY!!!!!!!!!!

Alisha- Buh Sujal I (Interupted)

Sujal- WAH DID I SAY GO AWAY (he dragged her out da room and locked his door)

Alisha was really upset she went crying to her room

Alisha- (to herself) I luv u Sujal buh i dnt fink u luv me, u luv ur profession ur neva gna change, its no point in tellin u anyfing I'm gna go

Alisha decides to leave she packs her bags and rings sm1 and books a flight to London

Alisha- So wen does da flight leave

Person- 2mrw evenin

Alisha- Havent u gt anyfin earlier

Person- No Sorry!

Alisha- K dahs fine fanks a lot

Meanwhile we c sm1 talkin 2 da waiter

Sm1- U idiot y didn't u give him da drink

Waiter- Sorri Sir da drink fell

Sm1- U Fool 4geh it I will do smefing myself (he rings sm1) Ayt u gt da plan every1s in da garden and in da house and no1s in da outhouse so uno wah 2 do ryte

Sm1- Yes sir I do

Sm1- Very Gd James

James was da new security guard of da outhouse he worked 4 Kripas Nanima Mrs Veena Sengupta, he was very cunning and evil he can do anyfing 4 money

Wahs James gna do????????

Part 83

Sukriti, Mayank, Nupur, Dia were all very happy they were dancing 2 da holi songs, Sammy made Laiba dance as well she was very happy. Ammy wasn't happy at all seeing Sammy and Laiba 2geva

Angad- Oi wahs rong y u so angry

Ammy- Angad ur sista seriously i cnt stand her hw dare she nt say im her best friend infront of da Sammy look at her nw shes dancing wid him no1 cares bout me I dnt like dis

Angad- Relax der just m8s u calm dwn k

Kumkum cmz

Kumkum- Wahs rong Ammy beta ur very quiet 2dy, go and dance and u Angad enjoy urselfs

Angad- I have gt a headache mom so im just restin

Kumkum- Did u have medicine

Angad- Jee Mom I had Paracetomol

Kumkum- Ok wah bout u Ammy?

Ammy- Aunty im nt in da mood

Kumkum- Y wahs happened?

Meanwhile we c Kripa and Shabd talkin

Kripa- Shabd y dnt u lot stay in da house wid all of us

Shabd- Uno hw my uncle and aunty are they dnt like it, so I told Nanima da outhouse is fine 4 us

Kripa- Shabd I 4gt 2 ask u I wana read Breaking Dawn did u bring it 4 me

Shabd- Yh I bought it, u read Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse so quick

Kripa- Yh its so interesting uno wah I was Team Edward, buh after watchin New Moon and Eclipse Im Team Jacob hes Gurjus

Shabd- Im so beta den dah vampire Edward and wolf Jacob god sake Kripa der characters ur madly in luv wid dem

Just den Alisha came

Alisha- Hey u lot k

S/K- Yh wer fine hw r u? Wer were u all dah tyme?

Alisha- I was in ma room anyways Shabd did u geh ma books da Vampire Diaries

Shabd- Yh bought dem

Alisha- K Fanks

Just den Sam came

Sam- Hey Alisha u ok?

Alisha- Yh Im fine

Sam- Shabd did u collect da dvds da Vampire Diaries season 1, I cnt wait 2 watch it Stefan and Damon r so Hot

Shabd- Yes Yes I collected everyfing i just went 2 da post office to send sm business letters, and u lot were like we ordered sm stuff collect it 4rm da post office, i bought i will go and geh it (Interupted)

Rob- Shabd listen yh Nanima is callin u shes over der waitin she wants 2 talk 2 u

Shabd- K im gwin

Alisha- Shabd gimme ur room key i will go and geh it

Kripa- Yh i will go wid u Alisha I cnt wait 2 c ma book

Shabd- K heres ma room key

Alisha- K Fanks

Alisha and Kripa go outside just den Angad and Ammy cm

A/A- Wer u lot gwin?

A/K- 2 da outhouse 2 geh sm stuff

Angad- Oh K

Kripa- Wahs rong Ammy? Y u so upset

Ammy- Its a long stori (Interupted)

Alisha- U lot talk I will brb

Kripa- K

Angad, Ammy and Kripa stood outside da outhouse and Alisha went 2 da outhouse and she went straight upstairs 2 geh da books and dvds 4rm Shabds room, she gt da books and dvds and suddenly da room door shut and der was fire everywer. Da servant in da outhouse came running

Servant- Ders a fire

A/A/K- Wah???

They so da window upstairs smoke was cmin out da room

Kripa- Alishas in der

Kripa, Angad and Ammy ran upstairs

Angad- Kripa u go dwnstairz and (interrupted)

Kripa- No Angad u fool cnt u c Alishas in der ders fire everywer move leh me open da door

Ammy rang da fire service

Kripa opened da door and wen inside and so did Angad

Kripa- Alisha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Alisha!!!!!!!!!!!

Angad- Alisha!!!!!!!!!!

Kripa so Alisha unconscious on da floor, Alisha arm had burnt badly, Ammy went inside

Ammy- Da fireservice should be cmin wer r u lot? Angad, Kripa

Angad- Wer ere?

Kripa- Alisha geh up plz!!!!!!!! (Kripa was getting a really bad headache after seein all dis she fainted)

Ammy picked Alisha up and out da room, da fire was getting worse

Ammy- Angad hurry up watch da ceiling

***
They took Alisha and Kripa to the Rocky View General Hosptial. All da family was der Sujal was really worried he was walkin back and fourth da doctor came out

Sujal went runnin 2 da doc

Sujal- Doctor hws ma Sista Kripa and hws Alisha

Doc- Der both out of danger wer gna keep dem 4 observation u can meet dem inabit wer gna shift dem both in da ward

Sujal- Fank god fank u doctor

Doc- Ur welcm dw

After a couple of hours

Nurse- Excuse is Mr Sujal Garewal here his Sista Kripa is callin him in

Dev/Ganga- Our daughter Kripa can we go in plz

Nurse- Yes u can

Every1 goes in

Kripa- Bruv der u r wahs all dis wah da hell am i dwin in da hospital

Shabd- Kripa hw r u feelin nw?

Kripa- im fine bruv Who r u? Bruvs who r dese people da whole famo cm 2geva i dnt even no who they are wers Alisha, Sam, Rob , Lucky and Tanz

Sujal- Relax Kripa

Nurse- Can u all plz leave

Da famo goes out da doc explains Kripas memorys bck and she doesn't remember her family

TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!

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Please check the next page for the summary of the story so far.
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Edited by Angad-Kripa#1 - 15 years ago
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Jab Dil Churaye Koi Summary

Kripa Malhotra youngest daughter of the rich Malhotra family in Manhattan was sent to London to study when the love of her life, Shabd Sareen died. There she met Sujal and the lot. He and his gang helped her get through the hard times. Kripa got involved in drugs, drinking and joined Sujal's gang.
Kripa had to return to Manhattan when her older sister Anjali was getting married to Angad Khanna's older brother Kavya. Sujal and the rest of the gang accompanied her.
At the engagement, Angad had an instant liking to Kripa.
On a trip to Calgary, Canada Kripa had an accident causing her to lose her memory. There she met Madan, who was a classmate when she was in school. Madan not only had a crush on Kripa but he also was a rival of her and Sujal's gang.
Her parents got worried about Kripa when she started asking about Shabd, and took her to Italy for a small vacation to distract her. Sujal, the gang and Angad's family had also joined them.
Due to her memory loss, she became great friends with Angad and found him to be a sweet guy.
On a pivate concert that Angad was performing at, Kripa saw Shabd who was also performing there.
Shabd after finding out about her memory loss was upset.
Slowly Kripa starts saying stuff that the old Kripa would say unknowingly.
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Edited by Angad-Kripa#1 - 15 years ago
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AMAZING update di!! The Twilight parts had me smiling like a idiot but the The Vampire Diaries..when it was mentioned...i was jumping up and down. I don't like Shabd anymore for some reason. He's so desperate to get married.

Oooo Armaan is jealous. Lubb him!! What is up with Laiba? I don't like that Sammy guy. Take him out Di.😡😆 Anyways, i wouldn't mind taking care of my poor Armaan and Angad you know.😉😆
Well...i can't believe it! So many villians! You have too many di. Stupid James. And aww Poor Alisha and Kripa.
Sujal is soo meann!! I feel sooo bad for Alisha. And what?? Kripa's forgotten her family? UGH! wow. Wonderful update di! I loved it!
Update soon and PM me.
*Jot*
Edited by Angad-Kripa#1 - 15 years ago
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tht was sooooooooo awesome anam longggggg time no updates
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after so many years!!!lol.. im just kidding.. thanks for the pm.. or i'd miss out on a great part..

she doesnt remember anyone but that means she remembers angad??omg... continue soon!
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Part 83

Dev- WAT!!!!!

Ganga started crying

Ganga- Doctor der must be smefing u can do plz

Doctor- Wel ders nuffin we can do wer givin her sm medicines, we cnt do mre den dah plz atm we dnt want any stress 4 da patient so u have 2 calm dwn plz dnt cry

Ganga- Doctor wah do u mean calm dwn she sma daughter i need 2 be wid her (she started crying more)

Dev- Ganga plz

Sujal so all dis he was very upset

Shabd is very upset also buh not coz Kripa don't remember her parents coz she dnt remember him

The story goes 2 month ahead Sujal goes to the hospital to c Kripa

Sujal- Hw r u Kripa? Hw u feelin?

Kripa- Im fine Sujal i want 2 meet my Mom and Dad I duno y wahs hapnin i miss dem can u call dem bruv plz

Sujal- (Happily) Yh i will straight away dw Lucky, Tanz u lot go and sit wid Alisha and Rob and Sam u lot sit wid Kripa wel I will go and call Uncle and Aunty

Lucky/Tanz/Sam/Rob- K Bruv

Dev and Ganga cm they hugged Kripa

D/G- Hw r u beta

Kripa- Im fine Mom, Dad I duno wahs rong my head hurts it looks like im 4getin a lot of fings, da doc gave me med and talked 2 me bout ma parents, hw i refused to meet dem sayin i duno dem im sori i duno wah happened 2 me

D/G- Relax beta dw wer here

Shabd- I need to remind Kripa hw can she 4geh me

Angad- Shabd I dnt fink u should talk bout dese fings at da moment plz Kripa still aint well

Shabd- U dnt understand Angad I gt a career uno I have to go Italy I wana marry Kripa and tke her wid me 2 Italy

Angad- WAT? I fought ur gna settle in Manhattan

Shabd- No I tried buh its nt possible I cnt postpone all my concerts

Angad- Ur concerts aren't important den Kripa u need to give her tyme 2 recover

Shabd- I have 2 months its nearly 3 months nxt week, I need to talk 2 her, Uno she remember you

Angad- Yh coz I met her at Bruva weddin she remembered everyfing 4rm da last 2 yrz

Shabd- Yh i been tryin 2 tell her buh she don't even want 2 talk 2 me 2dy im gna show her all our photos, videos, maybe she remembers

Just den Sujal came

Sujal- No Shabd u cant I told a few days ago as well u cnt remind her k its nt gd for her der gna discharge her 2mrw wer gwin home k den wil c k wah 2 do

Angad- Yh Sujals ryte

Shabd- (Angrily) No I cnt wait i gta talk 2 her 2dy

Sujal-(Angrily) I told u no u cnt meet her until 2mrw go home

Sujal mde Shabd go

Angad- Wahs rong wid Shabd? Hes acting weird since da incident happened

Sujal- Ino im nt gna leh him meet Kripa, Uncle and Aunty r inside u go and sit wid her Im gwin 2 c Alisha der discharging her 2dy

Angad- Hey Kripa u ok?

Kripa- Yh Im k much beta u ayt?

Angad- Yh Im k

Kripa- Angad wens Anjali Di and Kavya Jiju cmin

Angad- Der cmin 2nyte flight to Calgary der will meet u in da morning den wer all gwin bck 2 Manhattan

Kripa- Are u cmin 2

Angad- Yh wer all gwin Ammy, Laiba, Sujal Bruv, Lucky, Alisha, Tanz, Sam, Rob, Uncle and Aunty every1s cmin

Kripa- Dahs gna be gr8

In the past 2 months Angad and Kripa were very close friends, Kripa didn't talk much 2 Shabd he tried 2 remind her of dem buh she couldn't remember a fing and dah annoyed Shabd a lot, he didn't like Angad and Kripa being close friends, Sujal and Shaz always stayed in hospital wid Kripa buh 2dy they didn't stay coz Kripa told dem she will be fine

Its 11pm nw in Rockyview hospital. We c Shabd cmin into hospital

Nurse- Im sori sir visitin tyme are finished

Shabd- I really need 2 visit her plz i had a bad dream bout Kripa (he had tears in his eyes)

Nurse- K go just 10 minz plz k

Shabd- Fanks Nurse

Shabd went inside and Kripa was asleep, Shabd holded Kripas hand and she got up

Kripa- WAH U DWIN ERE SHABD? LEAVE MA HAND I TOLD U I DNT LIKE ALL DIS

Shabd- SORI U HAVE 2 LISTEN 2 ME 2DY I HAD ENOUGH FOR DA PAST 2 AN HALF MONTHS LOOK AT DESE PICTURES, VIDEOS, REMEMBER JUST ME AND U NO 3RD PERSON I LUV U KRIPA AND U LUV ME COZ OF DAH INCIDENTS (HE TELLS HER WAH HAPPENED) U 4GT ME MY LUV EVERYFING, U ONLI REMEMBER DA LAST 2-3 YRZ OF UR LYFE WAHS RONG WID U CNT 4GEH ME

Kripa- SHURRUP!!!!!! I DNT BELIEVE ALL DIS KRIPA DOESNT LUV ANY1 U UNDERSTAND TKE DESE PICTURES AND GO AWAY

Shabd- (Angrily) WAH DO U MEAN GO AWAY IM GNA TKE U WID ME 2DY DIS INSTANT (he grabbed Kripas hand)

Kripa- NO I DNT FINK SO LEAVE MA HAND (Kripa punched Shabd)

Hearing all da noise da nurse came

Nurse- Wahs gwin on ere

Kripa- Nurse hes annoyin me tell him 2 leave i dnt want to go wid him anywer

Shabd- KRIPA I WONT LEH U BE WID DAH ANGAD EVA

Kripa- Shurrup Shabd, Angads a M8 onli k geh out i dnt need to explain maself 2 u

Shabd leaves

Doctor came

Doc- Miss Kripa calm dwn I will give u injection

Da doc gave Kripa injection and she went 2 sleep

Nw we c Kumkum talking to Ammy and Angad

Laiba cmz

Laiba- Mom Im hungry

Kumkum- Beta its 11.30pm wah do u want

Laiba- Well as its rainin i want hot hot jalebi

Kumkum- K I will mke it

Ammy- Laiba we were talkin 2 Aunty u ruined our convo

Angad- Yh uno Mom is fixin Ammy rishtha

Laiba- WAT!

Ammy- Yh uno wid Shilpa shes really beautiful uno, yh i gt sm gd news 4 u as well Auntu is also planning ur rishtha wid sm guy wahs his name again Angad

Angad- Yh Rahul

Laiba- Wat no way i aint getting married

Kumkum- Beta ur Tayji was sayin buh i told dem I will ask u, Angad and Ridhima wedding will happene once we get home den ur engagement

Laiba- NO WAYS!!! AMMY, ANGAD BRUV UR NOT SAYIN ANYFIN

Ammy- Oi wah shall i say man im so lookin 4ward 2 meet Shilpa, dw dah Rahul is perfect 4 u

TO BE CONTINUED.......

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xAnamx
Edited by Angad-Kripa#1 - 15 years ago
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wowow tht was niceeeeeee i love it
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OMG! Shabd is an ***! I hate him. Whys he so desperate? Hmm? And AWWWW Angad lub you!! He cannot get married to Ridhima! Armaan and Riddhima are meant to be!

Laiba's funny. I like Sujal now. LOL Pushy Shabd...pushy. LOL
Update soon and PM me.
*Jot*
Edited by Angad-Kripa#1 - 15 years ago

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