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Part 84

Laiba- Waheva!! I dnt care Mom I aint getting married 2 any1

Kumkum- Y Beta U have to geh married 1 day either its dis yr or nxt, Rahul is a nyce guy, uno wat even Summit likes him

Ammy- Yh Uncle agrees Rahul perfect 4 u, uno hes such a nerdy geek type, so waheva u say he will listen 2 ya quietly, so I suggest u say yes 2 da ristha

Angad- Yh Laiba hes perfect

Laiba- If hes perfect den y dnt u 2 marry him, I aint marryin him (she goes angrily 2 her room)

Ammy, Kumkum and Angad couldn't stop laughing

Kumkum- Beta plan is wrkin Laiba is angry

Angad- Yh dah she is

Ammy- Shes also a lil jealous 2

Kumkum- Yh Ammy beta ders no1 perfect den u, I'm glad u told us dah u like Laiba wel try 2 convince her u dnt wori, im very happy as soon as Angad and Ridhima geh married, den wel geh Laiba and u married

Ammy- Dahs gr8 Aunty Im very happy

Angad- Shurrup Ammy I told u I dnt want 2 geh married dah early plz mom

Kumkum- Sori Beta u have to wer all very happy, u lot talk I will go and make jalebi

Ammy- Aunty Im cmin as wel I want sm Pakoreh

Kumkum- K beta I wil mke it

Ammy- Aunty I will help u cmin Angad

Angad- Yh

Nw we c every1 in Laiba room

Kumkum- Laiba beta heres ur hot jalebi and uno Ammy mde Pakoreh

Laiba- Fanks Mom (she hugged her)

Angad- Nw stop being angry and eat

Ammy- Eat as much as u want uno wen u get married 2 Rahul, u wont get any jalebi der Aunty makes da best jalebi

Angad- Yh Ammys ryte bout dah

Laiba- I told u im nt marryin dah Rahul dnt like him

Ammy- Cm on Laiba u aint even seen him yet hes ur type

Laiba- Shurup Ammy, Bruv Mom tell them they wont let me eat

Kumkum- U lot be quiet and let ma daughter eat, u both eat 2

Laiba- Mom all da jalebi is myne Bruv and Ammy aren't havin any only u can Mom they aren't allowed

Ammy- Oi dah aint fair gimme sm

Laiba- No!

Kumkum- K beta u lot eat Im gna go sleep nw im very tired, mke sure u put da dishes bck in da kitchen

Laiba- K Mom

Kumkum went 2 her room

Angad- K guys im gna geh gwin nw im tired gta go hospital 2mrw 2 c Kripa shes getting discharged, Dad was sayin wer gwin bck 2 Manhattan 2mrw nytes flight wid Kripa and dem wer all gna go 2geva

Ammy- Yh cnt wait 2 go bck

Laiba- Same ere ayt bruv nyte Ammy u go as well

Ammy- Nah im gna sit here wid u 4 a while im nt sleepy

Angad- K u sit Ammy Im gwin sleep nyte

A/L- Nyte

Angad went 2 his room

Laiba was eatin jalebi and watchin TV happily she was watchin her favourite movie Twilight and Ammy was smiling seeing Laiba happy

Laiba noticed dis

Laiba- Ammy y r u smiling

Ammy- Im smiling at Bella

Laiba- I fought u h8 Bella

Ammy- Nah i dnt h8 her nw uno she reminds me of Shilpa shes so beautiful

Laiba- (Angrily) Well gd 4 u Ammy I dnt want 2 no

Ammy- Y u getting jealous Laiba

Laiba- No y should i be jealous its nt like ur Edward or Jacob, u aint dah special Ammy

Ammy- Im way beta den Edward and Jacob

Just den Tayaji came

Tayaji- Armaan

Ammy- Jee Tayaji

Tayaji- Beta bahuth der hogayi jo jakar sojoa aur Laiba tum bhi sojoa TV band karoh beta

A/L- Jee Tayaji

Ammy- (to himself) Tayaji had 2 cm nw ruined every1

The nxt day we c every1 in hospital Kripa was getting discharged, all da gang, Kripas family, Angads family was der every1 was very happy Kripa was getting discharged

Kripa- So wen we gwin home

Sujal- We will be gwin home 2nyte flight straight 2 Manhattan

Kripa- Cnt wait 2 go home I was so sik of stayin in hospital, wers Alisha?

Sujal- Yh she waitin 4 u at home at ur Nani house

Kripa- Oh k so wen wer gwin

Sujal- Just waitin 4 da Doc 2 cm wid ur discharge papers and medicines

Kripa- K

Lucky- Bruv da doc is calling u in da office

Sujal- K I will brb

Sujal goes to talk 2 da Doc and he tells him wah happened last nyte

Sujal- K fanks Doc

Doc- Its nt gd 4 da patient all dis buh he can try hw much he wants her memory is finally bck and I dnt fink shes gna remember anyfin 4rm da past 6-7 yrz she only remember her recent 2 yrs

Sujal- Fanks Doc

Nw we c every1 in Kripa grandmothers house

Veena/Alisha- Welcm Home Kripa

Kripa- Fanks (she hugged dem both)

Angad- Kripa dese r 4 u

Kripa- Fanks Angad der beautiful my favourite flowers, Fanks every1 4 organising me a surprise welcm party

Veena- Ur welcm Beta ur leaving 2nyte ur gwin bck 2 Manhattan gna miss u a lot mke sure u look afta urself

Kripa- I will Nanima u dnt wori

Veena- Yh 1 mre fing afta Josh wedding I want ur wedding 2 happen, im cmin Manhattan nxt week

Kripa- Nanima marriage and me doesn't go no I dnt fink i will be getting married

Veena- Dw beta wel fynd u sm1 nyce i have few rishthas in mynd

Kripa- No Nanima Im nt ready 4 marriage

Ganga- Mama, cm here plz

Veena- Beta I will brb

Kripa- Angad have u seen Sujal Bruv anywer

Angad- No y wah happened

Kripa- I need a fag

Angad- Kripa u had 1 b4 we came home its bad uno u sed u would try 2 quit so u sed u will only have 2-3 fags a day u promised

Kripa- Yh ino Angad buh its difficult its an addiction i need it im nuffin widout it

Angad- Kripa u have to fyte wid urself its very harmful 2 ur health, u promised so u cnt

Kripa- Im tryin Angad its very hard 4 me not 2 smoke dah much i use to have 8-9 fags a day

Angad- I promise Kripa everyfing will be fine u will start 2 quit once u start havin less fags have 2-3 dy den 2 a day, den 1 a day den eventually u wont need dem

Kripa- Its easy 2 say Angad buh hard 2 do have u ever tried smoking its an addiction

Angad- Yh i have trust me its horrible it took me atleast gd 2 years 2 quit, uno hw i quit Laiba tried a fag and gt really ill and she was serious uno shes asthmatic already she so it in ma room and she tried it she was in school den, i realized wah harm a fag could do so i quit i luv ma sista more den anyfin

Kripa- Yh Angad buh nt every1 is like u, wer all different Im gna try ma best 2 quit

Angad- (Smiled) Dw u will quit i wil help u

Every1 was enjoyin da party nw we c Sujal and Alisha talkin

Sujal- Alisha im really sori u stil aint 4given me

Alisha- No Sujal ders nuffin like dah i have 4given u, u aint ever gna change u luv ur profession, Its ma fault dah I actually fought maybe my luv could change u, buh no it aint so im gwin Manhattan gna geh ma stuff and im leavin im gwin London 4ever

Sujal- Alisha u cnt leave Kripa just cm out of hospital and (Interrupted)

Alisha- Ino she will understand I will talk 2 her once we geh Manhattan u dw bout dah

Sujal- Alisha dnt do dis plz stay

Alisha- Y should i stay Sujal give me 1 gd reason y?

Sujal- Coz I LUV U!!!!

PART 85-Below.....

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Part 85

Alisha- U luv me no I dnt believe dah u dnt luv any1 besides ur profession

Sujal- Alisha ur getting it all rong I luv u a lot since ages buh just couldn't confess ma feelings

Alisha- Cm on Sujal u dnt luv any1 besides ur profession if u did luv me u would quit all dese deals and try and live life normally wid no drugs, no fags, no deals, u would also tell every1 else 2 quit as well buh no u aint gna do dah

Sujal- Look Alisha if dah makes u stay once we geh bck in Manhattan i promise i will quit everyfing, all of us will be 2geva like we always have da difference will be dah dis tyme der wont be any illegal drugs deals i promise plz don't leave me I luv u

Alisha- Sujal its easy 4 u 2 say all dis buh hard 2 do wen u do all dis den I will believe u

Alisha leaves

Sam heard all dis

Sam- Bruv wahs all dis u didn't really mean all dah did ya

Sujal- No im serious Im gna quit all dis nw and gna live lyfe like normally, all of u will as well all of u r my responsibility and if i quit all of u are gna quit as well wid me

Sam- Buh Bruv (Interrupted)

Sujal-(Angrily) I dnt want No 4 a answer wel discuss dis wen we geh bck 2 Manhattan, i dnt want to lose Alisha shes done alot 4 us and (Interrupted)

Sam- Ino Bruv we dnt either wel do waheva u say bruv dw

Sujal- Fanks very gd I will go and c Kripa u seen her wer is she

Sam- Shes talkin 2 Angad they mke a gr8 couple bruv

Sujal- Yh ino I was finkin dah 2 nw dah Shabd is out of da way, Angad is da best choice 4 Kripa wel talk bout dis wen we geh bck 2 Manhattan

Sam- K Bruv

Nw we c Shazy and Angad talkin

Shaz- Wel Angad bruv y dnt u sing us a song

Angad- Nw Shaz I dnt fink (Interupted)

Kripa- Yh Angad y dnt u sing

Angad- K

Shaz- Dahs nyce Bruv as soon as Kripa Di sed to u 2 sing u sed yes straight away erm (Interrupted)

Kripa- Shaz leave it nw yh he sed he wil sing so Angad wah u singin

Shaz- Yh Bruv wah u singin

Angad- Yh u will c

Shaz- K den Every1 can I have ur attention please Angad Bruv is gwin 2 sing us a song so every1 can u please give him ur full attention

Angad sang Chahata Dil Tumko Tum Nahiye Jante (4rm da movie shaapit ma favourite song sori couldn't fynd da lyrics 2 it)

Every1 clapped and da party finished den every1 went bck 2 Manhattan

The story goes another 3 months ahead

TO BE CONTINUED........

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the both parts are awesome
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very cute.. thanks for the pm.. everyone sees how good of a couple they are..lol.. now its left for krpa to realize and ridz to get out of the way:D:D
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Part 86

The story goes ahead 6 months

We c Manhattan a lot of fings had changed Sujal stopped doing drug deals, he was now working in Kripas Dad's business, all the gang is also working and every1 is tryin 2 quit smoking, Angad and Kripa have become close friends, Kripa also works in her Dads business, Josh and Aliyah have gt married, nw every1 wants Kripa 2 geh married

Ganga- Beta u can atleast meet da guy

Kripa- Mom cm on plz i told u im nt getting married, Dad ur nt sayin anyfing i fought u said we weren't gna talk bout dis again

Dev- Beta i understand ur point buh ur nanima is insisting u meet dis guy, I have already said no buh ur nanima is not listenin so i said i will try talkin 2 u

Ganga- Beta der is no harm in meetin the guy wer nt gna force u into marriage wer just sayin u meet him k

Kripa- No dahs my final answer

Sujal- KRIPA!!!!

Kripa- Yh Bruv nw u have cm 2 argue wah is it

Sujal- Wel u gta have to meet dis guy ok Nanima has personally met him and has chosen him 4 u k, I agree completely wid Nanima its bout tyme u settled dwn

Kripa- U wah so ur tryin to say i should geh married

Sujal- Yh buh im not sayin wivout ur permission u can meet da guy den decide k

Kripa- No Bruv dah isn't dne

Just den Lucky came

Lucky- Y u shoutin 4 Bruv i could u hear 4rm da garden, y dnt u lot just leave Kripa alone nw she doesn't even do anyfin rong so y do u lot have2 ruin everyfin marriage no way nobody wants responsibility

Kripa- Fanks Lucky finally sm1 agrees wid me so u gt ma answer im gwin

Sujal- No Kripa u gta meet da guy

D/G- Yh beta u have to we told ur nanima u would

Kripa- FINE!!!! I will meet da loser, buh I aint marryin any1 until Sujal Bruv gets married hes older den me so he should get married

Lucky- Yh dahs ryte

Sujal- Shurrup Lucky!!!! Wer did i cm in all dis

Kripa- Ur supportin Mom and Dad so yh ur in all dis so nw yh

Sujal- OK!!!! FINE!!!! I will geh married k

Lucky fainted

Kripa- Lucky geh up Kanta Massi bring water, ok gr8 Bruv its hard 2 believe buh yh so wen u fynd da girl and geh engaged I will meet da loser

Sujal- Cm on Kripa u gta meet him soon

Kripa- K den get engaged soon dahs da deal

Kripa goes 4rm der and Lucky cnt believe it he tells all da gang, every1 is shocked

Meanwhile we c Khanna Mansion

Summit- ANGAD!!!!! WER R U!!!!!!!!

Ammy cmz

Ammy- Aunty Uncles very angry wah happened

Kumkum- Beta ur Uncle uno hw hes like

Angad cmz dwn

Angad- Wah is it Dad? y u shoutin

Summit- Y im shoutin u were meant to go and receive my business delegates and u were sleeping since u have joined da family business everyfing has gne rong

Angad- Yh wel dahs nt my fault Dad its ur fault u mde me quit my career as a rockstar and mde me join dis business uno im no gd at it, im sori i was sleepin last nyte i was awake I was (Interrupted)

Summit- Yh probz partyin in sm club wah else can u do ur useless (Interrupted)

Kumkum- Summit atleast listen 2 wah Angad has 2 say

Summit- Y should i listen he knew i told him they were cmin

Angad- Look Dad I was workin on da royal hotel project dahs y heres da file look, im sori im not perfect da truth is no1 is perfect, business is nt my cup of tea i quit my career just 4 u, u already had Prem bruv and Kavya bruv handling da business, u mde me quit so i can join dis crap i dnt like it buh im still tryin i cnt be bovered anymre

Angad goes out da house Ammy goes after him

Ammy- Oi Angad calm dwn man

Angad- Dad mkes me angry seriously i tried my best

Ammy- Yh we no dw k relax wahs hapnin bout Ridhima

Angad- Da same old man shes a really gd friend buh uno Dad hes tryin 2 fix our wedding asap

Ammy- Yh we mde up so many excuses and uno wah Angad im running out of ideas nw duno wah 2 do, ur luv story is ruined and so is myne dnt like ur Dad he sent my Laiba all da way 2 Manchester 2 do an extra degree seriously wah was da need

Angad- Uno dah weren't Dad's idea Laiba initially wanted 2 go, u really mde her jealous wid Shilpa she took it all seriously so b4 u could talk 2 her, she told Dad she wanted to go Mamu's house in Manchester and Dad agreed so much rishthe were cmin 4 her i personally fink she went coz of dah

Ammy- Yh could be buh uno wah i been waitin 4 her 4 6 months shes cmin bck soon

Angad- Yh apparently 4 ma weddin Dad wants me 2 geh married in 2 months tyme he tryin 2 fix da dates and dah

Ammy- Gd Luck Angad

Angad- Shurrup Ammy uno wah da gd fing is Ridhima has gone London shes gt a gr8 job der, so im k until she cmz bck

Nw we c Summit on da fone wid sm1

Summit- So wen r u all cmin

Sm1- End of dis week

Summit- Very Gd I will send Angad 2 Airport 2 receive u all, yes yes I will also cm

Nw we c Angad in Gangs house talkin 2 Kripa

Kripa- U wont believe it Nanima likes sm1 4 me uno dah loser is cmin soon, they actually want me 2 geh married uno, can u believe it even Sujal Bruv agrees

Sam- Yh Bruvs lost it

Tanz- U wont believe wah happened afta dah Kripa tell Angad Bruv

Lucky- U gta listen u will laugh so much

Kripa- Uno I sed 2 Sujal Bruv I will meet da loser once u get engaged, uno wah Bruv agreed and uno our Lucky he fainted it was hilarious

Angad couldn't stop laughin

Angad- U serious omg dis is gna be funi so wen bruv getting engaged den

Kripa- Duno i doubt it he will anyways Angad u tell wahs hapnin at urz

Angad- Da usual Dad shoutin at me callin me useless and all, i told him i dnt like Business buh he dnt listen i 4gt 2 receive his business delegates

Kripa- Yh omg Uncle must be angry wid u

Angad- Yh he is

Sujal- Guyz i gt announcement 2 mke Im getting engaged in 2 dys tyme, so im throwing a big party on saturdy in plaza hotel, so afta dah Kripa will meet da guy Nanima has chosen

Every1 was shocked

Kripa- Cm again Bruva wah did ya say

Lucky- U serious

Sam- No ways OMG!!!!

Tanz- Bruv whos da girl

Sujal- Uno her very well she's cmin

Just den sm1 walked in wearing a cream churridar

Lucky- Alisha!!!!!!!

Lucky, Tanz, Sam all went to hug Alisha

Kripa- Alisha ur bck omg (she hugged her) hw r ya

Alisha- Im k

Tanz- Has Rob cm as well

Alisha- Yh hes getting da luggage Sujal proposed me infront of da whole university I was in a lecture uno he truly has changed dahs y i left i was waiting 4 him 2 change im really happy hes changed im really proud of all of u

Kripa- Wer really happy to have u bck

Angad- Yh i missed ya a lot Alisha gt loads 2 tell u

Alisha- Yh me 2 so Kripa whos da guy ur meant 2 meet

Kripa- Dnt ask sm loser dah Nanima has chosen gna meet him afta Sujal Bruvs engagement, i gta call u Bhabhi nw

Tanz- Dah sounds Lame hw bout we just call u Alisha

Lucky- Yh I agree wiv Tanz

Sujal- No u gta call her Bhabhi show respect 2 her k , so Kripa and Angad u 2 r incharge of all da arrangements k

Kripa- (Happily) K Bruv dw wel tke care of everyfing

Angad- Yh

After 2 dys we c Angad and Kripa in Plaza Hotel doing arrangements, Kripa was on da ladder decorating the hall wiv flowers, and Angad was also der, Kripa was bout 2 fall and Angad catched her both of dem were lookin in each other eyes

Nw we c sm1 cmin inside da hall

TO BE CONTINUED.........................

Edited by Anam Ali - 15 years ago
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awesome , mind blowing dear nice to see you back ...thank you for update
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Awwww i loved your update Di!! I'm in love with Lucky! What a guy.. He fainted. And OMG! Sujal and Alisha are together!! GREAT! Ummm....so i hope this is guy is Angad and i have a feeling it is. Or Angad should confess now. The idiot is taking so long to say 3 frickin words. >:(
*Jot*
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tht was soooooooo awesomeeee i like it
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@Monika- Fanks a lot =)
@Brainychild92- Fanks a lot =)
@Harji- Fanks a lot =) u cnt luv Lucky hes mynes k u gta keep readin 2 fynd out
@Shafoo- Fanks a lot =)
Edited by Anam Ali - 15 years ago

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