Jab Dil Churaye Koi (AK)LAST PART PG152 INDEXPG154 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thx a lot😃

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[size-1] Great Start Continue soon 😃 😃 I wonder whos gonna be in the gang
Edited by kripa_angad=luv - 18 years ago
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will post next part soon, if not then its because of raksha bandhan😉

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 18 years ago
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Episode 2

The story goes 2 days ahead

We see Shaz talking to Laiba in Uni who is dressed in this:



Angad and his friends come

Angad- Hey Laiba

Laiba- Hey Bro

Angad- So who's this ur new friend

Laiba- Bro this is Shazmin Malhotra

Angad- Hey Shaz sweetie

Shaz- Hey Bro

Angad- Come again did u say BRO

Shaz- Yeah Bro as ur Laibas Bro so ur my Bro too like My Josh Bro

Vivan- (whispers to Angad) Omg Angad lets go u don't know Josh the last time someone flirted with Shaz he battered him badly, the poor guy left the city lets go

Laiba- Yeah Bro u better leave before I call Josh Bro

Angad and his friends leave and Laiba and Shaz can't stop laughing

Shaz- Laiba ur Bro is such a flirt

Laiba- Yeah that's Angad Bro for u by da way he was only messing

Shaz- Yeah I know Laiba u know I am going London tomorrow with Josh Bro, for a few days to convince Kripa Di to come back for Anjali Dis wedding

Laiba- Shaz ur telling me now

Shaz- Laiba I just found out yesterday I will be back next week I am so looking forward to the wedding, it will happen once Kripa Di is back

Laiba- Yeah me too it will be so much fun Mom, Dad are gonna finalize the engagement soon, they were saying they are gonna talk to ur parents and then call panditji for a good mahuruth

Shaz- Yeah Laiba I gotto go now I have to pack my bag I will miss u

Laiba- Yeah me too cya

Shaz- Cya

Shaz goes home to pack her stuff

Now we see London



We see a big Mansion



A party is going on we hear loud music in da background, and there's smoke everywhere, we see people smoking, drinking and doing drugs.

Now we see a girl and guy arguing

Girl- oi gimme back it aint urs

Guy- u already had more then one shot no more u will lose the plot

Girl- I said gimme it back who gives a damn if I go nuts for now give it back (she snatches it)

Guy- u did not do that just c wat I do

Girl- What ur gonna do huh I care damn now just get lost Lucky u low life loser

Now we see the Girl and Guy there were non other than Lakshya and Taniya

Lakshya- He is 19 yrs old, he is very handsome, hes an drug addict, he is very arrogant and cares and respects no one except for the gang, and he doesn't believe in Love he thinks its total crap, everyone calls him Lucky as Lakshya is old fashioned



Lakshya was wearing this:



Taniya-(Played by Anam on IF) She is 19 yrs old, she's very beautiful, she's a drug addict a member of Kripas gang, she h8s her family, she cares and respects no one except the gang she's been with the gang since she was 17, she is very arrogant and less valued, she doesn't believe in Love she thinks its rubbish, everyone calls her Tans for short



Taniya was wearing this:



Lucky- How dare u call me loser? And this crack is mines lemme repeat dat for ur thick brain its mine underline mine!! (he snatches it)

Tans- Oh no u didn't (she snatches it back)

Just then a girl comes

Girl- Tans give it back to Lucky u had enough

Tans- No y should I its all mines (she sniffs the drugs)

Girl- Tans it's enough (she snatches the drugs packet) here Lucky now go u know thank god Rob called me Tans for gods sake don't overdose urself with this disgusting stuff,it aint worth it babe

Now we see the Girl it was non other than Alisha wearing this:



Alisha- (Played by Sukhi on IF) She is 19 years old very beautiful and kind, she cares and respects everyone, she lives with the gang, she's not an a drug addict, she helps everyone, she believes in Love she thinks it's a beautiful feeling



Tans- Alisha just bug off u know I gotta hang of this it calms me down and I love it, and u gave it to Lucky but I wouldn't blame u its all that son of a ***** fault u no(watching him finishing the packet) that's it he's so dead

Tans felt dizzy while walking

Alisha- See Tans how dizzy u are go and chill out abit

Tans- No I am not gonna leave Lucky and I am f9 u no u shud take a shot of it it mite change that sweet attitude of urs

Alisha- No thx I am ok without the waste of space disgusting drugs now go and sit down

Tans- NO!!!!!!!!!!

Now we see a guy come

Guy- Tans go and sit down or go to yr room u aint having anymore

Tans- But Bro don't be sad plz

Now we see the guy its non other than Sujal wearing this:



Sujal- He is 20 yrs old, he's very handsome he's the 1st member of the gang, he was the leader, but since Kripa entered she is the leader of the gang, hes an drug addict, he is very arrogant and cares and respects no one except for the gang, and he doesn't believe in Love he thinks its total crap



Sujal- I aint being sad ur not in the right state so just rest and go with Alisha

Tans- I am going

Alisha takes Tans to Tans room and then comes downstairs and talks to Sujal who was smoking

Alisha- Sujal ab bas bhi karoh tum chor doh yeh sab it's horrible it ruining everyone's life

Sujal- Alisha tumhe patha hai yeh apun ka kam hai I live on drugs and cigarettes and I can't leave it, it's my life,apun ka zindagi samji

Alisha- But Sujal it's ruining ur life god damn it

Sujal- Alisha I don't want to talk about this

Rob comes in this



Rob- He's 19 years old he is very handsome, he's an drug addict, he is very arrogant and cares and respects no one except for the gang, but he is good hearted and he doesn't believe in Love he thinks it's a waste of time



Rob- Sujal Dan is calling u he wants to chat about some deal

Sujal- shove him off too Kripa that waste chats so much bear does my head in

Rob- Woh Sujal Kripa's quite high right now and is busy she doesn't want to talk to anyone so he wants to talk to u and he aint(interrupted)

Sujal- Ok I get da point

Sujal goes to talk to Dan

Rob- What's wrong Alisha is everything ok y are u so down babe

Alisha- Rob these drugs, cigarettes are ruining everyone I as telling Sujal to leave it and all but he dont listen

Rob- Alisha u know Sujal been on them for long its very addictive u can't leave it takes time, I am sure he will understand

Alisha- Yeah I hope so

Now we see a Girl on da dance floor dancing, she is wearing silver top and a black short skirt, and now we see her eyes which are all red as she's been taking drugs, she's very high on them at the moment

WHO WAS IT?

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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NOO WAYYY Anam and DRUGS? ahahahha yaa right i want to know more lol cont soon 😳 omgg amam u were right im SHOCKED lil miss goody 2 good shoes and drugs and smoking!!! And laksh??? 😲
Edited by kripa_angad=luv - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ANAM AND DRUGS????? SMOKING?????? 😲 and sujal? Rob? Lakshya. Yeh sab goody goody guys ko kya hua? And ya - the girl on the dance floor is Kripz!! Maybe. How many members does Kripz gang have??? Cont soon Anam.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part.the girl is kripa well i think so.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: kripa_angad=luv

NOO WAYYY Anam and DRUGS? ahahahha yaa right i want to know more lol cont soon 😳 omgg anam u were right im SHOCKED lil miss goody 2 good shoes and drugs and smoking!!! And laksh??? 😲

Yeah Anisha I told u would be shocked yeah for da 1st time I am being bad😆 totally opposite from real life and yes my Lakshya is bad too

Edited by Anam Ali - 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anam Ali

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The perfect match hehehe lol 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful part
yet very shocking anam...how could you?? 😆 😆 😆
love this ff so far cont. soon

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