Jab Dil Churaye Koi (AK)LAST PART PG152 INDEXPG154 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
nice concept.waitin for u to start 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
omg i thought i commented but i'm sorry i didn't
i love the character sketch and can't wait till you start!
it's another ak ff it's guaranteed to be amazing!!i love the concept too
big fan!!! cont. soon
😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13

thanx everyone for your comments, promos will be up soon 😳

Originally posted by: amneet89

good going guys.thanx di..loved the character sketch...both sre brats...its going to b fun reading it...me always wid u thanx for the support for our new ff di, it means a lot


Asever 😳

Amneet 😉

Originally posted by: Fashion101

aweosme intro thanx a bunchie hun and ur have my fav jodi in it Prem and Mukti they rock. i love them too, lol they are my fav. jodi😉I really can't wait 4 frist part. it will be up soon, promise😃

Love,

Saniya

Originally posted by: devdootcn

nice fic cint soon thanx hun, and we will continue soon😃

Originally posted by: Sabrinaa xo

good luck in this fanfic!! thanx sabrina hun
i will deffi. read and comment when i get time!!
cant wait for the first part!!
it will be up soon...😃

Originally posted by: popgirl

Nice fanfic continue soon we will and thanx for enjoying so far😉

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 awesome intro best of luck dears 👏 👏 thanx dear😃

Originally posted by: Patel 1993

awesome intro.thank you hun u have my favorite jodi in their PREM & MUKTI. in all the other ff i read of them two in there they aren't married. but this one they are & they have a daughter. how sweet. it was all anam di's idea...😛can't wait for the first part. best of luck thank you😳

Originally posted by: armaghan0

wow amazing intor loved it seems really interesting thank you so much hun the characteriztions fabulous it was all di's hard work wow both ak aree aarrogant and less valued everyones really cute lol thanx hun😃

Originally posted by: eijaz-anita fan

cont soon.we wil hun...anum...loved..it.................gr8...wonder how they r gonna meet...i loved PKMN....!!!! 😳 😡 hehe hun we will continue soon😉

Originally posted by: nihita

awesome intro,plz cont.soon thanx hun and ya we will continue soon😃

love
nihita

Originally posted by: hello64

love the concept 👏 thanx kanwer😃
i completly adore your ff 👏 we are very grateful to you thank you so much hun😳
continue soon 😛

Originally posted by: deeya123

nice concept.waitin for u to start we will start soon and thank you 😊

Originally posted by: ix iishiqaa xo

omg i thought i commented but i'm sorry i didn't its okay hun you commented now
i love the character sketch and can't wait till you start! we will start soon, dont worry
it's another ak ff it's guaranteed to be amazing!!i love the concept too
big fan!!! cont. soon we will and thank you so much
😉

Thank you to everyone who commented it means a lot to anam di, shaz and me. We are very happy that you all enjoyed the intro, the promos will be up soon and hopefully the first part soon after, thank you once again everyone, a BIG HUG FROM ANAM DI, SHAZ AND ME!🤗


Edited by Mimi_Rani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Promo -

You enter a house and you see smoke everywhere, people dancing, drinking, smoking, and fighting. you look a little further and you see someone, drunk as heck and high. She calls out to the person "..., someone is here to meet you. the person turns around...

WHO IS THE PERSON, WHY IS THAT PERSON LIKE THAT...FIND OUT SOON...IS IT ANGAD, KRIPA, SUJAL, ALISHA, SHAZ, JOSH, OR SOMEONE ELSE 😳
Edited by Mimi_Rani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
awesome promo can't wait for the 1st part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
nice sketch 👏 👏
luv the fact that a-k r brats 😆
this is goin 2 be one heck of a good fic 😃
cant wait till they meet 😆 😆
nice promo
cant wait till u start the fic guyz 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ix iishiqaa xo

awesome promo can't wait for the 1st part

thanx a bunchie hun, and the first part will be posted soon by anam di😉

Originally posted by: popgirl

Gr8t promo 👏 👏 👏

thanx hun and the first part will be up soon😛

thanx hun😃

Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

nice sketch 👏 👏
luv the fact that a-k r brats 😆
this is goin 2 be one heck of a good fic 😃
cant wait till they meet 😆 😆
nice promo
cant wait till u start the fic guyz 😊

thanx hun and yah ak are brats, thanx for enjoying and the first part will be up soon😳

Originally posted by: kaa_san

nice promo cont soon

thanx and we will continue very soon😉

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thanx guys for the wonderful comments, the first part anam di will post in a bit😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
hey anam grt job plz keepp continuing and grt character sketh all of u luv zabzz]
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Originally posted by: za7n4b

hey anam grt job plz keepp continuing and grt character sketh all of u luv zabzz]

Thx a lot Zabz😃 I am just posting da next part

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Episode 1

It's a bright sunny day we see a beautiful mansion, its Malhotra Mansion we see everyone at the breakfast table except Shazmin Malhotra Kantabehen is serving breakfast.

Dev- Kantabehen Shaz ko aneh doh phir nastha serve karnah

KB- Lekin Dev Shaz toh so rahiye hai

Ganga- Dev aapki laadli beti so rahiye hai aap nashtha kariye aapko office bhi janha hai

Dev- Nahiye Ganga Shaz athi he hogi hum nastha saat kareghe

Ganga- Dev yeh ladki abhi takar so rahiye hai saat bhaj chuke hai aaj nahiye choroonghe auseh mein khud auseh jhagathi hoon

Josh- Mom aap betiyeh mein khud princess ko jagathaa hoon

Anjali- Haan chaloh mein tumhare saat chalthi hoon

Ganga- Tike hai jo aur Shaz ko kehna jaldi tyaar hokeh neeche aiye auseh Uni janah

Josh/Anjali- Jee Mom

Josh and Anjali go to Shazmins room, which is all pink and has teddy bears everywhere, Anjali opens the curtains

Josh- Princess utho its morning

Anjali- Princess utho tumhe Uni bhi janah hai

Now we see Shaz she opens her lovely brown eyes

Shaz- Bro, Di plz 5 mins

Josh/Anjali- No 5 mins get up warnah we are calling Mom.nahi sunegi, MOM!!!!!!!

Shaz- I am up plz don't call Mom I am going to get ready I will be downstairs in 20 mins promise

Josh/Anjali- Ok

Josh and Anjali go downstairs and Shazmin goes to get ready, and then after a while comes downstairs in her baby pink top and black mini skirt

Shaz- Good morning everyone, Good morning Dad (she hugs Dev)

Dev- Good morning baacha have ur breakfast

Shaz- Yes Dad

Ganga- Shaz beta jaldi utha karoh u have to take responsibility ur in Uni now don't be childish and get up early

Before Shaz can reply Dev spoke

Dev- Ganga abhi toh Shaz baachi hai ab tum apna baashan band karoh aur let baacha have breakfast aur tum bhi breakfast karoh

Ganga- Dev mein baashan aap janteh nahiye Shaz neh Uni mein doh lectures miss kiye and she's always l8

Dev- Ganga baachi hai koi bata nahiye right ur sorry na Shaz

Shaz- Yeah sorry Mom

Dev- Ab Shaz sareh lectures attend karnah ok

Shaz- Yes Dad

Ganga- Dev yeh sab kuch aap ki wajah seh aur Josh aur Anjali hum sab ne bahuth laad pyaar deh rakha hai itna laad pyaar acha nahiye

Dev- Ganga ab bas bhi karoh baachi hai

Ganga- Dev she's 19 agar yeh 25 saal ki bhi hojayghee aapke liye baachi he rahehghi

Dev- Haan mere liye yeh baachi he hai Shaz baacha u have passed ur driving test yeh loh ur new silver sports car ki chabi

Shaz- (Happily) WOW!!!! THX DAD UR THE BEST I LOVE U (She hugs him)

Dev- I love u too Baacha

Ganga- Shaz u got to take responsibility it's time for uni now ok and u have to attend each and every lecture ur teacher rang me Mr John u didn't attend 2 lectures he wasn't happy with u from now on u have to attend ur lectures and (Interrupted)

Shaz- Mom I got the point plz no lecture Dad tell Mom

Dev- Haan Ganga ab bas bhi karoh

Ganga- Kaash meri Kripa yahaan hothi toh woh mera saat zaroor deti (she has tears in her eyes)

Shaz- (she hugs her) Mom plz don't be upset Kripa Di will be back soon

Dev- Haan Ganga plz don't cry Kripa ek din hamare paas wapis zaroor aiyghee

Shaz/Josh/Anjali- Haan Mom Kripa will come

Ganga- I hope so Beta

Shaz- Mom I know so and Mom from now on I promise I will attend every lecture

Ganga- U better Shaz now go

Shaz- (she hugs her) Bye Mom I love u

Ganga- I love u too Beta

Shaz goes to Uni and Dev,Ganga, Josh and Anjali go to office

Meanwhile we see another beautiful mansion, its Khanna Mansion, we see Summit, Kumkum, Kavya and Laiba on the breakfast table

Summit- (Angrily) Yeh ladka abhi takar so raha iseh ehsaas he keh nahiye hai apni responsibilities ka, he's in Uni now

Laiba- Dad, Angad Bro atha he hoga relax

Kumkum- Haan Summit calm down mera Beta atha he hoga

Just then Prem and Mukhti come downstairs with their daughter Yuvika they greet everyone

Summit- (Angrily) Dekha Prem aur Mukhti bhi agaye Kavya aur Laiba bhi yahaan hai, ineh apni responsibilities ka kyaal hai aur Kumkum ek woh tumhara nalayak beta abhi takar so raha hai aaj nahiye choorogha auseh

Kumkum- Summit mera Bete ko nalayak maat kaho woh atha he hoga itni paraayi kartha hai aur (Interrupted)

Summit-(Angrily) Kumkum tum auseh janthi nahiye ek numher ka jhootha hai humhe kehtah Uni ja rehay pareneh keh liye aur u know what ause nalayak neh phicleh hafte ek bhi lecture attend nahiye kiya tumneh bahauth laad pyaar deh rakha hai dekha meri beti Laiba bhi Uni mein hai isneh saareh lectures attend kiye I am so proud of her aur ek woh nalayak Angad ek bhi lecture nahiye aaj nahiye choorogha auseh aaj auseh koi nahiye bacha saktha (Summit gets up)

Mukhti- Papa mein dhekthi hoon aap betiye

Summit- Nahiye mein khud joangha

Mukthi- Papa plz relax mein jathi hoon

Mukthi goes to wake Angad up, she enters Angads room its all messy the clothes are everywhere on the floor, she opens the curtains

Mukthi- Angad utho ANGAD…… ANGAD

Angad- Bhabhi plz soneh doh na it's weekend plz

Mukthi- Angad its not weekend aaj Monday hai tumhe Uni janah hai and u know Papa is very angry with u, if u don't get up Papa will personally come here and wake u up, actually I will call him PAPA!!!!!!!

Angad- No I am up plz Bhabhi don't call Dad

Mukthi- Ok now go and get ready

Angad- Yes Bhabhi I will be downstairs in 20 mins

Angad goes to get ready and Mukthi goes downstairs

Summit- Mukthi beta is he awake

Mukthi- Jee Papa he's awake he will be here in a few mins

After a while Angad comes down in this

Angad- Good morning everyone, good morning Mom (he hugs her)

Kumkum- Good morning baacha betho nashtha karoh

Angad- Jee Mom

Summit- Angad y haven't u been attending ur lectures

Angad- Dad ofcourse I have

Summit- No u haven't all last week u didn't attend 1 lecture even the principle called me

Angad- Woh……. Woh Dad…….. (Interrupted)

Summit- (Angrily) Don't u dare lie Angad if u don't attend ur lectures I will take ur beautiful black sports car, and that lovely motor bike and ur Mobile, and ur credit cards and I will seal ur bank account

Angad- NO!!!!! Mom tell Dad

Kumkum- Beta I am with ur Dad on this he's right

Angad- Ok Dad I am really sorry plz forgive me I will attend all lectures promise

Summit- Ok f9 u attend all lectures and from now on no club and no l8 night parties

Angad- But Dad I love da club and (Interrupted)

Summit- Angad if u don't listen I will take all these things away from u and I know u cant live without them, so u have no choice u have to agree

Angad- F9 Dad I agree I will attend all lectures and from now on no club and no l8 night parties

Summit- Gr8

Now we see Malhotra Industries and we see Dev,Ganga, Josh and Anjali talking

Ganga- Kripa ko wapis anah paregha chaar saal hogaye auseh London mein

Dev- Ganga humneh bahuth koshish ki lekin woh wapis nahiye aiyi ab Anjali ki shaadi honeh walhi hai aur Kripa ka honah bahuth zaroori hai

Anjali- Dad agar Kripa nahiye aiyi I am not getting married, she has to come

Ganga- Beta tumhare Dad neh phone kiya tha she doesn't want to come, hum khud bhi ghe teh auseh leneh, she doesn't want to come back ause hadseh neh meri Beti ki poori zindagi badal di patha nahiye hamesha meri baachi keh saat aisa kyun hotha hai (she cries)

Dev- Ganga plz ro maat sab tike hojaygha

Anjali- Haan Mom plz don't cry

Josh- Mom plz royieh maat mein vaada kartha hoon Di ki shaadi mein Kripa zaroor aiyghee mein khud London joangha aur mein auseh lekar aongha aur Mom maine tickets bhi book kardiye meri flight theen din baad hai

Ganga- Lekin Beta agar woh nahiye aiyi

Dev- Ganga tum fikar maat karoh mujhe poorah yakeen hai Josh par woh Kripa ko zaroor lekar aiygha

Shazmin comes from Uni and finds out Josh is going London to meet Kripa

Shaz- Daddy I wanna go plz I want to go with Bro to get Kripa Di plz

Josh- Shaz u aint going u got Uni

Shaz- Plz Bro Daddy Mommy Plz (she makes a cute face)

Dev/Ganga- Tike hai Shaz u can go

Josh- I will book ur ticket (Josh books Shaz ticket) Shaz our flight is in 3 days ok

Shaz- YAY!!!!!!! I can't wait to go London and meet Kripa Di

PREVIEW- THE GANG

WHOS DA GANG?

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