ff:The unembellished emotion rn-pt17b p43 - Page 22

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Part 16:-


Only he knew how it was creating a hailstorm in his heart and mindset at Naina's quite demeanor. But it was high time that he shed his shy conduct around the female clan and work to woo his lady love. He was dead confident that it was going to be a Herculean task despite being aware of her emotions too. He was confused at her reluctance to share her thoughts. Was she blaming herself for his imprisonment? He could think of no other reason. He let out a groan and a sigh. She was unconsciously definitely ensuring that he end up in the mental asylum. It was high time that they settle scores. The key to her abstract thinking process would be Alekh!!

Evening:-
Naina was flabbergasted. Major Shekhawat had just left her house in fit of fury. She had never seen him so out of control. Everything seemed to go on at a roller coaster's pace. His sudden barging into her house, his angry questions and then immediate departure left her mystified. Whilst her thoughts could shape up into concrete possibilities, Arjun?s loud sobs entailed her to give him her attention. What she didn?t know was the brave innocent blunder which she was going to commit by endangering herself was inadvertently averted by her TDH mentor.


She was definitely a blind fool!!!!!! A gorgeous spirited fool, he couldn?t help adding. His "phool". His thunderous anger softened at her na? approach. How dare??? how could she blame herself for his harsh fate. His talk with Alekh made him realize with shock the cynical truth. One thing that he was 100% positive was as long as he was alive she would never prostrate herself in front of traitors and lunatics. He never doubted that women were less capable of handling critical situations. Nevertheless he also believed that women were made to be cherished and protected to be loved and respected. And for a man who was so deeply in love, he knew it would be a sheer torture if he sees Naina suffer. Damn with his patience. He now knew that she reciprocated. She was now going to be his only his by hook or crook. Pity, she didn?t know what was going to hit her. And so would their enemies. A devilish smirk enveloped his raw spiced look.
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Naina bid adieu to her mom and dad. They were going to Bangalore to attend the wedding of a friend's daughter. She was going to miss them horribly. They had opted to take Arjun with them and she had complied. She knew things were now going to get rough and the farther was the family away from this mess, the safer they were going to be. She also knew that they would be safe in Bangalore as the friend was the head of the police faculty.
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Naina awoke quite early. It was around 4:30 am. She quickly gulped down a glass of water before hurrying to change into a pair of casuals for a jog. By the time she had cooked up a breakfast, boiled the milk and dusted the house, it was 6. She was bent to work out extra today.
Strapping a waist mini knapsack, she hurried outdoors after securely locking up her house. It was her fifth round around the park when she heard screams and laughter ringing though the basketball court in the vicinity. Curious, she approached the stadium and was astonished to find Alekh, Huda, Ali, Yudi and Captain Abhimanyu playing against the local goons. The goons stirred up unpleasant fights and were presently at the zenith of mischief creation. In the earlier encounters, they had eyed Pooja and her weirdly much to both their discomforts.
Naina found the announcer's cubicle quite empty. After denoting her presence to her friends, she quickly made her way to the chair and picked up the mike and switched on the speakers. Boy, did she love to commentate. If she wouldn't have been in the army, she would have definitely become a commentator after completing her MBA.
She began:-
"And its officers who are in possession, Yudi with the ball dribbling energetically towards the opponent ring, looking good!! Ah!!! Ball intercepted by red shirt civilian.. whoa whoa quite a throw.... Must say you've got a bad throw Mr...umm red shirt . Out of court.(A low chuckle escaped her.) Must be good at javelin, I suppose. The army men get the the throw, Ali passes on the ball to Alekh, good catch ".. Abhi sir receives the ball and wonderful!!!!!!! officer's score ? 6-2.. And we see Alekh again in possession and hell that was a foul!!!!!!!!
An outrageous cry escaped her when she saw Alekh limping towards her after a dirty foul on his leg. Ouch, that must have burned she thought. His reassurance after plopping down on the nearby couch eased her worry a trifle. Instead of resting, he grabbed onto the mike and continued on her behalf:-
"Nice swerve there by Ali, cool dribbling !!.. Fantastic .. Ali scores. Nice work there chap.. Score:- 8-2."
By now the goons were getting frustrated and had started restoring to not so spirited and ethical means.
"Hey that was AN INTENTIONAL FOUL you SCUMTOAD!!!"Screamed Alekh into the mike when a crew cut guy deliberately stomped on Abhi sir's foot when he attemoted to do a lay-up. Naina shocked at the language tried to pry away the mike while Alekh danced away from her reach.
What they didn't realize was morning joggers had all thronged over to see the match. Mainly college students!
The game got dirtier despite the unequal no. of players in both the teams. "Come on Huda !!"yelled Alekh into the silence that had descended. Huda managed an overhead pass but was crookedly intercepted by a leech looking somber fellow who pushed Yudi hurting his nose. And then the goons scored!
"8-4. Take that you DIRTY, LEECH ? CHEATING......."
Naina hurriedly interrupted "Alekh Do you mind commentating in an unbiased way!!!?"
"I am saying the way it is behna.."
Huda wasn't the one to take things lightly. In retaliation, he bumped into a hefty built mustachio while saving the basket.
"Yes, I don't believe it, Huda's saved it.....!! POKE HIM IN THE EYE, ........YUDI"
"Srry, sorry madam Ahluwalia, it wouldn' happen again."
It was turning into the filthiest match ever played. Naina was exasperated and excited at the same time. She knew to win, they needed another player. It seemed God had her plea because at that instant Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat entered the premises. Dressed in dark denim and beige T-shirt he looked just out of the shower. Naina couldn?t help drinking his exotic form.

"he best portion of a man' love is his little, nameless, unremembered acts of kindness and love."
Mother Teresa

A greeting and he was pulled into the match. With Raj, into the match, the game took a bizarre turn..The officers had begun coring goal after goal and they also were cheating... TIT for TAT.. Finally having pushed the goons to their angry potential, one of the goons pulled back Raj's t-shirt hurting him in the shin when he attempted a jump shot. Naina was now angry enough to kill the guy. She didn't even bother to tell Alekh off when he bellowed into the mike:-
'YOU CHEATING IDIOTIC SCUMBAG.." She herself was showing her fist to them. Huda and Abhimanyu sir, now began to play violently. Finally after another hour of play, the army officers had won. A roar of applause rippled through the spectators.
At the end of the mach what Naina didn?t understand was why on the earth was Raj ignoring her!!!


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NOTE:-

Hey people.. I know my indefinite updates are getting annoying. Its actually getting unpredictable due to personal reasons and school and even i am wondering if i can keep updating it. I sincerely am apologizing but then i can never promise. I know this is quite lousy of me but i can't help it.
By the way, if i have used and offending insults and phrases in this part, then plz do forgive me. I actually wanted to use it to emphasize on Alekh's personality.And also courtesy from "Harry Potter and The Prisoner Of Azkaban" where the 'tel-mel' is between Lee and proff. McGonagall. I have also tried to evolve Raj's character.. Please do give in your opinion.

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Amazing...Fabulous!!!

Yes Naina did remind me of McGonagall and Aalekh of Lee!!!Well done...Askaban is my fav HP book!!!Don't worry bad language has to be where it is necessary!!!!

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