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Part 9:-



There was faint smile on her face as she finished recounting her past. Raj could see the joy, happiness and love blooming in those gorgeous eyes. She looked happy!!! Somewhere in his heart Raj also was relieved, she was still Naina Singh Ahluwalia.

Realizing her present condition Naina said, "Umm. Sir. It's become quite chilly here, let's proceed inside. Everyone must be anticipating our return."

Raj nodded in approval. With a slight mischievous grin lightening up his face, when Naina almost tripped falling right onto his strong chest, he steadied her while she refused to look up to him. Suddenly, Naina realized that she had better go home and check up on her family. She told Raj to go back inside while she leaves to ensure her family's safety. Raj was beginning to disagree and almost proposed dropping her when she hurried past. Before disappearing from his sight of vision, she called out – "Congratulations!! Take Care!!"

Raj was bubbling with elation. She had retained her innocence and naughtiness over the years. And she still wished him. Shaking his head, he walked towards the porch.


Naina hugged and cuddled Arjun as soon as she took him from the cot. Half an hour had passed. Tears unknown to her kept flowing. He kept staring at her with a cute smile while his hands were upto some mischief She recollected the venomous, threatening words of man whose cult leader threatened to destroy their happiness. She knew she had to distress herself. The rain had reduced to a slight drizzle.
Placing him back on the cot with a sigh and leaving him to mess around with his favorite stack of toys she decided to play football on the empty ground outside. She recalled the time when Raj and all the cadets were in one team opposing the faculty. It had been so much fun.

With the ball beneath her feet the rain drenching her completely, her shorts and T sticking to her well- defined figure, she kicked it with a ferocious force with which it flew right into the goal post. At 9 at night, playing football in the rain would be considered insane.

After the vigorous shot, Naina continued to lash out her frustration and annoyance on the ball. She was about to give it another kick when she found herself kicking the empty air. Surprised she looked up and found him tossing and playing around with the ball as if she didn't exist. He kept scoring goal after goal with no care and no idea that someone apart from him even existed. Finally, this monotonous act of his was beginning to get on her nerves. The enlivening Naina was back. Marching towards him, with utter exasperation she managed to flick the ball away before he could manage another goal.

With his tousled dripping head, turning in her direction, their eyes met gleaming with stubbornness on a more concentrated degree in Naina's. With an unannounced start, the game began with Raj approaching Naina. Naina's moves were quick and agile but Raj himself wasn't an amateur. With lightning quick reflexes and strength, he remained an unbeaten obstacle in her path.
Eyes darting to and fro confusing him, she managed to steer away and make her first goal.
With triumph she passed on the ball to him.
All she got back was a "Not bad!! Not too good either." With disbelief, she turned to defend him. But despite this he managed to evade her and score.
"We are even!!"

And so the game continued. With one acing and the other catching up. After about an hour and a half of play, Naina was exhausted and thereby Raj won. Falling on to the lush green meadow prolific with water, she felt him gauging her expression and sensed his eyes scrutinizing each and every part of her body. Her already flushed cheeks turned more pink and rosy. Uncomfortable with the prevailing silence, she invited him upto the house wondering why he had come here initially. She asked him to stay over as it was late at night and also the rain had become more furious. Her parents were asleep and she guessed Arjun must also have dozed off. Hastily, supplying Raj with a towel and a fresh set of clothes she showed him the guest room after which she herself ran inside to get changed. After a hot shower and changing into warm pair of pajamas and top she walked towards the kitchen. She supposed that HE must have fallen asleep and attempted to make a hot cup of cocoa. It was 11 at night. Making herself comfortable on the diwan with the cup in her hand and the stack of files in the other she began to browse through them unaware that a pair of eyes was etching out her every move. Confident that she was too engrossed to care, he walked to the room from where he had seen her come out.

Having entered cautiously, he neared the blue sheet covered neat bed on which a small child was sleeping. Arjun, having sensed someone's approach opened his sleepy eyes while his legs kicked about in the air. Raj was fascinated, the kid was so cute!!

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Part10:-

"Hey Baby", he whispered. "Hope you haven't troubled mamma in these last few months. Hmm.. You seem to have got the same ravishing and mesmerizing eyes."
Arjun looked on up with large, curious eyes. He seemed to like the person because he quickly crawled up, whimpering slightly and came near Raj with a babyish smile on his face. He then feasted his eyes on the steel Titan watch Raj had adorned. It was sparkling as a result attracting his attention. He played with the watch trying to remove it while Raj watched on with a strange joy in his heart. He knew the kid was special. His smile was so lovable and mesmerizing. He knew that Naina was the most appropriate and wonderful mother the child could have.
He was stunned when the child squinted at him and his scarf covered a part of his face. Out of know where he started hitting Raj's hand and Raj guessed that he was all moods to play. He calculated that Naina would be too engrossed in her file to notice the time and she would be back only after a while. Quickly shutting the door, he picked Arjun up, and tossed and hurled him up and down. Arjun enjoyed being in Raj's arms. He chuckled and giggled. Laughed and goggled. He found a strange solace and delights in playing in the arms of this strong stranger. Later when Raj placed him back on the bed, he noticed Raj's bulging triceps disappear. He was confused and annoyed. He wondered who had taken away those big muscles. He suddenly started hitting Raj's arms with his baby fist as to hit the thief and bring those strong things back. Raj caught off-guard became confused as to why Arjun was hitting him. When his arms flexed a bit he noticed Arjun looking victorious and then once again puzzled when his arms relaxed. After a minute he understood. He quickly flexed his arms and Arjun stated caressing those 'dolays-sholays' and then suddenly hugged him goggling all over his face. Raj laughed at his innocence. After spending some quality time with Arjun Raj decided to leave. But Arjun thought the opposite. He just wouldn't let Raj leave. When Raj tried to go, he threatened to cry and Raj was in a fix. Suddenly, soft padded footsteps could be heard from outside. Raj ignoring the child's pleas hastily hid behind the curtains just when the door opened.

It was Naina. As soon as she entered, she saw Arjun sitting all wide-eyed and energetic. His scarf had come off and his silky hair was all messy. She was astounded and perplexed. He had been sleeping when she had checked on him after her bath. Hurrying quickly towards her son, she picked him up and asked, "Beta, aap ko kya ho gaya. Aap abhi tak jage hue ho? Aur aapke baal itne bhikre hue kyun hai?"
She noticed Arjun pointing towards the curtain.
"Parda hai, baba… Aap jaante ho na. Uske peeche jo darwaza hai wo verandah tak jaata hai."
Arjun started jumping and kept on indicating at the curtains confusing Naina with his weird behaviour. Finally fed up with his antics, Naina picked him up and walked towards the curtains so as to prove that there was no one behind.

Meanwhile Raj's heart started beating wildly as he felt the approaching steps. Itni bigdi hui haalat to tab bhi nahin thi jab who mission per tha. His thoughts were running in this direction," Kya beta, mumma ko ishaara karna zaroori tha. Ab kya karoon." His thoughts then strayed to those good old days when he had caught Naina behind his room's curtain. How ironical the current situation was. It was he who was now behind the curtain and Naina the prosecutor.

As soon as Naina drew the curtains away she saw…….

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Ppl... i might not be able to update until next Thursday.. i am goin on a family outing. I am sorry 4 the incovenience. But i promise a long update if i get loads and loads of comments. Thank you...