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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
neelu plz more udates then i will give a really bara sa comment as promised
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
i agree with u neelu!!!! but still she doing the wrong thing by letting piyush brainwash her... anjane main hi sahi... 😡 😡 😡

anywayz, gr8888888 part!!!!!! continue soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
nice parts........i think now kashish is going to be ready like as bride and i hope everything short out between them during this pooja......ple continue soon.....cant wait any more......thanks
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
yeah...i hope too that she forgets her anger n they both be in love as before!!

i know sujal ws wrong...but kashish has also been wrong in past!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ohhh hoooo toh naraz hai madam just cause of sujal is helping her own family 😡 . that's weird . maine toh dekha hai ladkiyan ladti hai apne pati se saying that u don't help and never come on time in puja and stiff 😆 . lekin hamara sujal time kya time se bohot pehele aaya hai aur abb help bhi zor daar karr raha hai 😉 . lekin yeh maharani room mein beth kaar gussa ha 😭 . her mom comes and sees her without any jwellery,mangal sutra,sindoor 😡 .kashish is ajeeb yaar sach . and now her mom is all sweet and says ki sujal ke liye karo he is there and all.awww... sooo sweet 😳 . i loved sujal in this part ❤️ . lekin yeh naraz hai 😡 . common jaldi se patch up karlo yaar 😳 . neelz let them come closer now 😳 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzz.....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
Ehhhhhhh ye piuysh chapter kab close ho ga wesy tu mai abi yaha tak nahi puhanch as i'm in 2nd part of pkr at pg 120 aj raat nahi tu kal tak inshallah yaha tak puhanch jau ge arey ye har bar romantic scene aty aty kyu reh jata hai i'm damn confirm nothing happned btween sujal kashish anywaz anjana best of luck i really like ur ff isi liye tu pkr itni high speed sy padhti aa rahi ho tata bye bye
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
aft a while-

s is helpin in the house hold work

he feels some1 nudgin him on his back

s mudta hai

sees its k

mooh phulake khadi hai arms crossed

k-tumse kuch baat karni hai! bahar aao,garden mein!

s is confused

but follows her 2 the garden

aft reachin the garden-

k-ye saab kya hai?ye saab kyun kar rahe ho tum?

s-kya?kya hai? kya kar raha hoon main?

k-ye saab naatak ka kya matlab hai>kyun aae ho yahan?meetin hai to jao naa!

s-arre ajeeb ladki ho tum! pehle kehti ho ki puja mein aao,mumma ko bura lagega etc,ur damad blah blah,aur jaab main aata hoon! taab tum puchti ho ye saab kya ho!naaraaz hoke baith jaati ho!

k-main bass itna puch rahi hoon!ki tumhari to meetin thi!aur ye saab kyun kyun kar rahe ho tum,tum to swarth ke bina kabhi kuch nahi karte naa!

s-haan sahi kaha swarth hai mera ismein bhi swarth hai,tum!!!!!!!

k looks at s,surprised

s-emm..tumhari mumma,main unka dil nahi dukhana chahta tha!wo bohot achchi hain!bilkul ek typical maa!jaisi maa honi chahie!..khair chodo..tum nahi samjhogi!main bass tumse itna kehna chahta hoon ki..maa ke saamne plz scene create matt karo...wo pehle se hi pareshaan hai papa ko lekar..aur pareshana ho jaegi! atleast puja khatam hone taak to hum log ek dusre se normally..i mean tabb ke lie bass sab kuch bhalaka saath kuch pal beeta sakte hai naa!uske baad,ghar pohonchne paar..hamare beech jo bhi ho!

k looks at s thoughtfully

k doesnt move or give any exxpresion

so s thinks tht as a dismissal of his proposal aur mudke jaane lagta hai

k-thanxs! thanxs 4 everything!

s turns with a surprised look

k-[smiles]kya hua?abb aise kya dekh rahe ho?bhondu kahin ke!

k climbs onto him & gives him a tighttttt hug

s-[choti si smile] achcha main bhondu to tumkya?bhonduni!

k hears her mom callin her andaar se

ma-kashiiiiiiiiishhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! kahan hai beta!!!!!!!!

k-mumma bua rahi hai!

k runs 2 the livin room,aft plantin a quice kiss on his cheek

s is bewildered & surprised by her actions

4 a second he didnt understood kya hua

then realised

& smiled a bit 2 himself

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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
Kashish is behaving like a child 😆 😆 eik dam bachkana harkatein aur zid bhi bachon jaisi 😆. Sujal and his mother- in -law make such a cute Damad- Saas jodi 👍🏼 and Sujal kabhie baaz nahin aaye ga mauka mila nahin keh flirt karna shuru kar diya dekha tak nahin keh sasuma saamne khadi hain 😉 I m so happy that kashish ne Piyush ki baaton par zyada ghaur nahin kiya ⭐️ ⭐️ and just hope keh ab koi aur problem na aajaye SK keh beech mein ab sab kuch theeq rahe and to make it full- proof aisa karte hain keh Piyush ko maar dete hain 😈, love the way the story is progressing it is becoming ore and more interesting day by day, awesome and tremendous keep up the good work and continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
abb k & her mom r in livin room

k is helpin mom

s enters

k mom murmers 2 k

mom-kashish,sujal ke gaal pe jo lipstick ka nishaan lagaya hai wo mita de,mehmaan aa jaenge,mushkil ho jaegi!

k is so embarrased

blushes hard 2 beetroot red

k runs 2 s

aur uske gaal se wo nishaan mita deti hai

s-kya hai kashish?kya hua?

k-kuch nahi!chup raho tum!

tabhi mehak comes

me-jijs!!!!!!!!! chalo basket ball khelte hain!

mom-bilkul nahi!abhi khana laga rahi hoon saab khana khalo!

me-paar mumma jijs ne promise kia tha mere saath basket ball khelenge

mom-nahi abhi sujal khana khaega,aaj jamai shoshti hai saara khana sujal ke lie hi banaya hai!bengali khana hai pata nahi sujal tumhe pasand aega ya nahi!

s-mumma aap jo bhi banaengi mujhe pasand aega


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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
abb khana lagta hai

s,k & mehak ko mumma khane ke lie bitha deti hain

& khud she is servin

mehak & k ek saath pas pass baithe hain

aur s k ke opposite baitha hai

mehak-[murmers 2 k]di!

k-haan

me-abb dekhna circus! jiju ka kya mast paplu banega!jiju ne kabhi ye saab khaya nahi naa!bechare!

tabhi mumma aati hai khana leke

k-aye! mehak! dekh -dekh! shuru ho raha hai

mom khana s ko serve karne hi jaati hai ki

dono k & me strt 2 gigle zoron se

s looks at both,confused sa

mom-kya hua tum dono ko?

me-kuch nahi mumma wo di ek joke suna rahi thi! [giglin under breath]

k-joke kahan mehak,main to joker dikha rahi thi

both me & k strt 2 gigle again

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