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Posted: 18 years ago
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The next day Kripa goes to the academy n is searching for Angad. He sees him in the queue in the canteen she goes
behind him.


Kripa:Hi Angad


Angad turns around to see who it is n ends up spilling coffee on her top again



Angad:Oh Sh**

Kripa:kya humari mulaaqat har roz aise hi hogi kya?

Angad: N this time its not my fault so dont expect an apology from me

saying that he walks off n starts talking to this girl. Kripa comes next to him

Kripa:Angad...Angad, I wanna say something

Angad:yeah..1 minute, busy right now.

Kripa:Angad pls

The girl walks away as she had to go somewhere

Angad:Kripa,look what uve done. Mera time barbaad kar diya.

Kripa:Main yahan tumse thanx kehne ke liye aayithi. Tumne meri diary lautayi.

Angad:Bas kehdiya?Mood off hogaya

Kripa:tum aise behave kyun kar rahe ho? Mere saath baat karne mein sharam aati hai?

Angad: aur nahin to kya. Aur yeh kya kapre paine hue ho. Bilkool ladkon ki tarha.

Kripa:Ye track suit hai. Whats wrong in it?

Angad:tum mini skirts kyun nahin pehenti?

Kripa:mini skirts? woh bhi academy mein? tumhara dimaag kharab hai

Angad:u will look sexy n much better than now. U will look hot... gorgeous, pretty, irresistable

Kripa:bas bas. Say no more. Chi ur disgusting

Angad:wrong. Im a man. aur har aadmi ke dimaag mein yehi chalta hai. Get used to it hunny.

Kripa:uff ye ladka bhi

she walks off angrily

Angad who is watching her walk:Uff ye ladki bhi

They both go to class and Angad goes in and sees kripa, he goes to her and says, "u know what Kripa I never noticed u before. But now where ever I go ur there."

k: ummm maybe thats coz the classes just started two days ago.

A: ha that could be the reason

K: just shut up.

The teacher comes in and tells them that there is gonna be a field trip to Delhi. Anyrbody who's interested can sign up.

Angad:so u wanna go?

Kripa:Where?

Angad:to hell, where do u think?

Kripa:naa im quite happy here. But i think u should go

Angad:main delhi ki baat kar raha hoon

Kripa:i dunno. Shayad

Angad:Shayad ka kya matlab?

Kripa:maybe. Main delhi jaa kar kya karoongi.

Angad:masti karenge aur kya

Kripa:Tum bhi jaa rahe ho?

Angad:haan

Kripa:to phir main nahin jaaongi

Angad:kyun? Mere saath sharam aati hai kya?

Kripa:aur nahin to kya? tum sirf gandi baatein karte ho. Sharam to ayegi hi naa?

Angad:hey come on Kripa, be a sport. Chalo na.

Kripa:ok ok, sochoongi. Khush

Angad:aur haan, packing karte waqt, salwar kameez nikaal kar, mini skirts or dresses pack karna. U'll look hot...gorgeous, sexy...irresistable.

Kripa:ANGAD!!! Ur so sick. Leave me alone

She walks off again n Angad is thinking "ye ladki bhi naa, bilkul pagal hai. Uff"

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Posted: 18 years ago
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That night Kripa is home alone when the phone rings.

K: hello

hello

K: umm who's this

tumhari maut

K: what, who's this

suna hai, that ur parents are out on a business trip and ur home alone.

K: what who's this

She runs to the door and locks it.

K: hello, hello.

The person hangs up.
kripa is hella scared. She checks the house and thinks I should call somebody.
Just then the door bell rings, kripa is hella scred she goes to the door and slowly opens it. Somebody goes BOOM.
Kripa gets hella scared but its just Angad, he's laughing like crazy at the door and kripa is shaking. She starts hitting him, and yelling: "Angad, u stupid, pagal, duffer, u know u scared me to death."

angad comes inside still laughing and closes the door, "aww poor baby got scared."

Kripa hits him again. "I swear what if i had gotten a heart atteack or something."

A: don't worry, I won't let u die that easily. I still have to torture u.

kripa hits him Again and says " god angad the pjone call really scared me."

A: what phone call, i din't call u

K (gets scared): what if u didn't call me than who was it.

Angad looks at her face and laughs again.

Kripa hits him again, "oh so it was u"

A: god yaar i think u broke some of my bones. Ouch stop hitting me.

K: waisey what r u doing here.

A: nothing, I came to ask if ur going to the field trip. Have u decided yet.

K: No, i stll have to ask my parents

A: why, ur old enough. You can make ur own decisions

K: yeah but still

A: hey im sure they wont mind u going.

K:I know. Lekin main nahin jaana chahti.

A:Kyun?

K:Meri marzi. Ab tum jaa sakte ho. Tumhe sharam nahin aati. Itni raat ko ek ladki ke ghar aate hue.

A:sharam waram, what is that? mujhe sharam nahin aati. Hey Kripa, jab tak tum jaane ke liye haan nahin ke dete main jaaonga nahin

K:Kya???tum yahin rahoge?

A:Ofcourse

K:to phir raho, mujhe kya

Angad gets irritated n naughty at the same time. he goes behind Kripa n lifts her up n swings her. She is screaming

K:ANGAD!!! Chodo chodo.
Angad lyes her down on the sofa n lifts her top n tickles her tummy. She is kicking her legs in the air n laughing non stop

K:Angad stop it pls pls. aaargh pls

A:nahin, jab tak tum haan nahin keh dete main nahin rukoonga.

K:ok ok. Yes. main jaaongi

He stops n covers her tummy. He is sitting on the floor while she sits on the sofa. They look at each other n laugh. Kripa gets a magazine from the table n roles it up n hits him with it. SHe chases him round the house. Then he finally goes out the house runnig while she is catching up

A:Bye Kripa see u 2moro. Meet u at college n be early coz we r all gonna leave for dehli at 8 am.

He says that drives off. She is looking at him driving away n smiling to herself thinking "Pagal. Shaitaan"

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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
gr8 part

can't wait for their field trip to delhi


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Posted: 18 years ago
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The next morning Kripa is getting ready. it's 7:30 when the bell rings. She thinks who could it be sooo early in the morning.
She opens the door and finds Angad standing there, with his bag on his shoulder.

A: sup Kripa, ready yet.

K: Angad what r u doing here so early.

A: I'm gonna make sure that u come. No excuses, no nothing alright.

K: ha baba i told u na yesterday that i'll come.

A: but still. just wanted to make sure. Anyway r u ready yet?? Hurry up lets go or we're gonna miss the bus. i'm gonna have to take care of u now, coz ur my dear uncle's daughter.

K: thanx but no thanx i can take care of my own self. Just wait here a few minutes. I'm almost ready.

After five minutes she comes carrying her stuff.

A: what r u wearing??

K: what u don't like it??? i just got it yesterday. its my newest salwar kameez.

A: Kripa i told u na, u should wear those sexy lil outfits.

K: no, I don't want to

A: yeah, then somebody might look at you right.

K (innocently): why r u being soo mean Angad

A: Whatever yaar. alright lets go

They drive off to the college.
They both go to the class where they were supposed to meet. Angad goes to talk to his "cool" friend and hot girls, while Kripa is talking to her friend gehna. They r chatting, when the professor comes and tells them all to get on the bus.

They all get in the bus. Angad and his lil gang is sitting in the back of the bus fooling around. Kripa thinks, "i should have never came."
Her and gehna are talking about, the places that they r gonna visit in Delhi

They all sleep in the way. When they reach their hotel, everybdy is really tired and sleepy. Kripa, gehna and shaan (gehna's boyfriend) r getting off the bus. The professor gives them all their room no. and roommates. Kripa's roommate is gehna ofcourse. but Angad is really dissappotnted coz none of his friends are his roommates. It's shaan, the person he didn't even know existed. they all go to their rooms.
Angad goes in and sees shaan.

A: hey man sup

S: oh hey, how u doin??

A: lemme make one thing clear I want the bed by the window and stay away from my stuff. And I'll have no problem wid u. Ok

S: ok 😕

A: alright then, I'm about to sleep.

Shaan's like oh god, just perfect.

They both go to sleep. While Kripa and gehna also change and go to sleep.
The next morning they all wake up, get ready and meet downstairs in the lobby. Gehna comes downstairs and goes straight to shaan, she hugs him. Angad who's looking at them thinks, "losers, jaisi shakal hai waisey girlfriend " 😈 Angad introduces himself.

A: hey I'm Angad, shaan's roommate, u must be his girlfriend right.

G: yeah, hi. How r u.

S: Gehna, where's Kripa

Angad is listening very careful now.

G: I don't know yaar, I'm hella worried about her, when I woke up this morning she wasn't in the room. I looked everywhere. But she wasn't there.

Angad is really worried now. He thinks, "yeh ladki bilkul pagal hai. I should've never left her alone."
he starts looking around for her. While all the other students r getting in hte bus to go sight seeing. Angad checks in the bus but she isn't in there. So he gets out and looks for her. He searches the whole hotel but doesn't find her. In the end he goes in the back where there's a lil water fall. he sees kripa there sitting on a bench looking really relaxed. Watching the ducks in the lil pond. Angad is mesmerized by her innocence and beauty. but at the same time he gets really angry.
He runs to her and yells.

A: R u f****n crazy. you could've told somebody that u were gonna be here. i was looking everywhere for u like crazy and ur sitting here enjoying urself.

Kripa looks up and simply says, "who told u to look for me in the first place. Listen I'm not in the mood to hear ur backwaas this early in the morning. Please its soo peaceful here, ur bothering me."

angad who is really tired from running around holds his stomach and sits down next to her.

A: so this is what i get for being soo nice. First time in my life I thought I was doing the right thing in looking for u. you're so .....

K: so what

A: i don't know. I'm hella tired from running everywhere.

he puts his head on Kripa's shoulder and relaxes a bit.
Kripa looks at him but doesn't move. She lets him rest.

K: why were u looking for me in the first place.

A: Coz,............ oh shit. The bus has prolly left by now.

He grabs her hand and they run to the front of the hotel. the bus has already left.

A: see what u did now. My whole day is gonna be wasted, They're gonna come back at night and i'm gonna be stuck here wid u. Oh Angad this is exactly what u get for trying to be noce. Just great.

kripa also is little bit upset coz she also wanted to go for the site seeing and somehow upset coz just because of her angad has also missed it
then both look at each other and say at the same time"ABHHHH"

angad says--kripa tum kaho

kripa--nahi angad tumkaho

angad--kripa ladies first tum kaho

kripa--ok let me tell ab hum kya karenge

angad--kya karenge matlab tumne mera pura din to barbaad kardiya ab koi kami baki hai kya

kripa-- little bit angry but was feeling sorry and was feeling bad also

angad notices it tand tells--arre kripa mein to mazak kar raha tha accha hi huwa waise bhi mujhe us boring sight seeing pe nahi janatha(he just lies to her )

well then they both plan how to spent the entire day then there is a person walking he calls that person and asks
angad- to the person--is there any place to watch near by
other person--yes ofcourse there is a very beautiful and romantic place nearly every honeymoon couples goes there
and then the person explains the place and goes

angad to kripa-- to chale?

kripa--kya tumhara dimaag to kaam kar raha hai na tum ne suna nahi honeymoon, romantic

angad--to kya huwa yaar par usne bautiful to kaha tha na aur tumhe beautiful jage kitni pasand hai

kripa--woh to hai par

angad--are yeh par war chhoro aur chalo

K: ok fine, but how the hell r we gonna get there, I'll tell u one thing, I'm not walking there.

A: Ok maharani ji. Here I'll pick u up.

He tries to pick her up, but she moves back

K: stop it angad.

Angad laughs: yaar its not that far, he said its at the end of this road. Comeon lets go it'll be fun. Something adventerous.

K: ha ha ha, adventerous. Apni shakal dekhi hai. I'm not used to walking.

A: ok fine then u stay here and I'll go by myself.

He starts walking after a while Kripa also runs after him.

K: oye ruko, ok fine I'll go wid u.

A: ab ayi na line pe.

The walk to the place.
When they enter, Kripa feels like she's in heaven. Everything around her is beautiful. But she sees that the place is filled with couples. She's a bit embarrased. Angad notices this so he tells her. "Look kripa there's also a casino here, u wanna go."

K: yeah lets go.

They go in ther and win some money.

When coming out. Angad says, "Kripa ur pretty lucky for me."

K: I know, ain't I.

A: ok don't get over excited.

K: Now what, where should we go.

A: There's a mall across the street, lets go we have to spend this money now na. And I'll buy u some nice outfits. Some sexyyy ones.

Kripa hits him: noooo

A: ok fine, but come wid me atleast.

They both go to the mall.
First they go to a mens store.

A: Kripa look for something nice for me, please.

K: Ok fine.

They look around and Kripa finds a really nice shirt. She shows it to Angad.
K: look Angad, I like this one its nice na.

Angad looks at it and says, "its um okkkkkk"

Kripa throws it on the floor and says, "fine, whatever. I always knew u had a bad choice."

Angad loves it when she gets mad like that.

He says: "I know na. I have a really bad choice."

He picks up the shirt and buys it.
Kripa is happy.

A: Ok now, I bought what u wanted. Now u have to buy whatever I choose.

K: no, hell no.

A: nope this is cheating, its not fair.

K: we're not playing a game.

Angad grabs her hand and takes her to the ladies section.

A: wow, these r some sexy outfits.

K: hell na, I would never wear anything like that. You can buy it for one of ur friends but not for me.

A: ok fine u don't like these, we'll go to the other section.

He takes her to another section.

He looks at all the outfits and says. "Hmmm no too revealing, nooo too long. hmmm i like this one."

He takes out a mini skirt with a cute lil shirt. It's not that bad.

A: I like this one so I'm gonna buy it for u.

Kripa looks at it and says: "No, I ain't wearing that."
A: Whatever. Im buying n uve got to wear it.

He goes n buys it for her. They both make their way to the hotel.
Angad goes n wears the shirt that Kripa tells him to buy.

A:How do I look?

K:Wow! Not bad. see, u can look nice too (laughs)

A:haha, i look better than u

K:whatever

A: HEy, maine yeh shirt pehenliya. Ab tum woh kapre peheno

K:What? no way! Maine mall mein hi kaha tha ki main woh nahin pehenoongi.

A:tum aise nahin manoge huh?

He runs after her in the room n grabs her n tickles her. She finally gives in.

K:ok ok, main haari. I'll wear it.

A:Good. Ab kapre lo aur bathroom mein change karke aao.

She goes in n changes. She comes out 15 mins later pulling her top n skirt down.

A:WOW!!! UR GORGEOUS!!!

Kripa is really embarrased.

A:oooh, ur so hot n sexy. I must take some pics.
He gets his phone n starts taking pics of Kripa. Kripa is trying to hide n trying to stop him

K:Angad pls stop it. No, pls stop.

A:ok ok. Yaar, where were u all these years?

K:Main to mumbai mein thi

A:nahin yaar, i mean ur beauty. Y did u hide urself?

K:I didnt. Jo main ho woh main ho. Mujhe dikhaawa pasand nahin.

A:But ur so sexy... hot..

K:Angad dont start that again

A:Amazing...beautiful...irresistable

K:ANGAD UR SICK!!!

She gets a pillow n chases him to hit him. She trips and falls on top of Angad. He cant get his eyes off of her. She is feeling uncomfortable n tries to free herself.

K:Angad pls chodo. Let go pls

He just keeps looking at her n suddenly holds her tighter n closer to his body. Kripa is getting really embarrassed n scared too.

K:Angad pls, pls chodo. Let go.

Angad n turns her over making her lye on her back on the floor. He is so close to her that she can feel his breath in her face n he can hear her heart beats. She is really scared now. N he tries to kiss her. But she pushes him n runs to the bathroon n locks herself. Angad is now sitting down thinking.


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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part

lolzzz angad control urself
😉


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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG wow!! dis FF iz soooo kooool!! plzz continue soooooooooooooooon!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
cool parts........this ff is rly nice............continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part




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Edited by iamsmart - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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K: Angad please leave me alone. Go away. This is the only thing u know how to do na, Larkiyo ke piche bhagna. I hate u just go away.

A: I didn't mean to Kripa. I don't know something came over me.

Just then the door opens snd gehna comes in, she's surprised to see Angad in her room.

G: Angad tum yaha.

A: oh yeah I came here wid Kripa, she's in the bathroon right now.

G: oh ok. Do u know Kripa???

A: Yeah our parents r best friends

G: oh thats nice.

A: alright then, I'll see u later.

He leaves still thinking about what just happened.
He thinks, "what did u just do Angad, and that too wid Kripa. whta's happening to u. Your choice is really getting bad"

Kripa on the other hand is in the bathroom crying and changing at the same time.

K: What else did u expect from him Kripa. You're the one who's stupid.

She comes out and sees gehna.

G: Kripa where were u for the whole day. It was really fun we went sight seeing.

K: nowhere I was just here.

G: oh r u ok?? U don't look that good.

K: yeah I'm fine.

G: Alright then lets go have dinner. Everybody's downstairs.

Kripa is going downstairs for dinner. She is wearing the salwar kameez she was wearing before. her face is very pale coz she had been crying. she sees Angad sitting at a table but she tries to avoid him. She is downstairs n sees that there r only two tables left with seats. One table has Angad n the other has Shaan. Gehna runs to Shaan's table n sits down. Kripa hesitantly sits infront of Angad.

A:Hey kripa, kripa, naaraaz ho mujhse? Maine sorry kehdiya na.

Kripa isnt looking at him n isnt responding either

A:Main to sirf mazak kar raha tha. Kab serious hogaya, pata hi nahin chala

She still isnt responding

A:Kripa, please, kuch to bolo. Mujhse khafa matt ho please.

He holds her hand which is on the table. She moves her hand. He then gets up n goes on the stage

A:Ladies n gentlemen, may i have ur attention pls.

Now Kripa turns n looks at him speaking

A:I would like to sing a song for someone jo mujhse root gayi hai. Please bear with me. (in his mind he is thinking of a song that will make Kripa laugh)

Teri kurti sexy lagdi ve kurti sexy
Teri chunri sexy lagdi ve chunri sexy
Lagdi ve lagdi ve, lagdi ve lagdi ve
teri chunri sexy

Everyone is cheering n clapping for Angad while Kripa is crying as she feels disgusted. She gets up from the table n leaves. Angad goes after her

A:hey kya huya? Gaana acha nahin laga kya? Im sorry. Main to sirf mazak kar raha tha

He grabs Kripa's arm n she turns around n says angrily

K:Mazak? haan Angad. tumhare liye sab mazak hai. Jo tumne upar kiya mazak tha aur jo ab kiya woh bhi mazak hai. Tum to behek rahe the upar par tum use mazak ka naam de kar mukar jaate. Par mere liye ye mazak nahin hai. jabse main tumse milli hoon, maine tumhari har baat ko mazak maana hai. Par ab nahin. Serious hona seek lo Angad. Tumhare kaam ayega.

Saying that she leaves to go to her room. A silent Angad is standing there thinking about what has just hit him. He has never been lectured like this in his life. N he hasnt ever taken anyone seriously in life either. But Kripa's words kept repeating in his ears. A tear drops from Angad's eye.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnx but i wanted to rename it n change a few things about it, like the ending for instance.
Edited by Kaj! - 18 years ago

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