A-K Dosti ki hai, nibhaani to padegi

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey,
Me n few members of KYPH section had written a fan fic 2 yrs back n i wanted to repost them again.

a young girl with beautiful eyes, gr8 hair, petite and simple named kripa. she meets a smart, debonair young man who happens to be the son of her father's friend. his name is angad. he is passionate a born flirt. he also a rock star, well lets say has an attitude of one

they meet each other in the music academy. kripa is walkin in the corridor. angad is talkin to someone in the corridor and kripa is walkin her nose deep into books and a walkman on her head. she doesnt see him and bangs into him. her books fall down and angad bends down to help her.

their eyes meet.............they keep on lookin..... at each other...


A: what the hell. Dekh kar chala karo. Can't u see through those fat ass glasses ur wearing.

K: oops sorry. I didn't mean too.

angad just brushes her off, yeah yeah whatever.

They both walk past eachother.

Angad goes to the canteen in the academy to get himself coffee. He gets the coffee n turns around. He accidentally spills the coffee on the girl behind him in the queue. The girl is kripa. She is shocked n her top is stained with the coffee.

Angad:Damn i didnt see u there.

Kripa:Thanx for the shower (in a jokey kind of a way. not rude)

Angad:Hey its not my fault. Y were u so near to me in the queue

Kripa:Hello?! This is a queue. If i stand 5 metres away from u, someone else will push in. U know its ur fault but ur not gonna agree to it. N sorry, u dont even know the meaning of that word right? Instead of saying sorry ur blaming everything on me.

Angad:well u bumped into me in the morning too.

Kripa: Yes i know. It was my fault n i said sorry. Now its ur fault say sorry.

Angad:What?! Forget it!

Kripa:uff...theres no point wasting my time on u. Keep ur sorry to ur self n make sure ur ego isnt bigger than ur head or else u wont be able to walk through the door.

Saying that she leaves n looks at her leaving furiously. He is confused. He has never been spoken like that to by anyone. For the first time someone who is young has dominated him (thats what he feels like). Then he shakes his head thinking "Kaisi ladki hai uff". Then he spots this slim n sexy girl. so now he is busy chatting her up as usual.


plz do comment whether i should post the remaining parts😛

Kaju
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!!

nice one!!

plzz contininue sooon!😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: SujalkiDeewani

kool! 1st 1 to comment! lemme read n comment actually...lol! 😆 😉


lol 😆 waiting for ur comment 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey kaj,
amazing intro and the part

i really liked it

would love to read further




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Posted: 18 years ago
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Angad is chatting wid some girl while Kripa just looks at him angrily.

She leaves from there. She goes home and her mom says, "Kripa beta hurrry up and go get changed. Today ur dad's best friend and his family are coming over for dinner."

K: ok mom. I'll be right back.

In the evening Naina, Dilip, Angad, and Karthick come to their house.
Everybody is hugging and chatting while Angad is just sitting there being ignorant. he thinks "Kaha mom ne phasa diya."

Just then Kripa comes out with some juice for everybody, looking really pretty in a baby blue plain salwaar suit.
Angad is shocked seeing Kripa. Kripa also looks at him but doesn't say anything.
She hugs Naina and Dilip and simply says hi to Angad and Karthick.
(I'm making all the family members positive)

Then she goes back inside in her room.
Outside everybody is eating and enjoying thmselves while Angad just keeps looking at the door in which kripa went. He feels really uncomfortable.
Kripa's dad notices this and says, "R u ok beta. I know u must not be used to this."

A: no i'm ok uncle I just need some fresh air.

Kripa's dad: "ok why won't u go outside and have a walk. i'll ask Kripa to show u around."

He calls Kripa outside, "Kripa beta tum Angad ko apna ghar dekhao, garden, show him the paintings that u made."
(By the way Kripa's family is pretty rich too)

Then Kripa comes into the living the living room n doesnt look so please.
She looks at Angad n says "Chaliyen".
They both start walking towards the Garden
Angad: Hum bahar kyun jaa rahein hai?

Kripa: Aap ne hi to kaha tha ki aap ko fresh air chahiye

Angad:Haan chahiye par mujhe tumhara ghar dekhna hai, tumhari paintings aur most importantly, tumhara bedroom.

Kripa isnt too pleased
Kripa:sorry par main kisi areh gaireh ko apna kamra nahin dikhati. Par kyun ki papa ne kaha hai to main tumhe dikhaoongi. BUT Dont touch anything in it. ok?

Angad:yeah ok whatever

They enter her bedroom n Angad feels like he is in paradise. He looks around him. He is mesmerised by her photos n paintings.

Angad: Nice pics yaar. U look much better in the photos.

Kripa:Thanx (sarcastically)
Kripa is feeling irritated n uncomfortable around him coz of what happened in the academy. But she still speaks to him politely as he is a guess in her house.

Kripa: Aap kuch peeyenge?

Angad: Yeah sure.
She goes downstairs to get him something to drink. Meanwhile Angad is roaming around her room touching her things. He spots her diary. He reads todays entry:

Uff...what a crap day. Pata nahin kiska chehra dekha tha maine ute samay. Academy ek batameez ladka milla. Kya naam hai uska..haan Angad the rockstar. Ghamandi. Sorry kehna nahin jaanta. Samajtha hoga ki har ladki usse inferior hai. I dont think so. hes dealt with the wrong girl. Agar woh aaj sorry kehta to shayad main uske baare mein ye sab nahin likthi par usne mera mood kharab kar diya. Sirf mood bhi nahin, t-shirt bhi.

Angad is amused by this. Kripa comes into the room n sees him with the diary. She puts the drink on the table n snatches the diary off him
Kripa:How dare u? Maine kaha tha na kisi bhi cheez ko haath mat lagana. To phir tumne mere diary ko kyun khola?

Angad:Agar private hai to sambhaal kar rakna chahiye, table par nahin rakna chahiye. Waise Kripa, parne do naa. Mere itni taarif kiya hai apni diary mein. Main tumhari previous entries bhi parna chahti hoon

Angad is trying to get the diary off her but she is trying to run n holding it behind her.

Kripa:Angad no, go away.
She bangs onto the table n some pics of her fall. They r modelling type pics where she is wearing sexy outfits. Angad sees this n is impress n cant get his eyes off the pics.
Angad:Wow!!! Tum sexy bhi ho? Yummy!

Kripa:ANGAD!!!

Angad:arre sach hi to keh raha hoon. Tum modelling karti ho kya?

Kripa:Nahin woh mere cousins mere ghar aye the aur hum ne aise hi, mazaak ke liye photos khinche. Pls give me my photos.

Kripa's mum: Kripa...Kripa, neeche aajao. Angad ko bhi boolao, khaana ready hai.

Kripa is tensed n saying:Ayi mum

She leaves her diary on the table n rushes down stairs. Angad puts the pics in the diary n tucks his diary in the back of his trousers. He pulls his shirt out to cover it. He goes downstairs to join them for dinner

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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part

ahun naughty angad took her private diary 😆

cont soon.




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Posted: 18 years ago
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Kripa runs downstairs and after a while Angad comes too. They all eat dinner. Angad is sitting next to Kripa.

A: Aunty the food is really good. I love the kheer that u made.

K's mom: actually beta Kripa made the kheer.

Angad looks at Kripa: oh.

After dinner they all leave, K's mom and Dad go too their room to sleep.

Kripa's still in the living room watching tv. When there's a knock on the door. Kripa hesitates a bit but still opens the door slowly and sees that its Angad.

K: tum, what r u doing here again

A: oh how sweet.

K: I know i am, but what r u doing here.

A: I left my wallet in ur room.

K: How can u leave ur wallet in my room. You didn't even take it out.

A: Yeah but it must have fell when I was chasing u, or someone might have stolen it.

K: oh tumhari soch bhi na. Fine come wid me.

She takes him to her room
She looks around and says "see it's not here"

A: How do I know that u didn't hide it somewhere.

K: Why would i hide it, i don't need ur money. I'm rich baby.

A: I'm still gonna check

He looks around, opens all her closets, throws all her stuff everywhere.

K: what the hell r u doing.

She grabs him by the arm and says, "get out of my room."

A: ok ok I wasn't planning on staying either.

K: hogayi apko tasali, did u find ur wallet.

A: no, but i'm sure u hid it somewhere.

K: ok then good luck trying to prove that. Bye now.

She pushes him out of her room and her house.
At the door she says sweetly, "bye I'll see u in the morning"

Angad leaves smirking to himself, knowing that the wallet isnt with kripa, but actually is in his car.

The next day at the academy. Angad is sitting in the canteen, when an angry Kripa is walking to him. She grabs the coffee that he was drinking and yells, "I want my diary back right now."

A: hi kripa, good morning. How r u doing?

K: Shut up Angad mujhe meri diary wapas chahiye.

Angad:arre naraaz kyun hote ho. Maine abhi tak 1st chapter nahin para hai.

Kripa: Angad, mujhe mere photos aur diary wapas chahiye.

Angad: Arre tum aise maang rahe ho jaise tum mujh par favour kar rahe ho. Thoda pyar se. politely.

Kripa: Angad, PLEASE give my things back. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

Angad: Nahin

Kripa:Huh?
A
ngad:haan nahin. Im quite bored when i get bored. ur diary will entertain me. aur tumhare photos....ooooh sexy...mind blowing...gorgeous. Mujhe tumhare photos se pyar ho gaya hai (sarcastically).

Kripa:ANGAD!!! ( she calms down) Angad pls. Mere liye woh photos kuch khaas nahin. Agar tum chaho to tum unhe jalaa bhi sakte ho. Par pls meri diary wapas kar do. Woh sirf diary nahin, meri zindagi hai.

She is upset n leaves quietly leaving a confused Angad behind.

Angad is at home now n its the evening. He is lying on his bed n thinking about what Kripa had said. He goes to open n read the book but Kripa's words r still in his mind.
He decides to return it back to her.

Kripa is at home alone as her parents have gone out for a business party. She hears the door bell n goes to open the door,

Kripa: tum?

Angad:haan woh main tumhari diary lautaane ayaa hoon
He gives her the diary back
Angad:im sorry

Kripa: Kya? Kya kaha tumne? Kuch sunai nahin diya

Angad: Im...im sorry. Main shayad bahot bura hoon. logo ko tang karta hoon. par main tina bhi bura nahin hoon ki main kisiki zindagi cheen loo
Kripa is suprised at his words n says thanx

Angad:mujhe chalna chahiye

Kripa:ok

Angad:bye good night

Kripa:Good night

Kripa is so happy to have her diary back that she didnt care about the photos
Angad goes to his room n sees her pics on the table. He looks at them n thinks"mujhe Kripa ko ye lautaana chahiye"
Then he looks at the photos n says: Naa. These photos r irresistable. They r mine now.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww, this ff...is so good! the ak teasing scenes are so cute!

cont soon!

<3 kiran
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwww this ff is awesome.........i love ak chemistry and scenes.......its great.......continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey just finished reading....wow....that was awesome....do continue soon...

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