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Chapter 11- The Seduction…Not So Much (Aye!)

"You ready?" Prithvi asked, cleaning his gun mindlessly. He shot into the dirt floor, smiling.

"Yeah." I said, walking out in my track pants and sweatshirt. I pulled my hair into a pony tail.

"No." He said, looking me up and down. It was unnerving, really. He grinned, "Why don't you look pretty today?"

"I look pretty every day." I said confidently, cleaning my own gun. Slightly smaller it is of a larger caliber, just like me. Small, but powerful.

"Wear something sexy." He replied, pushing me back into the room.

"Why? We're training." I ask, completely confused.

"No." He said, sternly. He grinned at me. "C'mon you own sexy stuff. I've seen it. Pretend it's Angad you're dressing up for." I rolled my eyes, and returned in what he called "booty shorts" and a tank top. Well, it was a halter, sports bra-ish, top. It was white and cute so I bought it, I don't know what it is. I tried to remember the store I bought it at, not the look Angad gave me when buying it. He said that was the sluttiest thing I'd ever chosen to work out in. I tried not to smile at the memory.

"Much better." He said, sighing. "We're training but…a little differently." He explained, trying to find delicate terms.

"Prithvi cut the crap. What am I doing?" He pulled a picture of a man out, setting it on the table.

"You've got to seduce him…at the gym." He said, simply. I examined the picture carefully; he was handsome who I presumed was probably quite the charmer with one single feature amiss.

"He's a Gujraal?" I asked, almost spitting.

"Good work. He is indeed. Ranbir Gujraal, the womanizer." He said nodding as if approving my skill of recognition.

"His eyes gave him away." I explained, staring at the hard steel eyes that I assumed every Gujraal sported.

"Besides the dirty political tactics, that's about all they got from their English descent."

"He's of English descent?" I ask, suddenly sprouting interest. Prithvi chuckled.

"Not for everyone to know though. His grandfather was a British son of a gun."

"Ahh," I said in realization. It explains why they are all such bas***ds.
"Should I do my hair," I asked to him, inspecting myself in the mirror. Prithvi tilted his head and looked at me.

"Your hair looks pretty today," he said dumbly. This was so extremely un-Prithvi. I grinned.

"Sweety your are terrible at giving compliments. I am not sure how Aaliya puts up with you." He blushed at the mention of Aaliya. Then suddenly the sternness returned to his face. This was so terribly un-Prithvi like.

"You're so smitten, Prithvi." I laughed as he glared at me.

"I am not." He replied, indignantly. "I simply do not stay in the company of females very much. You and Aaliya are all I got." I suppose he means that seriously not just in the female sense. We were his family. Sad, but true…we were his broken, strung along family.

"We are all you've got. So we gotta teach you some etiquette." I sighed. "You're so insolent."

"So says the thief." He mused. I smiled sarcastically.

"You never wake a lady with ice water…" I add, scolding. He grinned.

"You never wake a lady with ice water. You're no lady. You're Kritika…" He laughed. I'm glad I'm so highly thought of. I sigh dramatically.

"We're getting late."

"No. Ranbir doesn't show up at the gym till 8. We gotta wait." He said, looking me up and down again. I wish he would stop that.

"What?!" I ask, annoyed. He stopped grinning and glanced at my face again.

"Nice body." He replied, returning to the fascinating task of gun cleaning.

"Men." I groan, rolling my eyes. Prithvi finds my annoyance amusing, though he is fully absorbed in his task.

"Are we going to the range?" I ask, seeing him load 2 bullets into the black chambers.

"Nope." He said simply. Never more in my life had I wished I had the ability to read minds more than then. No body had the power to keep my guessing as to what was going on in their head like Prithvi did. If he wasn't taken, it would be oddly attractive.
But then I remember I'm a married woman….married. There's another thing, he reminds me vaguely of Angad. I miss him so much. I sigh deeply, Prithvi glances at me. "Call him." He sighs, handing me his phone. "You need to hear his voice, then you'll be fine."

How did he do that? Was I that bad at hiding the way I felt? This was what I thrived on, my acting ability. I shouldn't feel offended, keeping in mind that I'm not trying to hide anything from Prithvi.

I take the phone and reluctantly dial the number that I needn't see the phone for. Whenever I touched a mobile lately, my fingers dialed it without thinking. It was reflex.

"Hello." I heard Aaliya pick up. She sounded happy; it pained me to know that she had forgotten me so easily. I sigh despite telling myself not to.
"Hello?" She repeats. I feel near tears, my hand refuses to hang up.
"Bhai. I think it's for you!" Aaliya shouts annoyed. I can practically each footstep though it is muffled.
"Hello…" He asked annoyed and tired. His voice dripped fatigue, he hadn't slept. Guilt moved into me again, the phone was snatched from me. Prithvi put it on speakerphone.
"Is Kripa there?" He asked, obviously.
"No." Angad said angrily. "She's not."
"Where is she?" Prithvi asked, wiping my cheeks. I hadn't realized when I'd started crying.
"She's dead. Who is this?" He asked, bitterly.
"Prithvi. She's dead? Well, I guess that cheater deserved it." Prithvi said, amused. I glare at him but he's rubbing my back for me to stop crying. Another one of his mysteries.
"Is there a reason you called?" Angad asked, nearly fuming. I could hear the anger in his voice and it scared me. His anger was a thing to be feared deeply because it seldom came out.
"Yeah, I wanted to know how Kripa died." He said, seriously.
"I shot her. In an encounter. Do you mind?" Angad answered, annoyed.
"Oh." Prithvi said, fake disappointment in his voice. "You wish she was still alive?"
"Yeah. I do." He said, sighing. The anger left his voice immediately.
"Does Aaliya know what you did?" He asked, gently. Why Angad was talking so freely to Prithvi, that too, on the phone did not quite make sense to me. But I was happy in a way to hear his voice actually talk. Even if it was about me.
"She knows Kripa commit suicide." Angad said plainly. I smiled, despite everything he did what I thought he would. Thought the thing he wanted most desperately was to blame himself, but I knew he'd see it logically.
"Oh. That's…sad. Could I talk to Aaliya?" Prithvi asked uncomfortably.
"Sure." Angad said sternly. Me and Prithvi both laughed since we could hear Aaliya run to the phone.
"Hello?" She asked, excited and breathless.
"Hey." Prithvi said coolly.
"Prithvi? Hi." She said awkwardly.
"You already said hi." Prithvi said, amused.
"Oh." She said awkwardly. "What's up?"
"Nothing. I was just bored so I thought I'd call." Prithvi grinned widely. He smiled at the mention of her name and here she was talking to him. I wish his face would get stuck like that, it would be hilarious. He was handsome when he smiled, but sternness was the normal expression.
"Well, it's early. What are you doing?"
"Nothing just hanging around with a friend of mine." He glanced at me, awaiting me to leave. I sat there to bother him.
"You wanna hang out later?" Aaliya asked, expectantly.
"Sure. How about Friday?" Prithvi asked. Knowing Aaliya, she was probably nodding her head vigorously. I silently laughed at her.
"Yeah. Cool. Same old spot?" Prithvi's cheeks flushed out of embarrassment.
"Like always." He said. "Okay, bye."
"Bye." Aaliya said happily.

"Same old spot?" I asked, amused.

"We went out a few times…" Prithvi said discomfited.

"Few times? C'mon Prithvi. I knew about you guys. Aaliya told me EVERYTHING."

"Everything?" Prithvi's cheeks flushed red. I nodded, and my face went serious, "You cheated on me?" I clutched my heart dramatically and fell to the sofa.

"No, you cheated on me." He said, offended. "I was so pissed when I found out about you and Angad. I was in love with you… a married woman." Prithvi said, seriously.

I stared at him wide-eyed. There was a long pause of silence.

The roar of his laughter filled the room. I glared at him. "God, you're gullible."

"That wasn't funny." I explain. "At all."

"I do love you though." He kissed me on my cheek. "You're my best friend."

"Eh. You're alright too." I said, annoyed. "Just kidding." I laughed. "I love you too." I pecked his cheek. "Thank you for calling Angad."

"It's okay. He's upset." He stated, again.

"I know." I sighed. "He umm…shot me."

"I know. Four times." Prithvi said. He clicked his tongue.

"I told him to, or I'd shoot myself." I defended. He shook his head.

"You're always thinking about that day. It's okay." Prithvi rubbed my shoulder.

"We're getting late." I sighed, wincing at his sympathy. He shrugged and I decided to jog to the gym. It was a stretch but I got there before him.

"Dang girl." He sighed. I panted, hands on knee outside the entrance. We walked in.

"Well Kritika, you know the drill. Just go about the same routine we do every day. Without me. When you see Ranbir….well I think you know how to seduce a man pretty well."

"Puh-lease, I invented the game of seduction. I don't have to…?" My mind wandered.

"No, you don't. After you've got him, do whatever. He's all yours." He sighed.

"Can I kill him?" I asked, seriously. Prithvi shook his head "He's all yours." He pecked my cheek and walked away in all seriousness.

I felt a pair of eyes watching me jab at the punching bag. I turned around to find the tall man from the picture, Ranbir Gujraal.

The famous line comes in, "Are you checking me out?" He chuckled openly as I smiled sweetly.

"I cannot imagine what a beautiful young lady like you is doing here…" He stated. I must admit, he did have charm. Immense amounts of it. It was sickening almost.

"What women can't come to the gym?" I asked, batting my eyelashes innocently.

"Of course they can. You're the only one here though." He grinned.

"I believe in hardcore, serious workout. The body is very important." I recited. I was sounding really dumb but it's okay since it was important for him to not know who I was.

"Yes…" He eyes lingered at my chest, my bare stomach, and my thighs. "The body is very important." I felt like drop kicking him but I resisted the urge.

"Is there something you wanted?" I asked, cleverly. He smirked.

"Well, I want a lot of things but a drink would be great."

"A drink? It's too early in the morning for that. How about coffee?" I asked perkily.

"I know a great hotel around here. They serve the best cold coffee." He said, wiping his sweaty face. He was muscular, I inspected, it was obvious he came her often.

Of course, he was talking about the Hilton where he was staying. His intentions were very clear, quite unlike mine. I would have fun with this. We took his car and drove to the Hilton. We sat in the lobby caf.

"We look like idiots." I laughed comfortably. He nodded.

"It's okay. As long as we're comfy." We sipped on our coffee.

"Oh. My name is Ranbir. Ranbir Gujraal. Pleased to meet you." He put his hand out to shake mine.

"Wow. A Gujraal. The pleasure's all mine." I whisper low but loud enough to hear.

"Your name?" He asked. I gulped some more coffee.

"Kritika." I said, shaking his hand. He kissed my hand, pretending to be a gentlemen. "Your family is sure the elite one."

"My family is just powerful. Nothing more. Tell me about yourself." He smirked.

"This place is a bit impersonal. You know a quieter place?" I smiled seductively.

"My room's upstairs." He suggested. I shrugged. "Let's go."

PREVIEW: What happens in Ranbir's hotel room? What about the other Gujraal's? Angad spots Kripa…What happens next in Dearest Diary?
Edited by kIrAn...E>GA<3 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
dam* girl u rock at this! awesome part! angad spots kripa?! omg this will be GOOD! I loved the way Angad was talking to prithvi freely.. I wonder what Aaliya would've done if she would've found out Angad shot Kripa upon her will.. dam* this thing rocks! Continue Soon!!

p.s- im on yahoo, too lazii to come on msn lolz
Edited by erier101 - 18 years ago
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kiran wonderful part hun damn prithivi checking out kripa and then ranbir dude, stupid guys, anyways continue soon, this ff rocks, i love it 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part
lolzzzz even prithvi was checking out kripa
gosh! guys


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~Sana~
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fab part
i hope kripa kills him... it will b fun
continue soon
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Chapter 12- When It Falls Apart

We stood in front of his room. "1408" I mused. He glanced at me.

"Nothing as horrendous as murder has occurred here though…" He says teasingly.

"Not yet." I mutter.

"Why? Are you scared?" He asked mischievously. I rolled my eyes dramatically in dismay.

"I don't get scared, sweetheart." I said in a low whisper.

"We'll see about that, won't we?" He whispered back. We went in the room, he sat on the bed. I made my way to the window bench.

"What a view." I said, breathless. I looked out of the window. There was a garden balcony filled with white begonias. Looking down, the city seemed to far away and the clouds looked like I could reach out and touch it. I could almost taste them.

"Yeah. I always get this room just for that." He laughed. He put a cup of coffee up and tried to make conversation. It was 4 now. We made decent conversation, he wasn't terribly disgusting…nothing I hadn't encountered before.

It was intimidating sometimes, his charm and good looks but then glancing into his eyes all admiration vanished.

I fed him some bull that I was a girl with a very conservative Muslim family, therefore changed my name so I could work. My occupation? A bar dancer. My real name was supposedly Nafisa. I liked that name.

For some reason it was a common alias for me. Aaliya said it was unsafe to use the same assumed name more than once, but I never had been caught.

"Nafisa…" He started.

"Yes." I answered.

"Are you not hungry? I'll order dinner…" I glanced at the clock. It was eight. I nodded, as he called in our order for dinner.

We sat, eating in a matter of minutes. Well, he ate. I work better on an empty stomach. I picked at my food in a very feminine manner to make it appear I was eating.

"So tell me about your family…" He said, chewing barbarically. I rolled my eyes.

"Abu died when I was younger, Ammi took care of us for a while, until Hasan was old enough to work…"

"Hasan?" He asked, raising an eyebrow.

"My younger brother…" I assure. "But he's a locksmith. He doesn't make much. So I work too."

"You dance?"

"Well, yes. So I went from Nafisa to Kritika, since my boss refused to hire any Muslim girl, but surprisingly he has no trouble hiring Kritika. Discriminatory asshole…" I started, seriously angry. Sometimes, I get a little caught up in things.

"You're family is okay with that?" He asked, slurping some pasta into his mouth.

"Heavens no, they think I work as a pharmacy technician." I laugh, eying the empty glass. I was thirsty unfortunately. He poured a glass of champagne in plain view. It wasn't laced, unless of course he has some sort of sick understanding with the room service. I doubt that at present but surprisingly, I drank it. Glass upon glass.

My mind and judgment was glazed with alcohol. I felt unbearably tired. Nothing was in my food and drink; I had learned to feel when that had happened. Memories of when I was last drinking flashed through my mind; my mind drifted into far off thoughts of Angad. I could feel my consciousness slip away as I drifted into what I thought was sleep.

The fear of not knowing where you are does not compare to the feeling of terror you experience when you wake naked next to a man whose barest bones you despise. I knew I had messed up, that too badly.

Angered beyond words, I made my way to the bathroom. I came out, showered and dressed myself. Ranbir was awake, he yawned widely.

"Good Morning." He said, cheerily.

"Nothing terribly good about it." I spat with disgust. He chuckled. I wish I could shoot him right there, but unfortunately, due to my agonizing mistake I couldn't.

"We should meet again sometime." He said grinning.

"We would have to." I shook my wet hair, trying to sound flirty but I was plain disgusted. At Ranbir, at myself. Reality sank in as I recalled Angad. Hell, I'm a married woman. That just woke up realizing she had indulged in a one night stand. Indulge was not the word. More like endured.

"Nafisa…" He shook me out of my trance.

"Huh?" I asked.

"You were right. The body is VERY important…." He said, amused. I want to stab him. "You were time well spent."

"As were you." I lied.

"Do you need money for a taxi?"

"I have some." I say.

"Oh. Do you need money at all?" He asks, a bit confused.

"I'm not a whore." I say, appalled overcome with bitterness.

"Of course not. I was just asking…" He stumbled over his words. "Your family must be worried."

"Hm…." I thought. "Will you be here tomorrow?" I ask, smiling attractively.

"Yeah. I'll see you at the gym. Tomorrow er…the day after."

"Okay." I say properly. He leans forward and kisses me before I leave. His lips leave a warm trail like acid. I step back.

"I'll see you tomorrow then."

"See you." He said.

I ran home. Literally. I didn't jog. I didn't pace. I RAN. I collapsed on our sofa, extremely tired.

"What happened to you?" Prithvi asked, confused. "Where were you?"

"Ranbir…" I pant; I put my head in my hands. Pulling through my hair, frustrated I say panting. "I screwed up. I screwed up bad."

"What happened?" Prithvi asked, rubbing my back.

"I slept with him." I say, almost in tears.

"Why?" Prithvi asks, confused.

"I don't know." I say. My head was about to explode. I couldn't take this anymore. Years ago, I had saved my pride from a Gujraal and here I was, returning home after compromising that same pride to another Gujraal.

"It was a mistake." Prithvi said, reassuring. "It's okay, you didn't mean to."

"I'm married Prithvi! I just cheated on Angad!" I break out.

"No, you didn't." He said calmly. "He's a widower, remember?" He continued quietly. "Kritika, you have to realize that if Angad killed his wife that means you don't have a husband anymore…" He reasoned quietly again.

"Prithvi. He may not have a wife but I still have a husband…I may never see him again but I still belong to him." I yelled out my first thoughts. My thoughts got emotional, especially when it came to things like this. I was very Orthodox. Angad always said it was a negative trait of mine.

"Belong to him?!" Prithvi yelled. I had never seen him yell before. "Kritika, don't you get it?!"

"What?!" I ask, annoyed.

"I've said it before and I'll say it again. People like us cannot afford to…." I interrupted him.

"Have people like family to distract us away from our purpose?!" I finished knowing what he was about to say. "If your mom and dad and Mishti were alive, would you still say that?!"

"Yes. I would." He sighed. "Kritika, they're the reason I'm saying. Everyone needs family. I know that…." He sighs, defeated. I fear he may cry. Prithvi and Angad are the strongest people I know, if he cries, I will be lost.

"The more you have to lose, the greater the chance that you lose them." He says, tired. He mutters, "I'm sorry", and left. I went after him.

"Prithvi, I didn't mean to hurt you…" I said lamely, why was I so terrible at doing things right…

"Hurt me?" He chuckled, brushing it off. "I'm fine, Kritika."

"Don't you dare!" I yelled, suddenly enraged. "Don't you dare look me in the eye and lie to my face." Prithvi looked as if he were to slap me but instead he sat, annoyed on the bed.

"I don't get it, Kritika." He sighed. I sat beside him. "What?" I said sympathetic but obviously annoyed.

"I miss them all." He said, quietly.

"I know…" I said in almost a babying tone.

"But it sucks the most that I miss her…and she's f***ing alive. She's right there! And I can't have her!" He says, frustrated. He doesn't say Aaliya's name but I know it's her he's speaking of.

"What's stopping you?" I ask, fighting the urge to touch his shoulder. He hates sympathy that I have figured out.

"You." He sighs. I raise an eyebrow.

"Pardon?" I ask, politely.

"You and Angad are a perfect example as to why it will never work. I don't want the same thing to happen to us that happened to you two."

"Aaliya is not me and you are DEFINITELY not Angad…." I sigh, falling to the sofa in a manner far too dramatic to be originally my own.

"Sometimes I well wish I was…" I hear him mumble.

"Pardon?" I repeat.

"I'm afraid sleeping with a partial Brit has turned you into quite the polite one…" He chuckles, mocking me. I glare at him with intention to kill. I fear he picked up on that.

"That was a terrible thing to say." He apologizes.

"I feel terrible." I admit. "I hate that man." I add genuinely. "I hate myself."

"You shouldn't. It wasn't you fault."

"I've never screwed up this bad before." I say, frustrated. The light breeze can't remove the humidity built by frustration in the room.

"Everyone screws up." He says, brushing it off. I glace at him, "You don't." I defend. He cackled.

"Of course I do. Do you remember when I returned home one night with black eye. I was so banged up." I remembered, it was when we were "in a relationship." I practically laugh every time I think of it.

"When you came home totally wasted?" I asked, amused. He laughed, nodding.

"I got into a fight over you…"

"Me?"

"With Angad. We both beat the crap outa each other. It was crazy." He laughed.

"Why?" I asked, confused. He snickered louder.

"We were fighting over you…" He laughed. I raised an eyebrow, questioning. I mentally asked why since he was always in love with Aaliya.

"There was a time back then when I liked you. I mean I knew you were married to Angad but it was a dumb attraction." He laughed. I raised an eyebrow, this time amused.

"You know what I mean?" He asked, confused.

"Yeah. I do." I muttered. Being attracted to Prithvi is one thing I can't afford, I think. I brush the thought off. It's not that his personality is attractive or I'm lusting over his body or anything (though, he does have a nice one.) It's that he oddly reminds me of Angad. They are so similar in their mannerisms, their speech, their actions, their thought process, it's frightening.

"You do?" He asked, amused. I nodded. "Do you know Angad?"

"Who doesn't?" He joked. I glanced at him again. He was avoiding something.

"How do you know Angad?" I persisted. He shook his head.

"He's your husband, and Aaliya's brother." He shrugged. It didn't take a genius to realize he was hiding something. I sighed. "Liar."

"What'd did you call me?" He asked, half offended. I rolled my eyes and proclaimed I was going to take, yet another shower.

After forty-five minutes of mindless steam rising in the bathroom, I realize I've forgotten a towel. I sigh, annoyed again.

"Prithvi!!!!!" I yell. He was obviously busy because he replied quite angrily, "WHAT?!"

"Can you be a dear and grab me a towel…." I asked, sweetly. I see a hand, holding a green towel reach into the bathroom door. That wasn't Prithvi's hand. I recognized that hand.

Soon, the figure followed in with the towel. I suddenly wished I was invisible. Please go away, I mentally pleaded.

"Kripa?" The voice asked. I backed into the corner of the stall, wishing I could vanish. The voice was familiar but frightening. The last person I wanted to see right now.

PREVIEW: Angad? Aaliya? A Gujraal maybe? Who is the towel holding figure?
Edited by kIrAn...E>GA<3 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
kripa is very funny... so is prithvi... angad is a complete loser... aaliyah is very sweet...
now who is in the door... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part
but did that gujral mix someting in kripa's drink that she screwed up???
i hope its angad at the door...
continue soon
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omggg she slept with himmm WAT A LOSERRRR whor* 😡
im sorry im just angry 😡 😡
cnt soon
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Originally posted by: sahr_8

omggg she slept with himmm WAT A LOSERRRR whor* 😡
im sorry im just angry 😡 😡
cnt soon

uh.....okay?😕 ur gonna dislike the story sum more as u read on....if ur so easily angered i suggest u read sumthin wit a more simple plot line. dude, its juss a story...so chilll.....ugh, im continuing soon tho....so....thanx for reading? yeah.

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E> GA <3

p.s. its human to err, i cant make all da characters all goody-goody. its unrealistic and it lacks depth.

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