'DARD ka rishta' KYPH ff END pg 35

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Posted: 18 years ago

#71

This one is coming out really nicely! BTW, I just caught up with the Turtleneck Girl after I returned from vacation. That was a very good ending. I really like all your fan fictions. Thanks, Bheegi!

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A&K_4Evr-S

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Posted: 18 years ago

#72

first of all wats the Gynae floor and secondly
MISTY IS A BI*** AND SHES A WH*** AND SHES A $^$^&@$$&%&$% i hate herrr
plz kill her soon i seriously dunt feel sorry for her so called bimari!!!! 😡

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bheegi

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Thanks icegirl, Sana, Bugs, meme, angllgurl, namelesser and Sahr

Mishti has an illness which makes her very suspicious and paranoid about other people. Unfortunately, her parents make it worse by over protecting her and poor Angad is getting trapped by them 😭

Sahr- Gynae floor is the gynaecology (maternity) ward in the hospital. That is just the lingo among med students. Please ask me if u guys don't understand any of the medical terms/lingo.

Nameless, thanks for reading and liking Turtleneck 😊

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Abhilasha Sharma

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Posted: 18 years ago

#74

bechara angad.... he is fully cornered.... 😕
nice updatee... 😳

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Arra Dollie

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Posted: 18 years ago

#75

awww tht was an interesting prt.......aww poor kripa ....being offended by mishti...anyway cont sooon

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bheegi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#76

Thanks guys 😊

PART 8:

After Mishti's attempted suicide, Angad and Kripa did not meet for many months except for casual hellos in the hospital hallways. Angad passed the final MBBS exam at the top of the class. Mishti barely scraped through, thanks to the generousness of Dr Dilip Bose's medical colleagues who were grading the exams.

Angad was still looking for an opportunity to tell Mishti but after the finals, Mishti and her parents had left for a month long US vacation (of course that is what they told everyone, they were actually going to meet world renowned psychiatrists in the US)

Angad was now an intern and Kripa was in 4 th year. BMI had a tradition, as part of their community service in the rural towns, they would send teams of 1 intern and 2 or 3 forth year students to different community clinics for a month long rotation. They would be responsible for running the clinic for a month, with the Intern acting as the supervisor for the 2 students. Adjacent to each clinic, was a small 2-bedroom house with a cook and a servant to help with day to day living. The clinic had 1 nurse and 1 compounder to help the young doctors.

As fate would have it, Angad was assigned Harshini and Kripa as his students for the month long rural rotation. They left for Madhupur gaon soon after they were assigned their rotations. Kripa found out about Angad after they reached their destination as he came separately after finishing some work in Mumbai. Kripa and Harshini had arrived 2 days back and had already settled in the cute little house. The house was surrounded by beautiful gardens with lots of flowers. There was a nice patio on the outside with a wooden swing and a table with 4 chairs. They had given a list of their favorite foods to the cook, Ramuji, an elderly gentleman who loved to please the students from "the big hospital in Mumbai"

Kripa and harshini were sitting out on the porch in the evening, enjoying the sunset when they saw Angad walk in with his bags. Angad and Kripa were initially pleased to see each other but soon froze as they remembered what had happened in the last few months.

"HI Angad! Congratulations on topping the finals!" said Harshini as she welcomed him.

"Hum se zyaada kaam mat karwaana, please Angad!!" Harshini tried to lighten up the air as she could sense some tension between Angad and Kripa. Kripa had not told anyone about her feelings for Angad or what had happened with Mishti the other night.

Angad kept quiet and walked towards his room. "Ramu kaka, Khana tayyaar hai kya?" he shouted from his room. He was familiar with this center as he had spent his month in the 4 th year at the same place.

They all sat down to a delicious dinner but did not talk much. Harshini did most of the talking as Angad and Kripa just answered in monosyllables.

"Kripa tumhein kya ho gaya hai?" Harshini asked Kripa when they were getting ready for bed. Kripa and Harshini shared 1 room and left the other one for Angad.
"Kuch nahin….bas thak gayi hoon." Kripa lied

"Angad ko dekh karr hi thakaan shuroo ho gayi. Ab jab kaam karayega tho kya hoga?" Harshini laughed as she thought about working with Angad, the "slave driver"

Kripa sat down beside Harshini and told her the truth….her feelings for Angad….how they used to meet so often…how Mishti warned her…..

"Humnein tumhein pehle hi warn kiya tha….wo Mishti crazy hai…..Angad se door hi rehna…parr tumney hamari ek bhi nahin suni….chalo achha hai wo US gayi huyi hai….hopefully yahan uske koyi informers nahin hai"

"Informers?" Kripa asked surprisingly

"Yes, Kripa, hospital ke aadhe students, residents, aur nurses uske informers hain…..you are safe here because I can't stand her….but how will you resist his charm my dear….yahan tho din raat ka saath hai…..achha hai main kabaab mein haddi hoon….warna tho……" Harshini teased her as Kripa threw a pillow at her.

The three of them started working the very next morning. Soon Angad and Kripa were sharing the same warmth and rapport as if nothing had transpired in the last few months. Angad trusted Kripa's judgement with various patients and he gave her a lot of freedom in treating the patients. Harshini enjoyed reading all the Xrays; she had her heart set on becoming a radiologist. Kripa was sure she wanted to become a Pediatrician; she practically took charge of all the young patients. Angad was amazed to see that Kripa never lost her cool, was always calm and never panicked even in the most emergent situations. The three of them would work in the clinic all day and then retire to their 'house' in the evenings. Harshini was pleasantly surprised to see a change in Angad- no more attitude, no bossing around, he had become caring and sensitive towards his patients…..she guessed it was all because of Kripa.

They would sit outside and talk for hours. Harshini could sense how comfortable Angad and Kripa were with each other; they could be with each other for hours and not even notice if a third person was there. She could tell they were madly in love with each other….just in denial!

Harshini and Kripa would wake up early and take long walks into the open fields surrounding the house. Kripa was very fond of flowers; she would often bring some back with her and arrange them throughout the house. Angad observed Kripa quietly, he was happy to see her so cheerful and full of live. She would always be humming a song and dancing around the house and gardens….how he wanted to hold her and kiss her and pour his feelings out for her. Kripa was aware that Angad's eyes followed her everywhere….how she also longed to be in his arms but Mishti, even in her absence had become an invisible wall between them.

"Harshini, tumhara phone hai" one morning Kripa called for Harshini as she was going in for a shower.

When Kripa came out, she saw Harshini packing her bags as she was wiping her tears.

"Harshini, kya hua?" Kripa was concerned

"Mujhe aaj hi Mumbai jaana hoga…..mere papa hospital mein hai….he had a massive heart attack!" she started sobbing on Kripa's shoulders.

Kripa tried to console her and helped her pack. Harshini soon left by the hospital bus. Angad and Kripa were left alone to manage the clinic. Their work load increased but they did not mind that at all…..when they were together, somehow, they never got tired.

NEXT MORNING

As usual Angad was watching Kripa pluck the flowers from the garden when he heard a loud scream and saw Kripa collapse in the field. "KRIPAAA!!" he ran to her rescue.

He found her unconscious and saw a long black poisonous snake slither away into the bushes. He panicked and carried her inside. He saw the fang marks on her left ankle, as her foot and leg were starting to turn grey…..he quickly got a cloth from the kitchen and tied it on her calf as a tourniquet to prevent the snake poison from spreading towards her heart. There was no one else to help; he called for the compounder and asked him for snake anti-venin (antidote for snake poison).

"Wo tho shahar jaakar laana padhega saahab"

Angad took out a lot of cash and said, "Abhi issi waqt jaakar lekar aayo….paise ki chinta mat karo…..isski jaan mere liye bahut keemti hai….jaldi jao!"

"achha sahib….1 ghanta tho lag jaayega"

"Jitni jaldi ho sake….." Angad squeezed some more cash into his hand

Angad sat down with his face in his hands…..he had never felt so helpless….he was always Mr. Confident when emergencies were presented to him……but today when he saw his love in danger….why were his hands shaking…….? He got up and knew that he was the only one who could save her in this remote village.

He suddenly remembered the old fashioned way of sucking the poison out. He bent down on her ankle and made a small incision around the bite with a scalpel and started sucking out the poison with his mouth…..he sucked as hard as he could…checking her pulses and breathing intermittently. Kripa was still unconscious but still had life in her. Angad had never believed in God till now…..he looked up in the sky and prayed, "God, if you really there, you will be on my side today…I have never asked you for anything…please meri jaan ko bachaa lo" He had tears rolling down his eyes as he saw some blood oozing out from the bite wound ….that was not a good sign….it means the poison was spreading…..he sucked harder to get as much poison out as possible. Her pulse was becoming feeble….Angad prayed, "Bhagwan yadi aapney isse nahin bachayaa tho main bhi……" he paused as he heard "sahib, yeh rahi dawa"

Angad saw the compounder with the vials in his hand……it was like God had himself come to him with the only remaining hope…..he drew up the anti toxin in a syringe and injected into her veins. He waited for a few minutes and kept checking her pulse and breathing. His tears were constantly flowing……he was not sure whether it was too late……

Kripa finally opened her eyes, "Angad? Main yahan?" she looked around to see blood, scalpels, needles, gauzes all around her……Angad could not believe his eyes…..

As she tried to get up, Angad came and sat down on the bed,"leti raho…..main sab samjhata hoon" his tears were still rolling down.

"AH!" she cried in pain as she moved her leg. He put his hand on her ankle and said, "Kripa mere zindagi kaa aaj sabsey badha imtihaan tha….mujhe laga maine tumhey hamesha ke liye kho diya hai…..I can't live without you Kripa….I love you…." He could not control his emotions.

Kripa understood the gravity of the situation as she remembered falling in the garden after a painful sting. She looked at Angad with tears in her eyes; his pain at the thought of losing her was obvious in his eyes. She could not control herself either and hugged him tightly, burying her face in his chest, "Angad….I love you too……I can't help it….I am sorry…."

Angad lifted her face from the chin, "You don't have to be sorry….."he bent over her face and kissed her lips softly. Kripa reciprocated and did not let go of him…..

That accident had changed Angad and Kripa's lives forever…..they both knew they could not live without each other…..they knew they were made for each other….even if they had to fight anyone…they were not going to part. Angad spent the whole night nursing her wound and taking care of her needs. He refused to go back to his room. Kripa went off to sleep in his arms as he cuddled her all night.

He thought, "Kripa, tum se pehle main jaanta bhi nahin tha ki pyaar kya hota hai….bus kitaabon mein likhi baat lagti thi….parr ab ehsaas hua hai ki pyaar sabse khubsoorat cheez hai" he kept kissing her face, hands and neck as she slept in his arms like a baby. He was no longer an atheist….he looked up and thanked God for his most precious possession!

NEXT MORNING

Angad was ready for the clinic when Kripa woke up. "Aaj, tum yahin rest karo…main clinic sambhal loonga" he sat down beside her and kissed her lips.

"Parr akele kaise karr loge…Harshini bhi nahin hai…" she protested.

"Main kuch nahin sun na chahta…these are the doctors orders!!!….Ramu kaka ghar par hi rahengey aur tumhey jo chahiye, wo le aayenge….you just rest…GOT IT!" she smiled as she remembered how he used to always say "GOT IT" when he wanted to be bossy.

When Angad left, Kripa saw flowers all around her room…Angad had gone out early morning and picked her favorite flowers. She blushed and started humming this beautiful song:

"Rajnigandha phool tumhare" from "Rajnigandha"

http://www.dishant.com/album/rajnigandha-(1974).html

rajaneegandhaa phool tumhaare, mahake yoo hee jeewan mein
yoo hee mahake pareet piyaa kee mere anuraagee man mein

aadhikaar ye jab se saajan kaa har dhadakan par maanaa maine
mai jab se un ke saath bandhee, ye bhed tabhee jaanaa maine
kitanaa sukh hain bandhan mein

har pal meree in aakhon mein bas rahate hain sapane un ke
man kahataa hain main rangon kee, yek pyaar bharee badalee ban ke
barasoo un ke aangan mein

….to be continued…

Edited by bheegi - 17 years ago

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Arra Dollie

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Posted: 18 years ago

#77

amazing prt ...they expressed their love.....soo romantic!!😳

Edited by me_iq - 18 years ago

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bugs_bunny

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Posted: 18 years ago

#78

awww.... they both admitted their love!!

i month on their own!! woohoo.. lets hope they get to know each better.. 😛

i bet mishti's parents are going to blackmail him or something maybe! 😕

and he;s so cariing.. sucked the poison out 😳