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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: bheegi

Thanks everyone. AK inspire me like no one ever has. That is why I have all these ideas in my head- thank AK and thank KYPH 😆 😆

I never write stories with sad endings, so don't worry the end will be happy even if the journey has 'dard' in it. Kripa is and always be a confident and independent girl in all my ffs. Angad...arrogant...ofcourse!! 😆

Well that tells me one thing already about ur fanfics till now..hehe..

Nevertheless, I actually love it that way. Well I am really impatient to know the further part of the story..as u mentioned its journey could be DARD but would have Happy ending so..U KILLED it...😭well its OKie..i'll live with it!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks guys 😊

PART 2

CAFETERIA:

Angad and Shabbir join some other friends on a table. "OK, Ms Sharma…ab aap sabke order lee jiye aur jaldi se ley aaeeye!" said Angad authoritatively.

Kripa just stared at him and took her PDA out to take the orders.

"Wow, high tech junior hai, bhai!" quoted Manek, one of the other students.

Prithvi was also at the table but was busy researching something on his laptop and did not even look up.

"mujhe coffee chahiye with spoon sugar and some cream-naa zyaada naa kum. GOT IT!" Angad ordered. Kripa looked at him with a mischievous expression and turned around to bring the orders.

She came back with a tray with drinks, coffee, tea, pakoras, samosas etc etc –whatever she was asked to bring. She saw another woman student sitting next to Angad. The woman had her elbow on Angad's shoulder and whispered something in his ear as Kripa approached the table.

She served everyone their choices but as soon as Angad sipped his coffee, he spit it out, "yeh, kya mazaak hai? Yeh tumney namak daala hai ya cheeni?"

"I am sorry, Angad…"

"Angad nahin….SIR kaho!"

"I am sorry sir….yahan Mumbai mein cheeni aur namak bilkul ek sey lagte hain….can I get another cup?"

Everyone got a chuckle to see Angad flustered. It was rare to see Mr. Overconfident, Angad Khanna in that state. Prithvi was particularly pleased as Angad and he were arch rivals-both smart, brilliant and ambitious. Prithvi was aware that Mishti was crazy about Angad and he tried his best to keep their rivalry at the professional level only.

Kripa came back with another cup but the coffee was just lukewarm; Angad liked his piping hot. Angad was a perfectionist in every sense; he got frustrated and grabbed Kripa's hand, "Mere saath chalo, main tumhein dikhata hoon coffee kaise serve hoti hai." He pulled her towards the food counter. Kripa realized that he held on to her hand till they reached the coffee machine. What was there in his touch……did she feel something tingle inside…..???

Meanwhile, Mishti had her eyes on Angad and Kripa. She did not like the way he was holding her hand. She was relieved when they came back, Angad a few steps ahead of her. Kripa soon made friends with most of the people on the table. She was generally a friendly girl and made friends wherever she went. Mishti did not like that either…she was used to getting all the male attention in the college…after all she was "the princess…the Dean's darling….", why were all the men talking to Kripa instead? She was even more furious when she saw Angad sipping his coffee but staring at Kripa intently, without even blinking.

"Angad, let's go…you need to help me with a paper….." Mishti pulled Angad by his hand forcing him to get up.

"Ragging abhi khatam nahin huyi hai….Ms Sharma….aaj raat ko theek 8 baje, you shall report to the men's hostel mess…GOT IT!" Angad snapped his fingers at her as he got up.

EIGHT O'CLOCK AT MEN"S HOSTEL MESS

Kripa promptly arrived at the required destination. She knew that there was no way out of this ragging…even though she had her fair share at her previous college, the only difference was that in her previous college, only women could rag women but Mumbai….that is a different story. Trying to resist ragging or portraying fear usually made it worse; the best course was to humor the "bunch of boys"- yes they were boys and not men…real men would have more respect for women at their college!

8'O clock was the seniors' dinner time- no one else was allowed in the mess at that time. The "seniors" had earned that status as this was their final year and the mess cooks would oblige them with special feasts, not available to anyone else in the college.

"Aaj, hamare beech ek junior student hain , Ms Sharma…wo aaj sab seniors ke liye khana banayengi" Angad announced as everyone clapped. Kripa was shocked….how was she expected to cook for a bunch of hungry boys? She did not protest but gave Angad one of her cold looks and stepped into the kitchen. In a short while, the students were surprised to see a variety of dishes being served by Kripa and the mess boys.

"Wow, ladki ke haath ka khana khane kaa mazaa hi kuch aur hai" said one of the students. Angad quietly chewed on his food but could not help agreeing that this was one of the best meals he had tasted in ages…..perhaps since his mother's cooking…..

As Kripa gathered her belongings to leave, Manek got up and came close to Kripa. " Ab ladki jab men's hostel aa hi gayi hai, tho aaj ki raat bhi yahin guzaarni chahiye" he said with a devilish grin on his face. The other students laughed in agreement but Angad stayed quiet. He thought this was getting too far.

"Theek hai, tho aaj ki raat, Ms Sharma mere saath rahengi…." Angad got up and declared. He knew no one would challenge him but Kripa gave him a disgusted look and raised her voice finally, "'aap log desh ke future physicians and surgeons hain......sharam aani chahiye aap logon ko……"

"humnein sharam to medical college mein aate hi chodd di thi…ha…ha…ha" one of them said as everyone joined in the laughter.

Angad came close to Kripa, grabbed her hand and turned around, "she is going with me….so all of you stay out of it!" No one had the guts to challenge Angad so they remained seated and said nothing.

Angad walked with Kripa down the stairs and then to the main gate of the hostel while Kripa kept trying to set herself free, "you guys disgust me….I wish I had never moved to Mumbai……" she was almost tearful but was surprised when she saw they were at the main gate of the hostel. She looked up at Angad and before she could say anything, Angad set her hand free, "Kal subah surgical floor par rounds ke liye 6 baje aa jaana…Dr Gupta likes to start on time….GOT IT!" he pointed towards the gate and waited till Kripa left the premises safely. Kripa felt relieved as she left…..why did Angad do that….was he trying to be protective or just trying to scare her……?


WOMEN's HOSTEL

Kripa entered her room late at night; her heart was still beating fast after her experience at the men's hostel, "I hope this is the end of ragging!" she said to herself.

She had not even unpacked her boxes yet as she had been busy with orientation and ragging all day! She sat down on the floor and started opening the boxes one by one. She was wondering whether she made the right decision in switching colleges at this stage. It would take her time to break into the culture at a new college; so far she had not been impressed!

She heard a knock on her door, "OH, HI Aaliyah, tum abhi soyee nahin?"

"Tumhari light dekhi tho aa gayi. Waise hum sub bahut der se sotey hai…we are all night owls you see." Aaliyah smiled as she walked in.

Aaliyah joined Kripa on the floor and helped her unpack. "Kripa, tumhein unn ladkon ney zyaada tang tho nahin kiya? Hamare college ke ladke thode sir-phire hain par waise bahut helpful aur protective hain. Don't take them too seriously." Aaliyah advised Kripa.

Kripa smiled, "Don't worry, Aaliyah, aisa kuchh bhi nahin hua" she remembered how scared she was when they had asked her to spend the night at the men's hostel and how Angad had saved her from further harassment.

"Waise, most guys are fine but wo jo Angad hai naa, bahut arrogant hai. Uski naak hamesha oonchi rehti hai. No doubt, he is very smart but itnaa attitude…..GOD….aur uski girlfriend, Mishti…..she is something…..she is very possessive about Angad and does not like it if any girl even talks to him ……we all can't stand her either! I think they are made for each other……ha…ha…ha" Aaliyah could not control herself.

Kripa remembered the woman in the cafeteria; she was clinging to Angad and did not look very happy when Kripa was the center of attention, "AH, now I understand" she muttered softly.

"Tum ney kuch kaha…..?" asked Aaliyah

"Nahin…..thanks a lot Aaliyah for all your help. I am glad I have a friend in this new place…." They both wished each other good night……

……to be continued
Edited by bheegi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
awesome part.
why didn't prithvi noticed kripa 😆 so that we could see angad's reaction after a week or so 😉 😆



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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow, i CANNOT get enough of this FF!!! it is awesum!!! gosh, i hate how
arrogant Angad is, nd the stuff he made poor Kripa do!!! nd i hate Mishti
already!!! ughhh!!! but i like the fact tht he said Kripa from all those jerks,
tht was nice of him... nd Aaliyah is sooo nice to Kripa, i like her, lol...
anywho CANNOT wait to read the next prt... continue soon, like ASAP!!!
lol... 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww... angad the saviour!! 👏 😉

kripa's already feeling something! 😳 hehehhe!

ugh.. 🤢 mishti!! jealously!

and good to know its good a happy ending! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow..................this is a rly interesting ff.......ur a very good writer and i just love ur stories...........i have a feeling this ff is gonna be awesome
great parts......continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks everyone 😊 This is an old ff of mine, so will not be too detailed and may have more errors in spelling/grammer etc....thanks 4 liking it so far
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Posted: 18 years ago
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kool FF just caought up with all ur FFz that are ending and the new ones haha
so did u write this FF long time ago but posting it now????
im confused lol
gr8 part
can we have another one plz
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: sahr_8

kool FF just caought up with all ur FFz that are ending and the new ones haha
so did u write this FF long time ago but posting it now????
im confused lol
gr8 part
can we have another one plz



Yes, I used to write on another forum. I just started writing on If recently 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: sahr_8

kool FF just caought up with all ur FFz that are ending and the new ones haha
so did u write this FF long time ago but posting it now????
im confused lol
gr8 part
can we have another one plz



Yes, I used to write on another forum. I just started writing on IF recently 😊

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