My First Crush* UPD pg 9:'real feelings' - Page 4

hey great part .... continue soon

more funnier than the previous part.... bechara adi 😆
nice update tangi

just read ur fick... its gr8...
continue soon

just give me a few days I'll post the next part nd reply to the messages posted here 😃

hahaha...very nicee part..cute fanfic!!
continue soon!! 😛 👏 👏 👏

no i can't give you a few more days!
update please di!

wow i love your ff, i just read the first two chapters, continue soon cant wait 👏 👏 👏

oye tangs
its the 17th!
thinking of continuing? 😡

Originally posted by: Cutiepie Rani

oye tangs
its the 17th!
thinking of continuing? 😡

sry rani here it is😳

Special update for rani!

Chapter 3

" kripa u okay??" aditya asked.

Kripa stood up from her seat " yeah im fine, angad and rani were kicking me coz I was cheating"

"cheating??"

" yeah we all made a bet on what andriana will eat" kripa gave a grin as the rest of the gang including aditya and Adriana looked at her in anger.

" u what? Made a bet???" aditya looked angry but more then that he was worried about andrianas reaction.

"I donno ask anya it was her idea" kripa started the blame game.

" anya?!"

" ermmm yeah adi it was me…sorry" anya whispered in an innocent tone.

" well I don't know why your getting all hyper adi yaar she deserved it" rani gave a grin.

" errrr rani if you havent noticed yet, andrianas here so if u wanna like say negative comments about her your welcome to go to my room with the rest of the gang and bitch about her" said adi in a sarcastic tone.

" oh wow!! that's a great idea!!" kripa grinned. "chal rani"

" enjoy yourself adi" kripa winked " aur haan let us know all the details"

One by one everyone left the table.

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" OH my goodness man, rani u rocked!" angad said as he applauded rani.

" I know man but I think adi is naraaz with me" rani feared.

" forget him man" kripa consoled.

" hah!!!? Forget him….. how can I forget my first crush re"

" why cant u……it shouldn't be tht hard im sure"

" first you forget ur first crush" rani ordered

" wht…."!

" yeah kripa forget your first crush"

" come on girls stop arguing" angad tried being peace maker..

"SHUT UP ANGAD!" they both shot back.

" okiee dokiee" angad whispered and took a seat watching them arguing.

"forget angad then I'll forget adi" rani demanded, she made a big mistake but only realized it after the words came out of her mouth. Angad didn't know tht kripas first crush was him.

Kripas face turned red but not in anger in embarrassment, she turned her face towards angad looking for hes reaction.

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Ok that's it for today

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