My First Crush* UPD pg 9:'real feelings' - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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very interesting character sketch...
waiting for the first update.... 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very nice character sketch and intro lol Angads a ROCKSTAR!! woohoo!! lol i will be waiting for the first part/chapter soon lol cant wait im soo happy!!! <3 luvv yuu
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank you for your comment's everyone I'll post the first prt sometime tonight or tom 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome character sketch!!! i loved it!!
plzz cont soon! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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^ thanks 😃
first part comming in 30 minutes!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 1

"Buzzz..!!" Kripa's alarm ringed. She sat down on her bed & hit the alarm so that it stop's buzzing.

"Kripa look at your room….how many times will I clean it & how many times will you mess it up?" Kripa's governess dilpreet asked as she picked up some stuff from the floor and put it back in its right place.

Kripa stepped out of her bed & admired the Cristiano Ronaldo poster that was stuck on the opposite wall while dilpreet kept muttering about how untidy kripa keeps her room.

Kripa sighed. "Good morning" she said in a sarcastic tone. " Is dad awake or….."

Kripa got cut off. " He's gone to his office dear" Dilpreet answered.

"Oh!" kripa tried to sound surprised but she really wasn't. She's been asking the same question for 18 years

& she's been getting the same answer since then.

"come on kripa you have to go to uni get ready quickly"

" yeah I am… I am but you have to like get out for me to get ready so…can you like go" Kripa lowered her tone trying not to sound rude.

" you have twenty minutes get your but down here" Dilpreet shouted as she left the room.

Kripa locked her bedroom door. "finally we get some privacy….huh" she whispered to the C'ron poster.

She kissed the poster and started talking to it again.. "I still cant believe you cheated on me babbyyy…." she put both her arms on her hip's and continued….. " you cheated on your official wifey ….you cant go around kissing other peoples girlfriend like that, poor john" Kripa sighed & sat down on her bed. " boy did I wanna brake my computer when I saw that picture of you & bips….."

"oh yeah angads coming back today she told the poster, If anyone else was in this room they'd be thinking I've gone nuts talking to your poster" kripa grinned & carefully took of the poster from her wall & kissed the poster that was hidden underneath it..It was a poster of Angad.

"Kripa come on your gonna get late" Dilpreet shouted at the top of her voice.

" Yeah yeaah im coming aunty!!" kripa shouted back, she quickly stuck the c'ron poster on top of Angads one & headed for the bathroom.

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" Ding dong" kripa stoot in front of the Khanna residance waiting for someone to open the door.

"hey kripa!" Aditya said as he opened the front door.

"Hey adi what's up?" kripa asked. " where's angad yaar is he back?"

" missing him?" aditya asked as he closed the door.

" Oye don't say it that lout he's gonna hear" kripa made herself comfortable as she sat down on one of the sofa's. "By the way what are you wearing man, you cant come along with me to meet your jiju wearing that hes gonna get a bad impression thinking my official wifey has friends with such bad taste" kripa joked.

" Angad hasn't come yet he's on the way I just talked to him he just landed"

" oh" kripa said in a disappointed tone. Kripa got up from her seat and held her forehead pretending to faint "oh aunty, adiiii!!!" she screamed at the top of her voice as she deliberately fell down on the floor.

" shuru hoyi nautanki" aditya whispered to himself.

" kripa oh my god dear kripa get up" gayatri spoke in a concerned tone as she came running with a picture in her hand. " take kripa to your room adi the poor thing must be tired studying all day & theres no need to o to uni today"

Aditya held kripa and carried her to his room and shut the door. " what was all that nautanki now I wont be able to go to uni coz of you" he complained.

" bad luck adi if I didn't do that acting of fainting then aunty would have sent us to uni while we need to go the man united's training ground I wanna see if I can meet c'ron"

" ahem?!! We?? I don't, its only you!" aditya argued.

" Just shut up if u don't see suzzane for a day you wont die im sure she can live without you for that long"

" who wants to go to uni to see suzzane?" aditya asked in a sarcastic tone.

Kripa looked confused " I thought you told me you really liked her &…." kripa got cutt off.

" I'm so over her man…now its andrianna" aditya explained.

Kripa sighed " I should have guessed how could I have thought ur relationship with her would last for more then 2 days I forgot you cant stay with one girl for more then that"

" kripa how are you feeling now?" gayatri came in the room with a glass of water and that same photo.

" ahhhh!!! Ermmm….I I'm feeling okay now better then before"

" good dear, By the way look at this photo" gayatri handed a photo of a girl to kripa.

" who' s she?" kripa asked.

" Ek naya rishta" gayatri explained.

" She's pretty adi I think you should say yes!" kripa suggested with the intention of teasing adi.

" arrey nahin beta not for adi, its for angad" gayatri corrected.

Kripa's facial expression became the same as aditya's was a minute ago.

" mum I think she's good & even kripa likes her" kripa was getting a taste of her own medicine.

" okay then I'll talk to angad when he's back"

Before kripa could say anything gayatri was out of the room. " I swear I'm gonna kill you" kripa chased aditya from one corner of hes room to the other. Angad had arrived and went to adityas room to meet him as he opened the door totally unaware of kripa and aditya running after each other kripa fell in hes arms.

hope you all liked it😃

plzz post comments😳

Edited by tangina r - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
omg tangs!
i love it!
aww my adi baby! a big flirt huh! wait till we meet. and then i'll set him straight i tell you! lol
amazing beginning tangs!
please do continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part. hmmm so angad's back can't wait for the next part 😉


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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww the part was just as sweet as ras gulla/ ras mallai!! gawddd...cont soon...LOVE IT!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow... very funny... first meeting in arms.... 😆

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