My First Crush* UPD pg 9:'real feelings' - Page 3

first part was mind blowing 👏 cant wait to read the next part

Wow Tangi!!!

I didn't know you write ff's!!

I totally loved the intro and the character sketch and the first part!!!

Angad and Kripa sound so cute!!!

Can't wait for rani's entry! 😉 😉

Please continue soon!! 😳

aww thanks rani!

yep adi is a huge flirt in my ff😳😆

Originally posted by: Cutiepie Rani

omg tangs!
i love it!
aww my adi baby! a big flirt huh! wait till we meet. and then i'll set him straight i tell you! lol
amazing beginning tangs!
please do continue soon!

Thant you!!

Originally posted by: iamsmart

gr8 part. hmmm so angad's back can't wait for the next part

thanks😃

Originally posted by: amritafan

awesome

thanks for liking it & comparing it to ras gullas😆

Originally posted by: amber0802

awww the part was just as sweet as ras gulla/ ras mallai!! gawddd...cont soon...LOVE IT!!

yep😳😆

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

wow... very funny... first meeting in arms....

thnk u for the praise😛

Originally posted by: SaNyA_21

first part was mind blowing cant wait to read the next part

thanks meera😃

none of my friends know i write ff's this is my 5th one lolz i never told any of my friends tht i wrote them 😳

ranis entry will be in the next prt i cant wait till i write it either😳😉

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Wow Tangi!!!

I didn't know you write ff's!!

I totally loved the intro and the character sketch and the first part!!!

Angad and Kripa sound so cute!!!

Can't wait for rani's entry! 😉 😉

Please continue soon!! 😳

^ yeah i will rani 😉
im typing the next part this very moment 😃

Chapter 2: The Bet!

Angad & kripa had a small eye locking session until aditya brought them back to the real world.

"Hi, anyone remember I'm here?!" he asked in a sarcastic tone.

kripa got up and stood straight with a " I cant help it" face . Kripa hugged angad. " ermm h..Hi angad!!" she smiled. She really couldn't help it, he always had her eating out of he's palms and kripa totally felt helpless in front of her heart.

" hey kripa, sorry if I interrupted you and adi" he said in a innocent tone. " you can carry on trying to kill him I wont interfere" he smirked.

" na yaar its okay I forgive him for now, by the way how was you'r concert last night?"

" yeah angad how was it? Anya said some girl tried to tear your t-shirt??" aditya asked.

" she what??!! Who?? Do you have her address??" kripa screamed in anger forgetting that angad was standing right next to her.

" Kripa calm down, its okay"

" sorry angad I over reacted a bit"

"yeah I thought so, acha you guys carry on I'm hitting the shower then I have a press conference & I hope everything's ready for the success party tonight adi"

" but you just came back after a month angad take some rest yaar whats the point of doing a press conference straight away?" kripa asked in a concerned voice.

" being a rockstar isn't as easy as it looks baby" he said as he patted kripa on her shoulder and left the room.

" hey adi I'll be back okay, let me just go and see what anya's upto, and by the way theres a party tonight and you didn't even bother telling me??????" kripa questioned.

" well darling it doesn't even make any difference whether I tell you or not coz your gonna cone anyway like a bin bulai mehman" aditya joked.

" haha very funny" kripa made a weird face and left the room.

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Anya slammed a twenty pound note on the kitchen desk as she munched on her walkers crisp's " I bet Adriana's gonna have two peas and half a chicken" she whispered.

" naa I don't think so. I think 4 peas, a chicken and some rice" angad said as he betted with a fifty pound note.

" angad do u think she's got a appatite like you'rs?? heck no. well it doesn't look like it, but since its my turn….ermmm" kripa looked at andriana from a distance " ermm…one peas and a piece of carrot"

" hah!! Have you guys seen how slim she is I bet she doesn't even have water, But still I bet ermm… fiftly pounds that she'll have a quarter of a chicken and one peas" rani said as she placed a fifty pound note on the kitchen desk and stared at andriana with envy.

" rani, baby don't worry at the end he'll end up with you bachke woh jayega kahaan??" kripa consoled her.

" its my turn I think she'll just have a apple juice or maybe wine…heres my twenty quid" pearl smirked.

" how about mixing zeher in her juice that would make it much more tastier na?" rani asked as she stared at the couple.

" seems like you've got a lot of experience on how poison tastes"

" yeah I do raunak, I do any by the way its your turn"

"yeah I know" raunak said " okay errmm…heres ten pounds" raunak placed a ten pound note on the desk.

Everyone stared at him as if he was a alien " what?" he asked. " okay, okay heres another forty pounds, a sip if water and three peas I think"

Aditya and andriana came towards the kitchen looking for the gang, kripa who was sitting on top of the desk quickly hid the money behind her.

" hey angad some people are looking for you. What are you doing here???? Its your party enjoy" aditya said.

" itni chipak ke rehne ki kya zaroorat hai?" rani whispered.

" what?" aditya asked as he couldn't hear what she said.

" oh I mean wont you introduce us to her? Who is she anyway?? Your cousin sister??" rani asked with a smile on her face knowing fully who she was.

Kripa and gang tried to control there laughter at this comment but were not successful.

Aditya gave a stern look while the rest of the people were laughing uncontrollably.

" oops okay continue adi were hearing" rani smiled.

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At the dinner table. Andriana took a peas, everyone was staring at andrianas every move.

" hey andriana take some chicken its really tasty" angad suggested as he passed the plate of chicken towards andriana. Kripa, rani, pearl, raunak and anya looked at angad with the facial expression stating " cheater!!!!!!"

"no thanks I'm not really fond of chicken" andriana replied.

Kripa kicked angad from the bottom of the table. "than andriana take this its better then chicken" kripa put a boiled carrot on her plate and gave a cheeky smile.

Angad and rani who were on kripa's left & right kicked her from the bottom of the table just like kripa did to angad with the expression " cheater!!"

" ouch!!" Kripa screamed.

😆
lol betting on what she'll eat!
aww i was so mean to my baby! 😭
but it was funny! 😆
continue soon!

^ yep good idea na? 😆
thanks rani jaanu 🤗

lol!
continue soon hun! can't wait!

Great job Tangi!!!

Loved Rani's entry!!!

Please continue soon! 😃

yikes! betting on wat a person will eat....dats...different? lol.

ew a bioled carrot. soundz gross.

i loved how kripa freaked out wen sum gurl tried 2 rip his t-shurt off.

theyre so cute

gr8 part, cont soon!

<3 kiran
E> GA <3